吉林高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

邀请信

1．假定你是李华，你校将举办书法比赛，参赛学生同场竞技书写校名，优胜者的书法作品将被展览一周。请给你校热爱书法的英国交换生Joe写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加这一比赛。要点如下：

1. 比赛的时间和地点；

2. 比赛的要求和细节；

3. 预祝取得胜利。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇： 书法比赛 calligraphy contest

Dear Joe,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你校定于本周六晚为外国留学生举办包饺子活动。请给美国留学生Mary写一封电子邮件，邀请她参加。内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 活动安排；

3. 期待回复。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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3．假定你是李华，你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动，针对“低头族”这一问题， 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机，尽量抬起头来，注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件，邀请他一起参加。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

注意：1.行文连贯流畅；2.参考词汇：低头族：phubber 3.词数100词左右 Dear Henry,

How's everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，是你校模拟联合国社团主席。你校将举办第五次模联活动，请给你们的外教Smith老师写封信，邀请他担任指导老师(advisor)。信的内容包括:

1. 主题:全球气候；

2. 举办时间和地点；

时间: 5月10日-5月11日

地点:会议室一、二、三

3. 指导老师的任务。

(1)指导学生如何为模联做准备和如何写论文。

(2)指导学生如何提高口头英语和笔头英语。

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

模拟联合国大会: MUN

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，是校学生会主席，想邀请外教 Rick先生一起参加学校举办的五四青年节庆祝活动。请给他写一封信，内容包括:

1. 介绍写邮件的目的；

2. 活动时间，地点:5月4日上午9点，学校报告厅；

3. 活动内容:同学们表演节目，同时邀请Rick一起表演一个中西合璧的节目。

注意:1. 词数100字左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Rick,

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I really hope you can come and we can’t wait to see you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jerry上周来信想了解一下目前中国农村的现状，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1． 国家重视农村发展；

2．农村的显著变化（如住房、公路、教育等）；

3．邀请Jerry有机会来参观；

注意：1． 词数100左右．

2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Dear Jerry，

I'm glad to hear from you last week．

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Yours，

Li Hua

7．假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：

1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间，地点，参加者等）；

2. 说明你打算参加的原因；

3. 询问对方的意向。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：龙舟训练营  Dragon Boat Training Camp

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，上周应留学生朋友Leslie的邀请，你去听了一场钢琴音乐会，你打算教他认识中国汉字以示感谢。就此请你用英语给他写一封信件，内容包括：

1.对受邀表示感谢；

2.简要回忆音乐会及感受；

3.提出教他汉字作为回报。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Leslie,

How is everything getting along with you recently?

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

9．假如你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒着贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请你给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他高考后来你家过端午节。

参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival；福字the character Fu

注意：1.词数：100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Brown,

I’m really glad to receive your letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你校英文报将举办以“Scientists and Our Life"为主题的英语征文大赛,你想邀请你的英国朋友Mary参加,请你给她写一封邀请函。内容包括：

1. 写信缘由；

2. 征文要求（介绍至少两位科学家及其成就；举例说明科学对生活的影响；你对科技影响的看法）。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mary,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Joe,

Here is good news for you! Our school will hold a calligraphy contest, so I can’t wait to invite you to join in it.

The contest is to be held on 8th October in the Student Activities Center. There are some detailed requirements that you need to learn. First, whoever is interested in calligraphy can sign up for it. In addition, what the competitors write must be our school name and works of the winners will be on exhibition for a week. What’s more, all the competitors are required to write on the spot and the results will be announced immediately.

It’s a good opportunity to show your years of calligraphy learning. I hope you can win. Looking forward to your instant reply.

Yours.

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办书法比赛，参赛学生同场竞技书写校名，优胜者的书法作品将被展览一周。请给你校热爱书法的英国交换生Joe写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加这一比赛。要点如下：1. 比赛的时间和地点；2. 比赛的要求和细节；3. 预祝取得胜利。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：calligraphy contest（书法比赛）；can’t wait to（等不及）；join in（参加）；detailed requirements（详细的要求）；sign up（报名参加）；be on exhibition（展出）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如First, whoever is interested in calligraphy can sign up for it.运用了主语从句；What’s more, all the competitors are required to write on the spot and the results will be announced immediately.运用了被动语态。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

2．Dear Mary,

How is everything with you? I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening.

Intended to arouse the affection of foreign students with Chinese culture, this party will allow you to learn the history of dumplings and their importance to Chinese people. Besides, you can participate in interesting traditional Chinese games, in which your oral Chinese will be practiced through interactions with your fellow students.

I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country. Looking forward to your presence!

Yours

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封信。

【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 写信目的；2. 活动安排；3. 期待回复。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，写信目的以及活动的时间和地点。第二段，活动安排。第三段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:  invite，interactions，dumpling-making party in our school dining hall this Saturday evening，arouse the affection ,Chinese culture，earn the history of dumplings and their importance, participate in, be practiced, grasp this opportunity, enrich your life, deepen your understanding。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening. 省略that的宾语从句I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Besides，however。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening. 省略that的宾语从句I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

3．Dear Henry,

How’s everything going? Next weekend my classmates will hold an activity against phubbers in the street. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.

The mobile phone has brought us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around. Obviously, it can be harmful to their physical health and safety. Therefore, let’s work together to call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold their heads up in the street.

An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o'clock next Sunday morning.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封邀请信：假定你是李华，你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动，针对“低头族”这一问题， 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机，尽量抬起头来，注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件，邀请他一起参加，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； phubber（低头族），convenience（保便利），invite（邀请），harmful（有害的），physical health（身体健康）及safety（安全）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有take part in（参加），care about（关心），happen around (在身边发生)，be harmful to（对……有害），call on（号召）以及pay attention to（注意），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.”，状语从句“If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o'clock next Sunday morning.”，非谓语动词“I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

4．Dear Mr. Smith,

Our school MUN is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One, Two and Three. The theme is global climate. We sincerely invite you to be one of the advisors.

There are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper, etc. are too complicated for them. Therefore, advisors are needed to train them. Besides, in order to improve their English, some teams are determined to use English as their work language. How to express themselves properly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem. So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors. I know you are a MUN lover. Do come and join us.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假定你是李华，是你校模拟联合国社团主席。你校将举办第五次模联活动，请给你们的外教Smith老师写封信，邀请他担任指导老师。信的内容包括:1. 主题:全球气候；2. 举办时间和地点；时间: 5月10日-5月11日，地点:会议室一、二；三；3. 指导老师的任务。(1)指导学生如何为模联做准备和如何写论文。

(2)指导学生如何提高口头英语和笔头英语。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；advisor（指导老师），global climate（全球气候），theme（主题），sincerely（真诚地）， invite（邀请），prepare（准备），Model United Nations（模拟联合国），determined（决心的），complicated（复杂的）及properly（适当地）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有prepare for（为……做准备），invite sb to do（邀请某人做某事），in order to (为了)，be determined to do（决心做某事）以及in great need of（急需），而且还使用了主语从句“There are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper, etc. are too complicated for them.”及“How to express themselves properly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem.”，状语从句“Besides, in order to improve their English, some teams are determined to use English as their work language.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

5．Dear Mr. Rick,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of Students’ Union. On behalf of my fellow union members, I’m writing to invite you to join us in the celebration of China’s Youth Day in our school.

The celebration will take place in the school lecture hall at 9 am on May.4th. A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances and games, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. To get fully involved, I hope that you can put on a performance with us. And I think it will be a good combination of both our culture and yours.

I really hope you can come and we can’t wait to see you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，是校学生会主席，想邀请外教 Rick先生一起参加学校举办的五四青年节庆祝活动。请给他写一封信，内容包括:

1. 介绍写邮件的目的；2. 活动时间，地点:5月4日上午9点，学校报告厅；3. 活动内容:同学们表演节目，同时邀请Rick一起表演一个中西合璧的节目。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；Chairman of Students’ Union（学生会主席），invite（邀请），join（加入），celebration（庆祝），China’s Youth Day（五四青年节），lecture hall（报告厅），activity（活动），performance（表演），enable（使能够），involve（参与）及combination（结合）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有on behalf of（代表），join sb（加入某人），take place (举行)， a variety of（各种各样的），such as（例如）以及put on（上演），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances and games, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture.”，宾语从句“I really hope you can come and we can’t wait to see you!”，非谓语动词“To get fully involved, I hope that you can put on a performance with us.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

6．Dear Jerry，

I'm glad to hear from you last week． Since you are interested in the current situation of the countryside in China， I'm writing to introduce it to you．

In recent years， our government attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside， making it quite different from the past．Not only are many high buildings and broad highways built， but education has been given more attention and support．All of these changes have added to the convenience and happiness of the people in the countryside． Therefore， I sincerely invite you to come for a visit．

Looking forward to your early reply．

Yours truly，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jerry上周来信想了解一下目前中国农村的现状，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1． 国家重视农村发展；

2．农村的显著变化（如住房、公路、教育等）；3．邀请Jerry有机会来参观。

第2步：the current situation of the countryside in China（中国农村目前的境况）；attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside（重视农村的发展）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。In recent years， our government attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside， making it quite different from the past．该句中making it quite different from the past为现在分词短语作结果状语，attach importance to 重视；Not only are many high buildings and broad highways built， but education has been given more attention and support．该句为not only和but also连接的两个句子，not only引导的句子要用部分倒装的结构。

7．Dear Jim,

I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.

This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.

Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.

【详解】试题分析：本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请— 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)—期待和感谢。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.

文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。

【考点定位】应用文类书面表达

8．Dear Leslie,

How is everything getting along with you recently? I’m more than glad to have been invited to attend the piano concert with you. To be honest, not only am I impressed with the performances given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments made by you. Thank you again for your kindness.

Are you interested in learning Chinese character? As a matter of fact, traditional Chinese cultures are more and more popular all over the world, especially the Chinese character, which is one of the oldest written words and sounds beautiful. If you are interested, keep me informed as soon as possible and I’ll spare no effort to help you learn Chinese characters in return.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】根据提示，假定你是李华，上周应留学生朋友Leslie的邀请，你去听了一场钢琴音乐会，你打算教他认识中国汉字以示感谢。就此你用英语给他写一封信件。1.首先注意时态以一般现在时为主，其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段;第一段表达你对受邀表示感谢；第二段简要回忆音乐会及感受；第三段提出教他汉字作为回报。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型：1. not only am I impressed with the performances given by the skilled artists, but also with the wonderful comments made by you. 本句使用了并列连词not only…but also连接的并列句。2. the Chinese character, which is one of the oldest written words and sounds beautiful. 这是个由which引导的非限制性定语从句。 3. If you are interested, keep me informed as soon as possible. 此句是由if引导的条件状语从句。

9．Dear Mr. Brown,

I’m really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In China, the character for “upside down” sounds the same as the character for “ to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isn’t it?

By the way, I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. It’s a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we usually eat zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. It’ll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。

【详解】话题是向你的外教Mr.Brown介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他在高考后来你家过端午节。写作要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文；同时可以选择高级的词汇和语法项目，让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

【点睛】文中使用了由as引导的非限制性定语从句As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. 运用了that引导的宾语从句this means that happiness is arriving.以及反意疑问句Quite interesting, isn’t it?还运用了由it作形式主语的句子It’ll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.较高级词汇the same as，by the way，in memory of，look forward to也为文章增色不少。

10．Dear Mary,

The English paper in our school will hold an essay contest titled Scientists and Our Life and I’d like to invite you to take part in it. Your essay is expected to introduce at least two famous scientists in the world. You’d better focus on their achievements and contributions to human beings. You can also give examples to show the great effects of various inventions and technologies on our life. Of course, science and technology can not only make our life easier and more comfortable, but they also cause bad effects. So you can talk about your own opinions.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Mary写一封邀请函，邀请她来参加以“Scientists and Our Life"为主题的英语征文大赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

比赛：contest→competition

参加：take part in→participate in

期待：expect→hope

导致：cause→lead to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Of course, science and technology can not only make our life easier and more comfortable, but they also cause bad effects.

拓展句：Of course, not only can science and technology  make our life easier and more comfortable, but they also cause bad effects.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Your essay is expected to introduce at least two famous scientists in the world， science and technology can make our life easier and more comfortable, but they also cause bad effects.，Looking forward to（运用了被动语态）

[高分句型2] Of course, science and technology can not only make our life easier and more comfortable, but they also cause bad effects. （运用了not only...but also结构）