

高中英语高考读后续写情绪表达素材(初级表达+高级表达)(共8类)
展开高考英语读后续写情绪表达素材一、开心【初级表达】也就是在句子中,能看到直接表达喜悦的词汇,如joy, happiness等。① Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。② She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。③ Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy.听到这句话,每个人都欣喜若狂。【高级表达】用表情和动作来表达喜悦。① A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。② Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。③ She laughed, with her eyes shining with excitement.她笑了,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。(with复合结构)二、失望【初级表达】也就是在句子中,能看到直接表达失望的词汇,如disappointment,dismayed等。① Overcome with bitter disappointment at his failing to win a prize, he locked himself up in his room.他对未能获奖感到极度失望,于是把自己锁在房间里。② He was dismayed to learn of their disloyalty.他得知他们对他的不忠,感到很失望。【高级表达】用表情和动作来表达失望。① When I saw the pile of dirty dishes, my heart sank.我看到那一堆肮脏的餐具时,感到很扫兴。(这句话里“my heart sank”,我的心一沉,也间接表达了“失望”。)② The news that he didn’t win prize immediately threw him into low spirits.他没有获奖的消息立刻使他精神低落。(这句话里“threw him into low spirits”,把我扔进了这种低落的情绪中,画面感很强。)③ I feel like all my insides have been drained out and I feel empty and let down.我觉得我所有的内心都被排干了,我感到空虚和失望。(drain本意是“排出,流干”。“all my insides have been drained out”,内心已经被排光了,流干了,直接对应了后面的empty。)三、恐惧【初级表达】① He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。(with复合结构)② Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。(这句话用拟人的修辞手法,恐惧“爬到”身上,非常传神。)③ A flood of fear welled up in him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。(这句话把fear(恐惧)与flood(洪水)联系起来,很亮眼的一个表达。)【高级表达】① Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。(这句话没有直接写“恐惧”,而是用脸色苍白,舌头打结来表现恐惧。)② She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。(这里的“她浑身颤动”也可以换成“她的心跳得厉害(Her heart beat so violently)”。needle针,pin大头针,feeling like sitting on pins and needles翻译成“如坐针毡”,中英文在这个表达上有异曲同工之妙!)四、愤怒【初级表达】也就是在句子中,能看到直接表达愤怒的词汇,如feel/get angry/furious,seized by anger,feel a surge of anger (rage/fury)等。① Sam felt very angry.Sam感到非常生气。② I was seized by anger.我愤怒至极。【高级表达】用声音、动作等来表达愤怒。① His neck and face is flushed.他气得脸红脖子粗。(利用脸部和脖子表达愤怒)② The polar bear exposed his sharp teeth, snarling in our ear.这只北极熊露出锋利的牙齿,在我们耳边咆哮。(通过牙齿和声音来表达愤怒)③ Boiling with rage, Sheldon shook his fist at me.Sheldon非常生气,向我挥拳头。(通过拳头来表达愤怒)④ He stamped his foot in anger.他气得跺脚。(通过脚步动作来表达愤怒)⑤ His voice trembled with anger.他气得声音发抖。(通过声音来表示愤怒)五、激动【初级表达】也就是在句子中,能看到直接表达激动的词汇,如excitement,excited等。① Enjoying the beautiful sight, Mom could hardly contain her excitement.欣赏着美景,妈妈兴奋得难以自抑。② When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。【高级表达】在表达激动的同时,辅以人物的动作,让描写更有画面感,例如whistle(吹口哨)/dance/ jump/leap with joy;feel a surge(激增)of happiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one’s eyes) twinkle(闪闪发光);(one’s heart) beat/pound wildly(心跳加速);can hardly conceal one’s excitement(几乎无法掩饰兴奋的心情)。① When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was pounding with wild joy.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。② Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。六、感动【初级表达】直接描写“感动”的表达,秘诀就是把“感动”的事情表达出来,即因为什么事情而感动,请看下面的句子:① 让我感动的是……“I was touched to find that …”,你可以把感动的事情接在这个句型后面,例如:I was touched to find that they had prepared food for me.发现他们为我准备食物,我很感动。② 被深深感动,我……“Touched deeply, I …”这个句子后面可以描述在“感动”的同时,又做了什么,例如:Touched deeply, I waved goodbye to the family.我被深深地感动了,和这家人挥手道别。【高级表达】间接描写“感动”,主要是通过眼泪来表达,例如:Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。也可以用“With tears streaming down her face(泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来)”来代替“Tears filling her eyes”前一句是写眼泪还在眼睛里,后一种是写眼泪流了下来。另外,描写“眼泪”,是很多情绪里的共同的写法,可以是因为“悲伤”而流泪,当然也可以喜极而泣。所以这句话的后面“she offered her heartfelt gratitude”(表示衷心的感谢。)很重要,解释清楚了流泪的理由是:感动。用“a warm current rising in my heart”即“一股暖流涌入心头”,用这种句子来表达感动,例如:Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.我紧紧地拿着纸袋,一动不动,一股暖流涌入心头。当然你可以把moved和tears结合起来表达,例如:Mac feel moved with tears in one’s eyes.麦克感动得热泪盈眶。七、紧张【初级表达】也就是在句子中,运用直接表达紧张的词,如:(1)nervous adj. 焦虑的;担忧的;惶恐的nervousness n. 紧张(2)uneasy adj. 不安的;忧虑的(3)tense adj. 神经紧张的;担心的 v. (使肌肉)拉紧,绷紧(4)anxious adj. 焦虑;忧虑;担心anxiety n. 焦虑;忧虑(5)restless adj. 坐立不安的(6)uptight adj. 紧张不安的Sam felt very nervous.山姆感到非常紧张。【高级表达】用声音、动作、心理活动等来表达紧张,如:(1)声音、表情表紧张murmur in a trembling voice 用颤抖的声音小声喃喃stammer/stutter under one’s breath 结结巴巴地小声说His face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.他脸色苍白,站在那里说不出话。(2)动作表紧张take a deep breath 深呼吸hold one’s breath 屏住呼吸pace back and forth 来回踱步swallow hard 强咽口水shiver/quiver/tremble/shake with nervousness 紧张得发抖① Standing in front of the line, Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating.站在队伍的前面,艾米丽感到喉咙紧绷,手心出汗。② He was pacing nervously up and down the room.他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。(3)心理活动表紧张have/with butterflies in one’s stomach = one’s stomach be full of butterflies 心里发慌sb’s heart fly into one’s mouth 心提到嗓子眼儿with one’s heart in one’s mouth 提心吊胆地pound/beat/race/thump/hammer wildly/violently/loudly/hard (心)怦怦直跳得厉害My heart began to race and my mind went blank.我的心跳加速,头脑一片空白。八、伤心沮丧【初级表达】也就是在句子中,能看到直接表达伤心沮丧的词和短语,如:(1)sad adj. 难过的;悲哀的sadly adv. 令人遗憾;不幸地sadness n. 悲伤;悲痛;难过sadden v. 使悲伤;使伤心;使难过(2)heartbroken adj. 极其伤心的,令人心碎的brokenhearted adj. 心碎的;伤心的(3)sorrowful adj. 悲伤的;悲痛的;悲哀的sorrow n. 悲伤;悲痛;悲哀 v. 感到(或表示)悲伤(4)heart-struck adj. 心痛的;伤心的(5)distressing adj. 使人痛苦的;令人苦恼的(6)depressed adj. 抑郁的;沮丧的;意志消沉的(7)blue adj. 忧郁的,悲观的(8)miserable adj. 悲惨的;痛苦的(9)downcast adj. 垂头丧气的;低沉的(10)gloomy adj. 阴郁的;忧郁的These days he is in a bad mood.这些天他心情不好。【高级表达】运用一些修辞手法,或者在表达伤心沮丧的同时,辅以人物的动作、表情等,让描写更有画面感。① His face was cast a cloud of gloom after he heard this news.听到这个消息后,他的脸上蒙上了一层阴云。② The old song always brought tears to my eyes.那首老歌总是让我伤心流泪。③ The players sat there with glum looks on their faces.队员们愁眉苦脸地坐在那里。④ She was numb with grief and had trouble speaking.她悲伤到失去知觉,不能开口说话。
