高考英语书面表达读后续写——如何建构微情境 课件

这是一份高考英语书面表达读后续写——如何建构微情境 课件，共20页。PPT课件主要包含了“痛点”我知道，人物描写很单薄，环境描写很缺乏，微 情 境失 败，得分有锦囊，情●境，How，What，Have a try，学生作品等内容，欢迎下载使用。
800-meter test/1000-meter test
Yesterday, I ran 800 meters. It was s lng that I culdn't hardly bear it. Befre the test, I was nervus. It was a nightmare. (Cindy)
Black Beauty
The weather quickly grew wrse. We passed sggy meadws and crssed a flded rad where the water came up t my knees. At last we reached ur destinatin, but the squire's business tk ages and it was late befre we culd g hme. The trees swayed wildly as the wind tre thrugh them and we were pelted with twigs and leaves. I culdn't wait t get back t my nice warm stable. Suddenly there was a terrible cracking nise. Overhead an ak tree graned, and then crashed t the grund. Its ripped-up rts landed right in frnt f me. It was terrifying and I wanted t run away, but I'd been taught nt s I stpped where I was, trembling with shck. Jhn jumped dwn frm the cart and his calm vice sn sthed(安抚) me.
extreme strm
BB's fear but firmness&respnsibility
FireBlack Beauty
T find ut * descriptins f the fire * descriptins f BB's feeling & reactin * descriptins f peple's reactin & rescue wrk
*My eyes were stung. /culdn't breathe*frightened*t frightened t mve a step
*An stler ran in(The dr burst pen).*untied
*snrted & kicked *panic*never been s scared befre
*James gently patted me t calm me dwn.
*nisy*running arund shuting
*fire engines came;*firemen leaped t the grund and pulled ut ...
* 鱼骨图来自何小庆老师
*panicked*wrried
Use as many expressins yu learned just nw as pssible t write a scene like an extreme weather, a fire, etc.（arund 100 wrds）
Once n a dark winter's day, the yellw fg hung s thick and heavy in the streets f Lndn that the lamps were lighted. A strange-lking little girl sat in a cab with her father and was driven rather slwly thrugh the streets.
The air was ht and steamy and filled with the scent f flwers, thusands f them.
It was a fine dry night; frst in the air; the streets as clean as a ballm flr; the lamps, unshaken, by any wind, drawing a regular pattern f light and shadw.
Sme days the sunsets wuld be purple and pink. And sme days they were a blazing range setting fire t the cluds n the hrizn.
He rubbed his eyes—it was bright sunny mrning. The birds were hpping and twittering amng the bushes, and the eagle was wheeling alft and breasting the pure muntain breeze.
The weather has changed. The snw fell thick and fast, cvering the rads, the rfs, the trees in the gardens, the frnt steps, the carriages, and the hrses.
The cluds ver the land nw rse like muntains and the cast was nly a lng green line with the gray blue hills behind it. The water was a dark blue nw, s dark that it was almst purple.
As I walked, thunder rumbled in the muntains all arund and rain began t fall in heavy drps. When I reached the place, the strm was at its fiercest and the cuntryside was lit up by wild flashes f lightning.
The weather had cleared, the sun was streaming dwn and the sea was calm.
* 语料来自《新高考英语读后续写实践指南》和《典范英语10》
Descriptins
1. be in great excitement2. be verwhelmed with happiness3. be verjyed with4. be madly happy
1. feel rage build up inside me at the thught f2. feel a wave f anger sweep ver her3. feel ne's bld bil4. be filled with a sudden anger/a dark sheen f fury
1. be vercme with grief2. be in intense srrw and deslatin（孤独）
1. Terrr gripped me.2. feel all the fear returning
1. be mad with impatience.（不耐烦）2. be like a child with a marvellus present he can't wait t unwrap（好奇，迫不及待）3. be in the depths f despair/be in a pit f ttal despair（绝望）4. feel a surge f triumph（骄傲）5. be vercme with a feeling f disgust（厌恶，恶心）6. be trtured by feelings f intense guilt（愧疚）7. with scattered and brken hpe（失望）8. be badly startled（受惊）
* 语料均来自《典范英语10》
Have a try—迁移创写
At first, Surrell didn't see the black smke r flames shting frm the windws f his neighbrs' hme. He and his wife were just having a dinner in their wn huse in Allentwn, Pennsylvania, when they heard smene screaming: "The huse is n fire!” He went t investigate. That's when he saw tw wmen and a girl crazily at a lss n their prch(走廊). It was his neighbur' s huse. “The baby's inside there!" ne f the wmen cried. Thugh the fire department had been called, Surrell, then 64, instinctively(本能地) ran inside. "The baby" was 8-year-ld Tiara Rberts, wh always called him Uncle Surrell. She was the wman's granddaughter and a playmate f Surrell's three yungest kids, 8, 10, and 12. The ther tw n the prch were Tiara's aunt and cusin.
Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, he went in a secnd time.Paragraph 2: Surrell wke up in the hspital a cuple f days later.
Entering the burning huse was like running int "a bucket f black paint". The thick smke caused Surrell t walk blindly arund, burned his eyes, and made it impssible fr him t breathe. He felt his thrat and lungs burned, and every blink stung(蛰) his eyes. The cnditins wuld have been very dangerus fr anyne, but fr Surrell, wh has chrnic bstructive pulmnary disease(慢性阻塞性肺病) and was in hspital just half a year ag, they were life- risking. After a few minutes in the smke-filled huse searching but in vain, he ran utside t catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately. “The secnd flr.” her aunt shuted back. Surrell knew he culdn't hld his breath fr lng. S he uttered a little prayer: "Well, Gd, this is it. Yu gt t help me, because I'm nt cming ut withut that little girl.”
One pssible versin
Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, he went in a secnd time. The darkness was verwhelming(adj. 势不可挡的，压倒的). He ran blindly in the blackness, and finally made it t the secnd flr, where he was met by intense(adj.巨大的) heat. He was already ut f breath. "Baby girl, where are yu? " He cried desperately. All he culd hear was the ppping f burning wd. Then a sft but distinct(adj. 清楚的) man(n. 呻吟) emerged. He quickly crawled (vt.爬) tward the sund. Finally, he tuched smething. A she, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara tward him and hugged her tight and said, "Uncle’s gt yu. "The last thing he remembered, he was utside.
Paragraph 2： Surrell wke up in the hspital a cuple f days later. Having suffered severe burns t his windpipe(n. 气管) and the upper prtin(n. 部分) f his lungs, he spent anther tw weeks in the hspital. Tiara recvered sn and was released frm the hspital(出院) after tw days. She went t visit Surrell every day, talking with Surrell, thugh Surrell, whse thrat clsed ff and wh had t take extra medicatin, can't speak any wrd. "Thank yu fr saving my life, Uncle Surrell. "Tiara smiled. " It's a small price t pay, "Surrell thught. "but I' d d it again in a heartbeat (=withut thinking abut it).
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