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书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅳ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考（含答案解析）
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这是一份书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅳ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考（含答案解析），共25页。试卷主要包含了话题作文，材料作文，书信作文等内容，欢迎下载使用。
书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅳ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2019·江苏·南通）当前,不少文学作品被改编成电影,有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要求写一篇英语短文:
看电影:
省时、有趣、易懂;
读原著
细节更多、语言优美;
我的看法及理由
（请自拟内容）
注意：1. 内容须包含所有要点, 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 可适当发挥；
2. 词数90个左右, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；
3. 参考词汇：original n.原著；detail information 详细信息Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
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2．（2019·江苏·扬州）就要放寒假了，同学们都在制定寒假计划，比如看电视、看电影，旅游、阅读、…… 请以“Our plans for the winter holiday”为题，根据下面的表格内容要点，完成一篇英语短文。
要求: 1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2、必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥。
3、词数 100 字左右（作文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
看电影、电视
男生们打算看一些纪录片，动作片和直播的篮球赛。
女生们更喜欢看浪漫的爱情片。
旅游
租一辆自行车在扬州城逛逛。
去亚洲或者欧洲国家。
阅读
一些同学计划读充满神秘、恐怖的侦探书籍，还有一些打算读伟人的故事。
你自己的计划
…… (并讲述你的理由，至少两点)
Our plans for the winter holidayWinter holiday is coming. Many of my classmates are making plans for the holiday.
I do hope we can enjoy our holiday.
3．（2019·江苏苏州）在学校生活中，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”开展了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据表格提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
多种途径
帮助父母，表达爱心；
阅读书籍，了解世界；
亲近自然，放松自己；
……(自拟至少一点)
你的感受
……(自拟至少一点)
注意：
1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯。
2.词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
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二、材料作文
4．（2020·江苏·东海）请根据以下要点，写一篇短文，词数90左右。
要点：1.成龙(Jackie Chen)是世界上最伟大的功夫巨星。他作为歌手和导演也很出名。
2.1954年出生于香港，自小就梦想进入电影业。
3.1978年的电影《醉拳》（Drunken Master）标志着他成功生涯的开始，片中他成功地将幽默和激动人心的动作结合在一起。
4.他的成就远不止功夫巨星。他致力于慈善工作很多年。
5.我认为……
注意：1.第5要点须用1-2句话作适当的发挥。
2.短文必须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯。
5．（2018·江苏淮阴）荀子说：“不学礼无以立，人无礼则不生，事无礼则不成，国无礼则不宁。”文明不仅是一个国家千百年来积淀的文化底蕴，更应该是每个人行为的体现。校园是我们第二个家，我们在这个“家”里亲近文明，表现文明，实践文明。建设文明的校园，形成文明的风尚，关乎我们个人及这个“家”的成长。请根据以下要点，谈谈如何从自我做起，创建文明校园。
校园环境
不乱扔垃圾；爱护花草；节约用水；保护桌椅；
人际关系
和谐相处，互爱互助
自身修养
努力学习，广泛阅读，实现梦想；
礼貌诚信，懂得感恩；
… …(自己补充一点)
要求：1．必须包括以上要点，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、80-100字左右的短文。 2. 文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Our school is like a big family. As students, we should try our best to build a civilized
school.
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6．（2018·江苏·南通）近年来,一些家长为了让孩子取得更加优异的学习成绩,不惜重金在假期将孩子送入各种培训班,但同时这也可能会带来一系列的问题。请根据表格内容,写一篇90词左右的短文,简述假期培训可能带来的问题,并谈谈自己对假期培训的建议。
问题
1.费用较高,枯燥乏味
2.增加压力,安全隐患
3.导致厌学,……(考生自拟)
建议
1.……(考生自拟)
2.……(考生自拟)
注意:
1.表达中必须包括所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名
参考词汇:压力 pressureIn recent years, some parents always send their children to all kinds of training classes during their holiday to make them study better.
7．（2020·江苏·泰州）近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
学生们认为
1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学
2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣
3.……
家长们认为
1.影响孩子视力
2.增加家庭负担
你的观点
1.……
2.……
注意：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
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8．（2020·江苏·扬州）寒假即将到来，请以My favourite time of year为题，根据以下的中文提示写一篇文章介绍一年当中你最喜欢的一段时光。
写作要点：
最喜欢的时光
寒假
期间最想做的事情
1.看Audrey Hepburn主演的电影，因为喜欢她在电影和慈善界的成就
2.看各种纪录片，我们可以了解很多大自然的知识
3.边看书边欣赏谭盾的音乐。他的音乐使人感到平静
4. ... ...
喜欢寒假的原因
1. ... ...
2. ... ...
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My favourite time of year
9．（2018·江苏·扬州中学教育集团树人学校九年级期末）学校举行征文比赛，要求用英文介绍你的家乡扬州。请根据下列提示，完成你的征文。
A good place to visit
the Slender West Lake,...(Give one or two reasons)
A good place to have nice food
Dongguan Street, ...(Give one or two reasons)
A great man in Yangzhou
Zhu Ziqing (studied in Yangzhou Middle School；left Yangzhou to Peking University at 18;his works of art express the ...of life; they bring ...to the readers)
要求：
1）必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。As a local person in Yangzhou, I am proud of my hometown. It's my great honor to introduce my great hometown to all of you.
10．（2020·江苏·沭阳县）书面表达
最近，同学们都在讨论Jackson Yee（易炀千禧），你也是他的粉丝，请根据以下信息，以My favourite star为题写一篇介绍他的短文。
1. Jackson Yee 2000年11月28日出生于湖南。他短发，看起来很酷。
2. 他喜欢跳舞，很小的时候就开始学习舞蹈。他既是一名歌手，也是著名演员。
3. 他现在就读于北京电影学院。
4. 他在《少年的你》中扮演主角，并获奖。
5. 他还成立了Jackson Yee爱心基金，关注留守儿童。
6. 他有8000万粉丝，深受青少年喜爱。
注意事项：
1．词数90左右；2. 可能用到的信息: November，北京电影学院Beijing Film Academy
《少年的你》You’re a teenager 爱心基金 Love Fund 留守儿童stay-at-home children
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、班级等信息。
My favourite star
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11．（2020·江苏·泰兴市）假设你是李雷，你听说将有一批来自英国的交换生到泰兴，他们想了解有关泰兴中学生的学校生活。请根据下表信息用英语写一封电子邮件向他们介绍相关情况。
Items（项目）
Contents（要点）
校内
1. 师生关系融洽，同学互帮互学。
2. 学生上课认真听讲，课后......
3. 每学期举行艺术节。（写出内容、感受）
校外
1. 环保活动（举一例）
2. 慈善活动（举一例）
存在问题
1. 熬夜做作业
2. 饮食不健康
解决措施
（发挥一至两点）
要求：1．词数100个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Dear friends．I am glad to know you will come to Taixing. I'll tell you something about our school life.
At school, _______________________________________________________________
In our free time, we often work as volunteers. __________________________________
However, we still have some problems. _______________________________________
In my opinion, _____________________________________________________________
Welcome to my hometown. I hope you will have a good time here.
Yours
Li Lei
12．（2020·江苏扬州）B．写作
寒假即将来临，新世纪英语报发起“My winter holiday”专栏征稿活动，你打算向该报纸投稿，谈谈你的假期想法。
My winter holiday
study
1.plan my holiday carefully
2.read more books
3..…
relax
1. watch films, like action films best
2. have a trip
3...…
Family life
1.help do some housework
2.
My winter holidayThe winter holiday is coming. I have some good ideas to spend a meaningful holiday.
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13．（2020·江苏宿迁）书面表达
保护环境与自然和谐相处是人类今天面对的大问题。假如你是李华，你们班级正就“保护地球，从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。请根据表格内容，谈谈你周边的环境问题，在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的，以及你这样做的感受。提示词语：reduce, reuse, recycle, energy, plant; happy
环境问题
不关灯、不关水龙头、资源浪费、乱扔垃圾、森林砍伐严重、工厂排污水、污气汽车尾气-----
采取措施
节约水电、绿色出行、绿色购物、回收利用-----
感想
自己的感受---责任、必要、自豪以及对世界的巨大影响-----
要求：1. 必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数90左右，短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数。Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment.
三、书信作文
14．（2020·江苏宿迁）最遥远的距离是我在你身边,你却忙着抢红包‘ 盯得眼花,戳得手疼,抢得心跳…这些都是每年春节抢红包火爆场面的生动写照。这两年春节抢红包，全名狂欢，乐此不疲。抢红包为何如此火热？火热的背后该如何让冷静思考？假如你是李华，你班最近就此开展了一个调查，请用英文给学校校刊《英语天地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。
70% 的学生参加过抢红包游戏活动
75%学生赞同
1. 带来更多的乐趣
2. 更易与他人交流
3. 传统中国文化和现代文化的相结合
25%的学生表示担忧
Nantong Middle school
1. 浪费时间和金钱
2. 与家人交流的机会少
3. 用时太多以至于（1句话展开合理的想象
你的观点
……
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。
2. 要点必须包括所有信息，可以适当发挥。
3. 表格中你的观点需用2-3句话展开合理的想象，做适当发挥
4. 词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear EditorI am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of ‘Grabbing red packets ’in our class.
Yours sincerely
Lihua
15．（2020·江苏徐州）书面表达
以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
Hi,
I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:
Ø recommend two traditional Chinese things
Ø show your reasons why you recommend them
Looking forward to hearing from you.
David
注意事项：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, I am able to better understand the author’s ideas.
In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【详解】题干解读：此题要求写一篇议论文，题目已经给出，看电影还是看书，各有优点，在文章中都要阐述出来。另外，作者还需清楚表达出自己的观点。
例文点评：例文采用三段式；第一人称叙述；文中有很多较高级的句型和用法；行文流畅，结构清晰，态度立场鲜明。
高分亮点：
短语：the opposite opinion；detailed information；agree with；stay at home；in a situation of；in a word。
句型：it is better to do sth. than to do sth.；The reason is that+从句；I have more reasons for it。
2．例文：
Our plans for the winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming. Many of my classmates are making plans for the holiday.I find that reading is a popular plan among students.Some plan to read detective stories because they’re full of honor and mysteries.Some would like to read books about great people.
Another popular plan is travelling.Most students would like to visit Asia or European countries.They plan to visit places of interest there.Some students will rent a bike to travel around YangZhou.
Watching films or TV programmes are also their favourite plans.Boys will watch documentaries,action films,and live basketball matches while girls prefer watching romantic films.
I’d like to be a volunteer in our community center.I think it is meaningful to do such a thing.It can bring me pleasure.
I do hope we can enjoy our holiday.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“Our plans for the winter holiday”为题写一篇文章，要求涵盖下面表格的内容。由于是介绍假期计划，因此在时态的选择上要以一般将来时态为主， 同是在语言的表达上一定要清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2、例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态主要以一般将来时为主；例文详细具体的写了寒假的计划；结构清晰；逻辑性强。
3、高分亮点：
短语：plan to do；be full of；would like to do sth；places of interest；it is meaningful to do sth。
句型：Watching films or TV programmes are also their favourite plan；I think it is meaningful to do such a thing。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如plan to do；be full of；would like to do sth；places of interest；it is meaningful to do sth等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3．例文
How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
Here are some suggestions from my classmates. First, we can help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Next, we can also know more about the world by reading more books. Then, we should get close to the nature and relax ourselves. It is good for our study. What’s more, I think it is very important to keep healthy. We’d better play lots of sports in our spare time.
In a word, there are many things to do in our life. Let’s make full use of our spare time.
【详解】1.题干解读：此篇作文在写作时应承接短文开头，主要谈论如何让课余生活更有意义。根据所给内容，介绍使课余生活有意义的方法及个人感受。
2.例文点评：例文用第一人称进行叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述时，避免汉语式英语，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、句型等，句意叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：do some housework；know more about；what’s more；keep healthy；play lots of sports；make full use of。
句型：①Here are some suggestions from my classmates.
②Next, we can also know more about the world by reading more books.
③What’s more, I think it is very important to keep healthy.
④We’d better play lots of sports in our spare time.
⑤Let’s make full use of our spare time.
【点睛】写作六步骤：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
4．Jackie Chan is one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars in the world. He is also famous as a singer and a director. Jackie Chan was born in Hong Kong in 1954. He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. The film Drunken Master in 1978 marked the beginning of his successful career. In the film he successfully joined humor and exciting action together. His achievements are far snore than a Kung Fu superstar. He has devoted many years to charity work. I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.
【详解】题干解读：这篇文章要求写成龙的生平，介绍成龙的一些事，主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，第三人称单数。要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。介绍人物生平的作文要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
例文点评：这篇短文叙述完整准确，内容忠实于材料，在短文最后表达了自己的看法。在写作中句式变化丰富运用了比较高级的句式，时态准确，符合英语表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语： one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars；is famous as；dreamt of；the beginning of。
时间状语从句：He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. 定语从句：I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.
5．例文
Our school is like a big family. As students, we should protect the environment so as not to throw rubbish. We also should love flowers ,plants and save water. It is necessary for us to protect desks and chairs. Students should get along well and love each other. When someone needs help, we should do our best to help them. It is important for us to study hard. We can read widely and reading can open our eyes. By studying hard, we can realize our dreams. We are polite and honest to people. We should be grateful to those who help us. If we actively join in after-school activities, we can expand our interests, and constantly improve ourselves.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含表格里的内容，谈谈如何从自我做起，创建文明校园。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，介绍了不少于三项的校园活动，包括了校园环境、人际关系、自身修养等，例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3.高分亮点：词组：protect the environment；throw rubbish；get along well；love each other；do our best to；read widely；open our eyes；realize our dreams；improve ourselves等；
句型：It is necessary for us to protect desks and chairs. /When someone needs help, we should do our best to help them. /We can read widely and reading can open our eyes./By studying hard, we can realize our dreams. /If we actively join in after-school activities, we can expand our interests, and constantly improve ourselves.
【点睛】书面表达：
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如protect the environment；throw rubbish；get along well；love each other；do our best to；read widely等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
6．例文
In recent years, some parents always send their children to all kinds of training classes during their holiday to make them study better. As a student, I think this may bring some problems.
First, parents spend lots of money on these classes, but many students feel bored because that’s not what they want to learn. Second, a lot of time is wasted. It is not only bad for children’s study, but also stressful. Also it may not be safe to study in these classes. Third, it probably makes them hate studying. And it may be easy for some children to get into the bad habit of running away from school.
I think we should be given some time to relax and do some things that we want to do, such as playing basketball, football and computer games.Of course, we should finish our homework carefully first.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于一篇议论型文章，主要是以“假期培训可能带来的问题”为线索展开讨论，要求阐述假期培训存在的问题和提出自己的一些建议。可以使用阐述观点的first，second，third等阐述。
2. 例文点评：文章主要分三段描述。第一段总体提出问题，第二段分别对存在的问题进行阐述，第三段提出自己的观点。整个文章结构严谨完整，语言表达准确清晰，语言层次感强，用词恰当到位。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：all kinds of；lots of；not only … but also；such as。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；I think+宾语从句；that引导的定语从句。
7．iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.
However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【详解】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。
点睛：对立观点式
第一段：提出现象。
第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。
第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground.
They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。
第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.
But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
8．例文：
My favourite time of year
My favorite time of the year is winter vacation. Because during the winter holiday, I have time to do what I like. I will practise playing the piano in the winter holiday. I have loved playing the piano since I was a child. I began to play the piano when I was five years old. I can also accompany my family to chat and travel during the winter vacation. I can also make myself relaxed.
However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity. I also like to watch all kinds of documentaries, because I can learn a lot about nature. When I am bored, I can also enjoy tan dun's music while I was reading a book. His music could make me calm.
This is my favorite winter holiday life, it must be colorful.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是主要是描述最喜欢的寒假生活。通过寒假最想要做的一些具体的事情的描写以及为什么喜欢寒假生活的原因，描写清楚即可。
2. 例文点评：文章分两段描写。第一段主要是描写喜欢寒假的原因自己要做的具体的事情的描写，第二段做一个总结。整个文章结构完整，语言表述通顺清楚，用词准确。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：practise doing sth；play the piano；begin to do sth；all kinds of；make sb＋adj。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；while引导的时间状语从句。
9．My hometown is famous for many interest places, such as The Slender West Lake, The Ge Garden, The He Garden and so on. The Slender West Lake is one of the best places that worth a visit. One of the main reason is that the beautiful landscape along the lake attracts a large number of tourists, including the foreigners. Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why the people of Yangzhou are so infatuated with their city. Dongguang Street is a symbol of Yangzhou dishes. You can have an appealing color, aroma, taste and appearance. You will never forget the charming taste.
What’s more, Zhu Ziqing who is one of the most famous writers studied in Yangzhou Middle School and left Yangzhou to Peking University at 18. His works of art express the beauty and kindness of life. They bring wonderful poems to the readers.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于说明文。主要介绍名胜古迹扬州的瘦西湖，东关街和作家朱自清的基本信息。
2.例文点评：例文采用两段式，从去瘦西湖旅游的主要原因到东关街的主要美食再到作家朱自清的基本介绍，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行描写；时态采用一般现在时为主，一般过去式为辅。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be famous for，such as，a large number of，What’s more，a symbol of。
句型：One of the main reason is that，定语从句。
10．例文
My favourite star
My favourite star is Jackson Yee. He was born in Hunan on November 28,2000. He has short hair and looks cool. He likes dancing and began to learn it at an early age. He is both a singer and a famous actor. He is now studying at the Beijing Film Academy. He played the leading role in You're a Teenager and won the prize. He also founded the Jackson Yee foundation, which focuses on stay-at-home children. He has 80 million fans and is beloved by teenagers.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给材料作文，要求根据所给出的材料提示，以My favourite star为题。谈谈最喜欢的明星Jackson Yee（易炀千禧）。本文给出的要点比较具体，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，可适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：根据材料内容可知本文时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be born，both…and…，play the lead role in，left-behind children。
句型：He is both a singer and a famous actor. 他既是一名歌手，也是著名演员。both…and…两者都、既…又…。
He also founded the Jackson Yee foundation, which focuses on left-behind children. 他还成立了Jackson Yee爱心基金，关注留守儿童。这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
11．Dear friends．
I am glad to know you will come to Taixing. I'll tell you something about our school life.
At school, we get along well with our teachers. The students often help and learn from each other. We listen carefully in class and hand in our homework on time after class. There is an art festival at our school every term. Students can watch different types of films and enjoy different art forms. We feel excited about it and we also learn a lot at the festival.
In our free time, we often work as volunteers. Sometimes, we help clean up the parks to keep them beautiful. Besides, we go to the home for the elderly. We help the old people do some cleaning and shopping. This brings them a lot of pleasure.
However, we still have some problems. Some students often stay up to complete their homework. Some students don’t have a healthy diet. These are harmful to our health.
In my opinion, we should manage our time better and eat more fruit and vegetables. It’s better for us to form a good habit.
Welcome to my hometown. I hope you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含表格里的内容，写出校内、校外、存在问题、
解决措施等方面。
2.例文点评：例文通过对表格里的内容，写出校内、校外、存在问题、解决措施等方面。一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。
3.高分亮点：词组：get along well with；from each other；listen carefully；hand in；on time；an art festival；feel excited；learn a lot；clean up；do some cleaning and shopping；stay up；a healthy diet等；
句型：There is an art festival at our school every term. /Students can watch different types of films and enjoy different art forms. /Sometimes, we help clean up the parks to keep them beautiful./In my opinion, we should manage our time better and eat more fruit and vegetables. /It’s better for us to form a good habit. /I hope you will have a good time here.
【点睛】书面表达：
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如get along well with；from each other；listen carefully；hand in；on time；an art festival等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．例文
My winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I have some good ideas to spend a meaningful holiday.
I am planning my holiday carefully. I am going to read more books. I am going to study through the Internet. I am going to get up at six as usual. Then I will exercise. In My winter holiday, I am going to watch films, and I like action films best. I also plan to have a trip to Mount Tai with my parents. I am going to play basketball with my friends. My mother is usually very busy. I am going to help my mother do some housework. My father’s birthday is in the winter holiday. I am going to make birthday noodles for my father. I think he will be very happy.
I am sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful holiday.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于材料作文，也是话题作文，谈论的话题是“My winter holiday”。本文主要谈论寒假计划，时态主要是一般将来时，主要使用be going to结构。本文可知分为三段，采取“总分总”叙述。认为阅读材料，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。注意语法和拼写。
2.例文点评：例文作者叙述了寒假计划，采用三段式，第1段总写，打算过一个有意义的寒假；第2段作者写了具体的措施。最后总结。本文时态使用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，运用合适的连接词或过渡词。没有拼写和语法错误，符合英语的表达习惯。
3. 高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：be going to，through the Internet，as usual ，then，and，be sure等。
句型：(1) I am going to get up at six as usual. (2) I am going to help my mother do some housework.(3) In My winter holiday, I am going to watch films, and I like action films best. (4) I am sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful holiday等。
【点睛】写作六步骤：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
13．Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment, so pollution is more and more serious. Some people waste water, food, and other things.
As a student, I always remember these three words: reduce, reuse, recycle. For example, I turn off the lights when I leave the room and I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. I don’t use paper cups in my daily life. We often collect plastic bottles in our classroom. What’s more, I always take a bus to school instead of asking my parents to drive me.
I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，保护环境与自然和谐相处是人类今天面对的大问题。假如你是李华，你们班级正就“保护地球，从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。请根据表格内容，谈谈你周边的环境问题，在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的，以及你这样做的感受。
2.例文点评：这篇文章从三个方面来写：环境问题；采取措施；感想。时态用一般现在时态的用法，人称用第一人称，适当的也可以用并列句，使短文内容更丰富， 写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：pay attention to；more and more serious；as a student；For example；in my daily life.；instead of。
句型：What’s more, I always take a bus to school instead of asking my parents to drive me.；I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment.
14．例文：
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. 75% of them think it can bring them more fun. It can make it easier for them to get along well with others. The activity brings traditional Chinese culture and modern technology together. However, 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say it’s a waste of time and money to take part in it. They don’t have enough communication with their family members. Moreover, some students spend so much time grabbing red packets that they often forget to do their homework.
I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你班最近就此开展了一个调查，请用英文给学校校刊《英语天地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。语句通顺，要点齐全。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第一、三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：took part in；get along well with；modern technology；a waste of time；communication with；forget to do their homework；spend more time communicating with等。
句型：1. 75% of them think it can bring them more fun. 2.It can make it easier for them to get along well with others. 3.The activity brings traditional Chinese culture and modern technology together. 4.However, 25% of them are worried about the activity. 5.They say it’s a waste of time and money to take part in it.6. Moreover, some students spend so much time grabbing red packets that they often forget to do their homework.
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如took part in；get along well with；modern technology；a waste of time；communication with；forget to do their homework；spend more time communicating with等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
15．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.
The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?
I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.
【详解】本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。文章干净利落，层次分明
书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅳ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2019·江苏·南通）当前,不少文学作品被改编成电影,有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要求写一篇英语短文:
看电影:
省时、有趣、易懂;
读原著
细节更多、语言优美;
我的看法及理由
（请自拟内容）
注意：1. 内容须包含所有要点, 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 可适当发挥；
2. 词数90个左右, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；
3. 参考词汇：original n.原著；detail information 详细信息Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
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2．（2019·江苏·扬州）就要放寒假了，同学们都在制定寒假计划，比如看电视、看电影，旅游、阅读、…… 请以“Our plans for the winter holiday”为题，根据下面的表格内容要点，完成一篇英语短文。
要求: 1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2、必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥。
3、词数 100 字左右（作文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
看电影、电视
男生们打算看一些纪录片，动作片和直播的篮球赛。
女生们更喜欢看浪漫的爱情片。
旅游
租一辆自行车在扬州城逛逛。
去亚洲或者欧洲国家。
阅读
一些同学计划读充满神秘、恐怖的侦探书籍，还有一些打算读伟人的故事。
你自己的计划
…… (并讲述你的理由，至少两点)
Our plans for the winter holidayWinter holiday is coming. Many of my classmates are making plans for the holiday.
I do hope we can enjoy our holiday.
3．（2019·江苏苏州）在学校生活中，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”开展了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据表格提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
多种途径
帮助父母，表达爱心；
阅读书籍，了解世界；
亲近自然，放松自己；
……(自拟至少一点)
你的感受
……(自拟至少一点)
注意：
1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯。
2.词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
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二、材料作文
4．（2020·江苏·东海）请根据以下要点，写一篇短文，词数90左右。
要点：1.成龙(Jackie Chen)是世界上最伟大的功夫巨星。他作为歌手和导演也很出名。
2.1954年出生于香港，自小就梦想进入电影业。
3.1978年的电影《醉拳》（Drunken Master）标志着他成功生涯的开始，片中他成功地将幽默和激动人心的动作结合在一起。
4.他的成就远不止功夫巨星。他致力于慈善工作很多年。
5.我认为……
注意：1.第5要点须用1-2句话作适当的发挥。
2.短文必须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯。
5．（2018·江苏淮阴）荀子说：“不学礼无以立，人无礼则不生，事无礼则不成，国无礼则不宁。”文明不仅是一个国家千百年来积淀的文化底蕴，更应该是每个人行为的体现。校园是我们第二个家，我们在这个“家”里亲近文明，表现文明，实践文明。建设文明的校园，形成文明的风尚，关乎我们个人及这个“家”的成长。请根据以下要点，谈谈如何从自我做起，创建文明校园。
校园环境
不乱扔垃圾；爱护花草；节约用水；保护桌椅；
人际关系
和谐相处，互爱互助
自身修养
努力学习，广泛阅读，实现梦想；
礼貌诚信，懂得感恩；
… …(自己补充一点)
要求：1．必须包括以上要点，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、80-100字左右的短文。 2. 文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Our school is like a big family. As students, we should try our best to build a civilized
school.
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6．（2018·江苏·南通）近年来,一些家长为了让孩子取得更加优异的学习成绩,不惜重金在假期将孩子送入各种培训班,但同时这也可能会带来一系列的问题。请根据表格内容,写一篇90词左右的短文,简述假期培训可能带来的问题,并谈谈自己对假期培训的建议。
问题
1.费用较高,枯燥乏味
2.增加压力,安全隐患
3.导致厌学,……(考生自拟)
建议
1.……(考生自拟)
2.……(考生自拟)
注意:
1.表达中必须包括所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名
参考词汇:压力 pressureIn recent years, some parents always send their children to all kinds of training classes during their holiday to make them study better.
7．（2020·江苏·泰州）近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
学生们认为
1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学
2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣
3.……
家长们认为
1.影响孩子视力
2.增加家庭负担
你的观点
1.……
2.……
注意：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
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8．（2020·江苏·扬州）寒假即将到来，请以My favourite time of year为题，根据以下的中文提示写一篇文章介绍一年当中你最喜欢的一段时光。
写作要点：
最喜欢的时光
寒假
期间最想做的事情
1.看Audrey Hepburn主演的电影，因为喜欢她在电影和慈善界的成就
2.看各种纪录片，我们可以了解很多大自然的知识
3.边看书边欣赏谭盾的音乐。他的音乐使人感到平静
4. ... ...
喜欢寒假的原因
1. ... ...
2. ... ...
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My favourite time of year
9．（2018·江苏·扬州中学教育集团树人学校九年级期末）学校举行征文比赛，要求用英文介绍你的家乡扬州。请根据下列提示，完成你的征文。
A good place to visit
the Slender West Lake,...(Give one or two reasons)
A good place to have nice food
Dongguan Street, ...(Give one or two reasons)
A great man in Yangzhou
Zhu Ziqing (studied in Yangzhou Middle School；left Yangzhou to Peking University at 18;his works of art express the ...of life; they bring ...to the readers)
要求：
1）必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。As a local person in Yangzhou, I am proud of my hometown. It's my great honor to introduce my great hometown to all of you.
10．（2020·江苏·沭阳县）书面表达
最近，同学们都在讨论Jackson Yee（易炀千禧），你也是他的粉丝，请根据以下信息，以My favourite star为题写一篇介绍他的短文。
1. Jackson Yee 2000年11月28日出生于湖南。他短发，看起来很酷。
2. 他喜欢跳舞，很小的时候就开始学习舞蹈。他既是一名歌手，也是著名演员。
3. 他现在就读于北京电影学院。
4. 他在《少年的你》中扮演主角，并获奖。
5. 他还成立了Jackson Yee爱心基金，关注留守儿童。
6. 他有8000万粉丝，深受青少年喜爱。
注意事项：
1．词数90左右；2. 可能用到的信息: November，北京电影学院Beijing Film Academy
《少年的你》You’re a teenager 爱心基金 Love Fund 留守儿童stay-at-home children
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、班级等信息。
My favourite star
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11．（2020·江苏·泰兴市）假设你是李雷，你听说将有一批来自英国的交换生到泰兴，他们想了解有关泰兴中学生的学校生活。请根据下表信息用英语写一封电子邮件向他们介绍相关情况。
Items（项目）
Contents（要点）
校内
1. 师生关系融洽，同学互帮互学。
2. 学生上课认真听讲，课后......
3. 每学期举行艺术节。（写出内容、感受）
校外
1. 环保活动（举一例）
2. 慈善活动（举一例）
存在问题
1. 熬夜做作业
2. 饮食不健康
解决措施
（发挥一至两点）
要求：1．词数100个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Dear friends．I am glad to know you will come to Taixing. I'll tell you something about our school life.
At school, _______________________________________________________________
In our free time, we often work as volunteers. __________________________________
However, we still have some problems. _______________________________________
In my opinion, _____________________________________________________________
Welcome to my hometown. I hope you will have a good time here.
Yours
Li Lei
12．（2020·江苏扬州）B．写作
寒假即将来临，新世纪英语报发起“My winter holiday”专栏征稿活动，你打算向该报纸投稿，谈谈你的假期想法。
My winter holiday
study
1.plan my holiday carefully
2.read more books
3..…
relax
1. watch films, like action films best
2. have a trip
3...…
Family life
1.help do some housework
2.
My winter holidayThe winter holiday is coming. I have some good ideas to spend a meaningful holiday.
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13．（2020·江苏宿迁）书面表达
保护环境与自然和谐相处是人类今天面对的大问题。假如你是李华，你们班级正就“保护地球，从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。请根据表格内容，谈谈你周边的环境问题，在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的，以及你这样做的感受。提示词语：reduce, reuse, recycle, energy, plant; happy
环境问题
不关灯、不关水龙头、资源浪费、乱扔垃圾、森林砍伐严重、工厂排污水、污气汽车尾气-----
采取措施
节约水电、绿色出行、绿色购物、回收利用-----
感想
自己的感受---责任、必要、自豪以及对世界的巨大影响-----
要求：1. 必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数90左右，短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数。Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment.
三、书信作文
14．（2020·江苏宿迁）最遥远的距离是我在你身边,你却忙着抢红包‘ 盯得眼花,戳得手疼,抢得心跳…这些都是每年春节抢红包火爆场面的生动写照。这两年春节抢红包，全名狂欢，乐此不疲。抢红包为何如此火热？火热的背后该如何让冷静思考？假如你是李华，你班最近就此开展了一个调查，请用英文给学校校刊《英语天地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。
70% 的学生参加过抢红包游戏活动
75%学生赞同
1. 带来更多的乐趣
2. 更易与他人交流
3. 传统中国文化和现代文化的相结合
25%的学生表示担忧
Nantong Middle school
1. 浪费时间和金钱
2. 与家人交流的机会少
3. 用时太多以至于（1句话展开合理的想象
你的观点
……
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。
2. 要点必须包括所有信息，可以适当发挥。
3. 表格中你的观点需用2-3句话展开合理的想象，做适当发挥
4. 词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear EditorI am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of ‘Grabbing red packets ’in our class.
Yours sincerely
Lihua
15．（2020·江苏徐州）书面表达
以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
Hi,
I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:
Ø recommend two traditional Chinese things
Ø show your reasons why you recommend them
Looking forward to hearing from you.
David
注意事项：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, I am able to better understand the author’s ideas.
In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【详解】题干解读：此题要求写一篇议论文，题目已经给出，看电影还是看书，各有优点，在文章中都要阐述出来。另外，作者还需清楚表达出自己的观点。
例文点评：例文采用三段式；第一人称叙述；文中有很多较高级的句型和用法；行文流畅，结构清晰，态度立场鲜明。
高分亮点：
短语：the opposite opinion；detailed information；agree with；stay at home；in a situation of；in a word。
句型：it is better to do sth. than to do sth.；The reason is that+从句；I have more reasons for it。
2．例文：
Our plans for the winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming. Many of my classmates are making plans for the holiday.I find that reading is a popular plan among students.Some plan to read detective stories because they’re full of honor and mysteries.Some would like to read books about great people.
Another popular plan is travelling.Most students would like to visit Asia or European countries.They plan to visit places of interest there.Some students will rent a bike to travel around YangZhou.
Watching films or TV programmes are also their favourite plans.Boys will watch documentaries,action films,and live basketball matches while girls prefer watching romantic films.
I’d like to be a volunteer in our community center.I think it is meaningful to do such a thing.It can bring me pleasure.
I do hope we can enjoy our holiday.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“Our plans for the winter holiday”为题写一篇文章，要求涵盖下面表格的内容。由于是介绍假期计划，因此在时态的选择上要以一般将来时态为主， 同是在语言的表达上一定要清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2、例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态主要以一般将来时为主；例文详细具体的写了寒假的计划；结构清晰；逻辑性强。
3、高分亮点：
短语：plan to do；be full of；would like to do sth；places of interest；it is meaningful to do sth。
句型：Watching films or TV programmes are also their favourite plan；I think it is meaningful to do such a thing。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如plan to do；be full of；would like to do sth；places of interest；it is meaningful to do sth等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3．例文
How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
Here are some suggestions from my classmates. First, we can help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Next, we can also know more about the world by reading more books. Then, we should get close to the nature and relax ourselves. It is good for our study. What’s more, I think it is very important to keep healthy. We’d better play lots of sports in our spare time.
In a word, there are many things to do in our life. Let’s make full use of our spare time.
【详解】1.题干解读：此篇作文在写作时应承接短文开头，主要谈论如何让课余生活更有意义。根据所给内容，介绍使课余生活有意义的方法及个人感受。
2.例文点评：例文用第一人称进行叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述时，避免汉语式英语，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、句型等，句意叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：do some housework；know more about；what’s more；keep healthy；play lots of sports；make full use of。
句型：①Here are some suggestions from my classmates.
②Next, we can also know more about the world by reading more books.
③What’s more, I think it is very important to keep healthy.
④We’d better play lots of sports in our spare time.
⑤Let’s make full use of our spare time.
【点睛】写作六步骤：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
4．Jackie Chan is one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars in the world. He is also famous as a singer and a director. Jackie Chan was born in Hong Kong in 1954. He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. The film Drunken Master in 1978 marked the beginning of his successful career. In the film he successfully joined humor and exciting action together. His achievements are far snore than a Kung Fu superstar. He has devoted many years to charity work. I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.
【详解】题干解读：这篇文章要求写成龙的生平，介绍成龙的一些事，主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，第三人称单数。要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。介绍人物生平的作文要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
例文点评：这篇短文叙述完整准确，内容忠实于材料，在短文最后表达了自己的看法。在写作中句式变化丰富运用了比较高级的句式，时态准确，符合英语表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语： one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars；is famous as；dreamt of；the beginning of。
时间状语从句：He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. 定语从句：I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.
5．例文
Our school is like a big family. As students, we should protect the environment so as not to throw rubbish. We also should love flowers ,plants and save water. It is necessary for us to protect desks and chairs. Students should get along well and love each other. When someone needs help, we should do our best to help them. It is important for us to study hard. We can read widely and reading can open our eyes. By studying hard, we can realize our dreams. We are polite and honest to people. We should be grateful to those who help us. If we actively join in after-school activities, we can expand our interests, and constantly improve ourselves.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含表格里的内容，谈谈如何从自我做起，创建文明校园。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，介绍了不少于三项的校园活动，包括了校园环境、人际关系、自身修养等，例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3.高分亮点：词组：protect the environment；throw rubbish；get along well；love each other；do our best to；read widely；open our eyes；realize our dreams；improve ourselves等；
句型：It is necessary for us to protect desks and chairs. /When someone needs help, we should do our best to help them. /We can read widely and reading can open our eyes./By studying hard, we can realize our dreams. /If we actively join in after-school activities, we can expand our interests, and constantly improve ourselves.
【点睛】书面表达：
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如protect the environment；throw rubbish；get along well；love each other；do our best to；read widely等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
6．例文
In recent years, some parents always send their children to all kinds of training classes during their holiday to make them study better. As a student, I think this may bring some problems.
First, parents spend lots of money on these classes, but many students feel bored because that’s not what they want to learn. Second, a lot of time is wasted. It is not only bad for children’s study, but also stressful. Also it may not be safe to study in these classes. Third, it probably makes them hate studying. And it may be easy for some children to get into the bad habit of running away from school.
I think we should be given some time to relax and do some things that we want to do, such as playing basketball, football and computer games.Of course, we should finish our homework carefully first.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于一篇议论型文章，主要是以“假期培训可能带来的问题”为线索展开讨论，要求阐述假期培训存在的问题和提出自己的一些建议。可以使用阐述观点的first，second，third等阐述。
2. 例文点评：文章主要分三段描述。第一段总体提出问题，第二段分别对存在的问题进行阐述，第三段提出自己的观点。整个文章结构严谨完整，语言表达准确清晰，语言层次感强，用词恰当到位。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：all kinds of；lots of；not only … but also；such as。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；I think+宾语从句；that引导的定语从句。
7．iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.
However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【详解】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。
点睛：对立观点式
第一段：提出现象。
第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。
第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground.
They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。
第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.
But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
8．例文：
My favourite time of year
My favorite time of the year is winter vacation. Because during the winter holiday, I have time to do what I like. I will practise playing the piano in the winter holiday. I have loved playing the piano since I was a child. I began to play the piano when I was five years old. I can also accompany my family to chat and travel during the winter vacation. I can also make myself relaxed.
However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity. I also like to watch all kinds of documentaries, because I can learn a lot about nature. When I am bored, I can also enjoy tan dun's music while I was reading a book. His music could make me calm.
This is my favorite winter holiday life, it must be colorful.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是主要是描述最喜欢的寒假生活。通过寒假最想要做的一些具体的事情的描写以及为什么喜欢寒假生活的原因，描写清楚即可。
2. 例文点评：文章分两段描写。第一段主要是描写喜欢寒假的原因自己要做的具体的事情的描写，第二段做一个总结。整个文章结构完整，语言表述通顺清楚，用词准确。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：practise doing sth；play the piano；begin to do sth；all kinds of；make sb＋adj。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；while引导的时间状语从句。
9．My hometown is famous for many interest places, such as The Slender West Lake, The Ge Garden, The He Garden and so on. The Slender West Lake is one of the best places that worth a visit. One of the main reason is that the beautiful landscape along the lake attracts a large number of tourists, including the foreigners. Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why the people of Yangzhou are so infatuated with their city. Dongguang Street is a symbol of Yangzhou dishes. You can have an appealing color, aroma, taste and appearance. You will never forget the charming taste.
What’s more, Zhu Ziqing who is one of the most famous writers studied in Yangzhou Middle School and left Yangzhou to Peking University at 18. His works of art express the beauty and kindness of life. They bring wonderful poems to the readers.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于说明文。主要介绍名胜古迹扬州的瘦西湖，东关街和作家朱自清的基本信息。
2.例文点评：例文采用两段式，从去瘦西湖旅游的主要原因到东关街的主要美食再到作家朱自清的基本介绍，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行描写；时态采用一般现在时为主，一般过去式为辅。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be famous for，such as，a large number of，What’s more，a symbol of。
句型：One of the main reason is that，定语从句。
10．例文
My favourite star
My favourite star is Jackson Yee. He was born in Hunan on November 28,2000. He has short hair and looks cool. He likes dancing and began to learn it at an early age. He is both a singer and a famous actor. He is now studying at the Beijing Film Academy. He played the leading role in You're a Teenager and won the prize. He also founded the Jackson Yee foundation, which focuses on stay-at-home children. He has 80 million fans and is beloved by teenagers.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给材料作文，要求根据所给出的材料提示，以My favourite star为题。谈谈最喜欢的明星Jackson Yee（易炀千禧）。本文给出的要点比较具体，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，可适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：根据材料内容可知本文时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be born，both…and…，play the lead role in，left-behind children。
句型：He is both a singer and a famous actor. 他既是一名歌手，也是著名演员。both…and…两者都、既…又…。
He also founded the Jackson Yee foundation, which focuses on left-behind children. 他还成立了Jackson Yee爱心基金，关注留守儿童。这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
11．Dear friends．
I am glad to know you will come to Taixing. I'll tell you something about our school life.
At school, we get along well with our teachers. The students often help and learn from each other. We listen carefully in class and hand in our homework on time after class. There is an art festival at our school every term. Students can watch different types of films and enjoy different art forms. We feel excited about it and we also learn a lot at the festival.
In our free time, we often work as volunteers. Sometimes, we help clean up the parks to keep them beautiful. Besides, we go to the home for the elderly. We help the old people do some cleaning and shopping. This brings them a lot of pleasure.
However, we still have some problems. Some students often stay up to complete their homework. Some students don’t have a healthy diet. These are harmful to our health.
In my opinion, we should manage our time better and eat more fruit and vegetables. It’s better for us to form a good habit.
Welcome to my hometown. I hope you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含表格里的内容，写出校内、校外、存在问题、
解决措施等方面。
2.例文点评：例文通过对表格里的内容，写出校内、校外、存在问题、解决措施等方面。一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。
3.高分亮点：词组：get along well with；from each other；listen carefully；hand in；on time；an art festival；feel excited；learn a lot；clean up；do some cleaning and shopping；stay up；a healthy diet等；
句型：There is an art festival at our school every term. /Students can watch different types of films and enjoy different art forms. /Sometimes, we help clean up the parks to keep them beautiful./In my opinion, we should manage our time better and eat more fruit and vegetables. /It’s better for us to form a good habit. /I hope you will have a good time here.
【点睛】书面表达：
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如get along well with；from each other；listen carefully；hand in；on time；an art festival等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．例文
My winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I have some good ideas to spend a meaningful holiday.
I am planning my holiday carefully. I am going to read more books. I am going to study through the Internet. I am going to get up at six as usual. Then I will exercise. In My winter holiday, I am going to watch films, and I like action films best. I also plan to have a trip to Mount Tai with my parents. I am going to play basketball with my friends. My mother is usually very busy. I am going to help my mother do some housework. My father’s birthday is in the winter holiday. I am going to make birthday noodles for my father. I think he will be very happy.
I am sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful holiday.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于材料作文，也是话题作文，谈论的话题是“My winter holiday”。本文主要谈论寒假计划，时态主要是一般将来时，主要使用be going to结构。本文可知分为三段，采取“总分总”叙述。认为阅读材料，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。注意语法和拼写。
2.例文点评：例文作者叙述了寒假计划，采用三段式，第1段总写，打算过一个有意义的寒假；第2段作者写了具体的措施。最后总结。本文时态使用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，运用合适的连接词或过渡词。没有拼写和语法错误，符合英语的表达习惯。
3. 高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：be going to，through the Internet，as usual ，then，and，be sure等。
句型：(1) I am going to get up at six as usual. (2) I am going to help my mother do some housework.(3) In My winter holiday, I am going to watch films, and I like action films best. (4) I am sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful holiday等。
【点睛】写作六步骤：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
13．Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment, so pollution is more and more serious. Some people waste water, food, and other things.
As a student, I always remember these three words: reduce, reuse, recycle. For example, I turn off the lights when I leave the room and I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. I don’t use paper cups in my daily life. We often collect plastic bottles in our classroom. What’s more, I always take a bus to school instead of asking my parents to drive me.
I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，保护环境与自然和谐相处是人类今天面对的大问题。假如你是李华，你们班级正就“保护地球，从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。请根据表格内容，谈谈你周边的环境问题，在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的，以及你这样做的感受。
2.例文点评：这篇文章从三个方面来写：环境问题；采取措施；感想。时态用一般现在时态的用法，人称用第一人称，适当的也可以用并列句，使短文内容更丰富， 写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：pay attention to；more and more serious；as a student；For example；in my daily life.；instead of。
句型：What’s more, I always take a bus to school instead of asking my parents to drive me.；I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment.
14．例文：
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. 75% of them think it can bring them more fun. It can make it easier for them to get along well with others. The activity brings traditional Chinese culture and modern technology together. However, 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say it’s a waste of time and money to take part in it. They don’t have enough communication with their family members. Moreover, some students spend so much time grabbing red packets that they often forget to do their homework.
I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你班最近就此开展了一个调查，请用英文给学校校刊《英语天地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。语句通顺，要点齐全。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第一、三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：took part in；get along well with；modern technology；a waste of time；communication with；forget to do their homework；spend more time communicating with等。
句型：1. 75% of them think it can bring them more fun. 2.It can make it easier for them to get along well with others. 3.The activity brings traditional Chinese culture and modern technology together. 4.However, 25% of them are worried about the activity. 5.They say it’s a waste of time and money to take part in it.6. Moreover, some students spend so much time grabbing red packets that they often forget to do their homework.
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如took part in；get along well with；modern technology；a waste of time；communication with；forget to do their homework；spend more time communicating with等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
15．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.
The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?
I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.
【详解】本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。文章干净利落，层次分明
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