高中英语外研版 (2019)选择性必修 第一册Unit 2 Onwards and upwards精品ppt课件

Period Five　Writing—Writing about an experience

本单元的写作目标是“写一次经历”。属于记叙文写作，写时需要注意以下三个方面：

1．介绍这次经历发生的背景；

2．具体介绍这次经历；

3．介绍自己对这次经历的感受。

1．Several days ago，I attended a party...

2．Last Sunday，my friends and I went to...

3．It was very hard for me...

4．To my surprise，it is so interesting...

5．This experience made me become more...

6．From then on，I didn’t want to do...

7．In a word，I will not...

8．I got an important lesson from this experience...

 假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示描述自己的一次经历。

1．大约六岁时，在野外独自玩耍时迷路了；天突然下起了大雨，你非常紧张，不知道该怎么办。这时一位女士从你身边走过。她询问了你的情况，然后把你送回了家。

2．你的父母非常感激那位女士，你从此也知道了：做人要乐于助人，帮助别人会使自己更快乐。

注意：

 1．词数80左右；

 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

审题

写作要求是介绍自己的一次经历。写作时应注意下面几点：

1．确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，写作中应注意记叙文的常规格式。

2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。

3．主体人称：由于是介绍自己的一次经历，所以应该以第一人称为主。

谋篇

第一段：开门见山，引入话题——介绍自己难忘的经历；

第二段：具体介绍这次经历；

第三段：说明自己对这次经历的感受。

核心词汇

1．独自玩耍play alone

2．迷路get lost

3．正在那时just then

4．带某人回家take sb.home

5．匆忙in a hurry

6．从那以后from then on

7．处于困难中in trouble/need

连词成句

1．我忘不了发生在我六岁左右的一件事情。(forget; happen)

I will not forget the incident that happened when I was about six years old.

2．我在大雨中迷路了，这让我非常紧张。(get lost；nervous)

I got lost in the heavy rain and it made me very nervous.

3．我站在那里，不知道做什么。(stand)

I stood there and I didn’t know what to do.

4．看到我站在雨里哭，她把我送回了家。(see；take)

When she saw me standing  in the rain crying，she took me to my home.

句式升级

1．用非谓语动词改写句1。

I will not forget the incident happening when I was about six years old.

2．用定语从句改写句2。

I got lost in the heavy rain，which made me very nervous.

3．用非谓语动词改写句3。

I stood there，not knowing what to do.

4．用非谓语动词改写句4。

Seeing me standing in the rain crying，she took me to my home.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

 I will not forget the incident happening when I was about six years old.One day，I was playing alone outdoors.Suddenly，it began to rain heavily.I got lost in the heavy rain，which made me very nervous.I stood there，not knowing what to do.Just then a woman walked past.Seeing me standing in the rain crying，she took me to my home.When we arrived home，we were both wet.My parents were very grateful and asked her to stay to have dinner，but she left in a hurry.

 From then on，I decided to try my best to help those in need.I’m sure that I will be happier if I help others.