人教版英语初中九年级期末复习写作能力的提升

这是一份人教版英语初中九年级期末复习写作能力的提升，共29页。PPT课件主要包含了学习目标，书面表达题型，书面表达的写作步骤，列提纲，写全文，检查修改，书面表达写作实践，第一版，书面表达中的常见问题，检查语法等内容，欢迎下载使用。

本课结束时，你将能够:1. 正确审题理清写作思路；2. 运用丰富的词汇和句型丰富书面表达。
中考书面表达是一种应试作文，要求学生在给定时间内根据提示或所给要点写出要点齐全、表达清楚、语言准确、行文连贯的文章。 不仅要求学生熟练掌握词汇、句型语法知识，而且还应具备一定的审题能力、想象能力与表达能力。
审清主题, 人称时态, 要点信息。
服务主题, 去粗取精, 详略得当。
紧扣主题, 结构清楚, 衔接顺畅。
一鼓作气, 内容完整, 要点齐全。
主旨突出，内容完整，结构清楚，语言准确。
(2020 北京 题目2) “不积跬步, 无以至千里。” 积累, 有助于我们达成目标, 实现梦想。某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动, 假如你是李华, 请用英语写一篇短文投稿, 谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么, 有什么收获。提示词语：accumulate (积累), read, keep, make prgress提示问题：What did yu d t accumulate knwledge? What have yu learned frm ding s?
主题：积累知识人称：第一人称时态：过去时为主, 穿插使用现在时或完成时。要点信息：做过什么, 有何收获。
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything.
本主题相关的词汇和句型。
1. 积累知识 accumulate knwledge2. 重要 imprtant, f great imprtance, play an imprtant rle …3. 有助于 help, be gd fr, cntribute t …
4. 从基础做起 start frm ding basic things5. 养成习惯 frm the habit f, develp the habit f …6. 努力 try ne’s best, make great effrts …
7. 提高书面表达能力 increase writing ability, imprve writing skills…8. 开阔视野 braden my hrizns, get a wider perspective f…9. 实现理想 realize my dream, make my dream cme true…10. 使人受益 beneficial, benefit smebdy…
紧扣主题, 结构清楚, 衔接顺畅。1. 承接首句，进一步点明积累知识的重要性2. 做了什么：通过学习、读书、实践等积累知识3. 收获如何：知识增加、能力提高、眼界开阔4. 有何感想：受益、有收获
1. 承接首句，进一步点名积累知识的重要性Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance.Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle.It helps us realize ur dreams.It helps us achieve ur gals.It can imprve ur abilities.It can braden ur hrizns.
2. 做了什么：通过学习、读书、实践等积累知识I try my best t accumulate knwledge.I make great effrts t accumulate knwledge.I listen t the teacher and take ntes carefully .I develp the habit f practicing what I have learnt. I start frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing.I read a lt f English magazines.I listen t English radi every day.
3. 收获如何：知识增加、能力提高、眼界开阔Reading bradens ur hrizns.Practice imprves ur abilities.Listening t English radi helps us learn English well.Accumulating knwledge helps us understand the wrld better.Accumulating knwledge is a useful way t realize ur dreams.
4. 有何感想：受益、有收获Accumulating is beneficial t us.Accumulating benefits us greatly.I think it’s necessary t accumulate knwledge every day.I gain a lt by accumulating knwledge day by day.I becme mre self-cnfident as I accumulate knwledge.
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance. It helps us realize ur dreams. I tried my best t accumulate knwledge.I started frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing.Reading bradens my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. Accumulating knwledge benefits me a lt.
1. 中心不切题2. 结构不合理3. 主次不分明4. 语言不准确5. 衔接不顺畅6. 无好词好句
注重语言积累, 提高应用能力。
语法正确, 用词得当, 语言地道, 表达丰富。1. 检查语法是否准确；2. 使用高级词汇和高效句型等；3. 添加必要的相关细节信息；4. 梳理逻辑；5. 添加主题句。
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge are f great imprtance.It help us realize ur dreams. I tried ur best t accumulate knwledge.I start frm ding basic things, such as read and write.
主谓不一致。应改为is。
主谓不一致。应改为helps或helped。
代词混淆。应改为my。
动词形式错误。应改为动名词reading和writing。
Reading bradens my hrizn. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I have learnt. Which increased my writing ability. I benefited accumulating knwledge a lt.
结构错误。应改为Accumulating knwledge benefited me a lt.
名词单复数错误。Hrizn表示“眼界”时为hrizns。
时态错误。应改为had learnt。
连接词误用。应改为It。
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance. It helps us realize ur dreams. I tried my best t accumulate knwledge.I started frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing.Reading bradened my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. Accumulating knwledge benefited me a lt.
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance. It helps us realize ur dreams.Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle in helping us realize ur dreams.
I tried my best t accumulate knwledge. I started frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing. Reading bradened my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. In rder t accumulate knwledge, I tried my best t develp habits f reading and writing.
增减细节, 提高表达效率
Reading bradened my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. Accumulating knwledge benefited me a lt. I made great effrts t write dwn and practice what I had learnt, which benefited me a lt. Reading a lt bradened my hrizns, while practicing writing imprved my writing ability.
调整语序或使用连接词突出逻辑关系
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle in helping us realize ur dreams. In rder t accumulate knwledge, I tried my best t develp habits f reading and writing. I made great effrts t write dwn and practice what I had learnt, which benefited me a lt. Reading a lt bradened my hrizns, while practicing writing imprved my writing ability.
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle in helping us realize ur dreams, which nt nly bradened my hrizns, but als imprved my abilities.
增加主题句，引起下文中的做法和收获。
In rder t accumulate knwledge, I tried my best t develp habits f reading and writing. I made great effrts t write dwn and practice what I had learnt, which benefited me a lt. Reading a lt bradened my hrizns, while practicing writing imprved my writing ability. I became mre self-cnfident as I accumulated knwledge.
增加主题句，首尾呼应突出主题。