民族复兴路 热点04 -备战中考英语高分作文（全国通用版）

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备战中考英语高分作文热点04 民族复兴路 一、话题作文1．近几年，在党和国家的惠民政策帮助下，全国都在落实精准扶贫。铜仁发生了翻天覆地的变化。请以“Great changes in Tongren”为题，写一篇80词左右的文章，应包括以下要点，可适当发挥。1.人们的生活条件有了很大提高，高楼随处可见。农村的孩子也有了更好的教育。2.生活条件也得到了改善，天更蓝，水更清，路更宽，树更绿。3.交通变得更方便，铜仁有了飞机场、高速公路、高铁站、火车站。4.每年都有许多中外游客来铜仁参观。参考词汇：living condition生活条件；improve改善；here and there到处；countryside农村；receive得到；education教育；environment环境；traffic交通；convenient方便的；super highway高速公路；high-speed rail station高铁站；home and abroad国内外的Great changes in TongrenIn recent years, with the help of the favorable policies of our country,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Great changes in TongrenIn recent years, with the help of the favorable policies of our country, great changes have taken place in Tongren.The people’s living condition have improved a lot. We can see tall buildings here and there. The children in the countryside can also receive good education. The living environment has also improved. The sky is bluer and the water is clearer. The roads are wider and the trees turn greener. What’s more, the traffic in Tongren becomes more convenient because there is an airport, a high-speed rail station, super highways, railway stations and so on. It attracts many tourists from home and abroad every year.I believe that Tongren will become more and more beautiful in the future.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍铜仁的一些变化，人们的生活条件、教育、环境、交通等方面的变化。2.写作指导：本文用第三人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍铜仁的一些变化叙述完整，条理清晰。 二、材料作文2．随着我国经济的飞速发展,世界与中国的联系越来越紧密,中国在世界舞台上扮演着越来越重要的角色。几位外国友人正在谈论对中国的看法,同学们更需要全方面了解自己的祖国,才能为世界介绍好中国。请根据提示信息,写一篇英语短文。提示信息:1.来自美国的Bruce曾经在中国学习过,喜欢中国的校园,和中国的朋友交朋友。2.来自英国的Carol来中国几次,喜欢中国的名胜（places of interest）和美食。3.来自加拿大的David喜欢中国产品,喜欢在中国购物和移动支付（mobile payment)方式。4. …要求∶1.短文必须包含提示的所有内容,可以适当发挥;2. 90词左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。With the rapid development of China's economy, more and more foreigners have a better understanding of China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】With the rapid development of China's economy, more and more foreigners have a better understanding of our country. Three foreign friends are expressing their opinions on China.Bruce comes from America. He once studied in China. He thinks there are lots of beautiful schools in China and most students are smart and friendly.Carol is an English woman. She has visited China many times. She thinks China is a great country with lots of places of interest. What's more, people can taste all kinds of delicious food in China.As for David, a Canadian, he enjoys shopping in China. He thinks products made in China don't cost so much but are of very high quality. And mobile payment in China is quick and convenient.As a Chinese, I love my beautiful country with a long history. I hope my motherland will be stronger and more beautiful.【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是以“外国友人对中国的看法”为文章的主线展开描写。要根据文中题目给出的几个不同的外国友人的看法具体的描写，最后可以加入自己的看法，要注意语言的逻辑性和词语要恰当。2.点评：文章分五段描写。第一段总的指出外国友人对中国有不同的看法；第二段至第四段主要是分别描写三位外国友人对中国的不同的看法；第五段主要写作为一个中国人的一些期望。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言流畅，用词恰当，语句通顺意思易懂。3.高分亮点：短语：come from；lots of；places of interest；What’s more；all kinds of；enjoy doing。句型：She thinks+宾语从句；There be句型；and引导的并列句。3．飞天梦，强国梦！2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞行任务取得圆满成功。航天任务取得成功离不开航天人的坚守与努力。习总书记深情寄语航天人：“在航天事业发展的征程上勇攀高峰、不断前行”，“你们是新时代中国航天事业无数奋斗者、攀登者的代表”…… 假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一位你最崇拜的航天英雄，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。 提示词语：work hard, stick to, dream, difficulty, overcome 提示问题：● Which space hero do you admire most? ● Why do you admire him/her? I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. All Chinese people are proud of the three astronauts, Nie Haisheng, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu. Among them, I admire Wang Yaping most.  Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years’ effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut who walked in space successfully in China.As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题介绍自己最崇拜的航天英雄。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍王亚平；第三段介绍自己钦佩王亚平什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。4．从嫦娥奔月到中国神舟系列宇宙飞船成功发射，我们正一步步将梦想变成现实。随着科技的发展，未来，人们生活会发生很大变化。某英文网站正开展以“未来的生活”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图文提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对未来生活的设想。 要求：1. 文中必须包括图文提示的所有内容，可展开思路，适当发挥。2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。3. 词数：80 词左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。提示词：environment(环境) ；planet(行星)Life in the FutureWith the development of science and technology. Life in the future will be quite different. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Life in the FutureWith the development of science and technology. Life in the future will be quite different. The environment will be nicer. The trees will be greener and rivers will be clearer. There is no heavy traffic any more on the earth. Buildings like houses, hospitals will be built in other planets or under the sea. So there is enough space for people on the earth.Robots will do dangerous and hard work instead of human beings. They make people have more time to relax and enjoy their lives. The clothes that we wear will change their colors and styles according to the weather and our moods. We’ll have easier and more convenient lives in the future.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据图示内容，以“未来的生活”为主题写一篇作文谈谈你对未来生活的设想。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般将来时为主；人称以第三人称为主。写作时需涵盖图文提示的所有内容，不要遗漏，可适当发挥，对于细节部分可适当发挥。最后力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。5．生在中国是幸运的，生活在中国是幸福的。新冠肺炎就像一个没有硝烟的考验，彰显了我们祖国的伟大，我们党的卓越，我们中华民族的众志成城！作为一名中学生，面对新冠，你是如何做的？请以“I’m the little guard of health”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。要点：(1)你对新型冠状病毒(Novel coronavirus)的认识；(2)你如何预防新冠；(3)是否有信心战胜病毒。要求：(1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；(2)词数100左右。I’m the little guard of health___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：I’m the little guard of healthBecause of Novel coronavirus, we Chinese have had a special time. The Novel coronavirus is not terrible, the key is how we deal with it. Nobody wants to get the disease, but how should we prevent it and protect ourselves? Here are my suggestions.First, we should wear a mask if we have to go out. Don’t go to crowded places. Second, we should wash our hands with running water or soap slowly and carefully. And remember to open the windows regularly to keep our room clean. Besides, cover our nose and mouth when sneezing. If we don’t feel well, go to see a coctor. Most important of all, we should form a good habit. Go to bed early and get up on time. Be sure to have enough sleep, and take more exercise!I strongly believe we can keep healthy if we follow the suggestions.【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以“I’m the little guard of health”为题，围绕提示要点写一篇100词左右的短文，内容包括：对新冠的认识、预防新冠的方法和是否有信心战胜新冠。2. 写作指导：本文主要以第一和第三人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般现在时；写作内容应围绕提示要点进行展开，要点2的写作可使用连接词（如First、Besides等）来使文章层次清晰；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。6．近年来，国家对边远地区的扶贫计划深入民心，家乡发生了巨大变化。请你写一篇介绍家乡变化的宣传稿。要点包括：国家扶贫工作带来的好处1. 许多贫困家庭得到了当地政府的有效帮助，提高了他们的生活水平。2. 通过支持和鼓励村民大力发展农业，让人们富了起来，住上了宽敞明亮的新房。3. 免费让山区孩子上学，并每月给予贫困补助。4. 环境得到了较大的改善，比如以前被严重污染的河水变得越来越清澈。……感谢政府，感谢党……我的感悟和决心    ……要求：1. 行文流畅，句子结构合理，可适当进行补充。2. 字数在100词左右。参考词汇：生活水平living stardard、农业agriculture、山区 a mountainous area、贫困补助poverty assitance    In recent years, anti-poverty project that held by our country for the romote areas has won the support of the people.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】        In recent years, anti-poverty project that held by our country for the romote areas has won the support of the people. It has brought great benefits. My hometown has changed a lot.    First of all, many poor families have received efffective help from the local government. Their living standards have improved a lot. Besides, people have become rich and live in spacious and bright houses by supporting and encouraging villagers to develop agriculture. Additionally, children living in the mountainous areas can go to school for free and they get monthly poverty assitance. Finally, the environment has improved a lot. For example, the polluted river is getting cleaner and cleaner.    I think my hometown will become better and better with the help of the government and the Communist Party of China. I should study hard and make a contribution to socialist modernization.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇宣传稿；② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”“现在完成时”；③ 提示：大部分要点已给出，对于感悟和决心要补充完整。[写作步骤]第一步，总述扶贫计划使得家乡发生了改变；第二步，具体描述变化体现在哪些方面；第三步，表达感谢，并表明决心。[亮点词汇]①spacious 宽敞②efffective help有效的帮助③with the help of在……帮助下[高分句型]I think my hometown will become better and better with the help of the government and the Communist Party of China.（宾语从句） 三、讲稿7．习近平主席向全世界庄严昭告了中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。作为一名即将毕业的初中生，你对“中国梦”有何感想？请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。要点：作为中国人而自豪1.过去，“四大发明”等优秀的传统文化影响世界2.如今，……（列举两个中国成就，例如高铁)为实现中国梦而奋斗1.刻苦学习，勇于实践  2.……《补充至少一点)要求:1.词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）﹔2．要点齐全，可适当发挥：3．条理清晰，语句通颍，意思连贯，书写规范；4．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。Dear friends,President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you.【参考范文】Dear friends, President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you.Firstly, I am proud to see the prosperity of our motherland. Our excellent traditional culture, such as the four great inventions, had a great impact on the world. Today, China has grown into a powerful country with various kinds of achievements. For instance, the high-speed rail has greatly reduced travelling time around the country. Besides, from AI to 5G robots, Chinese technology companies are in the world’s leading position.In order to fulfill the Chinese Dream, we are supposed to work hard and take action to realize our own values. More importantly, it is significant for us to seize every possible opportunity to make our country more competitive. With dreams, hard work and opportunities, beautiful things can be created.That’s all. Thank you.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。就“中国梦”这个题材来发表自己的感想。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主。分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据提示材料描述让自己引以为傲的事情；第三段描述如何为了中国梦而奋斗；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。