天津市和平区2020-2022年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

天津市和平区

2020-2022年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编

书面表达

2022年天津市和平区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

66. 假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。

（1）在一个寒冷的早晨，社区的人们在排队做核酸检测。

（2）你前面的一个小女孩看到医生们的手冻僵了，摘下自己的手套送给医生们。

（3）医生接受了小女孩的礼物，并表示他们只是做了自己应该做的事情。

（4）其他人也向医生们表达了谢意，并给他们送去了热水瓶和暖宝宝。

（5）你觉得……

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）不得使用真实姓名和学校名。

（3）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

（4）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。

参考词汇：核酸检测 nucleic acid testing         冻僵 be numb with cold

热水瓶 bottles full of hot water        暖宝宝 heating pads

On a cold morning people in our community...__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年天津市和平区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达(本大题15分)

86. 假如你是新疆某中学的一名学生；王老师是你班的一位援疆教师。在他回津前夕, 学校将为他举行欢送会。请你根据以下要点提示, 用英文写一篇欢送辞。

要点提示：

(1)王老师是天津人, 三年前来到我校教英语。

(2)他与我们相处融洽, 但对我们要求严格。

(3)这些年来我们深表感激。

(4)下星期他将离校回津, 祝他一路顺风。

要求：

(1)第3要点的内容须用一两句话展开合理想象, 适当发挥。

(2)词数：80-100 (欢送辞开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。

(3)要点齐全, 语句通顺、意思连贯。

参考词汇：对……感激be grateful to sb；旅程journey

Ladies and Gentlemen,

First of all, please allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. As we all know, Mr. Wang ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2020年天津市和平区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达

86. 假设你是托尼, 你的朋友Mike即将面临中考, 他深感压力巨大, 情绪低落, 影响学习。请你写一封信, 给他提一些有益的建议。

（1）学会放松自己（体育锻炼;听音乐）

（2）健康饮食, 少吃垃圾食品, 多吃水果蔬菜。

（3）充足睡眠, 课上不困, 大脑活跃。

（4）学会沟通, 遇到问题向师长寻求建议, 和朋友分享。

注意：

（1）短文应该包括所给内容要点, 可适当发挥, 使文章连贯

（2）词数80~100. 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear mike

I'm told that you are facing so big an exam that you feel stressed and down. As a result, it has an influence on your study. As your friend. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Tony

答案：

2022年天津市和平区中考二模英语试卷

【答案】     On a cold morning, people in our community is lining up for nucleic acid testing. A little girl in front of me, seeing that the doctors’ hands were numb with cold, took off her gloves and gave them to the doctors. The doctors accepted the girl’s gift and said they were just doing what they should do. Others also thanked the doctors and sent them bottles full of hot water and heating pads.

I think everyone in the community is warm-hearted. With them, I feel that this winter is no longer cold.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据内容提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍发生在身边的感人故事。

2.写作指导：本文应以第三人称为主；时态以一般过去式时为主。按照提示内容的五个细节进行写作，内容要写全，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。最后注意字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
2021年天津市和平区中考二模英语试卷

【答案】例文

Ladies and Gentlemen,

First of all, please allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. As we all know. Mr. Wang is from Tianjin. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is a kind man who is easy to get along with. And at the same time, he’s always strict with us in our study. All these years, he’s worked hard and tried his best to make his classes lively and interesting. With his great help, we’ve especially improved a lot in our English learning. All of us feel quite grateful to him.

Next week, Mr. Wang is leaving for Tianjin. Let’s wish him a pleasant journey.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如你是新疆某中学的一名学生，你们班的援疆教师王老师将要回天津了，学校要为他举行欢送会，要求你根据要点提示写一篇欢送辞；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，辅以第一人称；时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

2020年天津市和平区中考二模英语试卷

【答案】例文：

Dear Mike,

I’m told that you are facing so big an exam that you feel stressed and down. As a result, it has an influence on your study. As your friend, I’d like to offer you some suggestions.

First of all, you are supposed to relax yourself by taking exercise, listening to music and going for a walk. Meanwhile, you should have a healthy diet. Also, junk food will do harm to you, so you'd better eat less. Instead, eat more fruit and vegetables. At the same time, you must have plenty of sleep in order that you won’t feel sleepy in class. Therefore, your brain will be active as well. Above all, you’d better learn how to communicate. You can ask your parents and teachers for help when you have trouble and you can also share your happiness and sadness with your friends.

        Finally, I sincerely hope you can achieve success and keep healthy from the bottom of my heart.

Yours,

Tony

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示给迈克一些建议。

2.例文点评：例文主要用第二人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作，讲述建议叙述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：as a result；first of all；are supposed to；taking exercise；listening to music; have a healthy diet; do harm to; at the same time; plenty of; above all; from the bottom of my heart。

句型：that引导的宾语从句；so…that…引导的结果状语从句；you are supposed to do和you should do表示建议的句子；in order that引导的目的状语从句。