北京高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

这是一份北京高考英语写作分类训练：应用文，共16页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高一学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
应用文1．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你高中的校园生活，请你给他回信，内容包括：• Personal Feelings（对高中生活的个人情感）• Reasons（理由）• Forms of Learning（学习形式）• Expectations（期望）Dear Jim,How’s your life in Britain? I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Look forward to hearing all about what’ happening with you soon.All the best!Li Hua2．假定你是李华，在澳大利亚留学期间，父母维修厨房时影响到了邻居James，请给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：1. 表达歉意；2. 解释原因。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，因故不能参加外教Mr.Green明天晚上开设的关于“中美文化差异”的讲座，请给他写一封信表示道歉，内容包括：1.表达道歉；2.解释原因；3.询问是否愿意提供相关资料。注意：1.词数80词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是高二学生陈伟，昨天，你和你的外籍同桌Bob关于用集体班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执，请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。1. 表达自己的歉意；2. 阐述道歉的原因(至少2条)；3. 表达自己的友好之情，提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．一段时间来，推行校车解决学生上下学问题是人们讨论的热点话题。近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法, 供有关部门参考。词数不少于60。注意：1.文章的开头已经给出。2.提示词: 报废车abandoned vehicles   对校车的信任度对校车的担心Recently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim听说你们已经开始了高考选科，发来邮件询问你的选科情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括:1. 选考科目；2. 选考某一科目的原因。提示：选科subject selection 注意：1. 词数120词左右；2. 开头结尾已给出。Dear Jim, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua7．假如你是某中学住校生李华，你对于宿舍室友的某些行为感到不满，因此写信向学校反映情况：1. 把宿舍弄得又脏又乱；2. 玩电脑游戏到深夜；3. 经常有朋友来访； 要求：希望能够换宿舍。注意：1. 词数不少于50。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。请抄写在作文纸上。Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to complain about one of my roommates for his behaviors._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua8．假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的李华，你从冬奥组委官方网站得知2022年2月4日到2月20日冬季奥林匹克运动会在北京和河北省张家口联合举行。目前北京冬奥组委正在招募志愿者。请你写一封信，应征冬奥会志愿者工作，内容包括：1. 你的个人信息； 2. 你的特长；3. 你的经历或经验。参考词汇：2022冬奥组委the Organizing Committee for the 2022 Olympic Winter Games官方网站official website志愿者 volunteer注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,Li Hua9．假设你是平谷区红星中学高二学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim曾到过平谷，他听说2021世界休闲大会（2021 Word Leisure Congress）已经在平谷闭幕，他想了解平谷近几年的变化。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：1变化（交通transportation,环境environment,……）；2.原因；3.欢迎他再来平谷。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是红星中学的李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中询问北京海淀近几年的变化，请根据以下要点进行回复。1、变化是什么；2、对你的影响；3、期待朋友来北京海淀。Dear Jim，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua              1．Dear Jim,How’s your life in Britain? I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, my school is an ideal place to get us the all-round development. We study maths, English, physics and many other subjects. Most subjects are much more difficult. I think the most difficult subject is maths. I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course. I will also do more exercise to keep fit. Look forward to hearing all about what’ happening with you soon.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回信介绍你的高中生活。【详解】1.词汇积累位于：located→situated困难的：difficult→hard友好的：kind→friendly竭尽全力：try one’s best→ do one’s best2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：We study maths, English, physics and many other subjects. Most subjects are much more difficult.拓展句：We study maths, English, physics and many other subjects，most of which are much more difficult.【点睛】【高分句型1】Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, my school is an ideal place to get us the all-round development.（运用了过去分词作状语，不定式作定语）【高分句型2】I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.（运用了that引导宾语从句）2．Dear James,  We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat. We didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress.We do hope you accept our apologies.    My parents are busy at work during daytime , so they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings. What's more, they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly.As the repair is still not finished, we will call in a professional worker to finish the work this weekend.We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours, so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again.   Sorry to have caused these problems.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，在澳大利亚留学期间，父母维修厨房时影响到了邻居James，请给他写一封道歉信。【详解】1. 词汇积累希望：wish→ hope困难：trouble→ difficulty惊讶的： astonished→ shocked促使，导致：result in→ cause2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：My parents are busy at work during daytime, so they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings.拓展句： Because my parents are busy at work during daytime, they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings【点睛】[高分句型1] What's more, they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly.（so…that…引导的结果状语从句）[高分句型2]We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours, so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again.（that引导的宾语从句）3．Dear Mr. Green,I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to apologize to you for failing to attend your lecture this Friday evening, which is about the difference between Chinese and English.Because of a high fever catching me yesterday, I have been in hospital for a timely treatment, which unfortunately prevented me from all school activities. In fact, I have strong interest in what you will share with us in the lecture. Therefore, it would be appreciated if you could provide me with some relevant materials.I would deeply apologize again and wish your lecture a success.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr.Green写封道歉信，对不能参加讲座表示歉意。【详解】1.词汇积累道歉：say sorry→apologize阻止：stop→prevent感激：be grateful→appreciate提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I would deeply apologize again and wish your lecture a success.拓展句：I would deeply apologize again for what I did and sincerely wish your lecture a success.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to apologize to you for failing to attend your lecture this Friday evening, which is about the difference between Chinese and English.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]In fact, I have strong interest in what you will share with us in the lecture.(what引导的宾语从句)4．Dear Bob,I am writing to express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt so sorry for what 1 did and said yesterday. I donated all the money to the students in the flooded area without discussing the plan with you.I could have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the money, you happened to be away from school and later I didn't explain it to you in an appropriate way. What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much.Now I want to take back what I said. Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday, and I'd like you to try to understand my situation. I hope our friendship will last long.Yours,Chen Wei【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求你给同桌Bob写一封道歉信，表达歉意，阐述道歉原因并表达友好之情。【详解】1.词汇积累歉意：apology→regret合适的：suitable→appropriate撤回：withdraw→take back冲动的：hotheaded→impulsive2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday.拓展句：Please accept my apology, for I was so impulsive yesterday.【点睛】[高分句型1] I could have dealt with it differently. (could have done，运用了虚拟语气)[高分句型2] What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much. (综合运用状语从句、宾语从句和非限制性定语从句)5．Possible VersionRecently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website.As can be seen from the pie chart, only 36.13% of the interviewees trust school buses, while 40.34% of them show their distrust.23.53% of them are not clear about it.Of those who show their disbelief, 35.29% are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and 24.37% worry that school buses are often overloaded, which can cause serious traffic accidents.About 21.35% of them worry that the school buses are not equipped with safety equipment like safety belts.Another 18.49% blame drivers for breaking the speed limit.I think effective measures should be taken to ensure the safety of students.More money should be invested to improve the quality of school buses.Meanwhile, all the school buses should be examined regularly.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生根据图示写一篇短文，介绍校车安全问题调查结果并谈谈自己的看法, 供有关部门参考。【详解】1.词汇积累然而：but→while严重的：severe→serious同时：at the same time→meanwhile检查：check up→examine2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Another 18.49% blame drivers for breaking the speed limit.拓展句：Another 18.49% blame drivers for breaking the speed limit, which is very dangerous.【点睛】[高分句型1] As can be seen from the pie chart, only 36.13% of the interviewees trust school buses, while 40.34% of them show their distrust. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Of those who show their disbelief, 35.29% are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and 24.37% worry that school buses are often overloaded, which can cause serious traffic accidents. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)6．Dear Jim,I am delighted to receive your letter inquiring for the information of subject selection in our high school. Now I am writing to share some details with you.As you know, the National College Entrance Examination is of great importance to every Chinese student. So we must pay special attention to the subject selection. Here are the rules: first, Chinese, English and math is must; second, we need to choose physics or history; third, among the four other subjects, we need to choose two as we wish. For me, I prefer history. It is history that makes me intelligent and let me know how to arrange my life. What about you？What’s your favourite subject? Looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim回一封信，向他介绍高考选科的情况。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：happy→delighted询问：ask→inquire重要性：significance→importance聪明的：smart→intelligent2.句式拓展合并简单句 原句：I am delighted to receive your letter asking for the information of subject selection in our high school. Now I am writing to share some details with you.拓展句：Delighted to receive your letter asking for the information of subject selection in our high school, I am writing to share some details with you.【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, the National College Entrance Examination is of great importance to every Chinese student.（as引导的非限制性定语从句；be of + 抽象名词）[高分句型2] It is history that makes me smart and let me know how to arrange my life.（强调句）7．Possible version:Dear sir, I’m writing to complain about one of my roommates for his behaviors.First of all, he is not a tidy person and always makes the dormitory in a mess. Secondly, addicted to computer games, he often plays until midnight, and it seriously affects my sleep. Thirdly, his friends are constantly visiting him, which almost drives me mad because they always make loud noise.I really hope you can look into these matters and deal with them as quickly as possible. I would be grateful if you could allow me to move into a new room.Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生写信向学校反映室友的一些不合理行为。【详解】词语积累行为：action→behavior非常：very→seriously经常：always→constantly迫使、使得：make→drive句式拓展（并列句变复合句）原句：First of all, he is not a tidy person and always makes the dormitory in a mess.拓展句：First of all, he, who is not a tidy person, always makes the dormitory in a mess.【点睛】[高分句式1] Thirdly, his friends are constantly visiting him, which almost drives me mad because they always make loud noise.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句；运用了because引导的原因状语从句）[高分句式2] I would be grateful if you could allow me to move into a new room.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）8．Dear Sir/Madam,Learning from the official website of the Organizing Committee for the 2022 Olympic Winter Games that you are wanting volunteers, I am eager to apply to be one.  My name is Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy from Hongxing Middle School. I am a native of Beijing. I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. What’s more, I’m fond of sports, especially the events for winter. Most importantly, I am easygoing and helpful. I have been a volunteer since I came to Middle School. I am sure to offer the best service for every athlete and the events.I would appreciate it if I could have the chance to be a volunteer.Thank you!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给北京冬奥组委写一封信，应征冬奥会志愿者工作。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：opportunity→chance招募：recruit→want特别：specially→especially提供：provide→offer2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Learning from the official website of the Organizing Committee for the 2022 Olympic Winter Games that you are wanting volunteers, I am eager to apply to be one.拓展句：Since I learned from the official website of the Organizing Committee for the 2022 Olympic Winter Games that you are wanting volunteers, I am eager to apply to be one.【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning from the official website of the Organizing Committee for the 2022 Olympic Winter Games that you are wanting volunteers, I am eager to apply to be one.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] I have been a volunteer since I came to Middle School. (运用了since引导时间状语从句)9．One possible version:Dear Jim,I’m glad that you care about the 2021 World Leisure Congress and want to know the changes in Pinggu. Let me tell you some developments of the city. I have witnessed many great changes in my hometown. The most impressive one is the rapid development of transportation. In the past, people travelled mainly by their own bikes. Nowadays, with many bus lines built, it is more convenient for people to go everywhere. Besides, the spread of sharing bikes helps people travel more easily. All these couldn’t have happened without the measures taken by the government and applications of new technology. Great changes have taken place in Pinggu. When visiting here again, you will feel the charm of the city. So welcome to Pinggu again. Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jim回复邮件，介绍平谷近几年的变化，并欢迎他再来。【详解】1.词汇积累告知：tell→inform见到：see→witness目前：at present→nowadays帮助：assist→help2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I have witnessed many great changes in my hometown.拓展句：I have witnessed many great changes in my hometown, which are amazing.【点睛】[高分句型1] Nowadays, with many bus lines built, it is more convenient for people to go everywhere. (with加复合宾语，过去分词作宾补；不定式用作真正主语，it作形式主语)[高分句型2] When visiting here again, you will feel the charm of the city. So welcome to Pinggu again. (when引导的时间状语从句中的省略，现在分词作状语)10．Dear Jim,It’s so nice to hear from you. Knowing that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing Haidian these years, I’m more than willing to tell you.In the past few years, great changes have indeed taken place in Beijing Haidian. To start with, more and more foreign companies are set here, which bring in more foreign people working and living here. Besides, there are more roads and subways built or being built, which relieves the problem of traffic jams in this busy capital. Shared bikes have become popular in Beijing Haidian as well. Speaking of the problem of air pollution, many measures like traffic control, using electricity or gas as fuel instead of coal have been taken.I am taking in all the advantages of all those changes as I am now riding a shared bike to school every day, breathing fresh air as well as keeping my body fit. You must have sensed my progress in my English wording, since I enjoy talking with my foreign teacher and learn from him in my Oral English Class.Anyway, I can’t wait to have you here to witness all those changes yourself. Come here, and you will be stunned.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写信介绍北京海淀近几年的变化、对你的影响并期待他来海淀。【详解】1.词汇积累变化：change→variation发生：take place→happen此外：besides→in addition利用：take advantage of =make use of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Knowing that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing Haidian these years, I’m more than willing to tell you.拓展句：Because I know that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing Haidian these years, I’m more than willing to tell you.【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you want to learn about the changes in Beijing Haidian these years, I’m more than willing to tell you. (运用了现在分词作原因状语及that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] You must have sensed my progress in my English wording, since I enjoy talking with my foreign teacher and learn from him in my Oral English Class. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句)