2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题8社会服务教师用书新人教版

专题8 社会服务Ⅰ．应用文写作感谢信(2019·浙江卷6月)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3．临别祝愿。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。    Dear Alex，①Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon, I'm eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help．Honestly speaking, it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills．Under your professional guidance, I have madeunbelievable progress in English．It's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest．②Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm and confidence．③No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am．Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home．Yours，Li Hua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如leave for, eagerly, express one's heartfelt gratitude to, honestly speaking, under one's professional guidance, make progress, unbelievable, rank first, encounter, cheer sb．up, help sb．out, fuel, enthusiasm, convey等。2．句式美：①句Learning that ...是动词-ing形式短语作状语。②句Whenever引导让步状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。③句enough后接不定式作结果状语，同时运用了how引导宾语从句，这两处表达增强了感情色彩。(2022·郴州一模)假定你是校学生会成员李华，你校学生会组织了图书捐赠及互换活动，外教Smith先生捐赠了许多英文图书。请你代表学生会给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表达感激之情；2．回顾活动以及 Smith 给予的帮助。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr Smith，    Yours sincerely, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mr Smith，On behalf of the Student Union, I'm writing to express our heartfelt gratitude for your generous donation of so many English books．Last Friday, we organised a book donation and exchange event．Many students and teachers took an active part in it．It's so kind of you to bring books covering a wide range of topics．Besides, the books you donated were very popular, all of which were taken away in a short time．There is no denying that your generosity and contribution made a big difference to our event, which turned out to be a great success．Thank you once again for your support．Yours sincerely，Li HuaⅡ．读后续写(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community．As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs．[悬念1] Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet．People were trying to help each other meet the challenges．Mrs Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman．She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor．She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help．When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them．One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before．There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy．The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much．“I wish you could see him，” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara．“He is such a help to his mother．He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do．”[悬念2]After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard．“I wish we could help him to earn money，” said Clara．“His family is suffering so much．”“So do I，” said Harry．“We really should do something to assist them．”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成)．”The other children also jumped up all attention．When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one．“I tell you what we can do，” said John．“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it．[悬念3]”注意：续写词数应为150左右。WhenMrsMeredithheardofJohn'sidea, shethoughtitwasagoodone, too．   Witheverythingready, Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness．   一、理清文章大意关键：Who: the Meredith familyWhere: in a small communityWhen: one morningWhat: The family wanted to help a poor family．How: They decided to make popcorn．大意：善良的Meredith一家帮助一个贫困家庭的故事。Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意，让贫困家庭的孩子Bernard去卖爆米花。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1 思考：Meredith一家生活没有受到经济滑坡的影响吗？悬念2思考：妈妈为什么回家跟孩子们说这些事情？悬念3思考：孩子们的主意妈妈会同意吗？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①妈妈同意孩子的想法，他们会做哪些准备呢？②到家做完爆米花之后会送到Bernard家吗？他们将怎样指导Bernard卖爆米花？③Bernard一家收到爆米花会有什么反应？段首句2思考：①Bernard会怎样卖爆米花？会赚到钱吗？ ②Bernard会自己做爆米花吗？③Bernard长大后会成为成功人士吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1：买装爆米花的纸袋→做爆米花→送到Bernard家→教Bernard如何卖→Bernard一家的感受Paragraph 2：Bernard卖爆米花→Bernard学做爆米花并改良口味→取得成功→回报社会WhenMrsMeredithheardofJohn'sidea, shethoughtitwasagoodone, too．So, they went to the local supermarket to buy paper bags．When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the paper bags．With the popcorn, they went to Bernard's home．They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn．Bernard and his parents were very grateful．And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family．Witheverythingready, Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness．He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn．He earned a lot of money．Then, he wanted to be self-dependent．Therefore, he asked Mrs Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn．After that, not only did he make plain popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better．Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man．He did not forget the help of the Meredith family, and he also did what he could to help those in need．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①第一段中副词very的运用凸显了当时人物的心情。②第二段中形容词remarkable的运用形象表明了Meredith一家的帮助给Bernard带来的影响。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①文章中高级词汇grateful, earn money, add ...to ...的使用为文章的一大亮点。②not only ...but also ...倒装句的使用是文章的增分点。③文章多处使用不定式，语言简洁明快。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Over the years, I've been guilty of hurriedly shutting the front door to many strangers when they came to my home knocking with the intention of selling things．I hated it when they tried their best to persuade me to buy the things they promoted．But earlier this year, a dear friend of mine, Linda, had an experience that changed my mind and attitude towards these “intruders”．Last winter, Linda went through a very messy divorce and was very depressed．So she quit her job and left Los Angeles, where she encountered her ex-husband in college．She flew to Boston on the east coast of the US．Later, she settled in a new neighbourhood in East Boston．However, shortly afterwards, the company where she worked went bankrupt (破产)．Suffering a series of bitter blows, she fell ill, a severe case of flu．She had to stay at home for the whole week, feeling extremely bad and hopeless．Early one morning, Linda lay in bed, feeling painful all over．Then all of a sudden, there was an upsetting knock on her front door．Struggling out of the bed, she dragged herself to the window．There, outside, she saw a young lady carefully holding some leaflets (传单) and a TV set model．She knew of a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was about to be gently delivered．“This is the last thing I need today，” she muttered to herself and hesitantly opened the door．Coughing bitterly, Linda stuck her head out．“Excuse me, madam ...” the young lady said with a smile．“I'm sorry but I am not the slightest bit interested in any TV whatever．” Linda interrupted her impatiently．“As a matter of fact, I am feeling terribly awful．” “Is there anything I can do for you, madam？” the young lady asked with concern．“No thanks, just leave me alone．” Linda then shut the door in her face．The young lady politely turned and left in silence．注意：续写词数应为150左右。Afewhourslater, anotherknock．    Lindawassurprisedbythislovelyaction．     【参考范文】Afewhourslater, anotherknock．Linda glanced out of the window and to her surprise, there at the door was the same lady, back again．Really annoyed this time, Linda opened the door but before she could speak, with a concerned look on her face, the young lady handed Linda a warm pot, saying, “I'm so sorry I disturbed you earlier．I thought you may like this homemade chicken soup．Hopefully it might make you feel a little better．”Lindawassurprisedbythislovelyaction．Being new to the area, she didn't know any neighbours, so the gesture was all the more appreciated．She could only smile embarrassedly and sincerely thanked her．With that, the lady left．After she related this story to me, I thought about how touching this deed really was．Especially in today's world where, sadly, kindness and thoughtfulness seem so rare．I also realised that thinking about others and showing kindness is the real meaning of love．