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书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅰ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考（含答案解析）
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这是一份书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅰ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考（含答案解析），共35页。试卷主要包含了材料作文，电子邮件，书信作文，讲稿等内容，欢迎下载使用。
书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅰ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．（2022·江苏·无锡市）中宣部评选出了2021年度十大时代楷模（Role Models of the Times），”燃灯校长”(Lamp Burning Principal) 张桂梅名列其中。无论是过去作为任课老师或班主任，还是现在担任校长，她身患疾病依然勤奋耕耘。请你以”The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei” 为题写一篇短文，简要介绍她的事迹，并谈谈自己的感想。
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数100个左右，文章开头在答题卡上已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 思维导图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
4. 省略号处须作适当发挥，感想部分为2-3句。
The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei
The model I admire most is Zhang Guimei.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2022·江苏扬州）升入初三后，你又结识了一些朋友，你对谁印象最深刻呢？请你以“The friend who has impressed me most”为题写一篇英语短文来给大家介绍一下吧。
提示：
(1) What is he/she like?
(2) What art form does he/she like best? And why?
(3) What type of TV programs does he/she like best? And why?
(4) How does he/she influence you? ( one point)
(5) What do you think of him/her?
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(2) 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
(3) 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
(4) 词数100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022·江苏淮安）临近期末，学校将在学习小组内开展年终自评和组评活动，假如你是Sunshine小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，对你的组员Daniel进行评价。
Name
Daniel（一个十五岁的初三学生）。
Character
聪明、勤奋、勇敢、乐于助人。
Hobbies
看电影；最喜欢的电影明星成龙，因为……
Honour
大部分精力投放到学习中，取得了很大进步。
擅长跑步，校运会赛跑第一名。
帮助警方破获绑架案，获得校见义勇为奖（Award for Bravery）
Problems
面临考试感到压力，缺少睡眠……
Your suggestions
……
注意：1. 词数：80-100词，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 2. 句子结构紧凑，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。
Daniel is a member of my team called Sunshine.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2022·江苏·淮安市）近期，《中国日报》对“双减”政策执行情况走访了一些初中学校，并做了调查。请根据表格中的调查情况，用英语写一篇调查报告，并谈谈你的看法。
作业量
作业时长
假日安排
课外活动
过 去
多
……（自拟）
周末和节假日补课
少而乏味
现在
较少
不超过1个半小时
不补课
丰富多彩，如：参加读书社团、唱歌、跳舞、绘画、打球
你的看法
……（至少写出两点）
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2. 内容必须包括表格中的提示要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 词数在80—100之间。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：补课 have extra classes
Recently, China Daily has made a survey on carrying out “double reduction” policy. Here is the result.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2022·江苏扬州）时光荏苒，毕业季来临。假如你们学校校报组织题为“校园生活”的英语征文活动，内容可以是回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。请选择其中之一，并根据提示写一篇短文。
School life in the past three years
School life in the coming three years
· your hobby or interest
· activities you took part in and your progress
· your friends and teachers
· your dream or plan
· activities you hope to join in and the reasons
· teachers and classmates you hope to meet
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括你选择的校园生活的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022·江苏盐城）“双减”, 即有效减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。最近你校英文校刊就实施”双减”政策后如何规划自己的学习和课余生活, 向全体九年级学生征求建议。请根据要点提示写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右（文章题目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数）;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息, 并作适当发挥。
参考词汇：双减政策 the Double Reduction Policy
How to get used to the new policy?
It is really good news that the Double Reduction Policy has been carried out. However, we have to face new challenges. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2022·江苏宿迁）寒假即将到来，请以My favourite time of year题，根据以下的中文提示写一篇文章，介绍一年当中你最喜欢的一段时光。写作要点如下：
最喜欢的时光
寒假
最想做的事情
1.看Audrey Hepburn的电影，因为欣赏她在电影和慈善领域的成就；
2.看各种纪录片，可以更多了解大自然和真实生活的事件；
3.边看书边聆听谭盾的音乐，他的音乐使人感到平静。
喜欢寒假的原因
自拟两点。
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3.词数：100左右；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My favourite time of year
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2021·江苏无锡）生命，对于每个人来说都只有一次。注意安全，就是珍惜生命的一种有效途径，我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？ TEENS正在举办以“Protect Ourselves, Cherish（珍爱）Our Lives”为题的征文活动，请根据导图提示，写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。
注意事项：1. 短文须包含提示内容并适当发挥，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在90个左右，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Life is only once for everybody. It’s important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
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二、电子邮件
9．（2022·江苏徐州）假如你是李华，在国外某购物平台购买了几件服饰，收到实物以后你发现了几个问题。请你根据以下提示，给该购物平台写一封邮件，说明这一情况。
1. T恤衫颜色跟平台图片里展示的完全不一样；
2. 牛仔裤的尺码标的是中号，但明显偏小；
3. 运动鞋的问题：……
4. 你的诉求：……
注意:
1. 邮件需包含以上所有要点。
2. 词数：90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出（见答题卡），不计入总词数。
3. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I ordered some clothes from you last month, but there are some problems and I’m really disappointed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you should be more serious about your business.
Truly,
Li Hua
10．（2022·江苏·盱眙县）目前，新冠疫情在全球持续爆发。假定你是张阳，你澳大利亚的笔友 Alice 给你写了一封信，想了解你在疫情期间的一些情况。请认真阅读以下邮件，根据信中的内容以及你的实际情况用英语进行回复。
To: Zhang yang @.china.com
From: Alice@australia.com
Subject: activities at home
Dear Zhang yang,Because of the outbreak of CDVID-19, I am stuck at home. I hear you also have to stay at home. At first, I feel a little bored. But later, I find reading is a good way to pass the time. Would you please share your experiences at home with me?
●Do you have a good time at the Spring Festival of 2021? What do you do?
●Do you have online classes? What subjects do you have? How do you like them?
●How do you do shopping?
●What do you eat every day? Do you have a healthy diet? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
All the best,
Alice
注意：1. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数;
2.回复须包括至少3个要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯;
3.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Alice,I am happy to hear from you and share my experiences at home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Zhang yang
三、书信作文
11．（2022·江苏·景山）书面表达
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对"中国红"一词很感兴趣，想了解"中国红"在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解．
地位
最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表
幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所
婚礼，春节等
表达方式
剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼
提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for
Dear Tony，
It's great to receive your letter． I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red．________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red．
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2022·江苏南京）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校英文剧社开展了一项关于青少年喜欢的电影的调查。请你根据调查表内容中的问题，用英语回复，可以适当的发挥。
We’re conducting a survey on what types of movies are the most popular among teenagers in our school. I need your help.
n How often do you go to the cinema?
n What types of movies do you enjoy most? And why?
n Who is your favorite movie actor/actress? And why?
要求∶
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to introduce my favorite kind of film and actor/actress.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、讲稿
13．（2022·江苏·扬州市）人生绚丽多彩，在三年的磨砺中，你们都变得越来越优秀，学习更加勤奋，与人相处更加和谐，深切关心社会生态。在面对即将翻去的一页里，你们一定有不少收获和感触。请为校广播台写一篇以To be a better self为题的英文演讲稿，和学弟学妹们分享你的经验，教他们如何做更好的自己，成就精彩人生。
1. How do you improve your study?
①manage your time…
②go over…
③…
2. How do you improve the relationship with others?
①try to communicate with…
②share your feelings…
③…
3. What will you do for our environment or our society?
①take part in…
②…
注意事项：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）包含表格中所有信息；并适当发挥；
（3）词数100左右，演讲稿的格式已给出，不计入总词数；
（4）不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名等。To be a better self
I am very proud that I have grown up during the past three years. As a teenager,
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14．（2022·江苏泰州）在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等。现在学校决定在初三各班星期二下午的延时服务活动中举行英语演讲比赛：MY HERO，请你从课本里的这些名人中选择一位，根据下列提示，写一篇简短的英语演讲小短文。
演讲小短文的内容要涵盖以下所有要点：
1. Who has impressed you most?
2. What do you know about him / her?
3. Why do you admire him / her?
注意事项:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 100左右，文章开头己经给出，不计入总词数。
My Hero
Dear classmates,
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among them, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
15．（2021·江苏无锡）公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。学校英语组准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。
How to live a healthy and happy life
Healthy lifestyle
（1）健康饮食；（2）适当锻炼；（3）充足睡眠。
Mental (心理) health
（1）积极乐观；（2）与人为善；（3）……（至少一点）
Hope
……（至少一点）
注意事项：
（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
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参考答案：
1．例文
The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei
The model I admire most is Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei used to be a teacher. She taught Chinese and politics. She worked hard though she was ill. She was strict and worked to high standards. When working as a headteacher, she had a heart full of love. She cared about the students’ daily lives and helped them with their schoolwork. She tried to stop the poor girls dropping school. As a principal, she set up the first free senior high for girls. She is praised as “Lamp Burning Principal” She has impressed me with her spirit. I want to be an excellent person like her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最钦佩的英雄，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍她的事迹。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth 过去常常做某事
②full of 充满
③care about 关心
[高分句型]
①She worked hard though she was ill.（though引导让步状语从句）
②She tried to stop the poor girls dropping school.（动词不定式作宾语，动名词作宾语）
2．例文
The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is Wang Gang. He is tall and strong. He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me. He is also helpful and helps me a lot. We often have a good time together. He likes singing. Because he sings very well. He likes watching news programs. Because he can learn a lot from it.
On Sunday last year, we went to climb Zinjin Mountain together. I was so careless that I fell over on the way to the mountain. Wang Gang helped me all the way and finally sent me to the hospital. I was very grateful to him. So I think he is a very good person.
We will graduate from junior high school soon. I want to say, “Wang Gang, you are my best friend. I will remember you forever. I hope your dream will come true soon.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“对他的评价”的写作，突出重点内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，直接写出最好的朋友，从外貌，最喜欢的艺术以及最爱的电视节目方面来介绍好朋友；
第二步，通过举例子来说明他是如何给我印象深刻的并对其进行评价；
第三步，书写结语，表达对朋友的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be grateful to sb感激某人
②graduate from毕业于
③come true实现
[高分句型]
① He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me.（when引导的时间状语从句，so ... that引导的结果状语从句）
②I hope your dream will come true soon.（I hope后跟宾语从句）
3．例文
Daniel is a member of my team called Sunshine. He is a 15-year-old student of Grade nine. Everyone in our group likes him very much because he is smart and hard-working. It’s also generous of him to share things with us. He often helps us when we are in trouble.
In his free time, he not only likes reading detective stories, travelling but also likes watching programs about sports. But since this term, he has devoted most of time to study and has made great progress. He is good at sports, especially running. He came first in the race of school sports meeting this year. He is such a brave young boy that he successfully helped Detective Lu solve the case of kidnapping. Because of this, he was honored with “Award for Bravery”.
But recently, he has got some problems. He is suffering from the coming exams. He feels so stressed that he can’t sleep well at night. I think that he worries too much and should arrange his time well so that he can achieve the confidence and pass the exams successfully. I hope he thinks my advice is worth taking.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括他的基本信息，性格，爱好，荣誉，问题和建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Daniel这个人的基本信息和性格；
第二步，介绍他的爱好及所荣誉；
第三步，最后是叙述他的问题和建议。
[亮点词汇]
① share sth with sb和某人分享某物
② in trouble处于困境
③ not only…but also 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① Everyone in our group likes him very much because he is smart and hard-working.（because引导原因状语从句）
② He is such a brave young boy that he successfully helped Detective Lu solve the case of kidnapping.（such…that引导的结果状语从句）
4．例文
Recently, China Daily has made a survey on carrying out “double reduction” policy. Here is the result.
In the past, students have too much homework to do. They used to spend 3 hours doing their homework. They had to have extra classes during weekends or holidays. They had few after-school activities and the activities were very boring.
But now things are different. They had less homework to do. All the homework can be finished in less than 1.5 hours. During weekends and holidays, they don’t have extra classes. They take part in colourful activities such as joining reading club, singing, dancing, drawing and playing ball games.
I think doing sports and taking part in different kinds of activities are very important for students. By doing sports and taking part in activities, students can keep healthy and learn things that they can’t get from books.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括“双减”政策前后的作业，假期和课外活动情况，自己的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“双减”政策前的作业，假期和课外活动情况；
第二步，介绍“双减”政策后的作业，假期和课外活动情况；
第三步，最后是叙述自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do过去常常做
② less than少于
③ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① I think doing sports and taking part in different kinds of activities are very important for students.（think后为省略that的宾语从句，and并列两个动名词作主语）
② By doing sports and taking part in activities, students can keep healthy and learn things that they can’t get from books.（that引导的定语从句）
5．Possible version l:
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the past three years.
I love reading. What impressed me most is the Reading Club. One day, I saw some students talking about books on the grass. I felt excited and joined in their discussion. Later, I became a member of the club. I read the four great classical Chinese novels and some history books. Reading has changed me far more than I expected, I am not as shy as I used to be and willing to try new things.
I was so lucky to meet a lot of friends who shared the same interest with me. My teachers encouraged me to make up some stories. As far as I’m concerned, reading opens up a new world to me. I will remember the three-year school life forever.
Possible version 2:
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school football life in the coming three years.
I am patient and like playing with kids, and I am good at Maths, so I hope to be a Maths teacher in the future. Besides Maths, I plan to learn other subjects well. They are very important for my dream job. I’m interested in football. I want to join the school football team because I’m expecting to play with my friends in the field to improve my team spirit.
I hope that teachers will be strict in my studies so that I can make great progress, because I’m short of self-management sometimes. I also hope to meet friendly and hard-working classmates. I’m looking forward to the coming high school life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。
2.写作指导：回望过去的事情用一般过去时，畅想未来的事情用一般将来时。回望过去可分为三段：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍让自己喜欢的爱好，让自己感触最深的事情；最后一段介绍自己的朋友和老师。畅想未来三年的校园生活时也分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段自己的梦想，希望参加的活动以及元音；最后一段表达自己希望遇见的老师和同学。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
6．例文
How to get used to the new policy?
It is really good news that the Double Reduction Policy has been carried out. However, we have to face new challenges. Here are my suggestions.
First of all, make good use of the time at school. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class. Whenever we have trouble, we can share problems with our classmates after class.
Secondly, finish our homework on time. We had better work out how much time we need to finish it all. I think a good plan can help us manage our time better.
Thirdly, we are supposed to take an active part in after-school activities, such as playing football. In this way, we can make our life more colourful.
Last but not the least, we can do some housework or work as volunteers to master some useful life skills.
In my opinion, with the help of the new policy, we will enjoy a happier life and grow into a better person in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作的主要内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏题目提示的信息，并且要在已给出的信息的基础上适当发挥，使文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步：在已给出内容的基础上，再加一句话，以引入下文的建议。
第二步：给出具体的建议，即在学校要充分利用时间、准时完成作业和积极参加校外活动。每一点建议都可以适当增添内容，使之更为饱满。
第三步：对双减政策下，学生将会有一个怎样的生活，提出自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物
②had better do sth.最好做某事
③be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
④last but not the least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
① Whenever we have trouble, we can share problems with our classmates after class.（whenever引导状语从句）
②Last but not the least, we can do some housework or work as volunteers to master some useful life skills.（动词不定式作目的状语）
7．例文：
My favourite time of year
My favorite time of the year is winter vacation. Because during the winter holiday, I have time to do what I like. I will practise playing the piano during the winter holiday. I have loved playing the piano since I was a child. I began to play the piano when I was five years old. I can also accompany my family to chat and travel during the winter vacation. I can also make myself relaxed.
However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity. I also like to watch all kinds of documentaries, because I can learn a lot about nature. When I am bored, I can also enjoy Tan Dun's music while I am reading a book. His music makes me calm.
This is my favourite winter holiday life, it must be colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据提示内容描述最喜欢的寒假生活。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文要以第一人称行文，时态以一般现在时为主。文章分三段描写。第一段和第二段主要是描写喜欢寒假的原因和自己要做的具体的事情，第三段做一个总结。整个文章结构完整，语言表述通顺清楚，用词准确。
8．例文：
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Life is only once for everybody. It’s important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, there are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, swimming in places like lakes or rivers alone is dangerous. Moreover, we should surf the Internet safely, and we shouldn’t meet online friends alone.
Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“保护自己，珍爱生命”为题写一篇文章，题干中给出了细节要点，写作时可根据这些要点提示进行写作，可适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段根据提示讲述保护自己的方式；最后一段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和连接词使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。
9．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I ordered some clothes from you last month, but there are some problems and I’m really disappointed. First, the color is not as green as it is shown on your website. I understand that the picture does not always show the real color, but it should not be that different. Second, I asked for Size M of the jeans because it is the size I usually wear. But your Size M is so small that I can’t wear it at all and I have to give it to my younger sister. Then, the trainers are not so comfortable as you’ve promised and they are not worth the money I’ve paid.
I think you should be more serious about your business.
Truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，主要讲述了在国外某购物平台购买了几件服饰，收到实物以后你发现了提示中的几个问题，要点要齐全，条理要清晰，语句要顺畅；
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题，收到的商品有问题；
第二步，第一个问题是T恤衫颜色跟平台图片里展示的完全不一样；
第三步，第二个问题是牛仔裤的尺码标的是中号, 但明显偏小；
第四步，第三个问题是运动鞋的问题；
第五步，说出你的诉求；
[亮点词汇]
①as green as和……一样绿
②ask for要求
③give sth. to sb.把某物给某人
④be more serious about sth.更加认真对待
[高分句型]
①But your Size M is so small that I can’t wear it at all and I have to give it to my younger sister.（so…that “如此……以致于”引导结果状语从句）
②Then, the trainers are not so comfortable as you’ve promised and they are not worth the money I’ve paid.（not so…as同级比较的否定句式）
10．例文
Dear Alice,
I am happy to hear from you and share my experiences at home. I had a very happy spring festival in 2021. Because of the outbreak of COVID-19, I seldom went out and spent most of my time at home. So I had more time to talk with my parents. I also helped them do some housework, my brother and I often played games at home. We were all very happy.
I had online classes at home. I had English, math and Chinese lessons online with my classmates. I think it was very helpful for my study. I usually went shopping or ordered meals online, and all my purchases could arrive quickly.
In the morning, I usually drank milk and eggs. For lunch, I often ate vegetables and fruit. I usually drank tomato and egg soup and ate some bread for dinner. I think I had a healthy diet, which was very helpful for my health.
Best wishes,
Zhang Yang
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给提示写一封电子邮件，告诉Alice 你所在的地区疫情期间你的情况和感受。
2.写作指导：本文写作人称以第一人称为主；时态以一般过去时为主；要根据信中内容进行答复，语言准确连贯，无语法、单词、标点的书写错误。
11．Dear Tony，
It's great to receive your letter． I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red． Chinese red， considered as the symbolic color of China， is extremely popular with Chinese people． It usually represents happiness， and we believe that it can bring us good luck．
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events． For instance， in a wedding， you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red． What's more， the houses are also filled with red paper cuts， lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival．Children will get red packets for best wishes as well． Obviously， Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China．
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red．
Yours，
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于书信作文，向你的英国朋友介绍“中国红”，包括地位、代表、使用场所以及表达方式。注意时态的准确运用，灵活运用所学的单词、短语以及句型。切记不要遗漏要点。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：for instance, be decorated with, what’s more, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等。
亮点句型：we believe that it can bring us good luck中，that引导的宾语从句。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如for instance, be decorated with, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如what’s more；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to introduce my favorite kind of film and actor/actress.
I usually go to the cinema once a month. I enjoy watching documentary most because I can learn a lot from it. For example, I can know more about nature or history and I can also experience others’ stories to make me get to know more about the real life. Jackie Chan is my favorite actor because his movements are neat and he is very brave.
In my opinion, a film is a useful tool for us to relax or learn something. So we should develop a good habit such as not watching a film too long every day, not watching the programmes that have a bad influence and so on.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。包括多久去一次电影院、最喜欢什么类型的电影及原因、最喜欢的电影演员及原因；
第三步，书写结语。谈谈自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① make sb. do sth.让某人做某事
② develop a good habit养成好习惯
③ such as例如
[高分句型]
① I enjoy watching documentary most because I can learn a lot from it. Jackie Chan is my favourite actor because his movements are neat and he is very brave.（2个because引导的原因状语从句）
② ...not watching the programmes that have a bad influence and so on.（that引导的定语从句）
13．例文
To Be a Better Self
I am very proud that I have grown up during the past three years. As a teenager, I think what I can do to my country is to make myself a better man. I think there are three aspects.
First of all, I do my best to improve my study. I manage my time reasonably. I go over what I have learned in time after class. And I must listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class. Secondly, good interpersonal relationship is also very important for us. I try to communicate with my classmates and teachers. I usually share my feelings with my friends. However, I also help my friends to bring out the best in them. Last but not the least, I will take part in voluntary activities. I will plant trees every year and make my contribution to bringing green to our environment. I will go to the old people’s home to visit the elderly and tell them stories and sing to them.
I hope my experience is of great value to you. And I do believe you can become better and have a promising future.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求根据表格提供的内容为校广播台写一篇以To be a better self为题的英文演讲稿，和学弟学妹们分享你的经验。学生不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出“To be a better self”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。主要从三个方面来写：如何提高学习、如何与别人相处、打算为环境或社会做什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望学弟学妹们未来会更好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②go over复习
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
[高分句型]
① I think there are three aspects.（宾语从句）
② I go over what I have learned in time after class.（宾语从句）
14．One possible version
My Hero
Dear classmates,
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among them, Jackie Chan has impressed me most.
He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His films successfully join humor and exciting action together.
He also does charity work. He has helped many people in need all over the world. So I admire him very much .
Jackie Chan is considered as a superstar not only for his success in action films but also for his effort in charity work. I should learn from him. I hope to be a person like him.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意内容完整、条理清晰，无拼写和语法使用错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己心目中的英雄是哪一位名人；
第二步，具体介绍他的成就、贡献等；
第三步，阐述自己为什么会敬仰他或她。
[亮点词汇]
① well-known 著名的
② successfully 成功地
③ in need 在困境中
④ learn from 向……学习
[高分句型]
① He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him.（定语从句）
② Jackie Chan is considered as a superstar not only for his success in action films but also for his effort in charity work.（not only ... but also 不仅……而且……）
15．例文：
Dear and classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?
Firstly, we should have a healthy lifestyle. We need to eat healthy food. We also need to exercise in a proper way. For example, we can play sports after school. Meanwhile, we need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can talk with our parents, teachers and friends as often as possible.
In a word, I hope everyone can pay enough attention to our health and enjoy our life.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，学校英语组准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，根据所给表格提示，写一篇题为“How to live a healthy and happy life”的演讲稿，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。写作时，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯
书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅰ-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．（2022·江苏·无锡市）中宣部评选出了2021年度十大时代楷模（Role Models of the Times），”燃灯校长”(Lamp Burning Principal) 张桂梅名列其中。无论是过去作为任课老师或班主任，还是现在担任校长，她身患疾病依然勤奋耕耘。请你以”The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei” 为题写一篇短文，简要介绍她的事迹，并谈谈自己的感想。
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数100个左右，文章开头在答题卡上已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 思维导图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
4. 省略号处须作适当发挥，感想部分为2-3句。
The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei
The model I admire most is Zhang Guimei.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2022·江苏扬州）升入初三后，你又结识了一些朋友，你对谁印象最深刻呢？请你以“The friend who has impressed me most”为题写一篇英语短文来给大家介绍一下吧。
提示：
(1) What is he/she like?
(2) What art form does he/she like best? And why?
(3) What type of TV programs does he/she like best? And why?
(4) How does he/she influence you? ( one point)
(5) What do you think of him/her?
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(2) 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
(3) 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
(4) 词数100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022·江苏淮安）临近期末，学校将在学习小组内开展年终自评和组评活动，假如你是Sunshine小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，对你的组员Daniel进行评价。
Name
Daniel（一个十五岁的初三学生）。
Character
聪明、勤奋、勇敢、乐于助人。
Hobbies
看电影；最喜欢的电影明星成龙，因为……
Honour
大部分精力投放到学习中，取得了很大进步。
擅长跑步，校运会赛跑第一名。
帮助警方破获绑架案，获得校见义勇为奖（Award for Bravery）
Problems
面临考试感到压力，缺少睡眠……
Your suggestions
……
注意：1. 词数：80-100词，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 2. 句子结构紧凑，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。
Daniel is a member of my team called Sunshine.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2022·江苏·淮安市）近期，《中国日报》对“双减”政策执行情况走访了一些初中学校，并做了调查。请根据表格中的调查情况，用英语写一篇调查报告，并谈谈你的看法。
作业量
作业时长
假日安排
课外活动
过 去
多
……（自拟）
周末和节假日补课
少而乏味
现在
较少
不超过1个半小时
不补课
丰富多彩，如：参加读书社团、唱歌、跳舞、绘画、打球
你的看法
……（至少写出两点）
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2. 内容必须包括表格中的提示要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 词数在80—100之间。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：补课 have extra classes
Recently, China Daily has made a survey on carrying out “double reduction” policy. Here is the result.
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5．（2022·江苏扬州）时光荏苒，毕业季来临。假如你们学校校报组织题为“校园生活”的英语征文活动，内容可以是回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。请选择其中之一，并根据提示写一篇短文。
School life in the past three years
School life in the coming three years
· your hobby or interest
· activities you took part in and your progress
· your friends and teachers
· your dream or plan
· activities you hope to join in and the reasons
· teachers and classmates you hope to meet
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括你选择的校园生活的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022·江苏盐城）“双减”, 即有效减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。最近你校英文校刊就实施”双减”政策后如何规划自己的学习和课余生活, 向全体九年级学生征求建议。请根据要点提示写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右（文章题目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数）;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息, 并作适当发挥。
参考词汇：双减政策 the Double Reduction Policy
How to get used to the new policy?
It is really good news that the Double Reduction Policy has been carried out. However, we have to face new challenges. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2022·江苏宿迁）寒假即将到来，请以My favourite time of year题，根据以下的中文提示写一篇文章，介绍一年当中你最喜欢的一段时光。写作要点如下：
最喜欢的时光
寒假
最想做的事情
1.看Audrey Hepburn的电影，因为欣赏她在电影和慈善领域的成就；
2.看各种纪录片，可以更多了解大自然和真实生活的事件；
3.边看书边聆听谭盾的音乐，他的音乐使人感到平静。
喜欢寒假的原因
自拟两点。
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3.词数：100左右；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My favourite time of year
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8．（2021·江苏无锡）生命，对于每个人来说都只有一次。注意安全，就是珍惜生命的一种有效途径，我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？ TEENS正在举办以“Protect Ourselves, Cherish（珍爱）Our Lives”为题的征文活动，请根据导图提示，写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。
注意事项：1. 短文须包含提示内容并适当发挥，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在90个左右，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Life is only once for everybody. It’s important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
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二、电子邮件
9．（2022·江苏徐州）假如你是李华，在国外某购物平台购买了几件服饰，收到实物以后你发现了几个问题。请你根据以下提示，给该购物平台写一封邮件，说明这一情况。
1. T恤衫颜色跟平台图片里展示的完全不一样；
2. 牛仔裤的尺码标的是中号，但明显偏小；
3. 运动鞋的问题：……
4. 你的诉求：……
注意:
1. 邮件需包含以上所有要点。
2. 词数：90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出（见答题卡），不计入总词数。
3. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I ordered some clothes from you last month, but there are some problems and I’m really disappointed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you should be more serious about your business.
Truly,
Li Hua
10．（2022·江苏·盱眙县）目前，新冠疫情在全球持续爆发。假定你是张阳，你澳大利亚的笔友 Alice 给你写了一封信，想了解你在疫情期间的一些情况。请认真阅读以下邮件，根据信中的内容以及你的实际情况用英语进行回复。
To: Zhang yang @.china.com
From: Alice@australia.com
Subject: activities at home
Dear Zhang yang,Because of the outbreak of CDVID-19, I am stuck at home. I hear you also have to stay at home. At first, I feel a little bored. But later, I find reading is a good way to pass the time. Would you please share your experiences at home with me?
●Do you have a good time at the Spring Festival of 2021? What do you do?
●Do you have online classes? What subjects do you have? How do you like them?
●How do you do shopping?
●What do you eat every day? Do you have a healthy diet? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
All the best,
Alice
注意：1. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数;
2.回复须包括至少3个要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯;
3.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Alice,I am happy to hear from you and share my experiences at home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Zhang yang
三、书信作文
11．（2022·江苏·景山）书面表达
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对"中国红"一词很感兴趣，想了解"中国红"在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解．
地位
最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表
幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所
婚礼，春节等
表达方式
剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼
提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for
Dear Tony，
It's great to receive your letter． I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red．________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red．
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2022·江苏南京）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校英文剧社开展了一项关于青少年喜欢的电影的调查。请你根据调查表内容中的问题，用英语回复，可以适当的发挥。
We’re conducting a survey on what types of movies are the most popular among teenagers in our school. I need your help.
n How often do you go to the cinema?
n What types of movies do you enjoy most? And why?
n Who is your favorite movie actor/actress? And why?
要求∶
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to introduce my favorite kind of film and actor/actress.
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、讲稿
13．（2022·江苏·扬州市）人生绚丽多彩，在三年的磨砺中，你们都变得越来越优秀，学习更加勤奋，与人相处更加和谐，深切关心社会生态。在面对即将翻去的一页里，你们一定有不少收获和感触。请为校广播台写一篇以To be a better self为题的英文演讲稿，和学弟学妹们分享你的经验，教他们如何做更好的自己，成就精彩人生。
1. How do you improve your study?
①manage your time…
②go over…
③…
2. How do you improve the relationship with others?
①try to communicate with…
②share your feelings…
③…
3. What will you do for our environment or our society?
①take part in…
②…
注意事项：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）包含表格中所有信息；并适当发挥；
（3）词数100左右，演讲稿的格式已给出，不计入总词数；
（4）不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名等。To be a better self
I am very proud that I have grown up during the past three years. As a teenager,
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14．（2022·江苏泰州）在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等。现在学校决定在初三各班星期二下午的延时服务活动中举行英语演讲比赛：MY HERO，请你从课本里的这些名人中选择一位，根据下列提示，写一篇简短的英语演讲小短文。
演讲小短文的内容要涵盖以下所有要点：
1. Who has impressed you most?
2. What do you know about him / her?
3. Why do you admire him / her?
注意事项:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 100左右，文章开头己经给出，不计入总词数。
My Hero
Dear classmates,
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among them, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
15．（2021·江苏无锡）公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。学校英语组准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。
How to live a healthy and happy life
Healthy lifestyle
（1）健康饮食；（2）适当锻炼；（3）充足睡眠。
Mental (心理) health
（1）积极乐观；（2）与人为善；（3）……（至少一点）
Hope
……（至少一点）
注意事项：
（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
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参考答案：
1．例文
The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei
The model I admire most is Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei used to be a teacher. She taught Chinese and politics. She worked hard though she was ill. She was strict and worked to high standards. When working as a headteacher, she had a heart full of love. She cared about the students’ daily lives and helped them with their schoolwork. She tried to stop the poor girls dropping school. As a principal, she set up the first free senior high for girls. She is praised as “Lamp Burning Principal” She has impressed me with her spirit. I want to be an excellent person like her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最钦佩的英雄，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍她的事迹。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth 过去常常做某事
②full of 充满
③care about 关心
[高分句型]
①She worked hard though she was ill.（though引导让步状语从句）
②She tried to stop the poor girls dropping school.（动词不定式作宾语，动名词作宾语）
2．例文
The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is Wang Gang. He is tall and strong. He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me. He is also helpful and helps me a lot. We often have a good time together. He likes singing. Because he sings very well. He likes watching news programs. Because he can learn a lot from it.
On Sunday last year, we went to climb Zinjin Mountain together. I was so careless that I fell over on the way to the mountain. Wang Gang helped me all the way and finally sent me to the hospital. I was very grateful to him. So I think he is a very good person.
We will graduate from junior high school soon. I want to say, “Wang Gang, you are my best friend. I will remember you forever. I hope your dream will come true soon.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“对他的评价”的写作，突出重点内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，直接写出最好的朋友，从外貌，最喜欢的艺术以及最爱的电视节目方面来介绍好朋友；
第二步，通过举例子来说明他是如何给我印象深刻的并对其进行评价；
第三步，书写结语，表达对朋友的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be grateful to sb感激某人
②graduate from毕业于
③come true实现
[高分句型]
① He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me.（when引导的时间状语从句，so ... that引导的结果状语从句）
②I hope your dream will come true soon.（I hope后跟宾语从句）
3．例文
Daniel is a member of my team called Sunshine. He is a 15-year-old student of Grade nine. Everyone in our group likes him very much because he is smart and hard-working. It’s also generous of him to share things with us. He often helps us when we are in trouble.
In his free time, he not only likes reading detective stories, travelling but also likes watching programs about sports. But since this term, he has devoted most of time to study and has made great progress. He is good at sports, especially running. He came first in the race of school sports meeting this year. He is such a brave young boy that he successfully helped Detective Lu solve the case of kidnapping. Because of this, he was honored with “Award for Bravery”.
But recently, he has got some problems. He is suffering from the coming exams. He feels so stressed that he can’t sleep well at night. I think that he worries too much and should arrange his time well so that he can achieve the confidence and pass the exams successfully. I hope he thinks my advice is worth taking.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括他的基本信息，性格，爱好，荣誉，问题和建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Daniel这个人的基本信息和性格；
第二步，介绍他的爱好及所荣誉；
第三步，最后是叙述他的问题和建议。
[亮点词汇]
① share sth with sb和某人分享某物
② in trouble处于困境
③ not only…but also 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① Everyone in our group likes him very much because he is smart and hard-working.（because引导原因状语从句）
② He is such a brave young boy that he successfully helped Detective Lu solve the case of kidnapping.（such…that引导的结果状语从句）
4．例文
Recently, China Daily has made a survey on carrying out “double reduction” policy. Here is the result.
In the past, students have too much homework to do. They used to spend 3 hours doing their homework. They had to have extra classes during weekends or holidays. They had few after-school activities and the activities were very boring.
But now things are different. They had less homework to do. All the homework can be finished in less than 1.5 hours. During weekends and holidays, they don’t have extra classes. They take part in colourful activities such as joining reading club, singing, dancing, drawing and playing ball games.
I think doing sports and taking part in different kinds of activities are very important for students. By doing sports and taking part in activities, students can keep healthy and learn things that they can’t get from books.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括“双减”政策前后的作业，假期和课外活动情况，自己的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“双减”政策前的作业，假期和课外活动情况；
第二步，介绍“双减”政策后的作业，假期和课外活动情况；
第三步，最后是叙述自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do过去常常做
② less than少于
③ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① I think doing sports and taking part in different kinds of activities are very important for students.（think后为省略that的宾语从句，and并列两个动名词作主语）
② By doing sports and taking part in activities, students can keep healthy and learn things that they can’t get from books.（that引导的定语从句）
5．Possible version l:
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the past three years.
I love reading. What impressed me most is the Reading Club. One day, I saw some students talking about books on the grass. I felt excited and joined in their discussion. Later, I became a member of the club. I read the four great classical Chinese novels and some history books. Reading has changed me far more than I expected, I am not as shy as I used to be and willing to try new things.
I was so lucky to meet a lot of friends who shared the same interest with me. My teachers encouraged me to make up some stories. As far as I’m concerned, reading opens up a new world to me. I will remember the three-year school life forever.
Possible version 2:
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school football life in the coming three years.
I am patient and like playing with kids, and I am good at Maths, so I hope to be a Maths teacher in the future. Besides Maths, I plan to learn other subjects well. They are very important for my dream job. I’m interested in football. I want to join the school football team because I’m expecting to play with my friends in the field to improve my team spirit.
I hope that teachers will be strict in my studies so that I can make great progress, because I’m short of self-management sometimes. I also hope to meet friendly and hard-working classmates. I’m looking forward to the coming high school life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。回望过去三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。
2.写作指导：回望过去的事情用一般过去时，畅想未来的事情用一般将来时。回望过去可分为三段：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍让自己喜欢的爱好，让自己感触最深的事情；最后一段介绍自己的朋友和老师。畅想未来三年的校园生活时也分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段自己的梦想，希望参加的活动以及元音；最后一段表达自己希望遇见的老师和同学。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
6．例文
How to get used to the new policy?
It is really good news that the Double Reduction Policy has been carried out. However, we have to face new challenges. Here are my suggestions.
First of all, make good use of the time at school. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class. Whenever we have trouble, we can share problems with our classmates after class.
Secondly, finish our homework on time. We had better work out how much time we need to finish it all. I think a good plan can help us manage our time better.
Thirdly, we are supposed to take an active part in after-school activities, such as playing football. In this way, we can make our life more colourful.
Last but not the least, we can do some housework or work as volunteers to master some useful life skills.
In my opinion, with the help of the new policy, we will enjoy a happier life and grow into a better person in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作的主要内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏题目提示的信息，并且要在已给出的信息的基础上适当发挥，使文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步：在已给出内容的基础上，再加一句话，以引入下文的建议。
第二步：给出具体的建议，即在学校要充分利用时间、准时完成作业和积极参加校外活动。每一点建议都可以适当增添内容，使之更为饱满。
第三步：对双减政策下，学生将会有一个怎样的生活，提出自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物
②had better do sth.最好做某事
③be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
④last but not the least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
① Whenever we have trouble, we can share problems with our classmates after class.（whenever引导状语从句）
②Last but not the least, we can do some housework or work as volunteers to master some useful life skills.（动词不定式作目的状语）
7．例文：
My favourite time of year
My favorite time of the year is winter vacation. Because during the winter holiday, I have time to do what I like. I will practise playing the piano during the winter holiday. I have loved playing the piano since I was a child. I began to play the piano when I was five years old. I can also accompany my family to chat and travel during the winter vacation. I can also make myself relaxed.
However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity. I also like to watch all kinds of documentaries, because I can learn a lot about nature. When I am bored, I can also enjoy Tan Dun's music while I am reading a book. His music makes me calm.
This is my favourite winter holiday life, it must be colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据提示内容描述最喜欢的寒假生活。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文要以第一人称行文，时态以一般现在时为主。文章分三段描写。第一段和第二段主要是描写喜欢寒假的原因和自己要做的具体的事情，第三段做一个总结。整个文章结构完整，语言表述通顺清楚，用词准确。
8．例文：
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Life is only once for everybody. It’s important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, there are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, swimming in places like lakes or rivers alone is dangerous. Moreover, we should surf the Internet safely, and we shouldn’t meet online friends alone.
Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“保护自己，珍爱生命”为题写一篇文章，题干中给出了细节要点，写作时可根据这些要点提示进行写作，可适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段根据提示讲述保护自己的方式；最后一段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和连接词使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。
9．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I ordered some clothes from you last month, but there are some problems and I’m really disappointed. First, the color is not as green as it is shown on your website. I understand that the picture does not always show the real color, but it should not be that different. Second, I asked for Size M of the jeans because it is the size I usually wear. But your Size M is so small that I can’t wear it at all and I have to give it to my younger sister. Then, the trainers are not so comfortable as you’ve promised and they are not worth the money I’ve paid.
I think you should be more serious about your business.
Truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，主要讲述了在国外某购物平台购买了几件服饰，收到实物以后你发现了提示中的几个问题，要点要齐全，条理要清晰，语句要顺畅；
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题，收到的商品有问题；
第二步，第一个问题是T恤衫颜色跟平台图片里展示的完全不一样；
第三步，第二个问题是牛仔裤的尺码标的是中号, 但明显偏小；
第四步，第三个问题是运动鞋的问题；
第五步，说出你的诉求；
[亮点词汇]
①as green as和……一样绿
②ask for要求
③give sth. to sb.把某物给某人
④be more serious about sth.更加认真对待
[高分句型]
①But your Size M is so small that I can’t wear it at all and I have to give it to my younger sister.（so…that “如此……以致于”引导结果状语从句）
②Then, the trainers are not so comfortable as you’ve promised and they are not worth the money I’ve paid.（not so…as同级比较的否定句式）
10．例文
Dear Alice,
I am happy to hear from you and share my experiences at home. I had a very happy spring festival in 2021. Because of the outbreak of COVID-19, I seldom went out and spent most of my time at home. So I had more time to talk with my parents. I also helped them do some housework, my brother and I often played games at home. We were all very happy.
I had online classes at home. I had English, math and Chinese lessons online with my classmates. I think it was very helpful for my study. I usually went shopping or ordered meals online, and all my purchases could arrive quickly.
In the morning, I usually drank milk and eggs. For lunch, I often ate vegetables and fruit. I usually drank tomato and egg soup and ate some bread for dinner. I think I had a healthy diet, which was very helpful for my health.
Best wishes,
Zhang Yang
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给提示写一封电子邮件，告诉Alice 你所在的地区疫情期间你的情况和感受。
2.写作指导：本文写作人称以第一人称为主；时态以一般过去时为主；要根据信中内容进行答复，语言准确连贯，无语法、单词、标点的书写错误。
11．Dear Tony，
It's great to receive your letter． I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red． Chinese red， considered as the symbolic color of China， is extremely popular with Chinese people． It usually represents happiness， and we believe that it can bring us good luck．
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events． For instance， in a wedding， you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red． What's more， the houses are also filled with red paper cuts， lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival．Children will get red packets for best wishes as well． Obviously， Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China．
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red．
Yours，
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于书信作文，向你的英国朋友介绍“中国红”，包括地位、代表、使用场所以及表达方式。注意时态的准确运用，灵活运用所学的单词、短语以及句型。切记不要遗漏要点。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：for instance, be decorated with, what’s more, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等。
亮点句型：we believe that it can bring us good luck中，that引导的宾语从句。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如for instance, be decorated with, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如what’s more；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to introduce my favorite kind of film and actor/actress.
I usually go to the cinema once a month. I enjoy watching documentary most because I can learn a lot from it. For example, I can know more about nature or history and I can also experience others’ stories to make me get to know more about the real life. Jackie Chan is my favorite actor because his movements are neat and he is very brave.
In my opinion, a film is a useful tool for us to relax or learn something. So we should develop a good habit such as not watching a film too long every day, not watching the programmes that have a bad influence and so on.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。包括多久去一次电影院、最喜欢什么类型的电影及原因、最喜欢的电影演员及原因；
第三步，书写结语。谈谈自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① make sb. do sth.让某人做某事
② develop a good habit养成好习惯
③ such as例如
[高分句型]
① I enjoy watching documentary most because I can learn a lot from it. Jackie Chan is my favourite actor because his movements are neat and he is very brave.（2个because引导的原因状语从句）
② ...not watching the programmes that have a bad influence and so on.（that引导的定语从句）
13．例文
To Be a Better Self
I am very proud that I have grown up during the past three years. As a teenager, I think what I can do to my country is to make myself a better man. I think there are three aspects.
First of all, I do my best to improve my study. I manage my time reasonably. I go over what I have learned in time after class. And I must listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class. Secondly, good interpersonal relationship is also very important for us. I try to communicate with my classmates and teachers. I usually share my feelings with my friends. However, I also help my friends to bring out the best in them. Last but not the least, I will take part in voluntary activities. I will plant trees every year and make my contribution to bringing green to our environment. I will go to the old people’s home to visit the elderly and tell them stories and sing to them.
I hope my experience is of great value to you. And I do believe you can become better and have a promising future.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求根据表格提供的内容为校广播台写一篇以To be a better self为题的英文演讲稿，和学弟学妹们分享你的经验。学生不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出“To be a better self”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。主要从三个方面来写：如何提高学习、如何与别人相处、打算为环境或社会做什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望学弟学妹们未来会更好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②go over复习
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
[高分句型]
① I think there are three aspects.（宾语从句）
② I go over what I have learned in time after class.（宾语从句）
14．One possible version
My Hero
Dear classmates,
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among them, Jackie Chan has impressed me most.
He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His films successfully join humor and exciting action together.
He also does charity work. He has helped many people in need all over the world. So I admire him very much .
Jackie Chan is considered as a superstar not only for his success in action films but also for his effort in charity work. I should learn from him. I hope to be a person like him.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意内容完整、条理清晰，无拼写和语法使用错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己心目中的英雄是哪一位名人；
第二步，具体介绍他的成就、贡献等；
第三步，阐述自己为什么会敬仰他或她。
[亮点词汇]
① well-known 著名的
② successfully 成功地
③ in need 在困境中
④ learn from 向……学习
[高分句型]
① He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him.（定语从句）
② Jackie Chan is considered as a superstar not only for his success in action films but also for his effort in charity work.（not only ... but also 不仅……而且……）
15．例文：
Dear and classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?
Firstly, we should have a healthy lifestyle. We need to eat healthy food. We also need to exercise in a proper way. For example, we can play sports after school. Meanwhile, we need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can talk with our parents, teachers and friends as often as possible.
In a word, I hope everyone can pay enough attention to our health and enjoy our life.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，学校英语组准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，根据所给表格提示，写一篇题为“How to live a healthy and happy life”的演讲稿，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。写作时，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯
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