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Glenda Maguire was at home in South Africa when she spotted a flock of wild ducks fly in and settle near a lake that borders her property. Normally, it was a pleasant sight, but that day it was heartbreaking. Glenda soon realized that something was seriously wrong with one of the birds.

 She went to get her camera, with which she could take photographs of things very far away. Through the pictures taken, she noticed that there was a plastic ring on his beak (鸟喙) and he was trying desperately to get it off. Glenda recalled that she had seen lots of plastic litter on the beaches of the lake. This plastic ring was probably from a bottle. The person who left this litter behind probably hadn’t given it a second thought, but it would cost the bird his life.

Glenda and her husband immediately set about trying to catch the duck using a cage trap, but the whole flock flew away not long after. She warned people to keep an eye out for the bird behaving abnormally, while continuing to hunt for him herself.

Two days later, the flock returned to Glenda’s house, but by then the trapped duck appeared to have given up hope. Glenda was very worried about the duck, and decided to try her best to rescue him. But the rescue wouldn’t come easy. It was unclear how long the duck had been trapped by the plastic ring. Being unable to eat and drink normally, he stood little chance of surviving long in that state—and the duck seemed to understand that.

By the next day, Glenda feared that time was running out. She decided to try a riskier approach and capture him with a net. But before she could, he volunteered himself—walking into the net they had baited (放诱饵) with food.

“I do believe it was a wonder,” Glenda said. “He had no reason to enter the net as he could not eat.” The duck had allowed himself to be caught, and Glenda was mad with joy.

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本文选自：

https://www.thedodo.com/in-the-wild/duck-stuck-plastic-ring

读后续写解题综述

一、语篇分析

本文是记叙文。讲述了格伦达·马奎尔(Glenda Maguire)和她的丈夫救助一只喙部被塑料环缚住的野鸭及保护湖区鸟类生存环境的事迹。文章内容贴近日常生活，情节简单清楚，语言通俗易懂。文章的主题语境是人与自然，选材新颖，回避了围绕人与社会或人与自我的惯用选材方式。

二、篇章线索

格伦达发现一只野鸭的喙部被塑料环缚住→推断塑料环会危及野鸭的生命，用诱捕笼捕捉解救未果→用诱捕网将野鸭捕获，剪除掉塑料环→看护野鸭康复，直至其回归自然→采取措施保护所在湖区鸟类生存环境。

三、续写内容

（一）搭建框架

第一段：根据第一段所给首句(With a lifesaving cut, the plastic ring was removed.)可知，野鸭已脱险，根据第二段所给首句(Despite this duck’s rescue)可知，野鸭已痊愈。据此可确定，本段应该写格伦达看护或设法医护野鸭康复的具体情况。

第二段：根据第二段所给首句(it upset her that other plastic litter still threatened the birds)可知，湖区鸟类的生存仍在遭受塑料垃圾的威胁，结合语篇的主题可判定，本段应该写格伦达清理塑料垃圾保护湖区鸟类生存环境的具体情况。

（二）构思细节

第一段：从野鸭能够自投罗网(he volunteered himself—walking into the net)来看，预计伤情不会太严重。但野鸭已有数天未能进食，结合Glenda feared that time was running out可知，野鸭一定会非常虚弱。所以，第一段应主要围绕格伦达看护野鸭进食、恢复体力等方面来添加细节。

第二段：本段可依据原文中设下的伏笔(Glenda recalled that she had seen lots of plastic litter on the beaches of the lake. This plastic ring was probably from a bottle.)来添加细节，如清理湖滩上的塑料垃圾、设置警告牌提醒人们不要乱扔垃圾等。另外，要用适当的结尾句与提示句中的upset相照应，以突出主人公淳朴善良的品格，增强故事的完整性。

读后续写题型的特点之一是没有固定的标准答案，考生可以有自己独特的写作思路，对文章的结尾有不同的诠释。但续写文所创造的内容一定要符合常理、要与原文的情节连贯接续，主人公情感的发展要合情合理，续写文内部也要衔接自然，这样才能确保所创造的内容与所给文具有较高的融洽度。

四、参考范文

With a lifesaving cut, the plastic ring was removed. Luckily, the freed duck showed no signs of lasting injury. Glenda breathed a sigh of relief and returned him to a pool outdoors, where he could recover within sight of his rescuers. The first thing he did was take a bath, and then he buried himself in eating and drinking. For the next few days, Glenda witnessed a sharp increase in his strength. Soon, he was back to his old self again, integrating into his flock.

Despite this duck’s rescue, it upset her that other plastic litter still threatened the birds. The improperly abandoned plastic rubbish around the lake was likely to claim the lives of countless birds. Realizing this, Glenda and her husband decided to do what they could to protect the birds. They cleaned up the beaches in their spare time. Meanwhile, they put up some signs by the lake to warn people not to litter. They also reminded whoever they encountered to take certain steps when disposing of garbage, like cutting up plastic rings. “If our effort prevents even just one animal’s suffering, it is very comforting,” Glenda said.