还剩1页未读，
继续阅读
成套系列资料，整套一键下载
2025版高考英语全程一轮复习写作微技能训练题必修第三册Unit5Whatanadventure外研版
展开
这是一份2025版高考英语全程一轮复习写作微技能训练题必修第三册Unit5Whatanadventure外研版，共2页。
读后续写思维拓展训练之17——人物动作语言加环境描写
有了角色，就有角色所处的环境，我们就要让环境为我们设定人物，推动情节服务，那么就需要把这些因素很和谐地结合在一起，有些时候不需要大面积大篇幅的描写，只需要寥寥几句就足够了，正所谓“只可意会不可言传”。
“人物动作语言加环境描写”之多样表达：
1．lip n. 嘴唇 2.spt v. 发现
3．kick v. 踢 4.witness v. 目击
5．sb v. 啜泣 6.eye cntact 目光交流
7．burst int laughter 突然大笑起来 8.be buried in 埋头于
9．cheer up (使)高兴起来 10.lk at sb. straight in the eye 直视某人
11．clearheaded 头脑清醒的 12.feel ne's way 摸索着前进
佳句观摩
1.“放假还待在家里干活儿多没劲啊！”其中一个女孩说。
一般句：“Hw tiresme it must be t stay at hme t wrk n a hliday！” said ne f the girls.
提升句：“Hw tiresme it must be t stay at hme t wrk n a hliday！” said ne f the girls, with a tss f her head. “Susan's grandmther is t strict.” (女孩晃着脑袋说，“苏珊的奶奶太严厉了”)．
2．他们笑着，唱着，喊着，装满他们的篮子！
一般句：They laugh, sing, shut and fill their baskets!
提升句：Hw they laugh and sing (欢笑和歌唱), and shut t each ther (互相喊话) as they fill their baskets! The sun lks dwn thrugh the yellw leaves (透过金黄的叶子俯视着他们); the rcks give them mssy seats (铺满青苔的座位); the birds and squirrels wnder (好奇) what these strange peple are ding in their wds (在它们的树林里)．
好句仿写
1.她向外望去。“哦，妈妈！多么美丽壮观的落日啊！”她大喊起来。
一般句：She lked ut. “Oh, mther！” she cried, “what a splendid sunset！”
提升句：As she lked ut, she ________________________________________________ (先看见西边的天空，点缀着明亮的落日云). “Oh, mther！” ________________________ (她欢呼起来), “what a splendid sunset！”
2．玛杰丽坐在台阶上，好奇地思考着。
一般句：Margery sat n the drstep and wndered.
提升句：Margery sat n the drstep and wndered, as __________________________________________ (大海的声音更大了，她周围的阳光越来越暖和了)．
3．可怜的跛腿珍妮坐在窗户旁，脸上写满痛苦和倦意。
一般句：Pr lame Jennie sat at her windw, with a lk f pain and weariness n her face.
提升句：Pr lame Jennie sat at her windw, ________________________________________ (看着阴郁、狭窄的街道), with a lk f pain and weariness n her face. “Oh, dear，” ________________________ (她叹了口气说)．
Unit 5 What an adventure!
写作微技能
1．first saw the western sky and sme bright, sunset cluds; she exclaimed in delight
2．the sea sunded luder, and the sunshine grew warmer arund her
3．lking ut upn the dismal, narrw street; she said with a sigh
读后续写思维拓展训练之17——人物动作语言加环境描写
有了角色，就有角色所处的环境，我们就要让环境为我们设定人物，推动情节服务，那么就需要把这些因素很和谐地结合在一起，有些时候不需要大面积大篇幅的描写，只需要寥寥几句就足够了，正所谓“只可意会不可言传”。
“人物动作语言加环境描写”之多样表达：
1．lip n. 嘴唇 2.spt v. 发现
3．kick v. 踢 4.witness v. 目击
5．sb v. 啜泣 6.eye cntact 目光交流
7．burst int laughter 突然大笑起来 8.be buried in 埋头于
9．cheer up (使)高兴起来 10.lk at sb. straight in the eye 直视某人
11．clearheaded 头脑清醒的 12.feel ne's way 摸索着前进
佳句观摩
1.“放假还待在家里干活儿多没劲啊！”其中一个女孩说。
一般句：“Hw tiresme it must be t stay at hme t wrk n a hliday！” said ne f the girls.
提升句：“Hw tiresme it must be t stay at hme t wrk n a hliday！” said ne f the girls, with a tss f her head. “Susan's grandmther is t strict.” (女孩晃着脑袋说，“苏珊的奶奶太严厉了”)．
2．他们笑着，唱着，喊着，装满他们的篮子！
一般句：They laugh, sing, shut and fill their baskets!
提升句：Hw they laugh and sing (欢笑和歌唱), and shut t each ther (互相喊话) as they fill their baskets! The sun lks dwn thrugh the yellw leaves (透过金黄的叶子俯视着他们); the rcks give them mssy seats (铺满青苔的座位); the birds and squirrels wnder (好奇) what these strange peple are ding in their wds (在它们的树林里)．
好句仿写
1.她向外望去。“哦，妈妈！多么美丽壮观的落日啊！”她大喊起来。
一般句：She lked ut. “Oh, mther！” she cried, “what a splendid sunset！”
提升句：As she lked ut, she ________________________________________________ (先看见西边的天空，点缀着明亮的落日云). “Oh, mther！” ________________________ (她欢呼起来), “what a splendid sunset！”
2．玛杰丽坐在台阶上，好奇地思考着。
一般句：Margery sat n the drstep and wndered.
提升句：Margery sat n the drstep and wndered, as __________________________________________ (大海的声音更大了，她周围的阳光越来越暖和了)．
3．可怜的跛腿珍妮坐在窗户旁，脸上写满痛苦和倦意。
一般句：Pr lame Jennie sat at her windw, with a lk f pain and weariness n her face.
提升句：Pr lame Jennie sat at her windw, ________________________________________ (看着阴郁、狭窄的街道), with a lk f pain and weariness n her face. “Oh, dear，” ________________________ (她叹了口气说)．
Unit 5 What an adventure!
写作微技能
1．first saw the western sky and sme bright, sunset cluds; she exclaimed in delight
2．the sea sunded luder, and the sunshine grew warmer arund her
3．lking ut upn the dismal, narrw street; she said with a sigh
相关试卷
2025版高考英语全程一轮复习课时作业十七Unit5Whatanadventure外研版必修第三册： 这是一份2025版高考英语全程一轮复习课时作业十七Unit5Whatanadventure外研版必修第三册，共13页。
2025版高考英语全程一轮复习基础过关练习必修第三册Unit5Whatanadventure外研版： 这是一份2025版高考英语全程一轮复习基础过关练习必修第三册Unit5Whatanadventure外研版，共4页。
2025版高考英语全程一轮复习分层自测练习必修第三册Unit5Whatanadventure外研版： 这是一份2025版高考英语全程一轮复习分层自测练习必修第三册Unit5Whatanadventure外研版，共3页。
