2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题9人际关系教师用书新人教版

专题9 人际关系Ⅰ．应用文写作邀请信(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1．节目介绍；2．访谈的时间和话题。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Dear Caroline，   Yours sincerely，Li HuaDear Caroline，As the person in charge of the English programme “Talk and Talk” of our school radio station, I sincerely invite you to participate in our programme．①It is ten years since “Talk and Talk” was established．②This is an amazing programme where you can share your ideas with students．Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it．As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a great deal．If you are available this Friday morning, I, together with the whole “Talk and Talk” staff, am waiting for your coming．③I'd appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration．Looking forward to your reply．Yours sincerely，Li Hua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如in charge of, establish, have trouble in doing sth．, urge, distinguished, a great deal, available, take ...into consideration等。2．句式美：①句It is＋一段时间＋since ...，意为“自从……以来已经……时间了”。②句where引导定语从句。③句I'd appreciate it if ...意为“如果……我将不胜感激”，是表达谢意的常用句型。假定你是李华，是学校学生会主席。请你代表学生会写封邮件给外教Ms Brown，邀请她参加学生会组织的英语角(English Corner)活动，内容包括：1．活动时间和地点；2．活动内容和目的；3．希望外教给予指导。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Ms Brown，     Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Ms Brown，I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union．Representing all the students in our school, I'm sincerely inviting you to take part in one of our activities, English Corner．The activity is aimed not only to arouse our interest in learning English and practise our oral English, but also to offer us a chance to make more friends．During the activity, everyone, both teachers and students, should talk in English．This time, we hope you can offer us some methods of improving our oral English．You are also expected to introduce something about your country．Please come to join us in the school garden from 4：00 p．m．to 6：00 p．m．every Saturday．Looking forward to your participation．Yours，Li HuaⅡ．读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was deep into the night many years ago．The rain just came pouring down outside．An elderly man and his wife entered the lobby (大厅) of a small hotel in Philadelphia, USA．[悬念1]Trying to get out of the rain, the couple approached the front desk hoping to get a room to stay in for the night．“Could you possibly give us a room here？” the husband asked．The clerk, a friendly young man with a winning smile, looked at the couple and explained that there were three conferences in the town．“All of our rooms are taken，” the clerk said．“But I can't send a nice couple like you out into the rain at one o'clock at night．Would you perhaps be willing to sleep in my room? It's not exactly a suite, but it will be good enough to make you comfortable for the night．”When the couple declined, the young man pressed on．“Don't worry about me．I'll make out just fine，” the clerk told them．So the couple agreed．As he paid his bill the next morning, the elderly man said to the clerk, “You are the kind of manager who should be the boss of the best hotel．Maybe someday I'll build one for you．[悬念2]”The clerk looked at them and smiled．The three of them had a good laugh．As they drove away, the elderly couple agreed that the helpful clerk was indeed exceptional, as finding people who are both friendly and helpful isn't easy．Three years passed．The clerk had almost forgotten the thing when he received a letter from the elderly man．It recalled that stormy night, when he offered his kind help to the elderly couple．In the envelope, there was a round-trip ticket to New York, and a letter asking the young man to pay them a visit．The young man decided to set out immediately．[悬念3] 注意：续写词数应为150左右。“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago？”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman．   “Youmustbejoking，”theyoungmansaid．   一、理清文章大意关键：Who: a young man and an old coupleWhere: in a small hotelWhen: on a rainy nightWhat: The old couple wanted to sleep in the hotel for the night．How: The young man provided his own room for the couple to live in．大意：文章讲述了一位年轻人在一个雨夜把自己的房间提供给一对老夫妇的故事。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1 思考：这对老夫妇是什么来头？悬念2思考：老人是在开玩笑吗？如果是许诺，他会信守诺言吗？悬念3思考：年轻人见到老人之后会发生什么事情？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①年轻人还记得那天晚上的事情吗？ ②老人是否会解释一下那天晚上的承诺？ 段首句2思考：①老人对年轻人的话会怎样回复？ ②新建的宾馆在哪里？③年轻人真的会成为宾馆的经理吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1：重提诺言→惊讶→解释Paragraph 2：难以置信→诚恳邀请→成功“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago？”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman．The young man was puzzled and remembered nothing of what the elderly man had said years before．He just looked at the elderly man in surprise, shaking his head．“Well，” the elderly man went on．“I promised to build a hotel for you when I left your hotel．You are so kind and so helpful．I'm sure you will turn out to be a good boss in the future．I have firm trust in you．“Youmustbejoking，”theyoungmansaid．“I'm serious，” said the elderly man with a smile around his mouth．He then pointed to a great new building there．“That，” said the elderly man．“Is the hotel I have just built for you．I hope you can take charge of it．” Thus, the young clerk became the first manager of the hotel．But he had never expected the turn of events that would lead him to become the manager of one of the world's most famous hotels．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①shaking his head作状语，映衬出了人物心理。②You are so kind and so helpful两个so连用，加强了说话者的语气。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①文章使用了in surprise, turn out, point to, take charge of等高级词汇。②what the elderly man had said years before这个宾语从句的使用是一个增分点。③that would lead him ...是定语从句。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。As I sat on the bus waiting to arrive at school, the sun shining, I just sat there full of excitement ready to enjoy the first day of spring．At last, the bus stopped and I started my day．The whole day I was waiting for one thing, noon break．As the day passed by, I heard the bell ring and everyone rushed out of the door．I hurried and ate lunch just to get outside．As soon as I was out, my close friend, Riley called me over to play basketball．We all started playing and time flew by as we heard the timekeeper yell, “10 more minutes．” From that point on, the game sped up．Score after score, the competition process was more intense．I passed it to my teammate, Austin, and he dished it back as I pulled up a shot．I felt as if the world around me were barely moving, and all I concentrated on was the ball going to the hoop  (篮筐)．Not knowing I was pushed back hard, I hit the ground．A huge pain entered my left ankle．I wanted to scream, but I didn't, hearing the people around me shout for help．I just lay there as Riley came over to pick me up and Austin fetched a wheelchair from the school clinic．Both of them helped me sit on the wheelchair．It seemed like the whole school circled around me as I was being pushed away．The moment we entered the clinic where I always felt nervous, I didn't think my ankle hurt as badly as it did just now, so I said, “I'm okay．” Then they had to send me back to class without any treatment．The rest of the day I felt my ankle swelling (肿) up and I thought of how stupid I was to say that my ankle didn't hurt in the clinic．“I should have gone home，” I thought to myself as I was thrown through this terrible pain．After school, I worried how to go back home．注意：续写词数应为150 左右。JustthenIfoundRileycomeinwithanicepackinhishand．    Aswewentout，weweresurprisedtofindAustinholdingsomemedicinaloil．    【参考范文】JustthenIfoundRileycomeinwithanicepackinhishand．From his look, I could easily read his concern, which instantly brought tears to my eyes．When asked if my ankles were swollen, his voice was clearly filled with worry and anxiety．I nodded helplessly, my eyes glued to my aching ankle．Handing me the ice pack, he told me it could help relieve the pain and reduce swelling at the early stage．So moved was I that I extended my heartfelt gratitude to him．He just smiled, saying that we were good friends and offering to send me home．Aswewentout，weweresurprisedtofindAustinholdingsomemedicinaloil．“I usually use this kind of oil when I get hurt and it does work．You can have a try，” he said with sincerity．All of a sudden, I felt I was the happiest person in the world．I hugged my friends tightly, joyful tears rolling in my eyes．Blessed with such friends, I felt I had so much to be grateful for．Joking about my basketball skill, they sent me home．