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专题15 书面表达（三） （一）（2022·上海杨浦·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）学校以下各社团打算在活动周开展一些竞赛活动：comics club（动漫社）              computer club（电脑社） school newspaper club（校报社）       super brain club（最强大脑社） debate club（辩论社）       paper cutting club（剪纸社）假设你是其中一个社团的干事 Sandy，请拟一份通知告知你所在社团将要举行的活动，内容包括：1.活动名称、目的；2.活动时间、地点；3.参加活动的相关要求；4.奖项设置等。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         NOTICEIn order to improve your creativity, we will hold a paper-cutting competition this Saturday at 2:00 pm in the school hall. The name of the competition is Celebrating the New Year. Participants are required to provide a piece of paper-cutting about the new year. We’re going to have three levels of awards. The first prize is an English dictionary. The second prize is a notebook. And the third prize is a certificate. Looking forward to your participation.Paper Cutting Club【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本篇作文是一篇通知。需要根据题干所给社团选择一种社团写一份关于所在社团举办竞赛的通知。2.写作指导：本文人称主要采用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要采用一般将来时和一般现在时。活动的相关内容要具体详细，语言要简洁。     （二）（2021·上海青浦·二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A valuable lesson” (请以“宝贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示：在学习与生活中，我们会因为经历了一些事情，获得体验，增加阅历，吸取教训。请以“宝贵的一课”为题，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。注意：抄袭试卷中内容不得分。文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：A valuable lessonDuring our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons, because they can taught something important about ourselves. As for me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.             During the summer vacation of my seventh grade, our class went to to an orphan home in our city to help the children there. At first, we gave away some meaningful story books and stationery to them. Then we talked about our school life to them. I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. And I even showed some children some skills which I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.That volunteer work really taught me a lesson, which I will never forget. I felt the truth of those words, which I never understood before that: “It is more blessed to give than to receive.” That day, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident and outgoing to communicate with others. More importantly, it made me realize that giving is receiving.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“宝贵的一课”为题结合自己的经历，并谈谈对这次经历的感受。要求不少于60词。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，讲述自己的经历用一般过去时。可分三段进行写作：第一段引出这次经历；第二段具体描述这次经历；最后一段收尾，表达自己的感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。   （三）（2021·上海崇明·二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “In three years’ time” （以“三年以后”为题写一遍不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化？你对三年以后的自己周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：In three years’ timeThere is no denying that the world is changing fast. I do believe that my life will be different in three years’ time. On the one hand, it will be more convenient, we can study at home. Whether we will go to school or stay at home depends on our choices. Certainly, unlike the last special year, we had to study on line because of the virus . On the other hand, the environment may become worse especially white pollution. Sadly, the number of people who like to throw everywhere is still rising. I hope the world will be more beautiful. To achieve this, I need to learn more knowledge about how to protect the environment. Call on more people to take part in fighting against pollution. Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求以“三年以后”为题，写篇不少于60个词的短文，描述三年以后你的生活或者周围世界发生的变化，以及自己对周围世界的期待。2.写作指导：人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般将来时为主。写作时，先描述三年后所发生的变化，最后可以谈谈如何实现这些变化；保证内容完整，结构清晰条理。   （四）（2021·上海嘉定·二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到很多选择。请以 “I chose to ________”为题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择？The following is for reference only●choose to be / do●make up my mind●encourage me to（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：I chose to be a reporterLife is full of different kinds of choices. Different people have different choices about their future jobs. As for me, I have made up my mind to be a reporter. Because I would like to see different people and I can make friends with more people. What’s more, I can tell people the truth about something popular. What can I do to become a reporter? I must study hard to obtain more knowledge. And, at the same time, I will write articles for magazines or newspapers. When I finish high school, I am going to go to college in Beijing. Because I think I can learn more there. My parents also encourage me to chase my dream bravely. With their support, I believe everything will come as expected.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一个半命题作文，要求以 “I chose to ________”为题，结合自身的经历，谈谈你生活中的选择，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择？2.写作指导：正式写作前，需要先补全题目，围绕题目中心内容，用第一人称开始写作； 开头先点题，然后结合自身情况说明原因，以及实现的方式，最后简单收尾。写作中注意要保证语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词和语法错误。    （五）（2022·上海静安·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）新学期带来了新变化。“双减”新规（The new rules）提出：减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。“双减”后，你的生活有了什么变化？请给学校的校长（Headmaster）写一封信，从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈谈你是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼，并请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Dear Headmaster,I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules. In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school, including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself. I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time? Thanks so much！YoursLi Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封学生写给校长的信，要求谈论“双减”政策出台后自己生活的变化以及遇到的烦恼，并请校长提出建议来解决烦恼。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，重点描述现在的生活，因此时态主要用一般现在时。可分为三段：第一段说明写信目的；第二段描述“双减”后生活的变化；第三段陈述遇到的烦恼并请求对方的建议。写作时，注意条理清晰，语言连贯，力求无语法和标点错误。    （六）（2021·上海奉贤·一模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点不占格。）Mr. Smith 用特殊的方式给他的学生上了“精彩一课”。你的老师一定也以他/她独特的方式给你留下过深刻的印象。他/她或许组织过精彩的活动，他/她或许讲述过精彩的故事，他/她或许……请以“A wonderful lesson（精彩一课）”为题，记录老师给你上过的精彩一课。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：A wonderful lessonWe have many classes every day, but I think the most wonderful class is yesterday’s Chinese class.Our Chinese teacher is Miss Li. Although she is very young, she knows a lot. She always tells us about the culture and customs of different places and so on. Yesterday in the Chinese class, Miss Li did not take the Chinese book but took several pictures that looked very bad. On these pictures, some children standed in the field looking at the distance, some children even picked up things to eat from the trash cans. All of us were surprised and didn't know what Miss Li meant. By explaining the content of each picture and the story behind it, Miss Li let us know that there are still many children in many areas who do not have food or go to school, so that we know how to cherish every day of school, and also let us sympathize with those children more.Since then, every time I have finished reading books, I will donate them to the community workstation, hoping to give them to those children who do not have books to read.【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是以“A wonderful lesson”为主题展开描写，内容可以按照自身的情况适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称用第一和第三人称展开描述。主要是介绍自己的精彩的课堂以及为什么是精彩的，从中学到了什么等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。  （七）（2021·上海浦东新区·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My     choice”.（请以“我  的选择”为题，写一篇不少于 60 字的短文。）人生即是选择。你在生活中一定做过无数次选择，或许是明智的，亦或许是错误的；或许是难忘的，亦或许是遗憾的……请结合你以往的一次选择，谈谈它对你的影响或你的感悟。（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:My best choiceEveryone has to make different choices in the life. Five years ago, I also made my choice. When I played with my little brother, I broke my mother’s favourite vase. I knew she would be angry. I wanted to lie at first. But soon I changed my idea. I told my mother the truth. To my surprise, my mother praised me instead.Honesty is valuable. If it is our mistake, we should accept it and then we can correct it. Thus, we can make progress in our life.【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于夹叙夹议的文章写作，要通过自己的一段经历，谈谈自己所做的选择对自己的影响或获得的感悟。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自己的一段经历，说明自己做了如何的选择，时态用一般过去时；最后要谈自己的感悟，可以用一般现在时。注意叙述时的完整性，并保证条理清晰。  （八）（2021·上海徐汇·一模）Write at least 60 words to talk about “How technology affects me”. Does the development of technology   affect you in a positive way or in a negative way? What do you think of the influence? How do you deal with it?请以“How technology affects me”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，谈论科技发展对你带来了正面的影响还是负面的影响。你怎样看待科技对你的影响吗? 你怎样面对这些影响呢?（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：How technology affects meWe live in an information time. Almost every person has one mobile phone. It's very convenient for me to learn the world using our telephones. I can send my greetings to my friends by phones. I can also communicate with my friends. I can get too much information by my phones. I can't imagine what our life will be like without telephones. Telephones are our good friends, but some children are addicted to mobile games, which affects their study. So we should use mobile phones properly.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时根据汉语提示，谈论科技发展带来了正面的影响还是负面的影响；怎样看待科技的影响；如何面对这些影响等。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。   （九）（2020·上海静安·一模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）在美国新泽西这一走丢孩子的眼中，马是世界上最美好的事物。你眼中最美好的事物是什么呢？请以“The greatest thing in the world”为题，结合自身经历谈谈你的看法。注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。【答案】例文：The greatest thing in the worldWhat is the greatest thing in the world? It is a smile. A smile can start a friendship and make us feel warm and joyful.Last year when I entered the new school, I had no friends and felt lonely. Then a boy with a big smile came up to me. I felt warm and cheerful because of his smile and we soon became good friends. How great the power of a smile is!【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：该题属于话题作文，作文标题是“The greatest thing in the world”。题目要求结合自身经历谈谈你眼中最美好的事物。注意文章字数不少于60词。2. 写作指导：由于作文是夹叙夹议的议论文，表达观点时用一般现在时，描写经历时用一般过去时，人称为第一人称。作文可以采用“三段式”结构，第一段表明观点，第二段叙述经历，第三段再次强调自己的观点。作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。    （十）（2021·上海杨浦·一模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。)法国“蜘蛛人”阿兰.罗伯特的经历告诉我们， 战胜恐惧也可以是一种勇敢。你对勇敢的理解是如何的呢？请以“The time I was brave(那次我很勇敢)” 为题，根据自身的经历谈谈你对勇敢的理解。（注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读的语篇不得分。）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：The time I was braveIn our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.            I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher's encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.Don't let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。但写作时要根据汉语提示，首先叙述自身的经历，然后根据经历谈谈对勇敢的理解。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身的经历；时态采用一般过去时叙述过去的经历，用一般现在时和现在完成时来叙述自己的成长和对勇敢的理解。描述经历时，力求语言准确，叙事完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。   （十一）（2020·上海青浦·一模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Life in 2050”（请以 “2050 年的生活”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：到2050年，我们的生活会是什么样的？请选择下图中(或自拟)1"~2个方面展开描述。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Life in 2050Life has changed a lot in 2050. The environment will be better and better. The air is fresher and the water is clearer. In 2050, people will no longer eat traditional food. People will eat a special kind of food in order to stay full for a long time. Science and technology will be highly developed and robots will take the place of human beings. Flying machines will replace today's cars. People won't have to go to school to study. They will study at home through computers.【解析】【详解】1、题干解读：文章要求对2050年的生活的影响，因此时态应用一般将来时态；人称应以第三人称\第一人称为主。2、写作指导：例文先是一句话点题；然后分开介绍了环境、食物、科技、交通和上学情况。语言流畅，无语法错误。   （十二）（2021·上海普陀·二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ has won my respect”(以“……赢得了我的尊敬”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 提示：Aunt Sandy 用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心着你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感受。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：My mother has won my respectMy mother is the person I respect most. She plays an important role in my life, not only as a mother but also as a friend.As a mother, she takes good care of the family, and she is never upset about my mistakes. She works hard in the company. She’s always warmhearted and ready to help others. She sets a good example for me. l have learned to work hard and respect people around. As a friend, she knows a lot about me and gives me help whenever it’s necessary.My mother has a great influence on me and she has won my respect..【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于记叙文写作，要求以“________ has won my respect”为题写一篇短文谈谈我最尊敬的人，举出一些事例来说明。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，第一段指出谁赢得了我的尊敬；第二段阐述具体事例，第三段总结这我很尊敬这个人。逻辑性要强，保证条理清晰。  （十三）（2021·上海黄浦·一模）You are planning a reading club on line, so you decide to invite a friend of yours to join you by email.(你正在筹备一个在线阅读社团，你决定通过电子邮件邀请一个朋友加入。)In your email, you need to...introduce your plan of the reading club.talk about what kind of books you are going to read.give the reason(s) why you want to run the club.(注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Eric, How are you these days? The reason why I'm writing is to invite you to join the reading club online. Since the smartphone is becoming more and more popular, the number of the people who read books in their spare time is on the decrease. Therefore, I want to create a reading club online. I'd like to give the invitations to my friends and people around me. Then, they can give the invitations to their friends. In the end, the number of members will increase quickly. I will recommend some books on history and art to the members in order to enrich their knowledge. I hope you can join us and help me. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一封邀请信。要求按照英文提示来写一封电子邮件邀请一个朋友加入你正在筹备的一个在线阅读社团，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述细节时，细节描写完整，符合文章要求，可适当增加细节；同时，细节描述要有逻辑，保证条理清晰。