上海青浦区2022-2020年中考英语二模试题-作文

上海青浦区2022-2020年中考英语二模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2022·上海青浦·统考二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A decision I made”（请以“决定”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

在学习和生活中，我们会做出许多决定，有时会庆幸自己的决定是正确的，有时也会为错误的决定而懊恼后悔。这些决定都会让我们有所感悟。请结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。

注意：

1) 抄袭试卷中内容不得分；

2) 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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2．（2021·上海青浦·统考二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A valuable lesson” (请以“宝贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：在学习与生活中，我们会因为经历了一些事情，获得体验，增加阅历，吸取教训。请以“宝贵的一课”为题，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。

注意：

抄袭试卷中内容不得分。

文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

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二、材料作文

3．（2020·上海青浦·统考二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation.

情景提示：

在本学期居家学习期间，你是如何开展学习的？有什么收获？请结合你的学习经历和体验谈一谈。（除诗歌外文体不限。）

Expressions for references:

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参考答案：

1．范文：

A decision I made

Our lives are the sum of all our decision. The decisions we make today may play an important role in our future. When I was thirteen, my mother wanted me to be a girl who was good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. I think the decision I’ve made must be wise one.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“A decision I made”为题，叙述自己所做过的决定，以及自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且把故事发生的背景、起因和过程叙述完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。

2．例文：

A valuable lesson

During our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons, because they can taught something important about ourselves. As for me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.        

During the summer vacation of my seventh grade, our class went to to an orphan home in our city to help the children there. At first, we gave away some meaningful story books and stationery to them. Then we talked about our school life to them. I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. And I even showed some children some skills which I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.

That volunteer work really taught me a lesson, which I will never forget. I felt the truth of those words, which I never understood before that: “It is more blessed to give than to receive.” That day, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident and outgoing to communicate with others. More importantly, it made me realize that giving is receiving.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“宝贵的一课”为题结合自己的经历，并谈谈对这次经历的感受。要求不少于60词。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，讲述自己的经历用一般过去时。可分三段进行写作：第一段引出这次经历；第二段具体描述这次经历；最后一段收尾，表达自己的感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

3．During this term, we mainly study at home because of the epidemic. We take online courses and watch video lectures to gain the knowledge. Besides, our teachers organize Wechat groups to help us discuss the problems and answer our questions. Through the way, we students can share the experience and follow the advice. I think this is very hard for me because it requires a strong self-learning ability which I desperately lack. So it is also an opportunity for me to improve myself.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写自己居家学习期间的学习方式以及收获。材料给出了相关的内容，学生需要把这些内容整合到一起即可，注意要符合逻辑。

2.例文点评：例文采用一段式，主要用一般现在时进行描述。前半部分描述上课方式，以及老师的帮助等。后半部分描述自己的收获。文章行文通顺，符合逻辑。

3.高分亮点：

短语：because of；help sb. do；self-learning ability。

句型：because引导原因状语从句，which引导定语从句；it is adj. for sb. to do sth.。