高中Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle当堂达标检测题

这是一份高中Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle当堂达标检测题，共3页。试卷主要包含了浪费了本该学习的时间；，对身心造成危害；，你的建议等内容，欢迎下载使用。

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假设你是李华，你的笔友王强最近沉迷于电脑游戏，这对他造成了很多危害。请你给他写一封信，劝说他改掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。内容包括：
1.浪费了本该学习的时间；
2.对身心造成危害；
3.你的建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻很关键
一、审题
1. 确定体裁：本次写作是应用文（建议信），内容为劝说对方改掉玩电脑游戏的习惯；
2. 确定人称：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；
3. 确定时态：时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
二、构思
第一段：表明写信的目的，这里可以简单叙述；
第二段：说明玩电脑游戏的危害并给出建议，可以借助题目给出的两个要点：浪费时间、危害身心；
第三段：表达祝愿。
步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全
1.__________________________对……着迷；沉溺于……
2. __________________________首先
3. __________________________花费……在……上
4. __________________________损害
5. __________________________充满
6. __________________________对……有害
7. __________________________摆脱；脱离
8. __________________________参加
步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现
1. 你沉溺于电脑游戏。（主系表）
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2. 玩电脑游戏会浪费许多宝贵的时间。（主谓宾）
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3. 你应该把时间花费在学习或其他更有意义的事情上。（主谓宾）
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4. 长时间玩电脑游戏会对你的健康和眼睛有害。（主谓宾）
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5. 有些游戏充满着暴力。（主系表）
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6. 它会对你的心理健康有害。（主系表）
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7. 你可以多读好书、多做运动或参加一些社会活动来开阔你的眼界。（主谓宾状）
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步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点
1. 把第1句升级为含有when引导的时间状语从句的复合句
________________________________________________________________________________2. 把第2、3句升级为含有限制性定语从句的复合句
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3. 第4句用especially强调eyes
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4. 把第5、6句升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句
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步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇
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课时把关练
Part IV Writing
参考答案
步骤二
1. be addicted t 2. t begin with 3. 4. d harm t 5. be full f 6. be harmful t
7. break away frm 8. participate in
步骤三
1. Yu are addicted t cmputer games.
2.Playing cmputer games will waste much valuable time.
3. Yu shuld spend the time n yur study r ther mre meaningful things.
4.Playing cmputer games fr a lng time will d harm t yur health and eyes.
5. Sme games are full f vilence.
6.It will be harmful t yur mental health.
7. Yu can read mre gd bks，take mre exercise r participate in sme scial activities t expand yur hrizns.
步骤四
1. I feel very wrried when I hear that yu are addicted t cmputer games.
2.Playing cmputer games will waste much valuable time which shuld be spent n yur study r ther mre meaningful things.
3. Playing cmputer games fr a lng time will d harm t yur health，especially t yur eyes.
4.Sme games are full f vilence，which will be harmful t yur mental health.
5.In rder t live a meaningful life，yu can read mre gd bks，take mre exercise r participate in sme scial activities t expand yur hrizn.
步骤五
Dear Wang Qiang，
I feel very wrried when I hear that yu are addicted t cmputer games.
T begin with，playing cmputer games will waste much valuable time which shuld be spent n yur study r ther mre meaningful things. In additin，playing cmputer games fr a lng time will d harm t yur health，especially t yur eyes. Wrse still，sme games are full f vilence，which will be harmful t yur mental health. Therefre，I strngly hpe that yu can break away frm it. The earlier，the better. In rder t live a meaningful life，yu can read mre gd bks，take mre exercise r participate in sme scial activities t expand yur hrizns.
Lking frward t yur gd news.
Yurs，
Li Hua