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这是一份最新高考英语一轮复习【讲通练透】 第09讲 读后续写之自然环境描写（讲通），共11页。试卷主要包含了抓基础，抓课堂，抓自习，抓阅读等内容，欢迎下载使用。
2、抓课堂、重效率、要求学生紧跟老师的节奏。一轮复习是将重点知识提炼，容量大，速度快。所以，学生的思路必须时时刻刻跟随着老师的思路，要快速地用脑思，用心听、用嘴说，用手写，才能达到高效。
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►第09讲 自然环境描写
（讲义）
目录
对景、物等的描写通常会直接使用物作主语，或者用拟人化的修辞手法。
（2023年浙江卷1月）It seemed that the bird was waiting fr me, its beady eyes lcked n mine as if trying t cnvey sme deep, unspken gratitude.
那只鸟似乎在等着我，它那明亮的眼睛盯着我，仿佛在试图表达某种深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。
（2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题）A few hurs int the trek, he saw eyes in the distance, s he grabbed his bat befre realizing it was just a stray dg.
长途跋涉几个小时后，他看到了远处的眼睛，所以他抓起了球棒，才意识到那只是一只流浪狗。
The mn washed the wds in a gentle light. The stars twinkled like a child’s curius eyes blinking with anticipatin.
月亮用柔和的光洗刷着树林星星闪烁着，像孩子好奇的眼睛闪烁着期待。
The sund came swiftly nearer, and became a wild rar, filling the whle valley.
这声音很快就走近了，变成了狂吼，响彻整个山谷。
5.During autumn, these same muntains are gld, and in winter they are cvered in sheets f white frst.
在秋天，这些山是金色的，而在冬天，它们身披白露。
6.The rar f the cean waves and cries f the seabirds make up the music f the cast.
海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫组成了海岸的音乐。
7.The leaves had almst all fallen ff, creating a sea f fiery clrs that crunched beneath ur feet.
几乎所有的叶子都掉下来了，在我们的脚下形成一片火红色的海洋。我们踩上去发出嘎吱嘎吱的声响。
8.The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strlled dwn the street. Occasinally, ne wuld fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it t the grund.
漫步街头，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉落，在微风中轻轻摇摆，飘然落地。
9.Bathed in the glden sunlight, the sea rippled and sparkled charmingly.
大海沐浴在金色的阳光下,荡漾着迷人的波光。
10.In an instant, everything had suddenly gne quiet. Birds didn't chirp, leaves didn't rustle and insects didn't sing. A feeling f stillness crept up n me
刹那间,万物突然安静。鸟儿不再鸣叫,树叶不再沙沙作响,昆虫停止歌唱。一种寂静的感觉悄然向我袭来。
11.Birds were chattering/twittering smewhere.鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。
12.On a quite mrning in the muntains, feel the sun n yur skin and breathe in the sweet scent f fresh flwers while birds greet the new day with their mrning sng.
山中宁静的清晨，感受阳光洒在你的身上，呼吸鲜花的芳香，聆听鸟儿们用它们的歌声迎接新的一天。
1.The peaceful landscape is a true feast fr the eyes, with its rlling green hills dtted with sheep and cattle.
绵延起伏的青山上散落着牛羊，这幅祥和宁静的景象真让人赏心悦目。
2.Mist-cvered muntains were dtted with small farms and villages.
雾蒙蒙的山上星星点点地散落着小农场和村落。
3.The path is winding and we saw muntains twering ver the green valleys and cliffs that seemed
endless.
小路蜿蜒曲折,我们看到高山耸立在绿色的山谷和悬崖上，似乎没有尽头。
4.At that mment, I nticed my father made a turn ff the highway and drve past a sign that read “Airprt Parking”.
就在那一刻，我注意到我的父亲在高速公路上转弯，开车经过了一个写着“机场停车”的标志。
5.When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t the spt that the bear had finally tre dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind.
当我们安全地坐在空中的直升机上时，我惊讶地发现，熊终于撕毁了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。
6.N mre than 30 paces away in the bg was a huge Alaskan timber wlf-caught in ne f Trapper Gerge’s traps.
不到30步远的沼泽地里，一只巨大的阿拉斯加大灰狼被捕猎者Trapper Gerge的陷阱困住了。
天气的描写属于情节的一部分，但不建议大篇幅进行描写。为了渲染气氛，烘托情节，可以细化到风、雪、雨、雷、阴、晴等。
N. 1.风
The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.
寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
The wind was s bne-chilling that I culdn't stp shivering frm the cd.
寒风刺骨，我冷得不停打哆嗦。
Outside,the winds blew the trees and beat against the huse, which made peple unable t ne their eyes.
外面，风吹着树，拍打着房子，使人们无法睁开眼睛。
As the wind blws, we can hear the leaves rustling in the trees.
随着风的吹拂,我们可以听到树沙沙作响。
It was getting dark and the wind died away.
天渐渐黑了，风渐渐小了。
The breeze gently kissed his checks.
微风轻柔地亲吻着他的脸庞。
N. 2. 雨
I was disturbed by the annying sund f the rain.
淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。
Immediately, sheets f bitterly cld rain filled the air.
顷刻间，空中下起了阵阵刺骨的冷雨。
The rain came puring dwn, the streams rse, and the winds blew and beat against the huse.
大雨倾盆，溪水上涨，狂风咆哮这撞击房屋。
Thugh the rain stpped, the wind rushed by and whistled and made strange sunds.
雨虽停了，风却呼啸而过，发出奇怪的声音。
The rain drummed n the windw, bidding farewell t the last beam f sunlight.
雨滴敲打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。
6.It was raining cats and dgs yesterday after schl, and I was all wet when I gt hme.
昨天放学的时候下着倾盆大雨，我到家时全身都湿了。
7.There was a heavy dwnpur. Unfrtunately, Tm was caught in the heavy rain.
下了一场大暴雨。不幸的是，Tm 在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。
N. 3. 雪
1 .The frzen snw crunched under ur feet.
冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。
2.Snw blanketed every rftp and weighed n the branches f ld trees.
雪覆盖了每一个屋顶,压在老树的枝丫上。
3.The cuntryside was transfrmed int a huge white plain by the snw. It's dark nw and the snw is falling,clumps f wet flakes drifting dwn.
乡村被雪变成了一片巨大的白色平原。现在天黑了，雪还在下，一片片湿漉漉的雪花飘落下来。
4. The feathery snwflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.
鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的画。
N. 4. 雾
The view was bscured by fg.
雾中景色朦胧。
2.The hills were envelped in dense fg.
群山被浓雾笼罩着。
3. The mrning fg blcked ur view.
清晨的雾挡住了我们的视线。
4. The fg sn encmpassed the whle valley.
雾很快笼罩了整个山谷。
5. The twn was cvered in a thick blanket f fg.
大雾笼罩着这个城镇。
6. The heavy fg seemed t be casting a net ver me.
浓雾似乎在我身上撒下了一张网。
N. 5. 太阳
This weather is terrible. I am sweating like a pig, althugh I'm nt ding anything.
天热得吓人，虽然我什么都没做，但还是汗流浃背。
In this heat, even the trees appeared defeated, with leaves drping lifelessly.
在这种炎热的天气里、连树木都显得萎靡不振,树叶都毫无生气地垂落着。
The sun was at its highest. The heat beat dwn n my head as if I was bacn under the grill.
太阳处于最高点,热浪击打在头上，我好像烤架下的培根一样。
The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered n its glass-clear surface.
湖水深蓝，阳光在风平浪静的湖面上熠熠生辉。
N. 6. 雾
The cluds had spread and nearly cvered the entire sky.
云层散开，几乎遮住了整个天空。
The sky was full f dark masses f cluds.
天空中乌云密布。
By afternn, the cluds have cleared away.
到了下午，云已经散去。
4.The sky was vercast, darkened with glmy cluds, and the whle wrld seemed t be envelped in a huge gray quilt.
天阴沉沉的，乌云密布，整个世界仿佛都被笼罩在一张巨大的灰色被子里。
N. 7. 雷电
1. An ash f lightning flashed acrss the sky. 一道闪电划过天空。
2. Outside, thunder bmed and crashed. 外面雷声隆降，发出巨响。
3. Thunder bmed in the sky verhead, 雷声在头顶上的天空中隆隆作响。
4.The weather in summer is unpredictable. Just nw it was sunny. In a flash, lightning and thunder brke ut, and the strm began t rain.
夏天的天气真是变幻莫测。刚才还是晴空万里，一霎时就电闪雷鸣，开始了狂风暴雨。
5.The thunder was rumbling in the distance.
远处雷声隆降。
6.Thunder rumbled in the muntains all arund and rain began t fall in heavy drps.
山里雷声隆隆雨点开始大颗大颗地往下落。
7. I was studying a Barbie and ding sme simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap f thunder rared frm the strm utside. I jumped at the nise, drpping the dll t the flr. The lights flickered nce and died, cvering everything in a blanket f blackness. Thunder cntinued t shake the sky and lightning illuminated the stre fr secnds, casting frightening shadws n my mind.
我正在研究一个芭比娃娃，在脑子里做一些简单的计算，，突然一阵惊天动地的雷声从外面的暴风雨中呼啸而出。我听到噪音吓了一跳，把娃娃扔在地上。灯光闪烁了一次，然后熄灭了，一片漆黑地笼罩了一切。雷声继续震动着天空，闪电照亮了商店好几秒钟，在我的脑海中投下了可怕的阴影。
N. 8. 星空
The sky was dtted with sparkling stars.
天上繁星点点。
Stars winked at me in a darkening sky.
夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。
Blue skies std tall and far.
蓝蓝的天空高高耸立。
4. The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairy tale quality.
深蓝色的夜空给这一场景增添了童话般的色彩。
5.At midnight,the strm quieted, the cluds parted and the stars shne thrugh the dark sky.
午夜时分,暴风雨停了，乌云散开,星星在黑暗的天空中闪罐。
6.he stars shine like diamnds.星星如钻石般闪耀。
（2023年浙江卷1月）I felt a surge f relief and awe at the sight f this sund and grateful creature, and I knew that I wuld always cherish the memries we shared as I climbed int my car and drve away.
看到这个健康的和感激的生物，我感到一阵欣慰和敬畏，我知道，当我爬上我的车，开车离开时，我会永远珍惜我们分享的回忆。
（2023年浙江卷1月）A flash f mvement caught my attentin. I turned arund t see the same hummingbird hvering in the air.
一阵短暂的动作引起了我的注意。我转过身，看到那只蜂鸟在空中盘旋。
(2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题) With the sun peeking ver the hrizn, Jhn’s face glwed with gratitude. Feeling energetic, he culdn’t wait t get started.
太阳在地平线上掠过，约翰的脸上洋溢着感激之光。他感到精力充沛，就迫不及待地想开始工作。
An air f sadness settled ver the grup.
人群中笼罩着一种悲伤的气氛.
It was awfully quiet except fr ur ftsteps hitting the rad, and my heavy breathing.
除了我们走在路上的脚步声和我沉重的呼吸声外，这里非常安静。
6.It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet.The air was charged with tensin.
突然安静得可怕,空气中弥漫着紧张的气氛。
【模拟速递】
【2023年江苏省镇江第一中学模拟预测】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Pam Bales left her car and stepped nt the snw-cvered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hur hike thrugh New Hampshire’s Munt Washingtn State Park. The hike up the lwer part f Jewell was pleasant. At 8:30 am, still belw the tree line, she tk the first in a series f n-the-trail selfies.
Less than an hur later, she tk anther pht, after she’d climbed int clder air and deeper snws. She made her way acrss the snw-cvered ridge tward Munt Washingtn. Then she nticed smething: a single set f ftprints in the snw ahead f her. She’d been fllwing faint tracks all day and hadn’t given them much thught, because s many peple climb Jewell Trail. But these, she realized, had been made by a pair f trainers, nt suitable fr hiking n snw.
By 11 am, Bales was getting cld and decided t abandn her plan. The nly thing keeping Bales n Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the snw. As she fught the wind and heavy sleet (雨夹雪), the tracks made a hard left-hand turn ff the trail.
Nw she alarmed. She was sure the hiker culd get thrugh in the w visibility and was heading straight tward the challenging trails f the Great Gulf Wilderness. Bales std there, stunned. The temperature and cluds were in a race t find their lwest pint, and darkness was mere hurs away. She turned t the left and called ut, “Hell!” int the frzen fg.
Nthing. She called ut again: “Is anybdy ut there? D yu need help?”
The strng westerly winds carried her vice away. She blew int her rescue whistle. Fr a fleeting mment she thught she heard smene reply, but it was just the wind playing games with her mind. She std listening, then turned and walked cautiusly in the directin f the single set f tracks. Bales fllwed the tracks cautiusly fr 20 t 30 meters. She runded a slight crner and saw a man sitting mtinless.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When she apprached him and said hell, he did nt react.
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After waking the man up, Bales recgnized that they had t get ut f there sn.
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【答案】
When she apprached him and said hell, he did nt react. Taking a deep breath, Bales gt clser, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed ut. She knew she had t wake him up immediately r the dreadful weather culd put him in greater danger. Out f her bag, Bales tk a carpet t wrap the man, gave sme ht water t him, called ut repeatedly and shk him hard. Frtunately, it didn’t take lng befre the man came t himself.
After waking the man up, Bales recgnized that they had t get ut f there sn. The wind kept hwling with the heavy sleet driving fiercely, and even wrse, darkness began t fall. Anxius, Bales struggled t help the man up, supprting his weight and inching alng the trail, fllwing the tracks left by her hiking bts. After what seemed like ages, they finally made it t the ft f the muntain. The man was rushed t hspital immediately. Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave f happiness welled up inside.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了帕姆·巴勒斯计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步六小时，不到一小时后，她已经爬进了更冷的空气和更深的雪中。她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊，向华盛顿山进发。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一组脚印。她一整天都在跟踪微弱的轨迹，并没有给它们太多的思考，因为有太多人爬珠尔小道。但她意识到，这些鞋是由一双运动鞋制成的，不适合在雪地上徒步旅行。后来，她在一个小角落，看见一个人一动不动地坐着。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当她走近他打招呼时，他没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写巴勒斯救助这名已经失去意识的男子的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在叫醒那个人后，巴勒斯意识到他们必须尽快离开那里。”可知，第二段可描写巴勒斯和那名男子一起下山，脱离险境的过程。
续写线索：检查——拿出物品给男子取暖——唤醒男子——扶起那名男子——一起下山——脱离险境——感受
[高分句型1] Taking a deep breath, Bales gt clser, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed ut. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Anxius, Bales struggled t help the man up, supprting his weight and inching alng the trail, fllwing the tracks left by her hiking bts. (运用了形容词和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型3] Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave f happiness welled up inside.(运用了让步状语从句的倒装结构)
【2020年浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm ging t miss yu s much, Pppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins(情绪)get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay？"His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by's mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn't.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. "What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up？"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mm.” Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let's get a little dg fr Pppy."
It didn't take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
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Para 2. A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
【答案】
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg. Then tw fluffy paws. Next the bx tipped ver sideways, and ut tumbled a mass f wiggly glden silliness. Pppy was amazed. She wagged furiusly. She barked with jy. She smiled, her tngue llling ut as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was nt shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping arund the lder dg. “That didn’t take lng,” remarked Mm, as bth dgs went raring arund the huse in an imprmptu game f chase. Dad laughed.
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. He had missed Pppy and was lking frward t seeing her. When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t. “Oh my gsh, wh is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed at the lk f shck n his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe yu gt yurselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mm. “This puppy is fr Pppy!”
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Pppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Pppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Pppy买一条小狗作伴。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Pppy的。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：a mass f，with jy，lk frward t等高级词汇；非谓语动词的运用The little pup was nt shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping arund the lder dg.；时间状语从句When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t.等高级句式。
目标1
景、物环境的描写
目标2
地点方位的描写
目标3
天气的描写
目标4
气氛的描写
目标5
经典赏析
目标6
真题感悟
一 景、物环境的描写
二 地点方位的直接描写
三 天气的描写
四 气氛的描写
五 经典赏析
2、抓课堂、重效率、要求学生紧跟老师的节奏。一轮复习是将重点知识提炼，容量大，速度快。所以，学生的思路必须时时刻刻跟随着老师的思路，要快速地用脑思，用心听、用嘴说，用手写，才能达到高效。
3、抓自习、重过程、增强得分的意识。学案都是在规定的时间内完成，重视规范的做题步骤，重视思考过程。更重要的是，做完题后要对做过的题目进行反思、整理。
4、抓阅读、重反思、全面提高成绩。得阅读者得天下。阅读是强化英语思维的最佳途径之一。一轮复习，重视基础知识的同时，要坚持阅读训练，促进英语成绩的整体提高。
5、抓时间，重效果，扎实做好每个复习环节。一轮复习时间紧，任务重，需要同学们充分抢抓时间，利用时间，紧跟复习进度。英语的进步并非一蹴而就，需要每天坚持把每件事情做扎实。做到这一点，成功只是早晚的事！
►第09讲 自然环境描写
（讲义）
目录
对景、物等的描写通常会直接使用物作主语，或者用拟人化的修辞手法。
（2023年浙江卷1月）It seemed that the bird was waiting fr me, its beady eyes lcked n mine as if trying t cnvey sme deep, unspken gratitude.
那只鸟似乎在等着我，它那明亮的眼睛盯着我，仿佛在试图表达某种深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。
（2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题）A few hurs int the trek, he saw eyes in the distance, s he grabbed his bat befre realizing it was just a stray dg.
长途跋涉几个小时后，他看到了远处的眼睛，所以他抓起了球棒，才意识到那只是一只流浪狗。
The mn washed the wds in a gentle light. The stars twinkled like a child’s curius eyes blinking with anticipatin.
月亮用柔和的光洗刷着树林星星闪烁着，像孩子好奇的眼睛闪烁着期待。
The sund came swiftly nearer, and became a wild rar, filling the whle valley.
这声音很快就走近了，变成了狂吼，响彻整个山谷。
5.During autumn, these same muntains are gld, and in winter they are cvered in sheets f white frst.
在秋天，这些山是金色的，而在冬天，它们身披白露。
6.The rar f the cean waves and cries f the seabirds make up the music f the cast.
海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫组成了海岸的音乐。
7.The leaves had almst all fallen ff, creating a sea f fiery clrs that crunched beneath ur feet.
几乎所有的叶子都掉下来了，在我们的脚下形成一片火红色的海洋。我们踩上去发出嘎吱嘎吱的声响。
8.The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strlled dwn the street. Occasinally, ne wuld fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it t the grund.
漫步街头，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉落，在微风中轻轻摇摆，飘然落地。
9.Bathed in the glden sunlight, the sea rippled and sparkled charmingly.
大海沐浴在金色的阳光下,荡漾着迷人的波光。
10.In an instant, everything had suddenly gne quiet. Birds didn't chirp, leaves didn't rustle and insects didn't sing. A feeling f stillness crept up n me
刹那间,万物突然安静。鸟儿不再鸣叫,树叶不再沙沙作响,昆虫停止歌唱。一种寂静的感觉悄然向我袭来。
11.Birds were chattering/twittering smewhere.鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。
12.On a quite mrning in the muntains, feel the sun n yur skin and breathe in the sweet scent f fresh flwers while birds greet the new day with their mrning sng.
山中宁静的清晨，感受阳光洒在你的身上，呼吸鲜花的芳香，聆听鸟儿们用它们的歌声迎接新的一天。
1.The peaceful landscape is a true feast fr the eyes, with its rlling green hills dtted with sheep and cattle.
绵延起伏的青山上散落着牛羊，这幅祥和宁静的景象真让人赏心悦目。
2.Mist-cvered muntains were dtted with small farms and villages.
雾蒙蒙的山上星星点点地散落着小农场和村落。
3.The path is winding and we saw muntains twering ver the green valleys and cliffs that seemed
endless.
小路蜿蜒曲折,我们看到高山耸立在绿色的山谷和悬崖上，似乎没有尽头。
4.At that mment, I nticed my father made a turn ff the highway and drve past a sign that read “Airprt Parking”.
就在那一刻，我注意到我的父亲在高速公路上转弯，开车经过了一个写着“机场停车”的标志。
5.When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t the spt that the bear had finally tre dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind.
当我们安全地坐在空中的直升机上时，我惊讶地发现，熊终于撕毁了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。
6.N mre than 30 paces away in the bg was a huge Alaskan timber wlf-caught in ne f Trapper Gerge’s traps.
不到30步远的沼泽地里，一只巨大的阿拉斯加大灰狼被捕猎者Trapper Gerge的陷阱困住了。
天气的描写属于情节的一部分，但不建议大篇幅进行描写。为了渲染气氛，烘托情节，可以细化到风、雪、雨、雷、阴、晴等。
N. 1.风
The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.
寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
The wind was s bne-chilling that I culdn't stp shivering frm the cd.
寒风刺骨，我冷得不停打哆嗦。
Outside,the winds blew the trees and beat against the huse, which made peple unable t ne their eyes.
外面，风吹着树，拍打着房子，使人们无法睁开眼睛。
As the wind blws, we can hear the leaves rustling in the trees.
随着风的吹拂,我们可以听到树沙沙作响。
It was getting dark and the wind died away.
天渐渐黑了，风渐渐小了。
The breeze gently kissed his checks.
微风轻柔地亲吻着他的脸庞。
N. 2. 雨
I was disturbed by the annying sund f the rain.
淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。
Immediately, sheets f bitterly cld rain filled the air.
顷刻间，空中下起了阵阵刺骨的冷雨。
The rain came puring dwn, the streams rse, and the winds blew and beat against the huse.
大雨倾盆，溪水上涨，狂风咆哮这撞击房屋。
Thugh the rain stpped, the wind rushed by and whistled and made strange sunds.
雨虽停了，风却呼啸而过，发出奇怪的声音。
The rain drummed n the windw, bidding farewell t the last beam f sunlight.
雨滴敲打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。
6.It was raining cats and dgs yesterday after schl, and I was all wet when I gt hme.
昨天放学的时候下着倾盆大雨，我到家时全身都湿了。
7.There was a heavy dwnpur. Unfrtunately, Tm was caught in the heavy rain.
下了一场大暴雨。不幸的是，Tm 在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。
N. 3. 雪
1 .The frzen snw crunched under ur feet.
冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。
2.Snw blanketed every rftp and weighed n the branches f ld trees.
雪覆盖了每一个屋顶,压在老树的枝丫上。
3.The cuntryside was transfrmed int a huge white plain by the snw. It's dark nw and the snw is falling,clumps f wet flakes drifting dwn.
乡村被雪变成了一片巨大的白色平原。现在天黑了，雪还在下，一片片湿漉漉的雪花飘落下来。
4. The feathery snwflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.
鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的画。
N. 4. 雾
The view was bscured by fg.
雾中景色朦胧。
2.The hills were envelped in dense fg.
群山被浓雾笼罩着。
3. The mrning fg blcked ur view.
清晨的雾挡住了我们的视线。
4. The fg sn encmpassed the whle valley.
雾很快笼罩了整个山谷。
5. The twn was cvered in a thick blanket f fg.
大雾笼罩着这个城镇。
6. The heavy fg seemed t be casting a net ver me.
浓雾似乎在我身上撒下了一张网。
N. 5. 太阳
This weather is terrible. I am sweating like a pig, althugh I'm nt ding anything.
天热得吓人，虽然我什么都没做，但还是汗流浃背。
In this heat, even the trees appeared defeated, with leaves drping lifelessly.
在这种炎热的天气里、连树木都显得萎靡不振,树叶都毫无生气地垂落着。
The sun was at its highest. The heat beat dwn n my head as if I was bacn under the grill.
太阳处于最高点,热浪击打在头上，我好像烤架下的培根一样。
The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered n its glass-clear surface.
湖水深蓝，阳光在风平浪静的湖面上熠熠生辉。
N. 6. 雾
The cluds had spread and nearly cvered the entire sky.
云层散开，几乎遮住了整个天空。
The sky was full f dark masses f cluds.
天空中乌云密布。
By afternn, the cluds have cleared away.
到了下午，云已经散去。
4.The sky was vercast, darkened with glmy cluds, and the whle wrld seemed t be envelped in a huge gray quilt.
天阴沉沉的，乌云密布，整个世界仿佛都被笼罩在一张巨大的灰色被子里。
N. 7. 雷电
1. An ash f lightning flashed acrss the sky. 一道闪电划过天空。
2. Outside, thunder bmed and crashed. 外面雷声隆降，发出巨响。
3. Thunder bmed in the sky verhead, 雷声在头顶上的天空中隆隆作响。
4.The weather in summer is unpredictable. Just nw it was sunny. In a flash, lightning and thunder brke ut, and the strm began t rain.
夏天的天气真是变幻莫测。刚才还是晴空万里，一霎时就电闪雷鸣，开始了狂风暴雨。
5.The thunder was rumbling in the distance.
远处雷声隆降。
6.Thunder rumbled in the muntains all arund and rain began t fall in heavy drps.
山里雷声隆隆雨点开始大颗大颗地往下落。
7. I was studying a Barbie and ding sme simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap f thunder rared frm the strm utside. I jumped at the nise, drpping the dll t the flr. The lights flickered nce and died, cvering everything in a blanket f blackness. Thunder cntinued t shake the sky and lightning illuminated the stre fr secnds, casting frightening shadws n my mind.
我正在研究一个芭比娃娃，在脑子里做一些简单的计算，，突然一阵惊天动地的雷声从外面的暴风雨中呼啸而出。我听到噪音吓了一跳，把娃娃扔在地上。灯光闪烁了一次，然后熄灭了，一片漆黑地笼罩了一切。雷声继续震动着天空，闪电照亮了商店好几秒钟，在我的脑海中投下了可怕的阴影。
N. 8. 星空
The sky was dtted with sparkling stars.
天上繁星点点。
Stars winked at me in a darkening sky.
夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。
Blue skies std tall and far.
蓝蓝的天空高高耸立。
4. The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairy tale quality.
深蓝色的夜空给这一场景增添了童话般的色彩。
5.At midnight,the strm quieted, the cluds parted and the stars shne thrugh the dark sky.
午夜时分,暴风雨停了，乌云散开,星星在黑暗的天空中闪罐。
6.he stars shine like diamnds.星星如钻石般闪耀。
（2023年浙江卷1月）I felt a surge f relief and awe at the sight f this sund and grateful creature, and I knew that I wuld always cherish the memries we shared as I climbed int my car and drve away.
看到这个健康的和感激的生物，我感到一阵欣慰和敬畏，我知道，当我爬上我的车，开车离开时，我会永远珍惜我们分享的回忆。
（2023年浙江卷1月）A flash f mvement caught my attentin. I turned arund t see the same hummingbird hvering in the air.
一阵短暂的动作引起了我的注意。我转过身，看到那只蜂鸟在空中盘旋。
(2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题) With the sun peeking ver the hrizn, Jhn’s face glwed with gratitude. Feeling energetic, he culdn’t wait t get started.
太阳在地平线上掠过，约翰的脸上洋溢着感激之光。他感到精力充沛，就迫不及待地想开始工作。
An air f sadness settled ver the grup.
人群中笼罩着一种悲伤的气氛.
It was awfully quiet except fr ur ftsteps hitting the rad, and my heavy breathing.
除了我们走在路上的脚步声和我沉重的呼吸声外，这里非常安静。
6.It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet.The air was charged with tensin.
突然安静得可怕,空气中弥漫着紧张的气氛。
【模拟速递】
【2023年江苏省镇江第一中学模拟预测】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Pam Bales left her car and stepped nt the snw-cvered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hur hike thrugh New Hampshire’s Munt Washingtn State Park. The hike up the lwer part f Jewell was pleasant. At 8:30 am, still belw the tree line, she tk the first in a series f n-the-trail selfies.
Less than an hur later, she tk anther pht, after she’d climbed int clder air and deeper snws. She made her way acrss the snw-cvered ridge tward Munt Washingtn. Then she nticed smething: a single set f ftprints in the snw ahead f her. She’d been fllwing faint tracks all day and hadn’t given them much thught, because s many peple climb Jewell Trail. But these, she realized, had been made by a pair f trainers, nt suitable fr hiking n snw.
By 11 am, Bales was getting cld and decided t abandn her plan. The nly thing keeping Bales n Gulfside Trail was the trainer tracks in the snw. As she fught the wind and heavy sleet (雨夹雪), the tracks made a hard left-hand turn ff the trail.
Nw she alarmed. She was sure the hiker culd get thrugh in the w visibility and was heading straight tward the challenging trails f the Great Gulf Wilderness. Bales std there, stunned. The temperature and cluds were in a race t find their lwest pint, and darkness was mere hurs away. She turned t the left and called ut, “Hell!” int the frzen fg.
Nthing. She called ut again: “Is anybdy ut there? D yu need help?”
The strng westerly winds carried her vice away. She blew int her rescue whistle. Fr a fleeting mment she thught she heard smene reply, but it was just the wind playing games with her mind. She std listening, then turned and walked cautiusly in the directin f the single set f tracks. Bales fllwed the tracks cautiusly fr 20 t 30 meters. She runded a slight crner and saw a man sitting mtinless.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When she apprached him and said hell, he did nt react.
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After waking the man up, Bales recgnized that they had t get ut f there sn.
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【答案】
When she apprached him and said hell, he did nt react. Taking a deep breath, Bales gt clser, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed ut. She knew she had t wake him up immediately r the dreadful weather culd put him in greater danger. Out f her bag, Bales tk a carpet t wrap the man, gave sme ht water t him, called ut repeatedly and shk him hard. Frtunately, it didn’t take lng befre the man came t himself.
After waking the man up, Bales recgnized that they had t get ut f there sn. The wind kept hwling with the heavy sleet driving fiercely, and even wrse, darkness began t fall. Anxius, Bales struggled t help the man up, supprting his weight and inching alng the trail, fllwing the tracks left by her hiking bts. After what seemed like ages, they finally made it t the ft f the muntain. The man was rushed t hspital immediately. Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave f happiness welled up inside.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了帕姆·巴勒斯计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步六小时，不到一小时后，她已经爬进了更冷的空气和更深的雪中。她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊，向华盛顿山进发。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一组脚印。她一整天都在跟踪微弱的轨迹，并没有给它们太多的思考，因为有太多人爬珠尔小道。但她意识到，这些鞋是由一双运动鞋制成的，不适合在雪地上徒步旅行。后来，她在一个小角落，看见一个人一动不动地坐着。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当她走近他打招呼时，他没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写巴勒斯救助这名已经失去意识的男子的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在叫醒那个人后，巴勒斯意识到他们必须尽快离开那里。”可知，第二段可描写巴勒斯和那名男子一起下山，脱离险境的过程。
续写线索：检查——拿出物品给男子取暖——唤醒男子——扶起那名男子——一起下山——脱离险境——感受
[高分句型1] Taking a deep breath, Bales gt clser, checked his pulse and suddenly realized that the man must have passed ut. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Anxius, Bales struggled t help the man up, supprting his weight and inching alng the trail, fllwing the tracks left by her hiking bts. (运用了形容词和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型3] Exhausted as she was, Bales felt a wave f happiness welled up inside.(运用了让步状语从句的倒装结构)
【2020年浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm ging t miss yu s much, Pppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins(情绪)get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay？"His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by's mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn't.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. "What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up？"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mm.” Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let's get a little dg fr Pppy."
It didn't take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
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Para 2. A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
【答案】
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg. Then tw fluffy paws. Next the bx tipped ver sideways, and ut tumbled a mass f wiggly glden silliness. Pppy was amazed. She wagged furiusly. She barked with jy. She smiled, her tngue llling ut as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was nt shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping arund the lder dg. “That didn’t take lng,” remarked Mm, as bth dgs went raring arund the huse in an imprmptu game f chase. Dad laughed.
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. He had missed Pppy and was lking frward t seeing her. When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t. “Oh my gsh, wh is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed at the lk f shck n his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe yu gt yurselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mm. “This puppy is fr Pppy!”
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Pppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Pppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Pppy买一条小狗作伴。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Pppy的。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：a mass f，with jy，lk frward t等高级词汇；非谓语动词的运用The little pup was nt shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping arund the lder dg.；时间状语从句When he bent dwn t give her a big hug, he fell ver in surprise as a small glden clud came racing up t lick his face t.等高级句式。
目标1
景、物环境的描写
目标2
地点方位的描写
目标3
天气的描写
目标4
气氛的描写
目标5
经典赏析
目标6
真题感悟
一 景、物环境的描写
二 地点方位的直接描写
三 天气的描写
四 气氛的描写
五 经典赏析
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