高考英语作文专题复习：柱状写作课件PPT

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如何进行图表式(柱状图式)作文写作
假如你叫Jim Lee，你最近对你班60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语给某报社的编辑写一封信报告此事，以引起舆论关注。注意：①报告应包括图表所示全部内容　　　　　　②叙述结果时要避免重复使用百分比。　　　　③叙述过程中要适当添加评语。④词数100左右。
学生习作点评Dear editr, My name is Jim lee. I am a middle schl student. Nw, I did a researchabut the purpse f my classmates g n the line. There are 30% f bys and 20% girls read news n the cmputer. Have 20% bys and 15% girls send e-mails n-line. There are mre girls (abut 35%) than bys (abut 5%) have a chat. Abut 10% bys and 10% girls used cmputers study. Mre bys than girls play games . Yurs Jim
Cmmn mistakes
1. Mst f the bys in rder t play games while mst girls in rder t have a chat. zxxk2. Abut 10% bys and 10% girls used cmputer study.
1. 20% f bys get n theInternet t send e-mails while 15% f girls get n the Internet t send e -mails number f bys wh like t play games is larger than the number f girls .
A. 30% bys and 20% girls g n-line in rder t read news. 20% bys and girls g n-line t send e-mails. 5%bys and 35% girls want t chat with thers. 10% bys and girls want t study n-line. Besides, 35% bys and 20% girls g n-line t play games.
cmpare A with BB. Girls ' favrite is chatting, but few bys like it . What bys like t d mst is playing games and girls als like it. Bth bys and girls like t read news r send e-mails n the Internet. As fr studying, the number f bys and girls is equal .
句式多样,文章增"靓"
1. Mst f the girls like t chat. Mst f the bys like t play games.2. Cmputers have changed the wrld greatly. We shuld make full use f them. It will becme a tl f ur study. zxxk
图表式(柱状图式)书面表达的基本框架
Tpic (intrductry sentences ) Bdy (supprting sentences ) Cnclusin (cnclusin sentences )
柱状图式作文写作的步骤:
一、开头 ：二、分析数据：三、得出结论：
开门见山 点名本图表所反映的主题,常见的词汇有：　　
　table, chart, figure, graph, tell, shw.
　　分析数据间主要差异及趋势,然后描写。在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式或对比式,以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由特别要注意层次清楚。
　　分析数据间主要差异及趋势, 然后描写在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时, 可采用分类式或对比式, 以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由, 特别要注意层次清楚，常用词汇有:
　　cmpare /with , cmpared t /with , in cntrast t .
用作比较说明相同点的:
　　　　　　　　　　　　 , the same as, similar t , like , equally imprtant
用作比较说明不同点的:
　　 unlike , n the ther hand , instead , different, frm , difference , between (amng ).
　　归纳总结或发表评论(有时第三步可省略)常用词汇有: t sum up , finally ,in cnclusin ,at last , in summary , n the whle , in shrt , all in all , in a wrd , in the end , in ther wrds , therefre , as a result , generally speaking , As I have shwn ..., As has been stated ,
常用句式结构:Tpic sentences
I have recently made a survey research has been made recently 'm writing t tell yu abut my research peple have different ideas
Bdy sentences
Smebdy's favrite smebdy likes t d mst like t fr..., the number secnd largest grup wuld like t secnd chice fr smebdy is t ...
Cnclusin sentences
As I have has been stated… In my think...
柱状图式作文写作要注意：
三要：1.要找出对比最为明显的突破点。2.要找出对比较明显的要点。3.要找出双方非常相似的要点 。三 忌：1.忌从左到右依此描述。2.忌反复使用同一句型。3.忌反复出现纷繁复杂的数据。
下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。注意：1.词数100左右； 　 2.参考词汇：鲜明的对比－－striking cntrast
书面表达审题体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称
I have recently made a survey abut middle schl students’ chice f their future jbs. They have different ideas abut it. The mst striking cntrast is in teaching. 30% f the girls wuld like t becme teachers while nly 5% f the bys want t d this jb. 20% f the bys want t d business and anther 20% want t becme lawyers while girls take up 15% in these fields . What bys like t d mst is t becmemanagers and the secnd largest grup wuld like t be scientists .Besides teaching , the secnd chice fr girls is t be scientists and managers .The number is nt small. Girls als expect t shw their abilities in these tw fields.
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