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这是一份专题04 求助信-2022年高考应用文写作分类精讲(全国通用),共11页。学案主要包含了求助信模板运用,经典考题赏析等内容,欢迎下载使用。
专题04 求助信-2022年高考应用文写作分类精讲(全国通用) 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信,注意语气要委婉、真诚。其结构一般如下:①表明写作目的,请求帮助②清晰陈述求助的具体内容③希望得到对方的帮助 求助信开头部分表达写作目的“请求帮助”①I am writing to ask for your help.②I am writing in the hope of your assistance in ...③I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.④I wonder if you could spare some time to help me.⑤I am anxious to get help from you. 求助信中间部分陈述求助的主要内容①I have some difficulties in ...②What I am worried about a lot is that ...③I am poor in overcoming the difficulties in ...④Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help.⑤I hope you could let me know if ...⑥Would you like to do me a favor to ...?⑦I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.⑧In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ...so that ...Also, I would like you to ... 求助信结尾部分表达希望得到对方的帮助①Thank you for your time and patience, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.②I would like to thank you for your generous help in this case.③Could you please help me ...?④I’d appreciate it if you’d like to offer me a helping hand.⑤Would you please be kind enough to offer me some advice? 【求助信模板运用】I am Li Hua, a student from ×××school. (正式一些的求助信需要进行自我介绍) / How are you doing these days? (求助熟悉的人需要寒暄问候一下) I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. (说明写信目的) / I wonder whether I could ask you to do me a favor. (正式一点的求助)
Faced with so many problems, I have to turn to you for help. First, I have trouble in ________遇到的困难1_________. What’s more, _____遇到的困难2______ is also very difficult for me to do. (中间段具体说明困难) Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to_________so that I can ________more easily? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.(表达谢意,期待来信) 【经典考题赏析】假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况; 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意:1.词数:120—150; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Tom,How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are. Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So I’m busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation(语调). Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest. I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 假定你是李华。最近,你与父母之间关系紧张,甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信,向他求助。内容包括:1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题;2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Charlie,How are you getting along?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Charlie,How are you getting along? Recently I have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annoyed.I am writing to ask you for help.You know, my parents don’t allow me to go out and play with my friends at weekends.They think I should make full use of every minute to work on my lessons.However, I think I need to play with my friends so that I can relax myself after a week’s hard work at school and it is a good way for me to keep in touch with my friends. I know it is wrong to quarrel with them, but I don’t know what to do to persuade them to change their mind and develop a good relationship with them. Would you please offer me some advice?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua假定你是李华,你想参加学校举办的英语诗歌朗诵比赛,请你给外教Mr.Smith发一封邮件,请他帮你选一首诗,并给予指导。内容包括:1.请求帮助;2. 主题必须是爱和友谊;3.期待回复。注意:1. 词数不少于100;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith,How is everything going?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, How is everything going? I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. Our school will hold English Poetry Reading Contest on 15 May. I am eager to have a try, but don’t know which poem is suitable. As a lover of poetry, would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about love and friendship. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to read the poem in the contest. I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua 假如你是李华,正在美国留学。你计划出去旅游两周,想请当地好友Catherine 帮忙照看你租的房子和你的德国牧羊犬(German Shepherd)。另外,帮忙浇浇花草,拿拿信件和报纸。请你用英文给她写封邮件,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 具体嘱托;3. 期待答复。注意:1. 词数 80 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Catherine,I wonder if you could do me a favor to attend to my home while I am away for my holiday from Dec.25 to Jan. 7th.Would you please take the trouble to feed and walk my German Shepherd on a daily basis? Besides it can't be better if you're willing to water the plants at regular intervals. If time permits, please pick up my letters and subscribed newspaper. By the way, the keys are in the mailbox.I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hu【解析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假如你是李华,正在美国留学。你计划出去旅游两周,想请当地好友Catherine 帮忙照看你租的房子和你的德国牧羊犬(German Shepherd)。另外,帮忙浇浇花草,拿拿信件和报纸。请你用英文给她写封邮件。分析可知,应该以第一人称和第二人称为主,一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Chris,Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help. Yours,Li Hua假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介;2. 指导内容;3. 商定时间地点。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。【答案】Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短剧的支持。第一段说明写这封邮件的目的;第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题;第三段表达感谢,并期待早日得到回复。 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:1. 条件及要求;2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。【答案】Dear Jim,How are you doing? I hope everything is OK with you.Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua 假定你是李华,当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:1.本人简介。2.求助内容。3.希望得到Tom的帮助。Dear teacher,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear teacher,My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met much difficulty in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar.I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外籍老师Tom写一封求助信,希望老师帮助解决自己在英语学习方面遇到的一些问题。[高分句型1] First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. (使用了that引导的定语从句)[高分句型2] Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. (使用了非谓语动词faced with作状语) 假定你是李华,正全身心投入在高考复习中,但最近与父母关系很紧张。于是你给你校的心理老师Mr. Li写一封求助信,内容包括: 1. 写信目的; 2. 关系现状; 3. 希望得到帮助。注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Mr. Li,I've been occupied in preparing for my College Entrance Examination recently, but unfortunately, I find it hard to get along well with my parents. So I'm writing to ask for your help.It seems that we are strangers under the same roof. I can't see eye to eye with them on almost anything so that bitter quarrels break out from time to time. What's worse, my parents push me to invest every minute in study, which puts me on the edge of a nervous breakdown.What should I do? I'm desperate to seek help from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
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