江苏高考英语写作分类训练:邀请信
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这是一份江苏高考英语写作分类训练:邀请信,共18页。试卷主要包含了假定你是某高中的学生会主席,晚会地点,晚会节目等内容,欢迎下载使用。
邀请信1.假定你是某高中的学生会主席。为促进学校全体老师和学生的英语学习,你校将举办英语晚会。现请你以学生会的名义写一份约100词的英文口头通知,欢迎全校老师和同学们参加。内容:1.晚会时间:下周五晚 8∶00—10∶00 2.晚会地点:学校大会议室 3.晚会节目:英语故事、歌曲、诗歌及短剧等;届时还请在本校工作的美籍教师Mr.Green及夫人、子女参加,他们将要表演精彩的节目。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.假设你是高三学生李华,你计划明年报考南京大学,你的朋友Peter邀请你参加了一个南京大学的夏令营活动,你收获很大,想要对他的邀请表示感谢。请你按照以下提示写一封感谢信,内容包括:1.对Peter的邀请表达感谢;2.活动内容及收获;3.表达你想要考取南京大学的愿望。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3.假设你是李华。是新华学校乒乓球队的队长。你们球队将应邀去纽约参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给比赛的联系人Mr Green 写一封邮件咨询相关事宜,要点如下:1. 接受邀请,表示感谢;2. 询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排。注意: 1. 词数100左右3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:captain of the ping-pong team乒乓球队的队长 friendly match友谊赛__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.假定你是李华, 学校计划组织学生参观大庆市新建成的主题为“中国智造(Intelligent Manufacturing in China)”的科技馆,请你给你的外教Tim写一封邮件邀请他一同参观,内容包括:1. 活动时间、地点;2. 计划参观的内容;3. 表达期待;注意:1. 词数80 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。5.假定你是李华,得知你的外教Mr. Smith当选为泰州市杰出外籍人才(Outstanding Foreign Talents of Taizhou):你代表班级给他写一封信表示祝贺。内容包括:1.祝贺他光荣当选:2.表达赞赏之情;3.邀请他参加庆祝派对。注意:1.词数80词左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.假定你是中华中学学生会主席李华,你校将于6月28日在和谐湖举行龙舟赛,请给友好学校复兴中学 (Fuxing High School) 写一封邀请信。信的内容包括:(1)写信目的;(2)活动时间、地点和意义;(3)回复时间:2021年6月25日前。注意:(1)词数120字左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua7.假定你是李华,你校组建了游泳俱乐部。请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信,邀请他加入。内容包括:1.组建俱乐部的目的; 2.俱乐部的主要活动; 3.报名的时间和地点;注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua8.假定你是李华,你们学校要举办传统中医讲座,你的留学生朋友Chris对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣,因此,你想邀请他参加该讲座。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.讲座的时间和地点;2.讲座的内容。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:传统中医讲座 a lecture on traditional Chinese medicineDear Chris,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9.假定你是高一学生李华,你校下个月将举办全市英语口语大赛,请用英语给你的朋友李雷写一封信,邀请他参加这次比赛。内容包括:1.比赛的时间、地点2.比赛的内容3.发出邀请注意:1.词数120左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣。你校将举办一场介绍中国艺术的讲座,请写封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.讲座内容(介绍中国画、剪纸和京剧);3.准备工作(简要了解一下相关知识)。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Here comes a piece of good news.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If you have any questions,please don’t hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to seeing you!Yours,Li Hua 1. May I have your attention please? I’m very glad to inform you that an English evening is going to be held in our school meeting hall from 8:00 to 10:00 p.m. next Friday. So it is our great chance to practice English and improve our English studies. You will enjoy English stories, songs, poems and short plays at the evening. Mr and Mrs Green from the USA working in our school, together with their children, will be invited to our evening. They will give us wonderful performances. All the teachers and students are welcome to attend our English evening. We hope all of you will like the performances. Please be on time. That’s all. Thanks you!【分析】本文属于应用文之口头通知。要求你以学生会的名义写一份约100词的英文口头通知:为促进学校全体老师和学生的英语学习,学校将举办英语晚会。欢迎全校老师和同学们参加英语晚会。【详解】本文属于口头通知。通知内容为:为促进学校全体老师和学生的英语学习,学校将举办英语晚会。欢迎全校老师和同学们参加英语晚会。要点包含:1.晚会时间:下周五晚 8∶00—10∶00 2.晚会地点:学校大会议室 3.晚会节目:英语故事、歌曲、诗歌及短剧等;届时还请在本校工作的美籍教师Mr.Green及夫人、子女参加,他们将要表演精彩的节目。所以,书写时可用“三段式”结构:第一段写明通知的原因并发出邀请:欢迎全校老师和同学们参加英语晚会;第二段描述晚会的安排:时间、地点以及节目安排;第三段表达自己的期望:希望老师和同学们都来参加。【点睛】本文在书写结构上,符合通知内容,要点齐全,句子精炼。文章中简单句、复合句交替使用,被动语态的使用,充分说明了作者的语言驾驭能力,完全可以作为范文来背诵。本文用到了一些高级句式,如:宾语从句的使用: I’m very glad to inform you that an English evening is going to be held in our school meeting hall from 8:00 to 10:00 p.m. next Friday. it用作形式主语:So it is our great chance to practice English and improve our English studies.2.Dear Peter,I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you for inviting me to take part in the summer camp in Nanjing University.I enjoyed myself in Nanjing University. We paid a visit to the campus of Nanjing University, which made me have a better understanding of culture and history of the campus. There were also many activities team work or single performance. We tried our best to put ourselves into this big family. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. This camp was a real life-changing experience. I will study hard and hope to be admitted to Nanjing University Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。要求考生写一封感谢信。【详解】假设你是高三学生李华,你计划明年报考南京大学,你的朋友Peter邀请你参加了一个南京大学的夏令营活动,你收获很大,想要对他的邀请表示感谢。请你按照以下提示写一封感谢信,内容包括:1.对Peter的邀请表达感谢;2.活动内容及收获;3.表达你想要考取南京大学的愿望。时态以一般过去时和一般将来时为主。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有:invite sb. to do sth.;take part in;enjoy oneself;have a better understanding of ;try one’s best to do sth.;be admitted to 等。可以使用的衔接词:1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型: We paid a visit to the campus of Nanjing University, which made me have a better understanding of culture and history of the campus.这句话运用了非限定性定语从句。And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. 这句话运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。3.Dear Mr Green,I am Li Hua, captain of the ping-pong team at Xinhua High Shool. We were glad to receive your invitation to a friendly match in New York. We are excited and would like more information about the match.First of all, can you please advice us about food and accommodations? A short list of nearby hotel and restaurants would be greatly appreciated. If you can think of any useful phone apps, please offer a recommendation. Finally, a schedule would help us begin preparation. Please send one as soon as possible.I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,接受纽约比赛方的邀请,并咨询乒乓球比赛相关事宜。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1. 接受邀请,表示感谢 2. 询问比赛相关安排 3. 期待回复第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)captain of the ping-pong team;friendly match;invitation;information;arrangement;food and accommodation;schedule;as soon as possible;look forward to第三步:连词成句1. I’m Li Hua, captain of the ping-pong team at Xinhua High School.2. Glad to receive your invitation to a friendly match in New York.3. Please inform us more information about the match.4. We would like to know the arrangement of food and accommodation in New York.5. We’ll be happy if you can offer a schedule for the match.6. Look forward to your reply early.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了多种句式,如If you can think of any useful phone apps, please offer a recommendation.这句话就使用了条件状语从句和祈使句。文章语言运用灵活,使人读来不觉乏味,整体思路清晰,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。4.Dear Tim,With a new science and technology museum whose theme is “Intelligent Manufacturing in China” built in our city recently, our school plans to organize a visit for us students to . Knowing that you are rather interested in modern science and technology, I am writing to invite you to go there with us.As scheduled,we will gather at the school gate this Saturday morning and take the bus at around 8: 00 a.m. Since the museum is newly built, various kinds of most advanced technological and scientific innovations are exhibited. I have heard a model of a solar car as well as a 3D room is on display. Moreover, the visitors will not only have a chance to experience the amazing speed of 5G networks but also get a better understanding of the AI equipment.Looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达考查应用文写作。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华, 学校计划组织学生参观大庆市新建成的主题为“中国智造(Intelligent Manufacturing in China)”的科技馆,请你给你的外教Tim写一封邮件邀请他一同参观,内容包括:1. 活动时间、地点;2. 计划参观的内容;3. 表达期待。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):organize;interested in;science and technology;as scheduled;gather;advanced technological and scientific innovations;have a chance;get a better understanding of等。 第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如:Knowing that you are rather interested in modern science and technology, I am writing to invite you to go there with us.非谓语动词的运用;As scheduled,we will gather at the school gate this Saturday morning and take the bus at around 8: 00 a.m.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。5.I'm writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your election of Outstanding Foreign Talents of Taizhou on behalf of my class.We are lucky to have you as our teacher and share your pride. In our view, you are a talented and professional teacher who has helped us make great progress in English. Besides, you have devoted yourself to education of this city for 10 years. In a word, you deserve the title.Finally, we would like to invite you to the congratulation party to be held at 4 p.m. this Friday in our classroom. We are looking forward to receiving your early reply.Yours,LiHua.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封祝贺信。【详解】第一步:审题。体裁:应用文。时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主。要点:1.祝贺他光荣当选:2.表达赞赏之情;3.邀请他参加庆祝派对。第二步:列重点词语,词组(注意好词的使用)例如:如on behalf of;in our view;make great progress;devote oneself to;in a word;deserve;look forward to等第三步:连词成句(注意好句型的使用,如非谓语动词,复合句,注意拼写和时态问题)第四步:连句成篇(注意衔接词的使用)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。第五步:润色修改。【点睛】本文内容完整,要点齐全,语言规范,词数适当,段落分布合理。作者在文中较多使用主从复合句,如In our view, you are a talented and professional teacher who has helped us make great progress in English.是用来定语从句;Finally, we would like to invite you to the congratulation party to be held at 4 p.m.使用了非谓语动词。主从复合句的使用,使得文章的句式灵活多变,为文章增加了色彩。6.Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I'm sincerely inviting your school to take part in the upcoming Dragon Boat Race to be held on the Huangshan Lake on June 30th.The event is scheduled to start at 2:00 p.m. and last for about three hours. To begin with, we will watch a short documentary of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption. Knowing that Cambridge High School has an outstanding boating team, I'm sure we won't miss the wonderful Dragon Boat Race. It is a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop close ties and to promote cultural exchange.We'd appreciate hearing from your reply before June 27th.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。假定你是中华中学学生会主席李华,你校将于6月28日在和谐湖举行龙舟赛,请给友好学校复兴中学 (Fuxing High School) 写一封邀请信。【详解】第一步:审题。体裁:应用文。时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主。要点:信的内容包括:(1)写信目的;(2)活动时间、地点和意义;(3)回复时间:2021年6月25日前。第二步:列重点词语,词组(注意好词的使用)如on behalf of;take part in;be begin with;be accused of;hear from等等。第三步:连词成句(注意好句型的使用,如非谓语动词,复合句,注意拼写和时态问题)第四步:连句成篇(注意衔接词的使用)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。第五步:润色修改。【点睛】本文内容完整,要点齐全,语言规范,词数适当,段落分布合理。作者在文中较多使用主从复合句,如On behalf of our school, I'm sincerely inviting your school to take part in the upcoming Dragon Boat Race to be held on the Huangshan Lake on June 30th.使用了不定式的被动式;To begin with, we will watch a short documentary of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption.使用了定语从句。主从复合句的使用,使得文章的句式灵活多变,为文章增加了色彩。7.Dear Peter,With swimming sweeping nationwide, a swimming club has been formed recently in our school. In light of your great passion about it, I'm writing to invite you to join it.In order to enrich our campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle. In addition, a diversity of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills. Please sign up in Mr. Smith's office before next Friday.Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it. I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Peter写信,邀请他加入学校组件的游泳俱乐部。【详解】体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主结构:总分总 要求:1.组建俱乐部的目的; 2.俱乐部的主要活动; 3.报名的时间和地点;第二步:列提纲(重点词组)invite sb. to do sth./ set up/ provide sb. with sth./ in order to/ in addition/ range from…to…/ be aimed at/ as well as/ sign up/ be convinced that…/ live up to第三步:连词成句1. With swimming sweeping nationwide, a swimming club has been set up recently in our school. 2. Knowing your great passion about it, I'm writing to invite you to join it.3.In order to enrich our campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle. 4. Additionally, a variety of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills. 5. Please sign up in Mr. Smith's office before next Friday.6. Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it. 7. I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:In addition, a diversity of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills.中which引导非限制性定语从句;Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it.中that引导结果状语从句,且使用了部分倒装。8.One Possible Version:Dear Chris,Knowing you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture, I can’t wait to invite you to a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine which will be host in my school.The lecture will begin at 3 p.m. this Sunday in the school hall. An expert is going to narrate the development history of traditional Chinese medicine and share some significant worldwide achievements with us. As far as I can see, it can enrich your understanding of traditional Chinese medicine and make you realize how much difference traditional Chinese culture has made in the present world.Looking forward to your arrival!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文属于提纲类作文【详解】根据文章所给的信息提示写一封邀请信。写作要点包括向Chris发出邀请,介绍讲座的相关信息:时间、地点、内容以及活动安排等.写作时态为一般现在时为主,人称用第一人称和第三人称。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章的档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。重要短语如:a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine(一场关于中医的讲座);have a keen interest in(对…感兴趣);share … with…(分享);look forward to(期待,盼望);As far as I can see(依我来看)等等。高级句型结构如:Knowing you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture, I can’t wait to invite you to a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine which will be host in my school.本句用现在分词短语Knowing…作状语,还有宾语从句…you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture和一个以which引导的定语从句which will be host in my school,另外该定语从句中使用了被动语态。9.Dear Li Lei,How has everything been going recently? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the English Oral Competition. What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication. That is why the English Oral Competition counts.The competition will be held in our school hall on the afternoon of December the 15th. Participants are expected to give an English speech on a given topic and then answer some questions related to your speech. The top three will be awarded prizes. Since I know you are willing to show yourself, I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition. For further information, you can visit our school website or contact me.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇表达属于应用文,要求考生描述对自己影响最大的人,具体描写人物的特点和产生的具体影响【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时要求:1.比赛的时间、地点2.比赛的内容3.发出邀请第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)take part in; be expected to do; given topic; participate in; further information; be willing to第三步:连词成句1. I’m writing to invite you to take part in the English Oral Competition. 2. Participants are expected to give an English speech on a given topic and then answer some questions related to your speech.3. Since I know you are willing to show yourself, I am expecting you to come to participate in the competition. 4. For further information, you can visit our school website or contact me. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和非谓语动词,如:What is known to all is that we learn English not just for tests but mainly for communication.这句话运用了主语从句和表语从句,连接词分别是what和that。Participants are expected to give an English speech on a given topic and then answer some questions related to your speech.中的related是过去分词做后置定语,修饰questions。固定搭配运用了如take part in; be expected to do; given topic; participate in; further information; be willing to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。10.Dear Tom,Here comes a piece of good news. A lecture is going to be held in our school. Since you’re obsessed with Chinese culture, I’d like to inform you of detailed information.The lecture is scheduled at the Students’ Hall at 2 pm this Friday. It covers a wide variety of topics on Chinese arts, including Chinese painting, paper cuttings and Peking Opera. I’m convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from this lecture. By the way, knowing briefly about these topics on the Internet in advance would be quite helpful.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to seeing you!Yours’Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,要求考生给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件,邀请他参加你校将举办一场介绍中国艺术的讲座。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:三段式:第一段写出写信目的,引出主题;第二段写出讲座具体内容;第三段表达期待对方能够参加这个讲座。要求:1. 表明写信的目的,邀请朋友参加讲座。2. 介绍活动的时间、地点、内容及需要做的准备工作。3. 表达自己期待对方能够参加这个讲座。第二步:列提纲 (重点单词及词组)lecture (讲座); be obsessed with… (痴迷于……); inform sb. of sth. (告知某人某事); a variety of (各种各样的); Chinese painting (中国画); paper cuttings (剪纸); Peking Opera (京剧); convinced (确信的); dig out (挖掘出); by the way (顺便说一下); in advance (提前)第三步:连词成句1. A lecture is going to be held in our school. 2. Since you’re obsessed with Chinese culture, I’d like to inform you of detailed information.3. The lecture is scheduled at the Students’ Hall at 2 pm this Friday.4. It covers a wide variety of topics on Chinese arts.5. I’m convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from this lecture.6. By the way, knowing briefly about these topics on the Internet in advance would be quite helpful.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1. 表文章结构顺序:first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last2. 表并列补充关系:What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…3. 表转折对比关系:but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…4. 表因果关系:because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why 5. 表总结:in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。第五步:润色修改根据写作内容需要,加入高级句式,如名词性从句,定语从句,状语从句等。I’d like to inform you of detailed information.本句用来告知朋友讲座的具体信息。可以使用原因状语从句,进一步说明为什么要告诉朋友讲座的信息。润色修改为:Since you’re obsessed with Chinese culture, I’d like to inform you of detailed information.【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句,如:Since you’re obsessed with Chinese culture, I’d like to inform you of detailed information.”,这句话为since引导的原因状语从句;其次,使用了一些固定句型和短语,如:be obsessed with…; inform sb. of sth.; in advance等,使语言更加丰富;同时使用了一些高级词汇,如lecture; paper cuttings; convinced等,让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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