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专题14 自然生态Ⅰ．应用文写作报道(2023·浙江卷1月)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1．活动的过程；2．收获与感想。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Getting to Know the Plants Around Us    Getting to Know the Plants Around Us①Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students' Union．②The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species．We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants．③Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals．I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem．Overall, it was a valuable and great experience．1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如participate in, observe, strike, provide ...for ..., maintain等。2．句式美：①句organised by our Students' Union为过去分词短语作后置定语。②句运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。③句运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句。假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了植树活动以迎接即将到来的植树节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，包括：1．参加人员；2．活动内容：徒步到西山植树；3．活动反响。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：徒步 vi．hike 植树节 Tree Planting Day     【参考范文】Last Sunday our school organised a tree-planting activity to greet the upcoming Tree Planting Day．All the students and teachers took part in the activity．We set off for Xishan on foot early in the morning, talking and laughing happily all the way．Upon arriving there, we got down to our work, some digging holes, some planting trees while others watering them．After that, we walked around and did some sightseeing, during which I took many photos．The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it raise our awareness of the importance of protecting the environment, but also it helped us to cooperate better．Ⅱ．读后续写(2020·浙江卷7月改编)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears．We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada．Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous．[悬念1] Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance．When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens．But sometimes, that is easier said than done．[悬念2] This was one of those times．As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread．The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence．He pulled and bit the wire．He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts．Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew．We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air．Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off．Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子)．I radioed the camp manager for help．He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived．Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear．Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment．The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray．The spray burns the bears' eyes, but doesn't hurt them．So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face．With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes．[悬念3]注意：续写词数应为150左右。Afewminuteslater, thebearheadedbacktoourcamp,    Atthatverymoment, thehelicopterarrived．    一、理清文章大意关键：Who: the author and his wife Elli Where: at a research campWhen: one fallWhat: to photograph polar bearsHow: They encountered a young male polar bear．大意：本文讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊时，如何对付一头饥饿的雄性幼熊的故事。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：作者在拍摄过程中会遇到什么样的威胁？悬念2思考：这句话暗示着什么？悬念3思考：北极熊洗完眼睛之后会不会返回？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①被激怒的熊返回之后会不会更凶猛？ ②扔食物比如面包会不会有效果？③熊吃光了面包又会怎样呢？段首句2思考：①飞机到达之后他们感受如何？会迅速登机吗？ ②在飞机上他们会看到什么？会拍照吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1：熊返回营地→紧张害怕→用面包攻击Paragraph 2：直升机赶到→快速登上飞机→熊把篱笆撞倒→拍下熊“打劫”的画面Afewminuteslater, thebearheadedbacktoourcamp, then we realised the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad．My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do．At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence．It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread．But it wasn't long before he ate up all the bread and came back again．Atthatverymoment, thehelicopterarrived．“Thank goodness we are saved！” Elli cried out．Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved．When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to the spot that the bear had finally tore down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind．I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①only一词与两个修饰比较级的even和much凸显当时的紧张氛围。②like mad是madly的高级表达。③finally表示直升机来得及时，熊撞倒栅栏很费劲，其实也呼应了上文这是一只幼熊。④quickly和rare用得好，机不可失，快速抓拍，这也呼应了文章第一段中作者此行的目的。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①not knowing what to do在此处用简短的动词-ing形式作状语，渲染了紧张的气氛。②it wasn't long before是soon的高级表达。③excited and relieved在此处作状语，用得恰到好处。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One never knows what one is going to find when one steps out into the world．Even something as simple as a walk through your neighbourhood can result in either mild excitement or unusual adventure if the cards are right．On a sunny afternoon, Mike journeyed into the construction site near his home．Suddenly, he heard something coming from around the side of a nearby building．It sounded like the whining (哀鸣) cries of an animal．He curiously turned the corner, only to see a small dog standing on its back legs and wagging its tail pitifully．He then noticed that the poor thing seemed to be stuck at the waist between a small concrete wall and an even smaller broken wooden fence．The poor animal's difficult situation was pretty obvious and Mike knew that if he did nothing and left the dog there, it might not survive．He had no idea how long the animal had been there up until that point．It might not have eaten or drunk anything in days．Determined to help, he looked around to find a stick, proceeded to climb up onto the cement slab and pointed his stick back at the dog．He was trying to pry (撬动) above the animal by insert the stick between the cement wall and the smaller, broken wall, but the terrified animal obviously didn't know his intention and attempted to bite at the tool and barked at him fearfully．The fright in its eyes said everything．After at least a minute or so of trying to free the dog, Mike found his plan much more difficult in practice than it had stayed inside his own head．The hot sun was beating down．Drops of sweat running down his face, Mike sat down on the ground and scratched his head with annoyance, thinking about what in the world his next move was going to be．Beside him, the dog curled up into a ball, whining miserably．注意：续写词数应为150左右。ThenMikewentaroundtotheothersideofthewallandgrabbedholdofthestick．   Eventually, withthefewwell-positionedpiecesofwood, Mikemanagedtoinserthisstickintherightway．  【参考范文】ThenMikewentaroundtotheothersideofthewallandgrabbedholdofthestick．He tried from a different angle．For a brief moment, he made eye contact with the dog in an attempt to assure the dog that he was there to save him．Seeming to sense his kindness, the dog became calmer and less scared．However, after several unsuccessful attempts, he sank himself to the ground, frustrated．Just at the moment, he glanced at some pieces of wood．An idea occurred to him．He tried wedging the pieces into the gap, pried and pushed．At the same time, he stayed cautious not to frighten the poor dog．Eventually, withthefewwell-positionedpiecesofwood, Mikemanagedtoinserthisstickintherightway．A little unsteadily, the animal got to its feet and pulled itself out fully．“Yes！” the rescuer exclaimed in excitement, unable to deal with blood dropping off his hand — he was injured while saving the dog．Behind him, the dog wagged its tail furiously and sniffed at his feet, happy to be free．Mike knelt down and stroked the dog, saying, “Go home, boy！” Seeing the dog disappear in the distance, Mike continued his way, bathed in the warm sunshine．