2023届高考英语二轮复习书面表达:【读后续写】寻找手套 课件
展开第二节:读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。注意:所续写短文的词数应为150左右;应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.
Basic requirements n “Cntinuatin Writing”:
Based n the given infrmatin, cntinue t write the unfinished stry and try t make yur writing .
* main plts f the passage * ten underlined keywrds * tw given sentences
Step 1 read
Principle 1: Be a ready detective
searched pckets and bag fr glves
selected fd in the stre
re-entered the stre t search fr glves
What did d n Christmas Eve?
Fcus n the main plts
fund glves lst at the exit
fllwed the same rute
asked the custmers \the cashier\the Lst and Fund Office
stared at the peple with glves
tne (情节基调): ?
a\an ending
Bad luck, Gerge thught, t lse his expensive glves n Christmas Eve.
Fcus n the tne
Fcus n ten underlined key wrds
Lst and Fund Office
Fcus n tw given sentences
Para 1: Suddenly, he nticed a man heading fr the dr,
Para 2: Back hme, he was upset and always thinking whether t buy a new pair.
* infer pssible lgical plts * arrange them reasnably
Step 2 draft
Principle 2: Be a reasnable nvelist
Infer pssible plts
Paragraph 1:Suddenly, he nticed a man heading fr the dr,
Q1: Hw did Gerge feel when he fund a man ? And why?
Q3: Culd it be Gerge's glves?
Obviusly nt
Q4: What wuld Gerge d next?
Q2: What did Gerge d then?
Old Gerge's attempts t search fr the glves were in vain.
2. Gerge was excited and decided t ask the man.
3. It culdn't be Gerge's glves.
4. Gerge had t leave the stre feeling frustrated.
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, he nticed a man heading fr the dr,
1. The man was wearing a pair f black glves.
Paragraph 2: Back hme, he was upset and always thinking whether t buy a new pair.
Q1: What was Gerge's alternative plan?
Q2: What wuld Gerge d befre making a final decisin?
Q3: Wuld Gerge have gd luck?
If the glves were nwhere t be fund, ...
He wuldn't give up hpe...
psitive energy r negative energy
Gerge went t the stre in the hpe that he was blessed with gd luck / a gd deed was never lst.
* use different structures * use transitinal wrds(过渡) * add sme relevant details 1
* infer pssible lgical plts * arrange them reasnably
* main plts f the passage * ten underlined key wrds * tw given sentences
Step3 plish
Step 2 draft
Step 1 read
Principle 3: Be a respnsible editr
Have a try!
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, he nticed a man heading fr the dr, Paragraph 2: Back hme, he was upset and always thinking whether t buy a new pair. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ways t express feelings:feel upset\sad\anxius\upset\blue\ depressed\dejected\ a lss\in a panic\in a sentimental md\in lw int 's heart sank\with a sinking heart\ cry ne's heart head drping\drag ne's feet\dn't feel like ding seized with srrw(panic\frustratin)\ be verwhelmed by mixture f anxiety and sadness crwded int ne's a strm f frustratin...
Hmewrk: Self r mutual evaluate the writing!
Principles fr Cntinuatin Writing:
Be a ready detectiveBe a reasnable nvelistBe a respnsible editr
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