书面表达作文真题汇编(15题)Ⅲ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考(含答案解析)
展开书面表达作文真题汇编(15题)Ⅲ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、话题作文
1.(2020·江苏苏州)初中三年,你一定结识了许多同窗好友,请你挑选一位你印象最深刻的好朋友,以“The friend who has impressed me most”为题写一篇英语短文,并涵盖以下问题:
1. What is he/she like?
2. What is special about him/her?
3. Does he/she have an effect on you?
4. What do you think of him/her?
注意:1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称,
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范,
3. 词数90词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2.(2021·江苏·盱眙县)青少年是祖国的未来。我们盱眙县在创建全国文明城市的过程中,举办了“争做好市民”评选活动。请你以“Being a good citizen”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书,号召同学们争做“好市民”。内容包括以下要点:
1.在学校:对老师同学有礼貌,努力学习知识,养成良好的学习习惯,爱运动。
2.在家里:经常和父母交流,懂得感恩,分担家务,知错就改。
3.在社会:遵守规则,爱护环境,在公共场合不要大声喧哗,注意人身安全。
4.你的观点……
Being a good citizen
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to be a good citizen?
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3.(2021·江苏南京)阳光中学校报开设了英文专栏。请根据以下调查表,用英文向校报投稿,介绍该校学生的电视节目喜好情况,并简单谈谈你的观点。
Types of TV programmes
Cartoon
Chat show
Documentary
Others
Percent
52%
13%
30%
5%
Reasons
cute characters
famous people
real-life events, …
…
注意:
(1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(3)词数80左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。Sunshine Middle School did a survey about watching TV programmes among students.
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4.(2019·江苏·盐城市)2018年,中国迎来改革开放四十周年。 “四十年众志成城,四十年砥砺奋进,四十年春风化雨,中国人民用双手书写了国家和民族发展的壮丽史诗。”请根据以下提示,以“China in my eyes”为题写一篇英文短文,来描绘你心中的中国。
注意事项:1.词数100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文章中不能出现使用真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包括所提供的主要信息,并适当发挥。
China in my eyes
The year of 2018 marked the 40th anniversary of China’s reform and opening-up. Since 1978, China has ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2021·江苏·扬州市)现在电视上各种节目丰富多彩,作为中学生我们要学会选择适合自己的节目观看,以充实自己的娱乐生活。上周班会,老师组织你们就中学生应该看什么类型的电视节目进行了讨论。请根据讨论内容,写一篇100词左右英语短文。
Types of TV programmes
Opinions
students
Documentary
学到许多自然、历史方面的知识,……
News report
了解世界上正在发生的事,……
Music programme
感到放松,……
teacher
Drama series
长时间观看会伤害眼睛,影响……
I
……
要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Last Monday we had a class meeting to discuss what types of TV programmes we students should watch.
Some students think we should ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2021·江苏·常州市)本学期结束了,学校评选优秀团员,我班张阳被选为优秀团员,根据以下提示,写一篇介绍张阳的短文。
基本情况
张阳,三(2)班优秀团员
有绘画天赋,喜欢黄色,因为……
兴趣爱好
1.喜欢观看访谈节目,因为……
2.喜欢旅游,最喜欢的地方是桂林
优秀事迹
1.上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程
2.上学期,帮助警察把两个小偷逮捕归案
3.再举一例
未来梦想
1. 希望成为一名工程师,为家乡设计出连接城乡的高铁
2…….
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Class 2, Grade 3. He has been chosen as an excellent League Member this term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2021·江苏·沭阳县)根据表格中所给提示,用英语写一篇词数不少于100的短文,介绍你去年暑假的北京之游。
人物:我和父母
时间:去年暑假
地点:北京 (中国 首都)
天气:炎热
交通:火车
活动
第一天 游览天安门广场,观看升国旗;
第二天 爬长城,是著名的世界奇迹之一;
第三天 参观颐和园(The Summer Palace),一个大的中式花园,皇帝(emperor)避暑的好地方。
此外品尝当地的特色美食,为亲朋好友购买纪念品(souvenir)。
感受
……
注意事项:
1. 短文须包括表格中的所有要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 表格中的省略号部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。A trip to Beijing
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8.(2019·江苏苏州)某中学自开展“向阳光少年学习”的活动以来,我们的身边涌现了许许多多的“阳光少年”,请你以“A Sunshine Teenager”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”(Tim)。
要点提示:
1. 属相是虎,充满自信,总是面带微笑。勤奋谦虚,乐意接受他人的建议。
2. 最喜欢黄色,因为黄色……(请自拟一点)。
3. 通过努力,他成功地在考试中处于领先地位。
5. 你的感想(请自拟两点)。
注意:
1.词数90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总数)。
2.短文必须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通畅。
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Hello! My name is Mike. Our school had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us.
Tim is one of them.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2020·江苏镇江)某英语报面向全市初三学生征稿:MY HERO AND I,请根据下面提示,为该报写一篇英语短文。在初三的英语学习中,我认识了很多名人(请从Spud Webb, Anne Frank, Tan Dun, Audrey Hepbrirn, Jackie Chan and Neil Armstrong任选其一),征稿内容要涵盖以下所有要点。
1. Who has impressed you most?
2. What do you know about him/her?
3. Why do you admire him/her?
4. What have you learned from him/her?
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数90左右,文章开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Hero And I
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I'm lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields, among whomhas impressed me most.
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10.(2020·江苏·铜山)请根据你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea . Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:
recommend two traditional Chinese things
show your reasons why you recommend them
Looking forward to hearing from you.
David
注意:
1.对你要推荐的两件中国传统物品要逐一陈述,给出理由,适当发挥。
2.词数90左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。I am glad to share my opinion with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.(2020·江苏徐州)书面表达
假如你叫李华,昨天晚上你看电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案(robbery)。请就以下信息,以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料,要求字数90左右。材料的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总字数。
案发时间
昨天晚上大约九点
案发地点
电影院附近的一条街道拐角处
作案人情况
两个男子,一个戴着墨镜的高个子,一个矮个子
受害人情况
一位年轻的女士,戴着一条金项链和一块金手表
案发经过
你正在街道上走着,突然听到身后有人呼救。你看到两个男子正抢劫(rob)一名女子。女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗(have a fierce fight with...)。当你赶到时,两个劫匪(robber)已骑着他们自己的车逃跑。女子的金表被抢劫了,但幸运的是女子没有受伤。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope the information will help you catch the robbers. Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
三、电子邮件
12.(2020·江苏·沭阳县)假如你是张明,你的美国笔友Jack对中国很感兴趣,想要深入了解。请你根据以下提示给他发个电子邮件,简要介绍一下中国的概况。
Brief introduction
位于亚洲东部,人口众多,幅员辽阔,历史悠久。
Famous attractions
万里长城,闻名于世,它…… (至少再补充一处名胜)
Culture and customs
节日丰富多彩……,我最喜欢……,因为……
传统艺术形式多样,有剪纸,戏曲……
Great people
屠呦呦,著名的科学家,发现青蒿素,挽救了很多人的生命,2015年获得了诺贝尔医学奖;钟南山,杰出的医学家,在抗击新冠肺炎疫情中做出巨大贡献,2020年被授予共和国勋章。
他们……
我认为……希望……
注意事项:
1.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺。
3.参考词汇:青蒿素artemisinin;诺贝尔奖the Nobel Prize;新冠肺炎COVID-19;共和国勋章Medal of the Republic
Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear that you are interested in China. Now let me tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、书信作文
13.(2020·江苏·南京)2020 will witness the second Art Festival in Sun Town. This year, the government welcomes people from different countries to take part in it. The art festival will be made up of four parts: Music World, TV World, Film World and Book World. It also collects ideas from the public.
Here’s what to do:
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative!
Please let the government know:
Which part do you choose to design?
What activities will you organize?
Why and how will you organize these activities?
注意:1. 80词左右,语句流畅通顺;
2. 内容需涵盖以上要点,并作适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现任何考生真实姓名。
Dear sir or Madam,
I prefer to choose
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五、讲稿
14.(2021·江苏扬州)你的成长像一次长途旅行,成长过程中有收获,有困惑,你在每次历练中成长。恰逢学校将举办题为“Growing up”的英文演讲比赛。请以此为题,谈谈你的成长过程。内容如下:
How to learn the world
Books, Internet: learn different things in different times and places, …
Parents, friends, teachers… (people who influenced you): teach you how to do, …
How to solve the trouble
My problems
How to deal with them
How to feel
Don’t give up before difficulty
Growing up is more important than success
Others (at least one point)
注意:
1、必须包括表中所有提示内容,并作适当发挥;
2、文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3、表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4、不少于90 词 (文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(2019·江苏·南京)你校校刊《英语园地》进行英语征文比赛,你打算以“My favourite TV programme”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文向该刊投稿。
要求:语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,并涵盖以下三个问题:
What kind of TV programme do you like best?
What is the TV programme about? (Give an example/examples.)
Why do you like watching this kind of TV programme?
My favourite TV programme
参考答案:
1.例文:
The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is Li Ping. She is tall and thin. She is so humorous that I never feel bored when she is with me. She is also helpful and helps me a lot. We often have a good time together. She has a lot of effect on me. She is so careful and helps me correct many mistakes. With her help, I make great progress in my study. I am very grateful to her. She is my best friend. I will remember her forever.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文,介绍一位我印象最深刻的好朋友。注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时;文章开头已给出,写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍我的朋友的名字,长相,特别之处以及对你的影响;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。
2.例文:
Being a good citizen
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to be a good citizen?
At school, we should be polite to teachers and classmates. We also should study hard and form good learning habits. In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to build up a good body. It’s our duty to help parents do some housework at home and we should always be thankful for what our parents have done for us. Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them. Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we’d better face and correct them timely. What’s more, I suggest we obey the rules in public and don’t speak loudly. We should care for the environment. Last but not least, we should keep in mind that safety is first.
In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above. I sincerely hope everyone can join us and try to be a good citizen.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示用英语写一篇倡议书,号召同学们争做“好市民”。注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时;文章开头已给出,写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍如何做一个“好市民”并表达自己的观点;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。
3.One possible version:
Sunshine Middle School did a survey about watching TV programmes among students.
According to the survey, 52 percent of students like cartoons because there are cute characters in them. 13% of students like chat shows, from which they can see a lot of famous people. 30% of students prefer documentaries, because documentaries have real-life events or can tell a lot of knowledge from them. The remaining 5% of students like other types of TV programs.
As for me, my favorite is the documentary. I like to explore fields in many locations, and documentaries with rich content can satisfy my needs.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文,介绍阳光中学对该校学生的电视节目喜好情况的调查结果。注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时;文章开头已给出,写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍阳光中学的学生对电视节目的喜好情况,并谈谈自己的观点;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。
4.例文
China in my eyes
The year of 2018 marked the 40th anniversary of China’s reform and opening-up. Since 1978, China has become more and more powerful. China has losts of places of interest, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and so on. Many foreign tourists visit these scenic spots every year. At the same time, Confucius Institutes have been set up in some countries to let more people know about Chinese culture. There are many people who have made great contributions to China’s development. For example, Yuan Longping, the father of hybrid rice, solved the problem of food for many people. In the future, Chinese people also have many visions. We hope China can get richer and stronger, and the Chinese people can get happier and happier.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,题目要求以“China in my eyes”为题,根据图片展示内容,来描绘你心中的中国。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用现在完成时和一般现在时相结合;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
5.例文:
Last week, we had a class meeting to discuss what types of TV programmes we students should watch.
Some students think we should watch documentaries because we can learn a lot about nature and history from them. And they can open our eyes. Some students believe that watching news report is good for us because we can know what is happening around the world. And we can also learn about many real-life events.Other students think watching music programmes may help us relax and learn about different music all over the world.
Our teacher advises us to watch fewer drama series because watching too much TV is bad for our eyes and may influence our study.
In my opinion, we should learn to choose the TV programmes which are suitable for us. And we should keep a balance between our study and TV programmmes.
【详解】1.题干解读:本篇书面表达是一篇材料作文。题目内容是在讨论中学生应该看什么类型的电视节目。要求我们根据讨论内容,写一篇100词左右英语短文。
2.写作指导:人称主要用第一、三人称进行叙述;时态采用一般现在时;在写作时开头介绍我们班开班会讨论青少年应该看什么类型的电视节目,学生对此的看法;第二段叙述老师的看法;第三段介绍我的看法。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
6.One possible version:
Zhang Yang is a student in Class 2, Grade 3. He has been chosen as an excellent League Member this term. Zhang Yang has a gift for drawing. He likes yellow because it represents wisdom./It is the colour of wisdom./Some people prefer it when they hope for success.
He has some hobbies. For example, he likes watching chat shows because there are always some famous people talking about their lives. He also likes travelling. His favourite place is Guilin.
He has done several good things. Last month he donated his pocket money to Project Hope. Last term he helped the police arrest two thieves.
He has some great dreams. He hopes to own a robot . He wants to become an engineer and design the high-speed railway connecting the city to the countryside for his hometown.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。写一篇介绍班级同学张阳的短文。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。从他的基本情况,兴趣爱好,优秀事迹以及未来梦想等方面来介绍他,写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
7.One possible version:
A trip to Beijing
Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing- the capital of China for a visit. We went there by train. It was very hot there.
On the first day, we went to see the Tian’anmen Square and watched the flag-raising ceremony. On the second day, we visited the Great Wall. It is one of the most famous wonders in the world. On the third day, we visited the Summer Palace which is a big Chinese garden. In the ancient times, it was a good place for the emperors to spend the summer. We also tried the special local food and bought some souvenirs for our friends and relatives.
I think Beijing is an ancient city of culture. It’s worth visiting. I hope to visit Beijing again.
【详解】题干解读:题目要求用英语写篇短文来介绍你去年暑假的北京之游;要求包含表格中所有提示,并进行适当发挥。
写作指导:此作文时态以一般过去时为主,采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式,第一段:主要介绍北京天气情况、和谁以及怎样的交通方式去北京旅游;第二段:主要介绍在北京旅游时的活动;第三段:介绍北京之旅的感受。
8.例文:
Hello! My name is Mike. Our school had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us.
Tim is one of them. He was born in the Year of the Tiger. He is a confident boy who always has a smile on his face. Everyone likes him because he is hard-working as well as modest. He is willing to accept others’ advice and this makes him even better. Through hard work he succeeds in taking the lead in the exams. Tim is also a sunny boy. He says he likes yellow best as yellow is the colour of the sun and it represents wisdom. We all think his favourite colour matches his characteristics.
In my opinion, Tim is a real sunshine teenager. His strong qualirties impress us and win high praise from parents, teachers and other students. I feel proud of having a classmate like him.
【详解】题干解读:题目要求以“A Sunshine Teenager”为题,根据要点提示,写一篇短文介绍阳光少年Tim。要包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要结合一般现在时和一般过去时,以第三人称为主来行文;文章可分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段介绍Tim;第三段写自己的感想。要保证无单词拼写和语法错误。
9.例文:
My Hero And I
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I'm lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields, among whom Jackie Chan has impressed me most. He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. His movies are very exciting. In order to make the movies real and excellent, he plays the roles of the movies carefully. So I admire him very much. Sometimes, he can hurt himself. I should learn strong spirits from him.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头介绍成龙给我留下的印象最深;接下来介绍成龙的情况以及我欣赏他的地方;最后表示我向他学习坚强的精神。
2.例文点评:例文采用一段式;用第一、三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时,介绍成龙的拍摄的电影以及角色等叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点:
短语:get to know;in order to;play the roles of;learn…from…。
句型:定语从句among whom Jackie Chan has impressed me most;句型such+ a/an+形容词+单数名词+that+从句。
10.例文:
I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.
The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?
I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求推荐两件中国传统物品,并介绍推荐的理由。
2.写作指导:本文用第一和第三人称来写作,时态采用一般现在时为主,讲述推荐的理由时要叙述完整,条理清晰。
11.Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you. It was at 9 p.m. Last night. The scene of the robbery was at the corner of a street near the cinema.
When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street. Suddenly I heard someone calling for help behind. I turned around and found two men were robbing a young woman. The woman put up a fierce fight with them. I ran up to them quickly, but when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes, the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of, and she was lying on the ground. Luckily, she was not hurt.
The suspect were two men. One was tall with sunglasses, and the other was. I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你看电影在回家途中目击的一起抢劫案。所提供的材料中列举了案发经过。
2.例文点评:主要从时间、地点、经过来描述:1).时间:昨天晚上大约九点It was at 9 p.m. Last night.;2).地点:电影院附近的一条街道拐角处;3).经过:你正在街道上走着,I was walking in the street.突然听到身后有人呼救call for help,你看到两个男子正抢劫一名女子see(find) sb doing sth.,女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗have a fierce fight with.,当你赶到时,两个劫匪已骑着他们自己的车逃跑run away/be away。女子的金表被抢劫了be robbed of,但幸运的(Luckily)是女子没有受伤。时态为一般过在时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须材料卡片上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密。
3. 高分亮点:
1). When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street 当抢劫案发生时,我正在街上走着。句子 I was walking in the street是过去进行时态。
2). when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes,the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of. 当我赶到时,两个劫匪已骑着他们自己的车逃跑,女子的金表被抢劫了。从句为一般过去时态,主句用过去完成时态,表过去的过去。
12.例文:
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in China. Now let me tell you something about it.
China, located in the east of Asia, has a large population, a vast territory and a long history.
There are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. The Great Wall is famous all over the world. It is the symbol of China. There is an old Chinese saying that a man is not a hero until he reaches the Great Wall. My favorite place is the Forbidden City, where ancient Chinese emperors lived. I have visited it many times. The Forbidden City is especially beautiful in winter.
Chinese traditional festivals are rich and colorful, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid Autumn Festival, the Spring Festival, the Lantern Festival and so on. My favorite is the Spring Festival, because I can receive many red packets. There are many traditional art forms, such as paper cutting, opera and so on.
There are many great people in China. Tu Youyou, the famous scientist who discovered artemisinin and saved many people’s lives, won the Nobel Prize for Medicine in 2015; Zhong Nanshan, an outstanding medical scientist, was awarded the Medal of the Republic in 2020 for his great contribution in the fight against the COVID-19.They are the pride of China and worth learning from all of us.
I think China is a very charming country and worth visiting by yourself. I hope I can take you to visit China and feel the charm of China.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一封电子邮件,根据提示内容向笔友介绍中国的情况。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。从地理位置,名胜古迹,文化和风俗以及著名的人物等方面来介绍,写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
13.范文:
Dear sir or Madam,
I prefer to choose Book World to design.
I’m going to divide Book World into three parts. The first part is the history of the book. The second part is the types of books, such as paper books, e-books and so on. The third part is the future development of books. Besides, I have prepared a special reading corner for children, which is decorated with all kinds of cartoon characters. There will be a robot in the shape of a book waiting for you to ask any questions. Visitors can not only read books, but also ask what they want to know about books.
I think books have no national boundaries. People all over the world can share the knowledge in books. Reading is an important way for people to get knowledge. I hope through these activities, let more people know the importance of reading.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】题干解读:题目要求给政府写一封信,分享你的想法;要求包含所有要点提示,并进行适当发挥。
写作指导:此作文时态以一般将来时和一般现在时为主,采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式,第一段:点明你要选择哪部分进行设计;第二段:介绍你为这部分准备了哪些活动以及怎么组织这些活动;第三段:介绍你组织这些活动的原因。
14.例文
Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way.
I learned about the world in different ways. I like reading books which can help me learn about people in different times and places. And I also learned a lot from my parents. They taught me how to be a kind person. At school, I learned how to get along well with my classmates and teachers.
On the way I also had problems. For example, I could not achieve a balance between working and playing. Then my head teacher told me to make a study plan and work out the time I can spend on my hobbies.
I solved the problems in this way. I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily. Having a good relationship with parents, teachers and classmates is important in our lives. Growing up is more important than success.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生根据写作提示,以“Growing up”为题写一篇演讲稿,谈一谈自己的成长过程,属于讲稿类作文。
2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇讲稿应以第一、三人称和一般现在时展开叙述。写作时承接开头,紧扣表格提示的内容,要写出自己认识世界的方式、成长中的问题及解决方法,最后谈一谈自己的感受。行文注意主谓一致,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
15.My Favourite Programme
Different students may like different kinds of TV programmes. I am a Grade 9 student. Of all the TV programmes, I like News Report best.
The News Report tells us what is happening in the world, with lots of up-to-date information from the international political situation to the latest football game. I can learn a lot which can’t be learned from books.
This programme can bring me a lot of fun and show me a lot of important things as well. Because of it, the world has been becoming smaller and smaller. Now watching this programme has become part of my life.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目要求完成英语征文比赛稿件,内容要涵盖题目中提出的三个问题。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式结构,第一段提出自己最喜欢的电视节目,第二段叙述节目的内容,第三段解释自己为什么喜欢这个节目;整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;时态主要是第一人称和第三人称;时态主要是一般现在时。
3.高分亮点:
短语:different kinds of;like…best;from…to…;a lot of;as well。
句型:what引导的宾语从句;be learned from被动语态;show sb. sth.;the world has been becoming smaller and smaller现在完成进行时
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