20 应试题型开放作文类- 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战中考英语高分作文（通用版）

20 应试题型开放作文类

 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战中考英语高分作文（通用版）

第一部分 应试题型开放作文类体裁解读及写法点拨

体裁解读

开放式作文不同于传统的书面表达，题目只给出漫画内容，很少有文字提示，要求学生根据漫画内容充分发挥想象力和创造力，通过拓展主题，组织篇章，在规定的时间里写出一篇内容充实的文章。

开放式作文不仅考查学生的认知能力和思维方式，同时也对想象能力、归纳和判断能力、思考和辨别能力等都提出了较高的要求。开放式作文所选取的话题多与学生的日常生活息息相关，要求学生在平时生活中做个有心人。

写法点拨

1.解析漫画，把握要点。首先对题目给出的漫画进行分析，把握作文的主题，作者

要根据主题发散自己的思维和想象能力，把可以联系上的东西都列下来，进行一番头脑

风暴。

2.筛选材料，初定框架。把能想到的素材进行筛选和整理，哪些该留下，哪些是没

用的，哪些可以整合到一起等，确定文章的体裁，采取什么表现手法，在心中形成初步

的框架。

3.连词成句，连句成文。选取恰当的词语来表达整理好的信息，连词成句，再用适

当的过渡词或过渡句把各个句子连接起来，使文章更加紧凑、自然。

第二部分 应试题型开放作文类万能黄金模板

万能模板1

①I want to have               （事物），which can                      .(能力）

②With               （事物），I can              (原因之一）.With the         (事物），I also

                        .（原因二）

③I want to have                       （事物）to                   .（做法）

注

①点明主题

②围绕主题阐明原因

③再次点明主题

模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。

万能模板2

①On             （日期），I went to                  （地点）.

②In the afternoon,I                  .（做的情一）In the evening,                 .（做的事情二）After dinner,we                                 .（做的事情三）

③I had                      .I enjoyed                      .（感想）

注

①点明主题

②具体所做的事情

③发表感想

模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。

第三部分  必备词汇与套用句型

必备亮点词汇

meaningful adj.有意义的  colorful adj.丰富多彩   beautiful adj.美丽的   lively adj.充满活力的

more and more 越来越   strict adj.严格的  helpful adj.有帮助的；乐于助人的 take part in参与

be strict with对······严格       harmonious adj.和谐的         get on well with 友好相处

make a mistake 犯错          joinv.参与，加入（某项活动）         cookv.烹饪，煮，烧

have a talk with sb.和某人谈话    subjectn.科目，课程  grow up长大，成长     scold v.责备

经典套用句型

闪亮篇首句

It is well-known that...众所周知······

Tell me why it is so...告诉我为什么它如此··.··.

It seems as if he knows everything.他似乎是个万事通。

The more you have, the more you want.拥有越多，欲望越多。

I want to have...我想拥有·.··..

I went to my grandparents' home with my parents.我和我的父母一起去爷爷奶奶家做客。

出彩篇中句

The earth is so clean that there will be not any pollution on it.那个地球如此干净，以至于在那里没有任何污染。

With the paintbrush,I also want to draw a nice home where people can live harmoniously together like a big family.有了这支画笔，我还想画一座好看的房子。在那里，人们可以像一个大家庭一样和谐地生活在一起。

I spent two hours in playing Chinese chess with my grandfather.我和爷爷下了两个小时的象棋。

In the evening,my parents worked together and cooked a wonderful dinner for us.晚上我的父母一起合作为我们准备了一顿丰盛的晚餐。

精彩篇尾句

I had a great time that day.那天我玩得很开心。

I enjoyed staying with my family.我很享受和我家人在一起的时光。图解

I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world.我想有一支魔法画笔画出一个美丽新世界。

第四部分  模板范文演练

模板1

（河南）在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。你想要拥有什么？请以“I want to have”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。

要求：1.请补全标题，如 a football,a mountain bike 或 a magic paintbrush等；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.词数80词左右。

I want to have

万能模板套用分析

首先，开篇点题。→主题

其次，围绕话题展开叙述。→叙述

最后，呼应主题。→主题

满分范文

I want to have a magic paintbrush

I want to have a paintbrush with magic power,which can make whatever I draw become a reality.(句式多变原则，which引导非限制性定语从句，whatever引导宾语从句。）①

With the paintbrush,I can draw a new earth. The earth is so clean that there will be not any pollution on it.② The rivers will be clean.The sky will be blue.With the paintbrush, I also want to draw a nice home where people can live harmoniously together like a big family.(长短句结合原则，前面句子为简单句，此句中包含where引导的定语从句。）

I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world.③

你也可以这样表达

①I want to have a paintbrush with magic power and with it I can make whatever I draw become a reality.

② So clean is the earth that there will be not any pollution on it.

③All I want is the paintbrush that can draw a beautiful new world.

范文译文

我想有一支有魔力的画笔

我想有一支充满魔力的画笔，它可以使我画的任何东西都变成真的。

有了这支画笔，我可以画一个新地球。那个地球如此干净，以至于在那里没有任何污染。河流将是干净的，天空将是湛蓝的。有了这支画笔，我还想画一座好看的房子。在那里，人们可以像一个大家庭一样和谐地生活在一起。

我想有一支魔法画笔画出一个美丽新世界。

模板2

（陕西）请根据提示内容，以“A Visit to Home”为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，叙述你“走亲或访友”的一次经历。

要求：1.将短文提示内容补充完整；

2.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

4.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；

5.词数不少于70词。

提示：When?Whose home?

How?What?

Your feelings...

万能模板套用分析

首先，点明主题。→主题

其次，围绕主题具体叙述。→叙述

最后，表达感想。→感想

满分范文

A Visit to My Grandparents'Home

On Mid-autumn Festival, I went to my grandparents' home with my parents. We brought them a box of mooncakes,because mooncakes symbolize family reunion in Chinese culture.①(句式多变原则，because 引导原因状语从句。）

In the afternoon,I spent two hours in playing Chinese chess with my grandfather.②He was really good at(短语优先原则。）playing Chinese chess, so was I. Finally,I tied with him.In the evening(一二三原则，按照时间顺序进行叙述。），my parents worked together and cooked a wonderful dinner for us. After dinner, we took a rest in the balcony. We looked at the bright moon and ate the mooncakes we brought. My grandmother also told me many interesting stories in her youth.③

I had a great time that day and enjoyed staying with my family.I loved them.(长短句结合原则，前面and连接了两个并列谓语，此句为简单句。）

你也可以这样表达

①Since mooncakes symbolize family reunion in Chinese culture,we brought a box of them for my grandparents.

② In the afternoon,I played Chinese chess with my grandfather for two hours.

③I also heard many interesting stories of my grandmother's youth from my grandmother.

范文译文

到爷爷奶奶家做客

中秋节那天，我和我的父母一起去爷爷奶奶家做客。我们给他们带了一盒月饼，因为月饼在中国文化中象征着家庭的团圆。

那天下午，我和爷爷下了两个小时的象棋。他下棋很厉害，不过我也不错。最后，我们打

成了平局。晚上我的父母一起合作为我们准备了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚餐过后，我们在阳台上

休息。我们一起欣赏明亮的月亮，吃我们带过来的月饼。奶奶还给我讲了许多她年轻时候的

趣事。

那天我玩得很开心。我很享受和我家人在一起的时光。我爱他们。

第五部分 中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文

A

（2022·湖北湖北·中考真题）

饮食不当，可能会诱发多种疾病。以下图片是李华同学的一次就诊经历，请结合图片及所给提示词，发挥你的想象，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，讲述一下他经历了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

提示词：at the clinic (诊所)；junk food；stomachache；medicine

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【参考范文】

Possible Version One:

One day, Li Hua had a stomachache. His father took him to a clinic right away.

At the clinic, a nurse asked what was wrong with Li Hua. He answered, “I had a stomachache, maybe I ate too much junk food last night.” Then, the nurse took him to see a doctor. The doctor examined him carefully. He told him to take some medicine and rest in bed.

One day later, Li Hua felt better. He realized that he would cat more vegetables and fruit, less junk food in the future.

Possible Version Two:

Li Hua is a boy who likes eating junk food very much. Last night, after dinner, he started eating again as usual. A few hours later, a strong feeling of stomachache struck him and his face turned pale at once. His father took him to the nearest clinic. Soon a nurse came and asked what happened. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to stay in bed. He didn’t feel better until he took the pills.

Junk food is delicious, but it is not so healthy. We should eat regularly and do sports often. The better living habits are, the healthier we’ll be.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片以及图片上的词汇展开想象写一篇作文，关于李华的就诊经历。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称以第三人称为主。结合题干内容和图片可知李华应该是肚子疼。所以可以围绕这一点展开叙述。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

B

（2017·山东菏泽·中考真题）

假如你是王宁，请你根据以下图片提示，用英语为“英语之声”广播站写一篇以“做文明学生，创文明校园”为主题的倡议书。

（一）可能用到的词汇：polite礼貌的； respect尊敬； be willing to do乐于做……； protect 保护； follow the school rules遵守校纪； behave表现；举止

（二）其他要求：

1. 倡议书应包含图片所给信息，并可展开想象，适当发挥；

2. 100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear all,

In order to build our civilized school, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Wang Ning

【参考范文】

Dear all,

In order to build a civilized school, we are all supposed to take an active part in the activities.

First of all, as middle school students, we must use polite words in our daily life. I think it is polite to express our thanks whenever or wherever others give us help. Of course, “Excuse me” is quite necessary when we want to ask for help. Secondly, we should be willing to help others who have difficulties in their daily lives. We’ll feel good when they make some progress.

As we all know, school is our family. We should love and protect her. Keeping her clean is our duty. All in all, we should follow the school rules and try our best to behave well.

Wang Ning

【详解】题干解读：题目要求根据图片提示，用英语为“英语之声”广播站写一篇以“做文明学生，创文明校园”为主题的倡议书；要求包含图片所有信息，并进行适当发挥。

写作指导：此作文用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。可采用3段式格式，第一段：开门见山，点明主题；第二段：主要介绍作为文明学生，可以通过哪些措施创建文明校园；第三段：总结全文，呼吁大家从自身做起，做守纪学生。

C

（2017·黑龙江·中考真题）

仔细观察下列六幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇短文。

要求：

1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。

2. 词数在80～100词之间。

3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

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【参考范文】

This morning my mother didn’t go to work and she wanted to do some washing at home.

First, she put some dirty clothes into the washing machine, and she went back to the bedroom to look for other dirty clothes with the door open. At that moment, my pet cat ran out of the bedroom happily and rushed into the washing machine. When my mother returned and was about to close the door, I came in with a dirty T-shirt. “Mom, could you please help me clean it?” “Of course, my dear.” Suddenly, my pet cat rushed out of the washing machine. My mother and I were both shocked. My god! What would happen if I didn’t give Mom the T-shirt?

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据图片内容，描写具体的事情，场景描写要具体详细，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣图片内容，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

D

（2022·山西·三模）

“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。

要求: 1.词数不少于80词；

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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【参考范文】

Without doubt, the study tour plays an important part in our school life. It makes our life meaningful and helps us be knowledgeable. I’d like to share one of the most impressive experiences.

Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates. We visited the history museum. The guide led us to different halls to learn about the history of CPC. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. When we watched the videos about how the soldiers fought against the enemies and achieved success, we were so shocked by their strong will that we couldn’t control the tears. All of us showed our respect to our ancestors because of the peaceful life they fought for. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo.

As teenagers, we should try to learn in various ways. Only in this way can we improve in different ways.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。

E

（2022·黑龙江鸡西·三模）

根据下面四幅图画所示内容，展开合理想象，写一篇短文。

要求： (1)词数在80~100之间。

(2)字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

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【参考范文】

One day on his way home. Wang Lin saw a bird in a tree. Then he picked up a stone and threw it at the bird. The bird was badly hurt and fell off the tree. Wang Lin was about to catch it when an old man appeared before him. He said that birds were friends of humans. Nobody should kill them. It’s everyone’s job to protect the beautiful and lovely bird.

Realizing that he made a mistake, Wang Lin said sorry and promised that he would never do any harm to birds anymore. He said he would also call on others not to hurt birds. The old man felt very pleased and in the end. He took the bird home and took good care of it.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要看清图片内容并组织好故事进程写。在写作时，第一段描述整个事件脉络，叙述男孩、男人与鸟的故事以及男人对男孩的教育；第二段概括事件结尾。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主去描述场景；描述事件时，场景应描写细致；并且事件发生的过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

F

（2022·黑龙江大庆·模拟预测）

图示作文：仔细观察下列四幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇英语短文。

参考词汇：

Rabbit Tom 小兔汤姆，Aunt Goose 白鹅阿姨

要求：

（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一；

（2）词数在80~100之间；

（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分。

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【参考范文】

It was a beautiful day. Rabbit Tom was invited to go to his friend’s home. To get to his friend’s home, he needed to cross a river. The river ran too quickly, and there was no boat. He didn’t know what to do and felt very worried. Just at that moment, Aunt Goose swam over. Waving his arms happily, Tom asked, “Excuse me, Aunt Goose. Could you help me cross the river?” “With pleasure, Tom,” replied Aunt Goose. Then Tom climbed onto the back of Aunt Goose and soon they got to the other side of the river. Tom thanked Aunt Goose very much for her help.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于看图写作，首先介绍故事起因小兔汤姆被邀请去朋友家；然后继续叙述故事经过：小兔汤姆想要过河，但是没船，找到了白鹅阿姨来帮忙；最后叙述故事结果：小兔汤姆在白鹅阿姨的帮助下顺利过河，并表达了感谢。

2. 写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，描述故事时，场景应描写细致；并且故事发生的背景、起因和过程以及结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。