人教版高考英语一轮复习Step2第1讲星光闪耀的亮点词汇写作专项课件

这是一份人教版高考英语一轮复习Step2第1讲星光闪耀的亮点词汇写作专项课件，共8页。
2023年高考阅卷老师说:“我们通常在1分钟内阅完一篇作文并给分,由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳,简单的词汇只会让我们产生视觉疲劳,但如果一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高级词汇,我们会眼前一亮。”
一、“语”众不同写作时,恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。(1)(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷,读后续写)I’m very happy t learn that David reached the finish line and wn a medal fr his persistence.→I’m mre than delighted t learn that David reached the finish line and wn a medal fr his persistence.(2)I’m busy with my lessns nw,fr the Cllege Entrance Examinatin, which is very imprtant t me,is near.→I’m ccupied with my lessns nw,fr the Cllege Entrance Examinatin, which is f great imprtance t me,is arund the crner.
二、更新换代写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是高级用法。On hearing the news,sme f my classmates and I frmed a grup t take part in the cmpetitin.I knw yu nce tk part in a rbtics cmpetitin and wn the award,s yu must have accumulated much experience in it.→On hearing the news,sme f my classmates and I frmed a grup t take part in the cmpetitin.I knw yu nce participated in a rbtics cmpetitin and wn the award,s yu must have accumulated much experience in it.
三、巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先,应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动,可以“一词传神”。Fr ne thing,I knw Chinese painting well,fr my father is a Chinese painter.→Fr ne thing,I am quite familiar with Chinese painting,fr my father is a Chinese painter.
四、低级淘汰为了展现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,应避免反复使用初中阶段学过的词汇,尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇。(1)(2022全国甲卷,书面表达)It was set up t raise awareness f prtecting the ceans,which play an imprtant part in glbal ecsystem.→It was set up t raise awareness f prtecting the ceans,which play a significant/crucial part in glbal ecsystem.(2)Secnd,I am trying my best t acquire the essential knwledge and skills cncerning my psitin.→Secnd,I am sparing n effrt t acquire the essential knwledge and skills cncerning my psitin.
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