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展开一、动作细节描写
1.南瓜开口朝上放在桌子上,我弯下腰,把头塞入开口中。
With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening _________________________________________________.
2.一开始,就在我眼睛上一点我就被卡住了,然后,我不愿放弃继续往里塞,我的鼻子稍微有点挡着我进不去。
At first I gt jammed ________________________ just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit ____________________, my nse briefly prevented entry.
3.最后,我把整个脑袋都塞进了南瓜里,就像把软木塞塞进了瓶子一样。
Finally I managed t put my whle head int it_____________________, like a crk frced int a bttle.
4.我肩膀上扛着巨大的南瓜,站直身子。
I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders_______________________________.
5.“现在我要把它放下来,”我说,杰森帮我扶着它,我弯下身将南瓜靠在桌子上。
“I’m ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back _______________________ ver the table t give it smewhere t rest.
6.当我用力拔的时候,我的鼻子碍事了。
When I pulled hard _________________, my nse gt in the way.
7.我惊慌失措,紧紧地靠在桌子上,转动脑袋,试图找到正确的角度,但无济于事。
I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund_________________________________________________________________________ trying t find the right angle, but it was n use.
8.“我头出不来!”我喊道,我的声音在这个封闭的空间里听起来大得很不自然。
“I can’t get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud ___________________________________________in the enclsed space.
二、情感和心理活动细节描写
1.我的兴奋转瞬即逝。
My excitement was shrt-lived ___________________________________.
2.我现在不知道为什么我以为把脑袋塞进南瓜里就能解决问题,但当时似乎很有道理。
I’m unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin ___________________________________ wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.
3.只有在我试着拔出头时,我才意识到进去容易出来难。
It was nly when I tried t remve my head ____________________________________________ that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. (强调句)
续写部分的细节描写(与原文语言特点一致)
一、续写第一段 (侧重动作、心理活动和神态描写,刻画全家喜乐融融的场面)
1.我像一只困兽,大声呼救,几乎把自己的耳朵都震聋了。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①Like a caged animal, I screamed fr help, and nearly deafened myself. (明喻)
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Like a caged animal, _______________________________________. (非谓语动词做状语)
2.恼人的是,从外面传来哥哥们的哄笑声和妹妹的咯咯笑声。
Annyingly, _____________________________________________________________frm utside. (无灵主语句)
3.“哈,哈,哈。”爸爸笑着,抓起一把刀,小心翼翼地把南瓜切开,好让我的头出来。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①“Ha, ha, ha.” Dad laughed, grabbed a knife and managed t get my head ut after carefully cutting the pumpkin pen. (三连动词,动作链)
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②____________________________________________________ and managed t get my head ut after carefully cutting the pumpkin pen. (非谓语动词)
4.“你出来了!”妈妈大笑起来。她拍下了我的糗事。
“Yu made it!”_____________________________. She was actually filming my whle embarrassment.
二、续写第二段 (侧重动作和情感细节描写)
1.令我们惊讶的是,视频在数小时内就获得了数千次点击和评论,有些人安慰我,有些人分享他们类似的愚蠢经历。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①T ur surprise, it gt thusands f clicks and reviews within hurs. Sme cmfrted me and sme shared their similar dumb experiences. (介词短语+并列句)
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②T ur surprise, it gt thusands f clicks and reviews within hurs, _________________________________________________________________. (独立主格结构)
2.一个说:“哇!好大的南瓜啊!我迫不及待地想看看里面的脸。”我能想象出这家伙忍不住偷笑的样子。
One remarked, "Ww! What a great pumpkin! I can' t wait t see the face in it" __________________________________________________________________________________.
3.每当我想起我的头卡在南瓜里的那一天,我就大笑。
Whenever I thught abut the day n which I gt my head stuck in a pumpkin, I culdn’t help but_________________.
三、满分结尾句
1.首尾呼应式
①从那时起,每年万圣节,有了新的传统,但当然非常谨慎、南瓜开口的更大了。
Every Hallween frm then n, _____________________ was passed n, but f curse with great cautin and a wider pening n the pumpkin.
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②我做梦也没想到我会以这种特殊的方式成为网络名人!多么不同的万圣节呀!
_____________________________________________________________________________! What a different Hallween! (倒装句+感叹句)
2.呼应主题式
作为这个淘气而又有爱且和谐的家庭的一员,我感到很幸运。
_______________________ a member f this naughty yet lving and harmnius family.
3.升华主题式
我想说我已经吸取了教训——三思而后行!
I wuld say I learned my lessn — _____________________!
答案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式,并背诵
一、动作细节描写
1. bent ver and pressed my head against the pening
2. gt jammed;unwilling t quit 3.managed t put my whle head int it
4.with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders 5. bent back 6. pulled hard
7. pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund
8.sunding unnaturally lud
二、情感和心理活动细节描写
1.My excitement was shrt-lived 2.frcing my head inside the pumpkin 3.It was nly when I tried t remve my head
续写部分的细节描写(与原文语言特点一致)
续写第一段
1. I screamed fr help, nearly deafening myself
2.rars f laughter f my brthers and giggles f my sister reached my ears
3.“Ha, ha, ha.” laughing, Dad grabbed a knife a
4.Mm laughed a lud laugh
二、续写第二段
1. sme cmfrting me and sme sharing their similar dumb experiences
2.I culd picture this guy culdn't help chuckling.
3.laugh ut lud
三、
①.a new traditin ②Never in my wildest dreams had I thught I wuld becme an internet celebrity in this special way
2.I felt lucky t be 3.lk befre yu leap
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