2024届高考英语冲刺之读后续写高分表达 课件

这是一份2024届高考英语冲刺之读后续写高分表达 课件，共23页。
Learning aims:
Knw what is a mral ending
Finish a stry with a mral ending
Imprvestudents’wrting skills
Lessn r Mral Ending
The main character in the stry grws,changes,r learns smething at the end f the stry, which will highlight the theme.
主题升华式结尾，也称哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句，总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。同学们平常可以积累一些含哲理的句子，如果引用得当，不仅能深化主题，而且能启人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。
Find ut the theme
1.Find it in the riginal texttpic sentencekey wrds:such as, lve,curage,cnfidence,smile,challenges,difficulties...
2.Cnclude it by yurself
谚语通式：As a saying/prverb ges,+名言 A man can be destryed but nt defeated.人可以被毁灭，但不能被打败。（面对挫折）Even small acts f kindness can make a big difference.即使是很小的善意行为也会产生很大的影响。（友善助人）PS.要具体文本具体分析，不要生搬硬套谚语名言。
Strategy1.运用谚语名言
1. It is never t ld t learn. 2. N crss, n crwn. 3. Ding is better than saying. 4. An idle yuth, a needy age. 5. A gd beginning makes a gd ending. 6. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 7. Nthing is impssible t the man wh will try.
Guess the meaning f the sayings.
不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。
少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
良好的开端就是成功的一半。
世上无难事,只怕有心人。
As a saying ges, “A gd beginning makes a gd ending.” As lng as yu take curage t take that first step,yu will be n yur half way t success.After all,a jurney f ne thusand miles begins with a single step.
Qute a saying
Use yur wn language
句式1：强调句： It is + 被强调部分 + that + 其他部分
1. 困难和障碍使我们更强大。It is difficulties and bstacles that make us strnger.2. 爱使世界转动。It is lve that makes the wrld g arund.3. 冷静和智慧帮助我们脱离危险。 It is calmness and wisdm that help us get ut f danger.
Strategy 2.Use yu wn language t summarize the theme
句式2：This unfrgettable experience taught me a valuable lessn then n, I became/grew...
1. 这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理：只要我们不放弃希望，任何困境都有出路。从那天起，我变得更聪明，更自信了。(个人成长类/脱困类)The unfrgettable experience taught me a valuable lessn that there’s always a way ut as lng as we never give up ur hpe. Frm that day n, I grew wiser and mre cnfident. 2. 这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理：我们遇到困难时一定要有积极的态度。从那天起，我变得更勇敢，更乐观了。(个人成长类)This unfrgettable experience taught me a valuable lessn that we shuld have a psitive attitude when facing difficulties. Frm that day n, I grew braver and mre ptimistic.
句式3：Only then did sb. realize ...
直到那时，他才意识到原谅和爱/善意/友谊的重要性。Only then did he realize the imprtance f frgiveness and lve/kindness/friendship. 直到那时我才意识到真诚和诚实在友谊中的价值。Only then did I realize the value f sincerity and hnesty in friendship.
句式4：感叹句：What a + adj + experience!
What an unfrgettable experience! It turns ut that there’s always a way ut f any dilemma as lng as we stay calm /never give up hpe / unite tgether.
多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静/ 不放弃希望 / 团结一致，就总有办法摆脱困境。
句式5：典型表达：流泪；心里想
①流泪Tears blurred ne's eyes.泪水模糊了某人的双眼。One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪水模糊了某人的双眼。Tears rll dwn ne's eyes/cheeks/face.泪水顺着某人的眼睛/脸颊/脸流下来。②心里想An inner vice tld 内心的声音告诉某人……thught/said t neself自己盘算；自思自忖
3．转折(个人努力或借助外界)典型表达：鼓起勇气(或通过另外一方的鼓励)；毫不犹豫①鼓起勇气pluck up/take/gather ne's curage(t d...)②毫不犹豫sb.culd hardly wait t d sth.withut a secnd thught /withut even thinking /withut delay /withut hesitatin
4．事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到宽慰典型表达：似乎；希望；宽慰①似乎It was like ding sth.It seemed if...②希望Hping a glimmer f hard t d sth.
③宽慰breathe a sigh f relief松了一□气sigh with relief如释重负A wave f relief flded/washed ver sb.一阵如释重负的感觉淹没了某人。t ne's relief 令某人宽慰的是……5．但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型表达：不幸的是；不知道(接下来)做什么①不幸的是But bad luck fr sb., ...但是某人真不走运，…… in withut n use...
②不知道(接下来)做什么Sb.did sth., wndering what t d sth., nt knwing what t d sth., unsure f what t d at a lss what t in a dilemma abut whether t d r nt.
6．突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)典型表达：某人突然想到/明白……；某人突然有了主意①某人突然想到/明白……It suddenly ccurred t ＝It hit ＝It struck ＝It dawned n
②某人突然有了主意(idea，thught...)ccurred/came t sb.＝ int ne's in ne's mind.One's mind began t race...某人的脑子开始飞快地运转起来……
7．过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折典型表达：过了一段时间；有了结果；皆大欢喜①过了一段时间Nt lng after that, ...＝Shrtly afterwards, ...＝Befre lng, ...＝It didn't take lng befre...＝It tk sme time befre...
我明白了一个忠实的朋友抵得上一万个亲戚。It dawned n me that ne lyal friend is wrth ten thusand relatives.那份亲情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。That affectin twards ur family is like a tuch f green tea, refreashing and heartwarming. 善良就像一缕阳光，可以照亮我们的生活。Kindness is like a ray f sunlight, which can light up ur life.没有爱的家庭就像没有灵魂的身体。A hme withut lve is n mre than a bdy withut sul.
A funny thing happened t Arthur when he was n the way t wrk ne day.一天，亚瑟在上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。
What a funny day. Arthur culdn't stp laughing whenever he lked back n this hilarius experience. 多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。
生活是一盒巧克力，你永远不知道下一步你会得到。Life is a bx f chclate. Yu never knw what yu will get. 朋友之于我犹如水之于鱼。A friend is t me what water is t fish.读书之于心灵，犹如食物之于身体。Reading is t the mind what fd is t the bdy.
精彩句式：The smile n her face shne like a diamnd.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。A smile f understanding flashed acrss his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。A ripple f excitement ran thrugh them.他们心中涌起一阵兴奋的涟漪。Laughter lingered arund the rm.笑声在房间里萦绕。