2023中考英语作文指导及预测

2023中考英语作文指导及预测

一、中考英语作文概述

中考英语作文是一种“半开放性的命题作文”，概括起来，它含有四个方面的要求：①段落形式规整 ② 语言表达正确 ③逻辑表达连贯 ④ 内容是否全面。             

①在形式上首先要体裁格式正确，单词的大小写正确、标点符号正确以及词数在100个词左右。

②语言表达的要求是正确、清楚、连贯，不一定非得都是复杂句，只要句子表述正确即可，中间可加几句复杂句，如宾语从句、定语从句和时间状语从句。 

③作文的内容表达要具有逻辑性，比如，我们在介绍节日时，要先介绍时间，然后按时间线索去介绍人们都会干什么事情，这样介绍的节日会让人们感觉清晰明了，具有逻辑性。

④内容是按照题目的要求和指令去写，不得遗漏任何一个要求；至少写三点，每一点在题目要求的基础上加上自己的扩展内容，可以是原因，结果，举例等。

中考英语作文在中考英语中起着举足轻重的作用。作文质量的好与差，得分悬殊很大，将对考生中考总成绩带来很大影响。[来

接下来，我们将就如何写作文展开说一下，当然，我们不会把所有知识点都讲到，我们只说一下写作的思路以及去写文章能立马用得上的词汇或句子，做到简单高效地掌握写作。

二、中考英语写作步骤

第一步：审题目，定体裁、主题、人称、时态

第二步：列提纲，打草稿、写要点，并将要点扩展成句

第三步：用技巧，巧链接

第四步：查文章

三、中考英语写作技巧

作文结构按三段式进行写作

第一段，点出主题加引起下文

在一段，我们可以用As we all know（众所周知）作为第一段的开头，后加一句有关主题的句子，接着我们可以说Let me tell you about it来引出下一段。

【例子】若写作主题为人民生活变化，第一段我们可以这样说：

As we all know,with the development of society, our life is becoming better and better. Now let me tell you about this.

第二段，按点进行写作，写作内容根据要点提示展开写作

第二段的内容我们要分点进行写作，加上表顺序的连接词，会显得更加清晰明了，一般来说，我们在写作时，可以写3-4点，每一点之前，都加上表顺序的连接词；并且可以用问句打头以表明我们这一段的观点。

【例子】What can we do? To begin with, when we are at school, we should keep our classroom clean and tidy. And we shouldn’t throw about rubbish. What’s more, we should help our parents do some housework at home. Besides, we shouldn’t make much noise in public places. Last but not least, we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order to make them understand the importance of this event and take part in it.

第三段，发表自己观点＋情感升华/落实行动

     第三段开头我们可以用表观点或者表总结的连接词引出，来表明自己的观点和态度。

【例子】

①All in all, if everyone makes a contribution to this event, Yangzhou will become a National Civilization City soon.

②In my opinion, after-school services can be beneficial for our study as well as our school life.

③In a word,the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.

1. 学会灵活运用连接词

我们直接来用例子说明一下如何更好地用连接词来让文章显得更加有逻辑，更加有连贯性。

【例1】我们如果去写中秋节人们的活动，我们可能会立马想到下面这两句话，People admire the moon.     People share the mooncakes.

在这里，我们知道两个活动是并列的，所以我们可以用表并列的连接词将这两句话连接起来。

People admire the moon and share the mooncakes.

People not only admire the moon but also share the mooncakes.

People admire the moon as well as sharing the mooncakes.

【例2】我们在写到事情、食物、习惯、爱好、运动等这些内容时，为了让自己写的更加具体，更加直观，我们可以用举例子的方式将所写的内容进行扩展。

①There is so much delicious and special food like niangao , dumplings and so on .

  There is so much delicious and special food , such as

  There is so much delicious and special food , including

②I have many hobbies,such as swimming, singing and dancing.

③We can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables.

【例3】在写作时，为了让你所写的内容更加具有说服性，同时让句子结构看起来更加丰富，我们可以使用表目的和因果的连接词来表明做事情的目的和原因。

①we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience.

②In order to make my dream come true, I will read a lot of books about space and watch many films about space.

③We should do more sports because it can help us keep healthy.

【例4】在写作时，我们可以用对比的方式将我们想要表达的内容显得更加突出。

We should walk out as often as possible instead of staying at home all the time.

【例5】运用宾语从句、定语从句、感叹句等特殊句式表达观点和情感

①We are supposed to save the earth that all humans have.

  ②I think that ....

  ③How meaningful the festival is!

④The girl who often helps me with my English is from England.

四、中考英语写作句式整理

1．It' s adj for sb. to do做..对某人来说...

2．not...until...直到..才...

3．The reason why...is that .......的原因是

4．That is why那是......的原因

5．That is because那是因为......

6．It is said that据说...

7．There is no doubt that+从句。毫无疑问.....

五、中考英语作文考点预测

话题一“双减”政策后，参加综合实践活动

一．随着“双减”政策的实施,同学们有更多的时间参加综合实践活动,全面提高自己各方面的能力(如阅读、运动、烹饪、救护方法……),请结合自身经历,根据写作要求写一篇英语短文。

写作要点:

1)What skills？2)How to help you? 3)what to do in the future?

As we all know, skills are necessary for us teenagers. Good skills can always help us grow up. As for me, cooking helps me a lot in my daily life.Now let me tell you about it.

First, cooking is a basic skill. It helps me to find the pleasure to create my own dishes so that I can enjoy myself better. In addition, I also learn the importance of food. So I won't waste it. Finally, I understand that my parents love me so much that they will do all hard work to make me happy. I can get on well with my parents now.

All in all, in order to develop my cooking skill, I will work harder. Maybe one day I can make other people feel happy through my dishes.

话题二“双减”政策后，如何利用业余时间

"双减"政策实施后,学生们的业余时间更多了。你是如何利用你的业余时间的呢?请你结合下面图示信息，以"How to make our free time more meaningful"为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。

How to make our free time more meaningful

As we all know, nowadays we have more free time than before because of the"double reduction" policy. But how can we make our free time more meaningful? Here are my suggestions.

Firstly,we should help our parents do housework so that they can have a rest after a day's hard work. We can also develop life skills such as washing clothes, cooking and so on. Secondly, we are supposed to read more because reading makes a man wise. We can learn a lot from it. Thirdly,we can do more exercise. That is because exercise helps us keep healthy and keeps our spirits up. Last but not least, we can do something meaningful, including volunteering in our community or visiting the old people's home.

All in all,let's make full use of our free time and be a better person.

话题三 延时服务

不久前，教育部出台"新政"，规定义务教育阶段学校需严格落实"四点半延时服务"。假如你是李华，请给你的美国朋友Tom 写一封邮件，介绍你校开展的校内课后服务内容，并询问他的学校课后课程开展情况。

1.自主决定是否选择延时服务，

2.开展多种社团活动，如∶篮球社团，…

3.这项服务给学生带来的好处。

参考词汇∶课后延时服务 after-school service

Dear Tom，

How is everything going? Our school is supposed to provide students with after-school services according to new policy. Now let me tell you about it.

First of all, we have the right to decide whether or not to take part in the services. In addition, the school will set up many clubs for us, such as the basketball club and dancing club. And I think that joining in clubs can help us enjoy our school life and develop our hobbies.

In my opinion, after-school services has many advantages for our study as well as our school life. First, We can explore something different at school except for studying knowledge. Second, the activities can help raise our interest in different fields and open a new world in front of us. Third, it can help us develop our own hobbies so that we can also relax ourselves .

How about you? Do you have after-school services in your school?I'm looking forward to hearing from you!

Yours，

Li Hua

话题四 劳动教育

近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象;为此，国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。对此你表示赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。

内容包括∶

1.上劳动课，学习生活技能;

2.参加实践活动，如∶植树、种菜等;

3.学做家务，如∶整理房间、洗衣服等;

4.你的建议....

参考词汇∶劳动精神课 a hardworking spirit class

As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do?

Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables in order to enrich our real-world work experience. In addition, we need to try to do some chores at home like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.

In a word,the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.

话题五 传统文化

坚定文化自信，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，近期，一批外国朋友要到你所在的学校参观访问，你将作为学生代表向他们介绍中华优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

Dear friends,

Welcome to our school. Today. I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.As we all know, there are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. They have a long history and have influenced many people. Now let me tell you about them.

Beijing Opera comes first. As one of Chinese national treasures, Beijing Opera comes from “Huiban” and it has three parts, including singing, dancing, and speaking. It tells a lot of stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.Next, let’s talk about tea. In China there are many different kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. It is good for our health.The last one is about china. China is the hometown of china. Our china technology is the earliest in the world, and it’s famous all over the world.

All in all, as a Chinese, we should spread our culture to the world. 

Thanks for your listening.

话题六 人的品质——坚持、团结、勇气

历时29天的2022年卡塔尔世界杯于12月18日落下帷幕，四年一届的世界杯，除了给我们留下一个个精彩的瞬间，带给我们更多的是启示与思考：

1. 坚持(persistence)——为了实现自己的理想，永不放弃；

2. 团结(solidarity)——齐心协力，共同成就；

3. 勇气(courage)——欢呼不只属于胜利者，为梦想勇于拼搏的人都值得点赞（a thumbs-up）；

4. 人生就是一届又一届“世界杯”，充满了意想不到与无限可能，你的梦想是什么？你打算如何去实现它？

请根据以上提示，以“Anyone With a Dream is Great”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的想法。

Anyone With a Dream is Great

  The 2022 World Cup in Qatar ended on December, 18th. It left people lots of wonderful moments. It also gave us something to think about. What are they?

 First is persistence ,whatever difficulties we meet we should never give up. Only in this way can we achieve our dream. Next is solidarity, teamwork is necessary, and we should work together to achieve common success. What’s more, courage is also important. Cheers are not only for winners, but also for those who have the courage to fight for their dreams. They all deserve a thumbs-up.

All in all, Life is one “World Cup” after another, full of surprise and possibilities. My dream is to become an astronaut and explore outer space. In order to realize my dream, I will make efforts to learn knowledge and improve physical fitness. I may meet many difficulties, but I won’t give up.

I believe that anyone with a dream is great. So let’s dream big and work hard to make it come true.

话题七 德育（具体实践）

习近平总书记同北大师生代表座谈时提出：“人才培养是育人和育才相统一的过程，育人是本，人无德不立，育人的根本在于立德，这是人才培养的辨证法。”为落实立德树人根本任务，各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动，根据下面思维导图内容提示以“Moral（德育）Education”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍如何践行德育教育。

Moral Education

As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.

We can At home, we should do some housework. We also should save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities in our free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. Last but not least, we should love our country. We should try our best to spread our culture.

话题八 体育精神

二十大报告指出，"要加强青少年体育工作，加快建设体育强国”，为了进一步推动中小学体育运动的开展，近期在必胜中学隆重举行了中小学体育节活动。请根据以下导图提示，写一篇英文文章谈一谈作为青少年，应该怎样发扬体育精神。

提示：团体操表演the group callisthenics

Recently , in order to promote the development of sports , Sports Day was held in BiSheng Middle School. Let me tell you something about the Sports Day.

 Firstly , Hundreds of students joined in the group callisthenics . My classmate got the first prize in the 100- meter race and won lots of praise. Secondly , we are supposed to do more sports instead of playing games at home . For example , we can run or play basketball in our spare time .Thirdly , we can’t be absent from P.E. classes at school . Instead , we are expected to take part in all kinds of sports activities, including running, jumping and doing exercises. Besides , it’s important for us to do eye exercises because it can protect our eyes .

 Finally , as teenagers , we should exercise more and study harder in order to serve our society better . We also need to keep strong and healthy . We ’d better face challenges bravely and believe in ourselves .

话题九：生态文明类

一：保护环境

As we all know, with the quick development of economy, our environment has become worse and worse.

    There are all kinds of pollution around us,such as water pollution, noise pollution and air pollution.These are bad to all living things in the world. We need to take measures to protect our environment.First of all, we can put waste into the dustbin and not throw it on the ground. What’s more, we can go to work by bus or with our friends in the same car. In addition, if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.Last but not least, we need more laws to help stop pollution.

    All in all, there is only one earth. If everyone protects the environment, the world will become more and more beautiful.All of us must remember: We have only one earth. Protecting the earth is to protect ourselves.

二：低碳生活

    As we all know, having a low-carbon life will be very important to us. I think having a low-carbon life can help us save a lot of energy. What’s more, it can help us reduce pollution and improve our environment.

   What can we do to have a low-carbon life？There are many ways.First of all, we can go to school by bike or on foot.What’s more,we should take cloth bags when shopping instead of taking plastic bags. In addition,we should turn off the the TV、 the computer and taps in time.It’s a good idea to reuse the books as possible as we can. Finally, we’d better recycle the water.

    In fact，If everyone does something for the environment，I believe the earth will be a better place. And our world will be more and more beautiful.

三：野生动物

As we all know, many wild animals are in danger at present.There are a number of reasons about this. First, the imbalance of our ecosystem leads to the spread of diseases. Second,people cut down many trees so that many animals have no home to live. Third, people even have wild animals for food. So the number of them is getting less and less.

     So what can we do?/So we should take measures to protect the endangered animals. First of all, I think the government should make rules on animals protection and set up national wildlife parks. What’s more,  we should also learn about wild animals. Finally, we never have animals for food.

     All in all, Protecting the animals is protecting ourselves. So let’s try our best to protect the wild animals.

 补充：All in all. Animals are our friends. If everyone can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more and more beautiful.

Heal the world.  Make it a better place.For you and for me. And the entire the world. In a word, we should stop existing and start living.

四：绿色出行

As we all know, more and more people ride bikes when they go out nowadays. With the development of technology, bike sharing comes into people’s lives. It has become more and more popular.

       It’s known that riding bikes has many advantages.First of all, It’s helpful to keep the air clean.What’s more, riding a bicycle is good for our health and weight loss.In addition, we can enjoy the scenery along the way, which can make us relaxed.Finally, it also helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of riding bikes.

       All in all, I hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment in this way. I believe the air around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.

话题十：有意义的生活

青少年是国家和民族的希望，是建设祖国社会主义现代化的未来栋梁。拥有一个有意义、有价值的人生，对青少年自己和整个民族都具有重要意义。某英文网站正在开展以“Live a more meaningful life”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据下面图表、写作提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

Live a more meaningful life

Life is a gift. Everyone has a different life. Having a meaningful life is very important to us.What should we do to live a more meaningful life?

There are a sea of ways.First of all, we should be caring and responsible. So we can go to the old people’s home to communicate with the old as a volunteer. What’s more, we should be hard-working. Practice makes perfect.We are supposed to review what have learned frequently and keep practicing. Then, we can have many hobbies such as  drawing ,dancing and singing to make our life more meaningful and colorful. Last but not least, we should be healthy. We are expected to do some exercises , including running, swimming and jumping. To be healthy, we should do exercise more and eat more vegetables.

All in all, We will be happy to have such a more colorful and meaningful life. So we should try my best to make it possible to have a better life!

话题十一： 实施乡村振兴战略，建设富裕美丽新农村

以“家乡的变化”为话题写一篇发言稿，介绍一下你家乡的变化，向同学们发出

倡议，号召大家行动起来，为展示家乡的风采贡献自己的力量。

要点提示：

1．在过去，我的家乡并不大，环境很好，人们过着质朴的生活；

2．在过去，街道狭窄，交通不方便；

3．现在发生了巨大的变化。人们的生活改变了，好多人都买了车，生活幸福，但是家乡的环境越来越糟糕；

4．我们必须采取行动，减少污染，我相信，在不久的将来，我的家乡会变得越来越好，越来越美。

Great Changes in My Hometown

  My home town is a beautiful village in the south of China. It has a population of 50000.

It has changed a lot in the last decades.I used to live in a small town. There used to be many trees .You can see different kinds of fishes swimming in the clear water.(对环境好的具体描述) People lived a simple life.  At that time, the only street was narrow. It's not convenient for people to go out. 

Great changes have taken place here. You can see different kinds of cars and buses are running in the wide streets. People  live a happy life.However/But, the pollution is becoming more and more worse. 

 In my opinion, we must do something to stop pollution. There is only one earth. If everyone can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, our hometown will become more and more beautiful.