续写范文精讲写作练习课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

这是一份续写范文精讲写作练习课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习，共16页。
Teaching aims
1.Master the structure f this kind f writing 2.Write an pen tpic cmpsitin
It was a rather crwded day at the subway statin. Seeing the busy passers-by stpped by his perfrmance, Eric, a music lver wh just graduated frm cllege, wre a big smile n his face. With deep passin fr music, he shwed up in the statin in his spare time, singing and playing the guitar t peple travelling t and frm the subway statin. With the meldius(悦耳的)sng cming t an end, hearty applause burst ut. As usual, Eric expressed his gratitude, ndding his head with a smile.“Man， awesme! An utstanding perfrmance!" Apprached a man, hlding the hand f a little girl in a pnytail(马尾辫)，aged abut fur.
“Park，a prducer f a recrd cmpany." The man intrduced himself, hlding ut his hand. “Wuld yu like t give it a try in my cmpany?" Out f pliteness, Eric shk hands with him in amazement. “I haven't seen smebdy this gd in a lng time! Yu are a beautiful scenery f this city, with such a beautiful vice!”Park admired. Suddenly, a phne call interrupted their cnversatin.Park briefly invited Eric t meet later in the same place and walked away t answer the call. Seeing Park ff, Eric did realize what had happened,with warm current flwing frm his head t te.It was the first time that he had earned such kind f recgnitin, which was ttally ut f his expectatin.
“A beautiful scenery f the city, with a beautiful vice!” Eric repeated the wrds, cleaning his guitar and preparing fr the next perfrmance. At that time, he caught sight f a little girl in a pnytail standing in a crner, weeping and lking arund. Carrying his guitar, Eric apprached her and squatted (蹲) dwn,“What's wrng with yu, hney?”
“I can’t find my daddy.”The girl burst ut crying. The girl calmed dwn in Eric’s sng when a man rushed int the ffice f the subway statin.
Pre-writing
While-writing
1.她站在那里,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 2.女孩抬起头来，盯着我的眼睛。 3.“你可以帮我去找我爸爸吗?”她低声问道。 4.“我可能会错过和Park的会面（meeting）”Eric摇摇头。 5.他在地铁站来回踱步，最终决定带女孩去地铁站的办公室。 6.女孩满眼忧伤。 7.Eric沉思，他脑子里闪过一个念头，我可以唱歌来让她开心。 8.开心的眼泪顺着脸颊淌下，她紧紧地拥抱她的爸爸。 9.当Park看到女儿的时候，他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 10.Eric看到这个令人满意的结果后,一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。
1..她站在那里,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。。 2.女孩抬起头来，盯着我的眼睛。 3.“你可以帮我去找我爸爸吗?”她低声问道。
She std there, tears rlling dwn her cheeks.
The girl lked up and fixed her eyes n mine.
“Can yu help me find my dad?”, she asked in a whisper.
4.“我可能会错过和Park的会面（meeting）”Eric摇摇头。 5.他在地铁站来回踱步，最终决定带女孩去地铁站的办公室。 6. 女孩满眼忧伤。
“I may miss the meeting with Park”, Eric shk his head.
He paced up and dwn in the subway statin. Finally. he decided t take the girl t the ffice f the subway statin.
Great srrw cluded the girl’s eyes.
7.Eric沉思，他脑子里闪过一个念头，“我可以唱歌来让她开心”。 8.开心的眼泪顺着脸颊淌下，她紧紧地拥抱她的爸爸。 9. 当Park看到女儿的时候，他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
Eric was deep in thught. An idea flashed acrss his mind, “I can sing a sng t make her happy.”
With tears f happiness rlling dwn her cheeks, she hugged her dad tightly.
A big smile appeared n his face when Park saw his daughter.
10.Eric看到这个令人满意的结果后,一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。
After Eric saw this satisfactry result, a sense f jy and happiness flded ver him.
Pst-writing