山东省济宁市邹城市2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

山东省济宁市邹城市

2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年山东省济宁市邹城市中考二模英语试题

八、写作(共1小题，计15分)

无奋斗，不青春!某英文网站正在开展以“越努力越幸福( The Harder I Work, the Happier I Will Be)”为主题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在初中生活中的一个小目标是什么?你是如何努力去实现的?以及你从中学到了什么?

提示词语：set a goal, work hard, make a plan, helpful, proud, succeed

要求：

1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2.必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；

3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4.词数：100词左右。

2022年山东省济宁市邹城市中考二模英语试题

八、写作（共 1小题,计15分）

假如你是李华，你们学校就“感恩父母，从我做起”这一话题展开讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈为什么要感恩父母，你和父母之间发生的最难忘的事以及你的感受。

提示词语：think，bring up,  prepare for，encourage，confident，happy,  proud

提示问题：

·Why do you want to thank your parents?

·What was the most unforgettable experience between you and your parents?

·How do you feel?

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2021年山东省济宁市邹城市中考二模英语试题

八 写作（共 1小题,计15分）

假如你是李华，面对中考，你压力比较大，想找周围的人倾诉，但有各种担心。请根据以下表格用英文写封信给 Tom，请他帮你提出合理的建议。

要求：

1.必须包括表中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥

2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称

3.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范

4.词数不少于100，文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数

Dear Tom ,

I am a Grade 9 student. As the high school entrance exam (中考) is coming. I am feeling quite stressed. I need someone to talk to, but I have my own worries. ______________________

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Could you help me find who is the best one to relax me? I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

答案：

2023年山东省济宁市邹城市中考二模英语试题

46．例文：

It’s well-known that there’s no shortcut to success but hard work. One of my experiences helps me realise the truth again.

 As I entered Grade 9, I found I had difficulty in speaking English freely. Therefore, I decided to improve my oral English by making a plan. First, I kept on practising listening to English and reading aloud to improve my pronunciation. Second, I tried to read English books from which I could learn many native expressions. Although it was quite challengeable, I managed to develop it into a habit. Thanks to my great efforts, I have made greater progress and I can speak better English now.

The experience has made me realise the great value of hard work. I not only feel proud of my oral English but also find the pleasure in hard work. I believe the more hard-working I am, the much happier I will be.

【详解】[总体分析]

题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

时态：时态为“一般过去时” ；

提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中越努力越幸福的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图借用“越努力越幸福”来引出重点介绍的内容；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“你在初中生活中的一个小目标是什么、你是如何努力去实现的？以及你从中学到了什么？”几个方面重点越努力越幸福具体情况；

第三步，书写结语表达“越努力越幸福”的感悟。

[亮点词汇]

improve oral English 提高英语口语

not only...but also... 不仅……而且……

thanks to 由于，幸亏

[高分句型]

①Second, I tried to read English books from which I could learn many native expressions.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

②Although it was quite challengeable, I managed to develop it into a habit.（although引导的让步状语从句）

2022年山东省济宁市邹城市中考二模英语试题

66．例文

I think it’s important for us to thank our parents. Since I was born, my parents have given me all their love and care, but never expect anything in return. They have brought me up and taken good care of me carefully and patiently.

Last year, I was chosen to take part in a speech competition. I felt very nervous. My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it. They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result. They said the process of learning was more meaningful. With their help, I did very well that time. I felt happy and proud.

I’d like to say “Thanks a lot! You’re great! I will love you forever!” to mum and dad.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要围绕“感恩父母，从我做起”展开，并根据题干中给出的三个问题进行写作，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。第一段讲述为什么要感恩父母；第二段讲述自己和父母之间发生的最难忘的事情；第三段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，无单词拼写和语法错误。

2021年山东省济宁市邹城市中考二模英语试题

46．例文

Dear Tom,

I am a Grade 9 student. As the high school entrance exam is coming, I am feeling quite stressed. I need someone to talk to but I have my own worries.

First, I consider talking to my teachers. They know what my problem with study better than others. Although they are kind and helpful, sometimes they look so strict. Meanwhile, teachers are always busy. I am afraid they can’t spare enough time to listen to me patiently.

Secondly, maybe I can find my parents to reduce my stress. They have nearly devoted all they have to give me a happy childhood. When I grow up to be a teenager, I find they can’t understand me at all. They always require me to do whatever they like. It turns out that I seem to lose my direction of my future.

Finally, classmates or friends seem to be good partners. They share every sunny moment with me and satisfy my need in school life. However, if my secrets can’t be kept well, I will feel very shameful. At the same time, they are so busy with their schoolwork that they may not give me useful advice.

Could you help me find who is the best one to relax me? I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，但要书信格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头。内容包括表中所有提示，主要讲述李华面对中考，压力比较大，想找老师、家长或同学进行交流，但有各种担心。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称进行叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主。本文可以分五段叙述，开头（第一段）和结尾（第五段）已经给出，找老师、家长或同学进行交流的担心可以分三段叙述。在叙述时，避免汉语式英语，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、句型等，句意叙述完整，思路清晰，语句通顺，表达条理，语句连贯。