话题01+挑战自我-2023年新高考英语读后续写之十年高考真题微编微练(有答案)
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这是一份话题01+挑战自我-2023年新高考英语读后续写之十年高考真题微编微练(有答案),共7页。
【真题微编】
(2020·天津高考·B)
“They tell me that yu’d like t make a statue f me — is that crrect, Miss Vinnie Ream?”
The deep, gentle vice helped calm the nervus girl.Asking a favr f the President f the United States was n casual matter, especially fr a seventeen-year-ld girl.
“Yes, sir,” she replied, her dark eyes meeting his.“I wuldn’t have dared t ask yu, but my teacher, Mr Mills, says I am ready.I plan t make it in an admirable manner.”
President Lincln smiled.“Painters, sculptrs—they’ve all tried t make the best f this rdinary face, but I’m afraid there’s nt much hpe.What did yu have in mind, Miss Ream? A bust?”
Befre Vinnie culd say yes, the President hurried n, a shade f aplgy in his vice.“Of curse — I shuldn’t have asked.A full-length pse wuld be much t big a prject fr a yung wman yur size.”
Vinnie’s face turned red.She realized she lked like a child, with her tiny figure.“Small des nt mean weak, sir,” she defended herself.“I was brn in the cuntry f Wiscnsin.I’ve driven teams f hrses and carried water.Making a full-length clay figure wuld nt exhaust my strength — and that is what I intend t d!”
The President’s eyes, brightened at her shw f spirit.“Srry, madam, I have underestimated yu as I didn’t knw yur backgrund.”
But his smile faded as he rubbed his beard with bny fingers, in thught.
The President seemed t cnsider her idea seriusly.
故事解读:
本文为记叙文,讲述一位17岁的来自威斯康星州的少女维尼为第十六任美国总统亚伯拉罕·林肯塑像的故事。在两人的对话过程中,自信的维尼用自己的智慧和应变能力,打消了总统的顾虑,说服了总统自己是有能力在他日理万机的行程中为他塑像的。
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But his smile faded as he rubbed his beard with bny fingers, in thught.“Miss Ream,” he sighed, “I’d like t let yu d it, but as yu knw, we are in the middle f a war.Hw culd I pssibly take the time t pse fr a sculpture nw? I hardly have a minute t myself.”Vinnie glanced arund and nted the size f his ffice.“I wrk quickly,” she said.Her vice was sft but cnfident as she pinted t the crner near the windws.“If I were t bring my clay here and wrk fr three hurs every afternn, I culd cmplete mst f the prject while yu are at yur desk.”
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The President seemed t cnsider her idea seriusly.He gt up and shk Vinnie’s hand warmly, “I’ve heard that yu are a talented yung wman, and I have fund yu charming and intelligent as well.I cannt make my decisin immediately, but yu will hear frm me sn.”The very next day, Vinnie received an invitatin frm the President.
【真题微练01】
(2019•北京卷•B)
Alice Mre is a teenager entrepreneur,wh in May 2015 set up her business AilieCandy.By the time she was 13,her cmpany was wrth millins f dllars with the inventin f a super-sweet treat that culd save kids’ teeth,instead f destrying them.
It all began when Mre visited a bank with her dad.On the uting,she was ffered a candy bar.Hwever,her dad reminded her that sugary treats were bad fr her teeth.But Mre was sick f missing ut n candies.S she desired t get rund the warning,“Why can’t I make a healthy candy that’s gd fr my teeth s that my parents can’t say n t it?” With that in mind,Mre asked her dad if she culd start her wn candy cmpany.He recmmended that she d sme research and talk t dentists abut what a healthier candy wuld cntain.
With her dad’s permissin,she spent the next tw years researching nline and cnducting trials t get a recipe that was bth tasty and tth-friendly.She als apprached dentists t learn mre abut teeth cleaning.Cnsequently,she succeeded in making a kind f candy nly using natural sweeteners,which can reduce ral bacteria.
Mre then used her savings t get her business ff the grund.
Meanwhile,with her parents’ help,Mre is generally able t live a nrmal teenage life.
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Mre then used her savings t get her business ff the grund.Afterwards,she and her father secured their first business meeting with a supermarket wner,wh finally agreed t sell Mre’s prduct—CanCandy. As CanCandy’s success grws,s des Mre’s credibility as a yung entrepreneur.Mre is enthusiastic abut the candy she created,and she’s als psitive abut what the future might bring.She hpes that every kid can have a clean muth and a brad smile.
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Meanwhile,with her parents’ help,Mre is generally able t live a nrmal teenage life.Althugh she funded her cmpany early n in life,she wasn’t driven primarily by prfit.Mre wants t use her unique talent t help thers find their smiles.She dnates 10% f AilieCandy’s prfits t Big Smiles.With her talent and determinatin,it appears that the sky culd be the limit fr Alice Mre.
【真题微练02】
(2017·浙江卷·A)
Benjamin West, the father f American painting, shwed his talent fr art when he was nly six years f age. But he did nt knw abut brushes befre a visitr tld him he needed ne. In thse days, a brush was made frm camel’s hair. There were n camels nearby. Benjamin decided that cat hair wuld wrk instead. He cut sme fur frm the family cat t make a brush.
The brush did nt last lng. Sn Benjamin needed mre fur. Befre lng, the cat began t lk ragged. His father said that the cat must be sick. Benjamin was frced t admit what he had been ding.
The cat’s lt was abut t imprve. That year, ne f Benjamin’s cusins, Mr Penningtn, came t visit. He was impressed with Benjamin’s drawings. When he went hme, he sent Benjamin a bx f paint and sme brushes. He als sent six engravings by an artist. These were the first pictures and first real paint and brushes Benjamin had ever seen.
In 1747, when Benjamin was nine years ld, Mr Penningtn returned fr anther visit.
William Williams, a well-knwn painter, came t see him wrk.
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In 1747, when Benjamin was nine years ld, Mr Penningtn returned fr anther visit. He was amazed at what Benjamin had dne with his gift. He asked Benjamin’s parents if he might take the by back t Philadelphia fr a visit. In the city, Mr Penningtn gave Benjamin materials fr creating il paintings. The by began a landscape(风景)painting.
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William Williams, a well-knwn painter, came t see him wrk. Williams was impressed with Benjamin and gave him tw classic bks n painting t take hme. The bks were lng and dull. Benjamin culd read nly a little, having been a pr student. But he later said, “Thse tw bks were my cmpanins by day, and under my pillw at night. ”While it is likely that he understd very little f the bks, they were his intrductin t classical paintings. The nine-year-ld by decided then that he wuld be an artist.
【真题微练03】
(2016·江苏卷·D)
Nt s lng ag,mst peple didn’t knw wh Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce was ging t becme.She was just an average high schl athlete.There was every indicatin that she was just anther Jamaican teenager withut much f a future.Hwever,ne persn wanted t change this.Stephen Francis bserved then eighteen-year-ld Shelly-Ann at a track meet and was cnvinced that he had seen the beginnings f true greatness.Her times were nt exactly impressive,but even s,he sensed there was smething trying t get ut,smething the ther caches had verlked when they had assessed her and fund her lacking.He decided t ffer Shelly-Ann a place in his very strict training sessins.Their cperatin quickly prduced results,and a few years later at Jamaica’s Olympic trials in early 2008,Shelly-Ann,wh at that time nly ranked number 70 in the wrld,beat Jamaica’s unchallenged queen f the sprint.
“Where did she cme frm?”asked an astnished sprinting wrld,befre cncluding that she must be ne f thse ne-hit wnders that spring up frm time t time,nly t disappear again withut signs.But Shelly-Ann was t prve that she was anything but a ne-hit wnder.At the Beijing Olympics she swept away any dubts abut her ability t perfrm cnsistently by becming the first Jamaican wman ever t win the 100 metres Olympic gld.She did it again ne year n at the Wrld Champinships in Berlin,becming wrld champin with a time f 10.73—the furth fastest time ever.
Shelly-Ann is a little wman with a big smile.She has a mental tughness that did nt cme abut by chance.Her jurney t becming the fastest wman n earth has been anything but smth and effrtless.She grew up in ne f Jamaica’s tughest inner-city cmmunities knwn as Waterhuse,where she lived in a ne-rm apartment,sleeping fur in a bed with her mther and tw brthers.Waterhuse,ne f the prest cmmunities in Jamaica,is a really vilent and verppulated place.Several f Shelly-Ann’s friends and family were caught up in the killings;ne f her cusins was sht dead nly a few streets away frm where she lived.Smetimes her family didn’t have enugh t eat.She ran at the schl champinships barefted because she culdn’t affrd shes.Her mther Maxime,ne f a family f furteen,had been an athlete herself as a yung girl but,like s many ther girls in Waterhuse,had t stp after she had her first baby.Maxime’s early entry int the adult wrld with its respnsibilities gave her the determinatin t ensure that her kids wuld nt end up in Waterhuse’s rundabut f pverty.One f the first things Maxime used t d with Shelly-Ann was taking her t the track,and she was ready t sacrifice everything.
It didn’t take lng fr Shelly-Ann t realize that sprts culd be her way ut f Waterhuse.
But Shelly-Ann’s victry was far greater than that.
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It didn’t take lng fr Shelly-Ann t realize that sprts culd be her way ut f Waterhuse.On a summer evening in Beijing in 2008,all thse lng,hard hurs f wrk and cmmitment finally bre fruit.The bareft kid wh just a few years previusly had been living in pverty,surrunded by criminals and vilence,had written a new chapter in the histry f sprts.
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But Shelly-Ann’s victry was far greater than that.The night she wn Olympic gld in Beijing,the rutine murders in Waterhuse and the drug wars in the neighburing streets stpped.The dark clud abve ne f the wrld’s tughest criminal neighburhds simply disappeared fr a few days.“I have s much fire burning fr my cuntry,”Shelly said.She plans t start a fundatin fr hmeless children and wants t build a cmmunity centre in Waterhuse.She hpes t inspire the Jamaicans t lay dwn their weapns.She intends t fight t make it a wman’s as well as a man’s wrld. As Muhammad Ali puts it,“Champins aren’t made in gyms.Champins are made frm smething they have deep inside them.A desire,a dream,a visin.”One f the things Shelly-Ann can be prud f is her understanding f this truth.
【真题微练04】
(2015·四川卷·B)
Nthing culd stp Dad.After he was put n disability fr a bad back,he bught a small farm in the cuntry,just enugh t grw fd fr the family.He planted vegetables,fruit trees and even kept bees fr hney.
And every week he cleaned Old Man McClgin’s chicken huse in exchange fr manure.The smell really burned the inside f yur nse.When we cmplained abut the terrible smell,Dad said the strnger the manure,the healthier the crps,and he was right.Fr example,just ne f his cantalupes filled the entire huse with its sweet smell,and the taste was even sweeter.
As the vegetables started cming in,Dad threw himself int cking.
Dad carried the pt ut and we pened drs and windws t air ut the huse.
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As the vegetables started cming in,Dad threw himself int cking.One day,armed with a basket f vegetables,he annunced he was ging t make stew.Dad pulled ut a pressure cker and filled it up with cabbages,eggplants,ptates,crns,nins and carrts.Fr abut half an hur,the pressure built and the vegetables cked.Finally,Dad turned ff the stve,the pt began t cl and the pressure relief valve sprayed ut a clud f steam.If we thught Dad’s pile f chicken manure was bad,this was 10 times wrse.When Dad tk ff the lid,the smell nearly kncked us ut.
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Dad carried the pt ut and we pened drs and windws t air ut the huse.Just hw bad was it?The neighbrs came ut f their huses t see if we had a gas leak! Determined,Dad filled ur plates with steaming stew and passed them arund.It didn’t lk that bad,and after the first wave had shut dwn my ability t smell,it didn’t ffend the nse s much,either.I tk a taste.It wuld never win a prize in a cking cmpetitin,but it was surprisingly edible,and we drank up every last drp f sup!
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