天津市南开区2020-2022年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

天津市南开区

2020-2022年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编

书面表达

2022年天津市南开区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

66. 假设你是大明。你打算在暑假里做一件有意义的事情，恰好动物救助中心正在招募志愿者，于是你用英文写了一封邮件发送给负责人Mr. Lee，阐述你想成为志愿者的理由。

参考词汇： Animal Helpers 动物救助中心    convenient 便利的

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear Mr. Lee,

I am a student I would like to

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Yours

Daming

2021年天津市南开区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

86. 假设你是玲玲, 平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点, 记述你的朋友小丽参加达人秀节目的事情, 并表达自己的想法。

（1）小丽喜爱唱歌。上周日参加了达人秀节目, 但是惨遭淘汰。

（2）小丽十分难过, 无心学习, 并打算放弃这个爱好。

（3）作为好朋友, 你很担心小雨。

（4）你告诉小丽要享受参加节目的乐趣, 不必太在意结果。

（5）你认为中学生应该……….

参考词汇∶talent show 达人秀节目    eliminate v. 淘汰

要求：

（1）词数∶ 80～100个。

（2）日记格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

（3） 要点齐全。行文连贯, 可适当发挥。

Fine                 Wednesday

My friend Xiao Li likes singing very much. Last Sunday she ______________________________

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2020年天津市南开区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

86. 假设你是某中学九年一班的学生李明。周日，你们班和九年二班打了一场篮球比赛。根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇日记。

 （1）一开始，你们打得很好，比分遥遥领先。

 （2）后来，你们放松了，二班将比分反超。

 （3）你们努力追赶，但为时已晚，最终二班赢得比赛。

 （4）赛后，你们感到很难过，有的同学开始互相责备。

 （5）你认为……

参考词汇：catch up (with) 追赶    blame责备

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Sunday            Fine

Today our class played against Class Two in the basketball game.__________

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答案：

2022年天津市南开区中考二模英语试卷

【答案】例文

Dear Mr. Lee,

I am a student. I would like to be a volunteer for the Animal Helpers Center. My name is Daming. I am writing to recommend myself according to the following points. Firstly, I love animals and I am willing to help them. Secondly, I keep a dog and a cat as my pet, so I have some experience of taking care of animals. Thirdly, I can take the subway to the center, it only takes about 15 minutes to get there. The transportation is convenient. Fourthly, as a student, I can go to the Animal Helpers Center three days a week. Besides, I know a little about medical knowledge.

If I am lucky enough to be chosen, I will try my best to help animals. Thank you for your patience.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文——电子邮件的写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，介绍自己想成为志愿者的理由，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。

2021年天津市南开区中考二模英语试卷

86．[例文]

Wednesday                                                               Fine

My friend Xiao Li likes singing very much. Last Sunday she attended a talent show but was eliminated. She was feeling down and not interested in study because of this. As her best friend, I was worried about her very much. I told her to enjoy the show and don’t take the result too seriously.

It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight. In addition, there are many ways to success, and only by working hard can we achieve our goals. As a teenager, we should spare no efforts to study and develop our interests at the same time, which, without doubt, will enrich our future life.

【详解】1.题干解读：本题为日记作文，要求根据题目所给要点，对小丽参加达人秀节目被淘汰导致闷闷不乐的事情继续叙述并发表自己的看法。题目要点要齐全，并可适当进行拓展。

2.写作指导：写作时应用第一、三人称，叙述过去发生的事情时应用过去时，其他部分可用现在时。作文应逻辑清晰、层次分明、要点齐全，注意不同时态的准确使用，单词拼写要正确。

2020年天津市南开区中考二模英语试卷

66．Sunday                                                                                                                                                                                                             Fine

Today our class played against Class Two in the basketball game. Our class made good preparations for it and made up our mind to beat them. At first, we played very well and the score was well ahead. Then we let down our guard and Class Two came back ahead. We tried to catch up, but it was too late. In the end, Class Two won the game. After the game, we felt sad. Some students began to blame each other. I think it is not right to blame others. It is a team work and everybody is responsible. Besides, it is just a game. We should train hard to win the next game.

【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求根据提示以李明的身份写一篇英语日记。审题可知，日记的内容是记叙自己班和二班进行的一次篮球比赛以及自己的感受。题目中的提示非常清楚，这也是学生们写作的一个提纲，学生们可以此为基础组织语言，增添一些细节信息，串联成文。短文应用第一人称、一般过去时和一般现在时记叙。

例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先内容完整，包含了题目中的所有信息，对自己的观点进行了补充，对细节进行了拓展，使内容更加丰富、具体；文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确；句式结构完整，简单句结构为主，穿插使用了并列句、宾语从句等，还使用了非谓语动词的结构。表达流畅，意思连贯。

高分亮点：

短语：make preparations；make up one’s mind；at first；catch up；in the end；each other。

句型：Then we let down our guard and Class Two came back ahead.；We tried to catch up, but it was too late.；I think it is not right to blame others.；We should train hard to win the next game.。