河北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信1．假定你是李华，学校编辑部正在征集关于健康的英文稿件，你想就高中生近视(nearsightedness) 问题投稿，具体要点如下：1. 简述高中生近视现状；2. 分析近视形成的原因；3. 提出视力保护的建议。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear editor,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想选修中文作为外语，为此写信征求你的意见。请按以下要求给Peter写一封回信。1. 鼓励他选修中文；2. 中文的魅力和学习中文的意义；3. 学好中文的建议；注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华, 你的朋友Lily写信向你询问如何保持健康。请你给她发一封电子邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：1. 注意合理饮食, 多吃水果和蔬菜；2. 保证充足的睡眠, 至少8小时；3. 坚持锻炼身体, 多参加体育运动。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；Dear Lily,How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你校的英语微信公众号最近征求改进意见，请你给微信公众号负责人写一封电子邮件，提出你的建议，内容包括：1. 及时更新内容2. 增加栏目（column）注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir / Madam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,Li Hua5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。1．参加中文学习班；2．看中文书刊、电视；3．学唱中文歌曲；4．交中国朋友。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishesYours,Li Hua6．假定你是李华，最近，你的外国好友Lily来信说她升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你根据以下提示，用英语给她回一封信。1.关心同学，乐于助人；2.学会倾听很重要；3.积极参加班级活动并展示自己的才能。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。7．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jack 因为选课问题，与父母意见不同，发生冲突，情绪低落，写信向你求助。请给他写一封回信，信中包含如下内容：1. 给与安慰。2. 提出和解建议：（1）和父母进行沟通；（2）选这个科目的原因 ；（3）……注意：1. 词数100左右；开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。Dear jack,I am sorry to hear that you had some conflicts with your parents on subject choosing. But ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“Be the Master of Your Cellphone”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1. 分析手机的利与弊；2. 提出正确使用手机的建议。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。9．假定你是李华，你校将举办一场主题为“How to read a book”的英文讲座。请你写封邮件邀请外教Michael老师做讲座，内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 讲座的内容：阅读的意义和方法。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Tom对中国美食很感兴趣，打算在间隔年（gap year）期间学做中国美食，他写信想你征询建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 推荐美食；2. 说明理由；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________            1．Dear editor,My name is Li Hua. My topic today deals with the problem of nearsightedness in students.At present, an increasing number of students wear glasses and some even in high degree, which worries themselves a lot. In my opinion, there are mainly three reasons. First, their ways of using eyes are not healthy. Second, because of the high pressure of study, they often study for too long without any break. Third, some spend too much time before televisions or computers.However, much can be done to protect our eyesight. When reading, make sure we are in bright places and let our eyes rest every hour. Whenever we are free, we can do some eye exercises so that our tired eyes can be restored quickly.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就高中生近视(nearsightedness) 问题写一篇文章。【详解】1.    词汇积累关于：concern →deal with目前：Now →At present首先：To begin with →First在我看来：As far as I’m concerned= In my opinion2.句式拓展简单句变为复合句原句：Second, because of the high pressure of study, they often study for too long without any break.拓展句：Second, because the pressure of study is very high, they often study for too long without any break.【点睛】[高分句型1] At present, an increasing number of students wear glasses and some even in high degree, which worries themselves a lot.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2] Whenever we are free, we can do some eye exercises so that our tired eyes can be restored quickly.这句话运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句。2．One possible version:Dear Peter,Nice to receive your letter, in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language. I consider it as a wise choice.For one thing, Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world. For another, the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique, thus helping you create a new way of thinking.If you learn Chinese well, you can communicate with the largest population in the world, which provides you with more opportunities to make a career. What’s more, the Chinese language is sure to give you a glimpse of the colourful culture of China. Therefore,I recommend you to choose Chinese as a second language.And it’s not a bad idea if you study Chinese.May you do well in learning Chinese. If you have any problems, don’t hesitate to write to me.Best wishes.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Peter写一封回信，给他一点关于选修中文作为外语的建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累独特的：unique→particular因此：therefore→hence寻求：seek for→ask for给某人提供某物：provide sb. with sth.→supply sb. with sth.2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：For another, the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique, thus helping you create a new way of thinking.拓展句：For another, the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique which helps you create a new way of thinking.【点睛】[高分句型1] Nice to receive your letter, in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language.(运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] For one thing, Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world. (运用了that引导的定语从句)3．Dear Lily,How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.As we know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast, we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruit, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar or fat. It is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be beneficial to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇应用文，向好朋友Lily给出一些如何保持健康的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累重要性：importance→significance此外：in addition→furthermore认为：think→suppose必要的：necessary→essential2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Since we grow very fast, we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruit, fish, meat and so on.拓展句：It is since we grow very fast that we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruit, fish, meat and so on.【点睛】[高分句型1] Only in this way can you keep fit. (运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2] As we know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)4．Dear Sir/ Madam,I'm writing to make some suggestions on the improvement of our school's WeChat public account. As our school's WeChat public account is open to all the students, I think it is advisable that more news about students' study, life and interest be offered. It will be more attractive if more photos of activities can be posted. In addition. I hope our WeChat pubic account will be updated more often to make the students know what's going on in our school. A new column on Chinese poetry will be welcomed. It can help students learn more about traditional culture and enjoy the beauty of words.I hope these suggestions will be useful. And I would be ready to discuss this matter in detail if necessary.                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Sincerely yours,                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给微信公众号负责人写一封电子邮件，提出相关建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice=suggestion提供：give →offer欣赏：appreciate→enjoy另外：what’s more →in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：A new column on Chinese poetry will be welcomed. It can help students learn more about traditional culture and enjoy the beauty of words.拓展句：A new column on Chinese poetry, which can help students learn more about traditional culture and enjoy the beauty of words, will be welcomed.【点睛】[高分句型1] It will be more attractive if more photos of activities can be posted. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)[高分句型2] I hope these suggestions will be useful (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)5．One possible version:Dear Peter.I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will help you learn Chinese Try and write to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Peter写封信，就如何才能学好中文给予他建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad →happy建议：advice →suggestion学习：learn → study此外：Besides =Moreover2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.拓展句：First, the reason why it is important to take a Chinese course is that you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. (运用了介词+which引导的定语从句)[高分句型2] Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. (运用了不定式作主语)6．Dear Lily,I know that you have the problem of making new friends in senior high school. The following are my suggestions.First, you should care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. In that case, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.I hope my advice will be helpful to you,Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国好友Lily写封回信，就如何在高中结交新朋友提出一些建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累建议：advice → suggestion 才能：gift→talent关心：be concerned about → care about参加：take part in → participate in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Second, it is important for you to be a good listener.拓展句：Second, if your classmates talk with you about their trouble or happiness, you should listen to them carefully. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. (运用了it做形式主语，动词不定式作主)[高分句型2] Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.(运用了where引导的定语从句)7．Dear jack,I am sorry to hear that you had some conflicts with your parents on subject choosing. But I think there is no need to feel upset, for things like this usually happens to teenagers, you included.As far as I am concerned, you should explain to your parents patiently and carefully. It is advised that you should tell them the reasons why you must choose the subjects, and the perspective of them, which is of great importance. Besides, you should also promise that you will learn what you choose well and make them know your determination. These are the ways I persuaded my parents to allow me to choose what I like.Looking forward to your reply and hoping that you can make up with parents.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友 Jack写封信，就和父母进行沟通提出和解建议。【详解】1.词汇积累会议：meeting→conference建议：suggest→advise重要的：important→be of great importance此外：in addition→besides2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, you should also promise that you will learn what you choose well and make them know your determination.拓展句：Besides, you should also promise that you will learn what you choose well so that you can make them know your determination.【点睛】[高分句型1] It is advised that you should tell them the reasons why you must choose the subjects, and the perspective of them, which is of great importance. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Besides, you should also promise that you will learn what you choose well and make them know your determination. (运用了what引导宾语从句)8．Be the Master of Your CellphoneCellphones have brought us great convenience and pleasure. Using cellphones, we can keep in touch with others, text a message and read e-books. However, every coin has two sides. Cellphones also have some bad effects on us. Some students are addicted to online chatting or games, which does harm to their studies and health,In my opinion, we should learn some knowledge by using cellphones. Besides, we can also download some songs to enjoy. Please make good use of cellphones and let them serve us well.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“Be the Master of Your Cellphone”为题写一篇关于如何正确使用手机的发言稿。【详解】1. 词汇积累 快乐：joy→pleasure  影响：influence→effect聊天：talk→chat沉迷的：lost→addicted2.句式拓展 合并简单句原句：In my opinion, we should learn some knowledge by using cellphones. Besides, we can also download some songs to enjoy.拓展句：In my opinion, we should learn some knowledge by using cellphones while downloading some songs to enjoy.【点睛】[高分句型1] Some students are addicted to online chatting or games, which does harm to their studies and health, (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Please make good use of cellphones and let them serve us well. (运用了祈使句)9．Dear Michael,I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture. The topic is how to read a book. It will begin at 4 pm next Friday at the school hall and last about one hour.I know you love reading and have read a large variety of books. Would you please share with us the meaning of reading and offer us some tips on how to read a book? I'm sure your lecture will be of great help in our reading journey.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封邮件邀请外教Michael老师来做讲座。【详解】1.词汇积累发表演讲：deliver a lecture→give a lecture提供：provide→offer各种各样的：various→a large variety of建议：advice/suggestion→tip2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture. The topic is how to read a book.拓展句：I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture, whose topic is how to read a book【点睛】[高分句型1] The topic is how to read a book. (运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构)[高分句型2] I know you love reading and have read a large variety of books. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)10．Dear Tom,I’m pleased to know you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year. I think fried rice is your best choice.Fried rice is eaten as a main dish. It is flavorful and is easy to learn. Fried rice is made from rice with many other ingredients that you can choose to suit your preferences, such as pork, beef chicken, egg, or vegetables. It is a fast meal because it not only cooks quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation.I hope my recommendation will be helpful. May you have a good time learning it.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给澳大利亚笔友Tom写封回信，推荐中国美食并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：option→choice打算：plan to→intend to美味的：delicious→flavorful需要：need→require2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：I’m pleased to know you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year. I think fried rice is your best choice.拓展句：Since I knew you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year, I think fried rice is your best choice.【点睛】[高分句型1] I think fried rice is your best choice. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)[高分句型2] It is a fast meal because it not only cooks quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)