浙江省嘉兴市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-04作文

浙江省嘉兴市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

04作文

一、材料作文

1．（2021·浙江嘉兴）校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项目。假设你是学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益处。要点提示如下：

注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信息，并适当发挥。

(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。During the Health Week, we will have ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2．（2020·浙江嘉兴）在你校"劳动教育月"期间,校英语报发起了"A Helper at Home"主题征文活动。请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下:

注意:

(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当发挥。

(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

(3)词数:80~100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。

短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home.

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二、电子邮件

3．（2020·浙江嘉兴）假设你是 David,打算今年夏天去 Batsford Arboretum游玩。请给植物园写一封简短的邮件,询问你想了解的信息,如用餐、门票价格等。

注意:

（1）邮件中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

（2）词数:30-50。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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David

三、讲稿

4．（2022·浙江嘉兴）假如你是李华，为营造更好的校园英语氛围，你班决定以学校花园为载体，开展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”项目式学习（COOC Project），经过分组讨论，你们形成了Plan A与Plan B 两个实施方案（见下表）。请你选择其中一个方案，用英语写一篇短文，代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选方案的内容和优势进行回报。

注意：(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息，并适当发挥。

(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

(3)词数：80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。     

Dear classmates,

I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

参考答案：

1．范文：

During the Health Week, we will have a School Trip Day on Friday. Here is the plan for the day. We will start our trip by walking to Lakeside Park. In the morning, there is going to be a kite-flying competition. At noon, we will have a picnic near a small lake there. After lunch, we will go boating on the lake. We can feel a sense of peace in mind while we are rowing on the blue water.

By being part of these activities, we will not only develop friendship with our classmates, but also relax ourselves and be free from pressure of study. ( 98 words )

Possible versions:

During the Health Week, we will have a Sports Day to make our school life more colorful.

On that day, there will be different sports. In the morning, we will play ball games. Everyone can go in for their favorite ones. In the afternoon, there will be a game that you can never miss—playing tug-of-war. It is really a good chance to make us better understand the meaning of teamwork. After that, there will be a kung fu lesson, which can help us learn to keep fit.

All these sports will do us good. Not only can they make us feel relaxed but also develop friendship. (100 words )【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，详细介绍“健康周”的具体内容，包括各个时间段的活动内容和这次活动的目的。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般将来时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

2．例文

A Helper at Home

       I have always been a good helper at home. As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them to do housework.   Last Sunday，after breakfast，I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills.

I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，在你校“劳动教育月”期间,校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动。要求结合自身情况，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈自己经常做的两项家务以及收获。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

2.例文点评：本文按照题目的要求，介绍了自己所做的两项家务，结构清晰，要点全面；文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。

3.高分亮点：

短语：help sb to do sth，try to do，put away，not only…but also…。

句型：I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. 我认为能让我的父母工作后感到开心。I think后加省略了that的宾语从句。

In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be. 总之，我的家务活做的越多，我的父母就会越快乐。the+比较级，the+比较级：越……就越……。

3．[例文]

Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope everything goes well.

I am writing to you tell that I will visit Batsford Arboretum this summer. And I’d like to know whether I can have lunch there or not. If not, I will bring my own food there. How about the price of the ticket? Can I get a student discount on this ticket price?

I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

David【详解】1.题干解读：本题为书信作文，要求给植物园写一份邮件进行咨询。时态应用现在时，人称可用第一、二人称。

2.例文点评：例文为标准书信格式，第一段和最后一段均为标准邮件开头、结尾用语。中间第二段则是按照题目所给提示，就植物园就餐和门票问题进行了提问。例文思路清晰，条理清楚，符合题目所列要求，是一篇合格的范文。

3.高分亮点：

短语：whether … or not，if not，be looking forward to，

句型：

（1）I am writing to you tell that I will visit Batsford Arboretum this summer.（宾语从句）

（2）How about the price of the ticket?（how about句型）

4．例文：

Plan A

Dear classmates,

I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is naming the plants in English.

There are mainly two steps. We’ll first do a survey to find information about the plants. We can surf the Internet, or ask our teachers for help if we meet with difficulties. The second step is to design name cards. We’ll describe each kind of plants in English. To make the cards look prettier, a photo of the plant will be included in each card.

We believe this plan will make our school garden a better place to learn about nature and improve our English. I can’t wait to see it come into practice.

That’s all. Thank you!

Plan B

Dear classmates,

I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is creating an English corner.

The first thing we’ll do is to choose an area for it. As you see in the map, the grassland makes a good choice. We’ll decorate it with several tables and chairs, so that we can have comfortable talks. A shelf of English books and magazines will also be put there. Then we’re going to make some rules. For example, we need to take care of things, and of course, speak English only.

I’m sure this corner will become a popular place for us to improve our spoken English, and make more friends as well.

That’s all. Thank you!   

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”为主题，结合提示内容，选择一个方案进行介绍。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：以Plan A为例，写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍具体要怎么做；第三段介绍该计划预期的成果；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。