2022-2023学年河南省平顶山实验高中高三下期入学测试英语试题（Word版含答案，无听力试题）

这是一份2022-2023学年河南省平顶山实验高中高三下期入学测试英语试题（Word版含答案，无听力试题），共10页。
2022-2023学年高三入学检测 英语试题
第一部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。
A
Winners Club
You choose to be a winner!
    The Winners Club is a bank account specially designed for teenagers． It has been made to help you better manage your money． The Winners Club is a transaction account(交易账户） where you receive a key-card so you can get to your money 24/7—that’s 24 hours a day, 7 days a week!
    It’s a club with impressive features for teenagers:
No account keeping fees!
    You’re no millionaire so we don’t expect you to pay large fees． In fact, there are no account keeping or transaction fees!
Excellent interest rates!
    You want your money grow． The Winners Club has a good rate of interest which gets even better if you make at least two deposits(储蓄）without taking them out in a month．
Convenient
    Teenagers are busy—we get that． You may never need to come to a bank at all． With the Winners Club you can choose to use handy tellers and to bank from home using the phone and the Internet．．． You can have money directly deposited into your Winners Club account． This could be your pocket money or your pay from your part-time job!
Mega magazine included
    Along with your regular report, you will receive a FREE magazine full of good ideas to make even more of your money． There are also fantastic offers and competitions only for Winners Club members．
    The Winners Club is a great choice for teenagers． And it is so easy to join． Simply fill in an application form． You will have to get permission from your parent or guardian(so we can organize that cool key-card) but it is easy． We can’t wait to hear from you． It’s the best way to choose to be a winner!
1．What can we learn from the Winners Club?
A．Special gifts are ready for parents． B．The bank opens only on work days．
C．Services are convenient for its members． D．Fees are necessary for the account keeping．
2．The Winners Club provides magazines which _______．
A．encourage spending B． are free to all teenagers
C．are full of adventure stories D． help to make more of your money．
3．What is the purpose of this text?
A．To set up a club． B．To provide part-time jobs．
C．To organize key-cards． D．To introduce a new banking service．
B
Jane Goodall is a famous animal behaviorist and has spent many years observing the behavior of chimps in their native habitat． Jane Goodall was born on April 3rd, 1934 in London, England． Her childhood dream was to spend time with animals in the wild． In particular, she was drawn to Africa and the dream of seeing wild animals in their native habitat． It was an unusual dream for a girl at the time, but her parents said to her, “We know it's different, but we are at your back．”
In 1956, Jane jumped at the opportunity to travel to a friend's farm in Kenya． It was there that Jane met the famous anthropologist, Dr Louis S．B． Leakey． Leakey was impressed with Jane's passion and knowledge of Africa and wildlife．
In 1960, Leakey and Jane began an important study of wild chimps by Lake Tanganyika． The chimps showed some fascinating habits to the group． These included meat eating, which is completely different from the previous opinion about chimps． Also, Jane saw chimps making tools to catch insects． This was an important discovery because, at the time, it was assumed only humans made tools．
The study of chimps in their native habitat was a significant event, leading to many new observations． Jane's first article My life among wild chimpanzees was published in National Geographic in 1963． Some aspects of the study were challenged． For example, some feared her decision to feed the animals might have distorted their behavior and made them more aggressive(好斗的)．
In 1977, Jane set up the Jane Goodall Institute which promotes plans to look after chimps and their environment． The institute has many networks and programs all over the world．
4．How did Jane Goodall's parents respond to her childhood dream?
A． They supported her． B． They laughed at her．
C． They worried about her． D． They got angry with her．
5．What did people think of chimps previously?
A． Chimps were used to living alone．
B． Chimps were good at making tools．
C． Chimps were thought not to eat meat．
D． Chimps liked eating insects very much．
6．What does the underlined word “distorted” in the last but one paragraph mean?
A． Affected． B． Trained． C． Protected． D． Controlled．
7．Which can be a suitable title for the text?
A． The secrets of chimpanzees
B． The mysteries of African land
C． Jane Goodall—a friend of the wild world
D． Jane Goodall—a woman living with chimps
C
In November 2020, US climber Emily Harrington, 34, took on El Capitan—a 3000 foot(914 meters) rock formation(岩层) in Yosemite National Park, US． She accomplished her feat within a day and became the first woman to free-climb the Golden Gate route．
    It used to take weeks for rock climbers to reach the top of El Capitan, even with the help of a partner and climbing aids． In recent years, only three people—all men—had free-climbed the Golden Gate route on El Capitan in 24 hours, according to CNN．
    Although rock climbing has long been dominated by men, the number of female climbers has been rising in recent years． Even in the pandemic, many of them have made great achievements and pushed human limits．
    “I spent a lot of years feeling like I didn't belong, like maybe I hadn't earned my place to be a Yosemite climber,” she told the San Francisco Chronicle． “But throughout this experience I learned that there is no belonging or not belonging, no formula to achievement up there．”
    The rising number of female climbing enthusiasts should come as no surprise． According to the website Climbing．com． “Climbing is one of the few sports where it's possible to level the playing field． Women's flexibility helps offset anything we may lack in strength, bridging the gap between the sexes．”
    Legendary Austrian climber Angela Eiter is another strong female figure in the climbing world． In 2020 Eiter made news as she climbed the unknown face she calls Madame Ching in her home country．
    According to the New York Post, the route was free of traces． That means Eiter has to search for the holds and predict how the moves were going to play out by herself． Worse still, the rock there is really fragile and some holds had to be fixed with glue． But after intensive indoor training to visualize(构思) the route and build up her strength, Eiter, who stands 154 cm high and weighs 46 kg, made it．
    “I am not the strongest woman and I am very small, and I am happy that I can show other women that they can also do it,” she told the New York Post．
    As Climbing．com noted, this battle with oneself embodies(体现) the spirit behind the sport． “Maybe that's why more women feel more empowered to find their own way, break free of the mold(模式) and climb what we want to climb． Women have decided to follow their hearts．”
8．What did Emily Harrington accomplish?
A． She was the first person to take on El Capitan successfully．
B． She reached the top of El Capitan within a day．
C． She free-climbed the Golden Gate route within weeks．
D． She climbed the Golden Gate route with climbing aids．
9．The underlined word “offset” in paragraph 5 can be replaced by ________．
A． bring about B． make up for C． build up D． make for
10．What difficulty did Angela Eiter meet with when climbing Madame Ching?
A． There were no traces to follow． B． There were no holds to use．
C． Her prediction about the route was wrong．D． she didn't bring necessities like glue．
11．What can we learn from Harrington and Eiter?
A． Work hard to be a role model． B． Find where you belong．
C． Always battle others． D． Be brave and pursue your goal．
D
Recently I read an article written by Edan Lepucki and titled "Don't Play With Your Kids． Seriously．" It makes a case for parents consciously withdrawing from their children’s playtime until those children are able to play independently all the time．
According to Edan Lepucki, there are two main reasons． One is that it allows the child time and space to delve into wonderful imaginary worlds that he or she is not able to enter in quite the same way if a parent is present．
The second reason is that it gives parents a break． With everything else we do on a daily basis-feeding, cleaning, disciplining, educating, transporting, and more—it's simply too much to be expected to entertain our kids actively, as well． Lepucki describes a sense of exhaustion to which I can relate．
"The constant quarrelling was so exhausting that my husband and I didn't have the energy to play the way my son preferred． After 1 scolded him, I felt guilty and frustrated"
Adopting a no-play approach changed everything, improving both the relationship with her son and her own mental wellbeing, and it has done the same for me, with my own three children．
I have another reason for choosing this approach: It builds greater independence in children． Children play differently when adults are present． They tend to rely on adults to solve conflicts，whereas when they're on their own, they have no choice but to rise to the occasion and deal with any issue．
Lenore Skenazy, the author of "Free Range Kids", told me that when adults are present, kids act like kids, but when adults leave, kids become adults． She said, "If there's an adult there, they will take over． So adults need to step back．"
Take this as your excuse to stop playing with your kids． Know that it's perfectly OK to say no, to admit you need a break, and to encourage your children to play without you． Then sit back and observe the clever, imaginative little humans you've created at play． It's a most satisfying feeling．
12．What does the underlined part "delve into" in paragraph 2 probably mean?
A． Develop． B． Change． C． Explore． D． Preserve．
13．How does Lepucki benefit from her parenting style?
A． Her relaxing time is increased． B． She becomes more independent．
C． She makes more adult friends． D． Her physical health has improved．
14．Why is Lenore Skenazy mentioned?
A． To prove kids' poor independence． B． To provide evidence for an opinion．
C． To show kids' changeable character． D． To explain parents' bad effect on kids．
15．Which can be the best title for the text?
A． It Provides Us with Many Benefits to Play Alone
B． Parents Should Help Develop Kids' Independence
C． Refusal Can Create a Harmonious Family Atmosphere
D． It Won't Hurt Your Kids If You Stop Playing with Them
第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
As we all know, friendship is important in our daily life． A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness． But how to make friends is still difficult to some of us． 16______
Be friendly to others． 17______You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be． Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his look and clothes．
Be reliable． If you and your friend agree to meet somewhere, don’t be late． If you’re not going to make it on time or make it at all, call them as soon as you realize it． 18______ Be someone that people know they can depend on．
19______Listen carefully to what people say, remember important details about them (their names, their likes and dislikes), ask questions about their interests, and just take the time to learn more about them．
Encourage your friends． 20______A friend to all is a friend to none． Never make fun of or laugh at your friends in front of others． You should come to support them．
A． Be a good listener．
B． When you say you’ll do something, do it．
C． A true friend always gives courage to his friends．
D． Never leave your friend when he is in trouble．
E． The following information can give you some tips．
F． Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return．
G． He will remain with them in both good as well as bad times．
第二部分 语言知识运用（共两节，满分45分）
第一节 完形填空（共20小题；每小题1．5分，满分30分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
A Welcome Gift
    Dario and his mother loved their new apartment． The living room was large enough for their piano． That night, the two of them    21    side by side at the piano． They played jazz music to celebrate their new home． The loud    22    filled the room and made them feel very happy．
    The next morning,    23    , their happiness disappeared． Someone had left a    24    under their door during the night． One of their neighbors had written to complain (抱怨) about the sound of the piano． Dario’s mother asked the building superintendent (管理员) if he knew anything about it． Rut he said that they were all    25    people and he couldn't imagine any of them had done that． Later that morning, Dario suggested that they write a letter to their    26    and apologize for their playing．
    "Maybe we could go and    27    everyone in person," his mother said．
    "What if we invited them to come here for a    28    instead?" Dario asked．
    They both loved the    29    ． Over the next few days, they sent out invitations and prepared desserts   30    their guests． They decorated the apartment with streamers(彩带) and party lights．
    Finally, the day of the party    31    ． Some guests brought presents． Others brought flowers． Some even brought desserts to    32    One woman, Mrs Gilbert,    33    Dario's mother with a book of piano music by Chopin．
    "I heard you playing the other night," she said． "The sounds woke me out of bed． I    34    that you might play like this every night． So I wrote a short note． I hope you don't think I disliked the playing．"
    Dario's mother smiled at Mrs Gilbert． "I think maybe we    35    you an apology," she said． "I didn't    36    how late it was when we were playing． Maybe we should play some quieter music at night．"
    "You play, you play!" Mrs Gilbert said． "I like what you play! Just not so loud at night．" She pointed to the book she had given them． "These songs are not such    37    music．"
    "These songs are beautiful music," Dario’s mother said． "We will be    38    to play them in the evening．"
    "And we won’t play so loud or late!" Dario said． He was already looking forward to    39    the new music． More than that, however, he was happy to see the big smile on his mother's face． It gave him a feeling of    40    and made him feel that they were home at last．
21．A．sat     B．stood     C．lay     D．walked
22．A．voice     B．ring     C．music     D．cry
23．A．therefore     B．however     C．otherwise     D．instead
24．A．note     B．poster     C．bill     D．report
25．A．proud     B．rich     C．lucky     D．nice
26．A．neighbors     B．friends     C．relatives     D．audience
27．A．blame     B．instruct     C．question     D．visit
28．A．party     B．concert     C．show     D．play
29．A．experience     B．idea     C．performance     D．action
30．A．to     B．with     C．for     D．from
31．A．continued     B．arrived     C．passed     D．finished
32．A．order     B．sell     C．share     D．advertise
33．A．treated     B．presented     C．helped     D．served
34．A．promised     B．admitted     C．agreed     D．worried
35．A．give     B．send     C．offer     D．owe
36．A．realize     B．remember     C．understand     D．accept
37．A．sweet     B．strange     C．funny     D．aloud
38．A．brave     B．sorry     C．happy     D．afraid
39．A．changing     B．practicing     C．recording     D．writing
40．A．equality     B．freedom     C．warmth     D．sympathy
第二节（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
The Universal Beijing Resort, 41_______(current) the largest in scale worldwide, was open to the public on Monday, which coincided with this year’s Mid-Autumn Festival holiday from Sept． 19 to 21． The film-themed lands, rides and shows, such as the Transformers Metrobase and the Harry Potter rides, and Kung Fu Panda Land of Awesomeness among other Universal “firsts”, 42_______ (be) the most popular attractions during the opening so far．
In the Hollywood zone, movie lovers will not only see a recreation of the Hollywood Walk of Fame, 43_______ get a behind-the-scenes film making experience at the film studios, 44_______ was created by Hollywood film director Steven Spielberg and Chinese filmmaker Zhang Yimou． More than a magical land for cinephiles (影迷), the resort is also a foodie heaven with a total of 80 restaurants and food stalls 45_______ (serve) all kinds of food that one can name from different movies．
46_______ the first Universal Studios theme park in China, UBR has many China-related elements． For example, the Kung Fu Panda Land of Awesomeness, 47_______ (inspire) by DreamWorks Animation’s Film, is Universal’s first “land” with such a theme． The land has small bridges and flowing water． Lanterns are hung in many places． Accompanied with Chinese music, visitors can eat 48_______ (variety) of Chinese desserts in restaurants that look like ancient buildings．
Building such an 49_______ (impress) park isn’t easy． But Chinese 50_______ (wise) and power help push it forward． It is the fifth worldwide for Universal Studios and the third in Asia, after Japan and Singapore．
第三部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
    增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
    删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
    修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
    注意: ​1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
              2． 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I visited Mountain Dragon with several classmate today． We arrived at the foot of Mountain Dragon on half past nine and spend nearly one hour in climbing． We could see flowers and grass all the way up and the air in the mountain smelt very freshly． We did not feel tiring at all． When we got to the top, and we were all wet with sweat． We sat under a tall tree to have rest, drinking some water and eating anything． There were several temples in the mountain． Monks (僧侣) in a temple was singing． We watched for a longer time because we had never seen this before． It was really a beautiful mountain．
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她写一封信，推荐一位老师。
要点：
1．介绍你所推荐的老师；
2．推荐该老师的原因；
3．祝愿她拜师成功。
注意：
1．词数100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：民族舞folk dance；推荐recommend
Dear Emily,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
答案以及解析
1．答案：C
2．答案：D
3．答案：D
4．答案：A
解析：细节理解题。根据第一段句子but her parents said to her, "We know it's different, but we are at your back．"但她的父母对她说:“我们知道这是不同的,但我们支持你。”所以她的童年梦想得到了父母的支持,故选A。
5．答案：C
解析：推理判断题。根据第三段句子These included meat eating , which is completely different from the previous opinion about chimps其中包括吃肉,这与之前关于黑猩猩的观点完全不同。由此可以推断先前黑猩猩被认为不吃肉的。故选C。
6．答案：A
解析：猜测词义题。根据后文made them more aggressive(好斗的),使它们更具攻击性。由此可知一些人担心她喂养这些动物的决定,让它们攻击人类,这可能会影响了他们的行为,单词应该是影响的意思,A． Affected影响;B． Trained训练;C． Protected保护;D． Controlled控制。故选A。
7．答案：C
解析：标题归纳题。本文写了Jane Goodall是一位灵长类的动物研究专家,她致力于研究野生动物黑猩猩以及取得的巨大成就。A．黑猩猩的秘密;B．非洲土地的奥秘;C．简·古道尔——一位野生世界的朋友;D．简·古德尔——一位与黑猩猩生活在一起的妇女。简·古道尔——野生世界的朋友。符合主旨,故选C。
8．答案：B
9．答案：B
10．答案：A
11．答案：D
12．答案：C
13．答案：A
14．答案：B
15．答案：D
16-20答案： EFBAC
解析：16此空出现在第一段，而且下面的内容就是关于如何交朋友的具体的方法。故答窦为E，意为：下面的内容可以给你一些建议。正好起到了承上启下的作用。17联系本段的小标题，be friendly to others，可知本段主要讲述的是对他人要友好。在所有选项中，选项F建议人们：对他人微笑，你也肯定会得到一个微笑。这正是友好的一个方式，故答案为F。18联系本段的主要内容，再联系下文的Be someone that people know they can depend on．可知讲述的是要成为能够依靠的人。而通过If you and your friend agree to meet somewhere, don't be late．可知想要成为这样的人，就应该能说到做到，符合这一内容的只有选项B。故答案为B。19本题考查小标题部分，只有选项A和选项C符合条件。通过阅读后面的内容可知，本段讲的是仔细听别人讲的话。故答案为A，做一位好的听众。20通过小标题可知这段讲述的是鼓励自己的朋友，而本段最后一句说的是支持朋友。故答案为G，表示真正的朋友无论遇到好事还是坏事都会永远伴随你左右。
答案：21-25 ACBAD 26-30 ADABC 31-35 BCBDD 36-40 ADCBC
解析：21．根据空后的"Side by side at the piano"可知,他们应该是坐(sat)在一起的。
22．根据上文中的"They played jazz music"可知,这里应该是吵闹的音乐(music)充满整个房间。
23．根据上文中的"made them feel very happy"以及空后的"their happiness disappeared"可知,此处应为转折关系,故用 however。
24．根据下文中的"One of their neighbors had written to complain (抱怨) about the sound of the piano．"知,指一张便条(note)。
25．根据下文中的"he couldn't imagine any of them had done that"可知,管理员认为邻居们都很友善(nice)。
26．根据上文一位邻居留便条抱怨可知,他们应该是给邻居们(neighbor)写信致歉。
27．根据"could go"和"in person"可知,这里是表示"拜访(visit)每一个人"。
28．根据下文中的"party lights"和"the day of the party"可知．他们是想举办一个聚会(party)。
29．根据上文Dario的建议知,他和母亲都喜欢这个主意(idea)。
30．prepare sb． for sth．意思是"为某人准备某物",这里指他们为邻居们准备了一些甜点。
31．根据下文中的"Some guess brought presents"可知,最后,聚会那天到了(arrived )。
32．因为是参加聚会,所以邻居带甜点是用来分享 (share)的。
33．treat"款待";present"赠送";help"帮助";serve"服务"。present sb． with sth．意思是"赠给某人某物",根据语境,这里表示Mrs． Gilbert给Dario的母亲带来了一本书。
34．根据下文中的"you might play like this everynight"可知,这里应该是说Mrs． Gilliert当时很担忧(worried)。
35．Dario的母亲认为他们应该向Mrs． Gilbert道歉。owe sb． sth．"欠某人某物",符合语境。
36．根据上文语境可知,表示他们当时没有意识到(realize)他们那么晚还在弹钢琴。
37．根据上文中的"Just not so loud"可知,这些歌曲不是那么吵闹(loud)。
38．根据上文语境可知,他们将会非常高兴(happy)在晚上弹奏这音乐。
39．因为是新的音乐,所以Dario很期盼练习(practicing)。
40．根据下文中的"made him feel that they were home at last"可知,融入新的生活,应该有温暖(warmth)的感觉。
41-50答案： currently have been but which serving As inspired varieties impressive wisdom
解析：41考查副词。句意:目前全球规模最大的北京环球度假酒店于周一向公众开放,这与今年9月19日至21日的中秋节假期相吻合。修饰句子,所以用副词,故填currently。
42考查时态和主谓一致。句意:电影主题的土地、游乐设施和表演,如《变形金刚都市》和《哈利波特》游乐设施,以及《功夫熊猫惊悚之地》等全球"第一”,是开幕式至今最受欢迎的景点。so far常和现在完成时态连用,主语为and连接的复数名词,故填have been。
43考查连词。句意:在好莱坞片区,电影爱好者不仅可以看到好莱坞星光大道的再现,还可以在由好莱坞电影导演史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格和中国电影制片人张艺谋创建的电影制片厂体验幕后电影制作。 not only．．．but also不但……而且,故填but。
44考查非限制性定语从句。句意:在好莱坞片区,电影爱好者不仅可以看到好莱坞星光大道的再现,还可以在由好莱坞电影导演史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格和中国电影制片人张艺谋创建的电影制片厂体验幕后电影制作。先行词为物,在非限制性定语从句中作主语,故填which。
45考查现在分词。句意:该度假村不仅是影迷的神奇之地,还是美食天堂,共有80家餐厅和食品摊位,提供各种各样的食物,人们可以从不同的电影中找到它们的名字。 serve和它所修饰的词之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词作后置定语,故填serving。
46考查介词。句意:作为中国第一个环球影城主题公园,环球影城拥有许多与中国相关的元素。表示"作为",后跟名词,所以用介词as,故填As。
47考查过去分词。句意:例如,受梦工厂动画电影启发的《功夫熊猫乐园》就是环球影城第一个具有此类主题的"乐园"。 inspire和主语之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词作状语,故填inspired。
48考查名词。句意:这片土地上有小桥和流水。许多地方都挂着灯笼。在中国音乐的伴奏下,游客可以在看起来像古建筑的餐厅里品尝各种各样的中国甜点。 varieties of=a variety of各种各样的,故填varieties。
49考查形容词。句意:建设这样一个令人印象深刻的公园并不容易,但中国的智慧和力量推动了它的发展。作定语修饰名词,所以用形容词,故填impressive。
50考查名词。句意:这是环球影城在全球排名第五,在亚洲排名第三,仅次于日本和新加坡。和power并列作主语,所以用名词,表示抽象概念,为不可数名词,故填wisdom。
第三部分 写作 答案：
I visited Mountain Dragon with several today． We arrived at the foot of Mountain Dragon half past nine and nearly one hour in climbing． We could see flowers and grass all the way up and the air in the mountain smelt very ． We did not feel at all． When we got to the top, we were all wet with sweat． We sat under a tall tree to have rest, drinking some water and eating ． There were several temples in the mountain． Monks (僧侣) in a temple singing． We watched for a time because we had never seen this before． It was really a beautiful mountain．
解析：1． 将第一句中classmate改为classmates several的意思是"一些"，是修饰可数名词的形容词，而且classmate是可数名词，根据句意可知是指"和一些同学"，所以这里要用它的复数形式，即classmates。
2． 将第二句中的on改为at 句中的"half past nine"是指时间9: 30，在表示具体时间前面要用介词at，意为"在九点半"，因此这里不能用on，要改为at。
3． 将第二句中的spend改为spent 由第二句的前半部分arrived可知,句子使用的是一般过去时，所以这里的谓语动词spend,要用过去式spent。
4． 将第三句中的freshly改为fresh 由于smell为感官动词，意思是"闻起来"，感官动词后面只能加形容词做修饰，因此这里的freshly,要改为形容词fresh，即"新鲜的"。
5． 将第四句中的tiring改为tired 这里句子的意思是"我们根本没有感觉累"。这里的主语是人，而形容人很累要用形容词tired, tiring只能修饰除人以外的事物，所以这里不能使用。
6． 将第五句中的and删去 这里句子是一个主从复合句, "When we got to the top"是时间状语从句，因为一个句子中不能没有主句，所以后面一定要是主句，因此要把and删去,这样后面的句子才能成为主句。
7． 在第六句中的have rest中间加a 根据句意可知，是"我们坐在一棵大树下休息"，have a rest是表示"休息"的固定搭配，中间不能缺少冠词a，所以这里要加上a。
8．将第六句中的anything改为something anything的意思是"任何事"，并且在用于疑问句或否定句时意思和something相同，即"某些事或一些事"，而something则是用于肯定句。因为第六句是一个肯定句，且句子中也不是说"吃任何东西"，因此这里要用something表示"一些"。
9．将第八句中的was改为were 根据句子意思可知，是"一所寺庙里的僧人们在唱歌"。句子中的主语是monks(僧人们) ，是复数形式，因此谓语不能用第三人称谓语形式，又因为文章通篇是使用一般过去时，所以要把表示单数的was改为表示复数的were。
10． 将倒数第二句中的longer改为long 根据句意可知，是"因为我们从来没来过这儿所以在这儿看了很长时间"。句子中没有表示两者的比较的意思，没有用来做对比的一方，所以这里的long不用比较级，因此只要用long。
答案：Dear Emily,
Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China．
I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you．
Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school． You know, I love folk dance． I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me． And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school． Her peacock dance is wonderful． She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me． Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching． I believe you will achieve a lot with her help．
I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen’s student．
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：1．词汇积累
喜欢：love→be fond of
极好的：excellent→superb
热情的：enthusiastic→passionate
此外：Besides =In addition to
2．句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you．
拓展句：I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher to you, who is Miss Chen,．