高中英语人教版 (2019)必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life集体备课ppt课件
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Dear Jnsn, My name is Li Hua, a Class 6, Grade 1 student at Yang Ming high schl. Learning that new members are wanted in the English club, I'm writing t apply fr it. With humrus and easy-ging characteristics, I can get alng well with thers. Besides, I have been interested in English since I was very yung s that I have a gd cmmand /knwledge f English.Additinally, experience f mre than ten years’ English learning enables me t cmunicate with thers fluently. Therefre, I hld a firm belief that I will meet all yur requirements. Hpefully, my applicatin can be taken int cnsideratin. I will never fail t live up t yur chice. Yurs, Li Hua
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Dear Jnsn, My name is Li Hua, a Class 6, Grade 1 student at Yang Ming high schl. Learning that new members are wanted in the English club, I'm writing t apply fr it. With humrus and easy-ging characteristics, I can get alng well with thers. Besides, I have been interested in English since I was very yung s that I have a gd cmmand /knwledge f English.Additinally, experience f mre than ten years’ English learning enables me t cmunicate with thers fluently. Therefre, I hld a firm belief that I will meet all yur requirements. Hpefully, my applicatin can be taken int cnsideratin. I will never fail t live up t yur chice. Yurs , Li Hua
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Therefre, I hld a firm belief that I will meet all yur requirements.
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假如你是高一新生李华,学校为了丰富你们的课余生活,为大家开设了很多课外活动。但是最近在繁重的学习任务和紧张的日程安排下,课外活动选择的问题上遇到了困惑,请给好朋友Jhnsn写一封求助信寻求帮助,描述自己遇到的困难或问题并表达感谢。内容提示如下:1.写信目的(交代写信的背景及目的)2.求助内容(解释求助原因及具体诉求)3.表示感谢并希望对方及早回复。
熟悉的朋友(是否需要自我介绍)
短语 翻译 1.对困惑 be cnfused abut 2.寻求建议/帮助 ask fr suggestins/help3.丰富我们的校园生活 enrich ur campus life4.开设课外活动set up extra-curricular activities5.作为高一新生 as a freshman6. 课余时间 spare time7. 繁重的学习任务 heavy task8.紧张的日常安排tight schedule9.发现做某事困难find it hard/tugh t d 10.作出恰当的选择 chse prperly
11.面临困难/问题 cnfrnt/face difficulties/prblems12.忙于做某事 be busy ding sth13. 面对 be faced with14.渴望做某事 be anxius t d sth15.多种多样的 diverse/ varius/ a variety f 16.作出正确的选择\决定 make a suitable chice17.报名 sign up fr18.提供一些有建设性的指导 ffer sme cnstructive suggestins19.产生作用 make a difference20.因某事感激某人 I wuld appreciate it if yu culd
Dear Jnsn, Faced with the prblem f hw t chse suitable extra-curricular activities, I feel s cnfused. That is why I am writing t ask yu fr sme suggestins. T enrich ur campus life, ur schl sets up many extra-curricular activities t chse frm. As a freshman, there are many curses we have t study, which leaves us little spare time. With ur heavy task and tight schedule, I find it really hard/tugh t balance academic pressure and activities. Besides, chsing prperly frm diverse extra-curricular activities by myself is such a big challenge . I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me sme cnstructive suggestins. Lking frward t yur rely.
欣赏: 1. 首段运用悬垂结构,引出写信背景。2. 中段从性格,学识和经验三方面来讲诉李华的理由,运用了with 短语结构,分词结构作原因状语和结果状语。总结句用了同位语从句。句式丰富,结构清晰,内容覆盖所有主要点。 3.尾段用了被动句。闪光点:框架结构清晰句式多样1分词结构做状语2.with 结构做原因状语3.s that 结果状语4.experience无灵主语5.同位语从句6.衔接副词无缝对接,行文流畅紧凑7.被动结构
Yurs ,Li Hua
Make sure yur letter is cmplete.
Dear Jnsn, Faced with the prblem f hw t chse suitable extra-curricular activities, I feel s cnfused. That is why I am writing t ask yu fr suggestins. T enrich ur campus life, ur schl sets up many extra-curricular activities t chse frm. As a freshman, there are many curses we have t study, which leaves us little spare time. With ur heavy task and tight schedule, I find it really hard/tugh t balance academic pressure and activities. Besides, chsing prperly frm diverse extra-curricular activities by myself is such a big challenge . I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me sme cnstructive suggestins. Lking frward t yur rely.
yurs Li Hua
1.对困惑 be cnfused abut 2.寻求建议/帮助 ask fr suggestins/help3.面对 be faced with
首段写作: self -intrductin ?backgrund infrmatinwriting purpse
I am cnfused abut the prblems f chsing the extra-curricular activities.I am faced with the prblems f chsing extra-curricular activities.I am writing t ask fr help/suggestin.
Tip1:合并句子,分词做状语结构表原因
______________, I am cnfused. That is why ____________________.
Dear Jnsn, Faced with the prblem f hw t chse suitable extra-curricular activities, I feel s cnfused. That is why I am writing t ask yu fr sme suggestins. T enrich ur campus life, ur schl sets up many extra-curricular activities t chse frm. As a freshman, there are many curses we have t study, which leaves us little spare time. With ur heavy task and tight schedule, I find it really hard/tugh t balance academic pressure and activities. Besides, chsing prperly frm diverse extra-curricular activities by myself is such a big challenge . I wuld appreciate if yu culd ffer me sme cnstructive suggestins. Lk frward t yur rely.
Yurs Li Hua
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me sme cnstructive suggestins. Lking frward t yur reply.
尾段写作: expectatins appreciatin
Tip2:经典句式 精准背诵
首尾段写作:1.Pay special attentin t the frmat f the sentence structure in the writing f the first and the last sure there is n detailed infrmatin besides self-intrductin , back-grund infrmatin, and purpse f writing in the first sure the last paragraph crrespnd t the first f the tw parapraphs are fcused n the theme.
2.为了丰富我们的校园生活,学校为我们开设了很多课外活动,需要我们自己选择想要参加的活动。3.作为一个高一新生,我们有很多课程不得不学,课余时间就很少了。4.我面对着繁重的学业压力和紧张的日程安排。5.我发现从多种多样的课外活动中作出一个合适自己的选择非常艰难。
中段写作:句式多样1.现在分词或者过去分词做状语2.t d 做目的状语3.which引导的非限制性定语从句4.with 复合结构表原因5.find it adj t d sth 5.ding做主语
中段写作:表示目的的句型s thatin rder thatin rder tt d sth rInitially,I have a gd knwledge f spken English, which enables me t cmmunicate wi
varius sentence pattens
imitate the writing:为了丰富我们的校园生活,学校为我们开设了很多课外活动,需要我们自己选择想要参加的。T enrich ur campus life, ur schl sets up many extra-curricular activities fr us t chse frm.
rich 富有的、enrich 丰富able 有能力的enable 使某人有能力
Tip3:动词不定式表目的
中段写作:Revise:首先,我对英语口语有很好的掌握,使得我能和外国人流畅地沟通。Initially,I have a gd knwledge f spken English, which enables me t cmmunicate with freigners fluently.
imitate the writing:作为一个高一新生,有很多课程不得不学,这使得我们有很少的业余时间。As a freshman, there are many curses we have t study, which leaves us little spare time.
Tip3:模仿写作 which 引导的定语从句
中段写作:模仿写句再者,随和的性格让我处于一个优势能与人很好地相处。Additinally, being easy-ging puts me at an advantage t get alng well with thers easily.
imitate the writing:此外,独立从众多的课外活动中作出一个选择是一个大的挑战。 Besides, chsing prperly frm diverse extra-curricular activities by myself is such a big challenge .
Tip5:模仿写作 ding做主语
中段写作:模仿写句:有着幽默随和的性格,我和同学们相处地很好。With humrus and easy-ging character, I can get alng well with thers.
imitate the writing:有着繁重的学业和紧张的日程,我感觉平衡好学业压力和活动很困难。With ur heavy task and tight schedule, I find it really hard/tugh t balance academic pressure and activities.
Dear Jnsn, Faced with the prblem f hw t chse suitable extra-curricular activities, I feel s cnfused. That is why I am writing t ask yu fr sme suggestins. T enrich ur campus life, ur schl sets up many extra-curricular activities t chse frm. As a freshman, there are many curses we have t study, which leaves us little spare time. With ur heavy task and tight schedule, I find it really hard/tugh t balance academic pressure and activities. Besides, chsing prperly frm diverse extra-curricular activities by myself is such a big challenge . I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me sme cnstructive suggestins. Lking frward t yur reply. Yurs, Li Hua
Dear Jnsn, Faced with the prblem f hw t chse suitable extra-curricular activities, I feel s cnfused. That is why I am writing t ask yu fr sme suggestins. T enrich ur campus life, ur schl sets up many extra-curricular activities fr us t chse frm. As a freshman, there are many curses we have t study, which leaves us little spare time. With ur heavy task and tight schedule, I find it really hard/tugh t balance academic pressure and activities. Besides, chsing prperly frm diverse extra-curricular activities by myself is such a big challenge . I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me sme cnstructive suggestins. Lking frward t yur reply. Yurs, Li Hua
清晰的结构合理的布局丰富,充分的信息相关,聚焦的内容多样的句型简洁凝练的语言1.现在分词或者过去分词做状语2.t d 做目的状语3.which引导的非限制性定语从句4.with 复合结构表原因5.find it adj t d sth 5.ding做主语适恰的语调?适恰的语气
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Tip6:适恰,诚挚的语气
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