2023年中考英语作文复习建议信写作课件

这是一份2023年中考英语作文复习建议信写作课件，共19页。PPT课件主要包含了 写作评分标准，总- 分-总， 结构，回信+建议， 语言， 思路等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假如你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。请你阅读来信后回复，词数80左右。【2020西湖区 一模】
看到这篇作文你会怎么写？ Have a try
英文作文大结构是什么？
1. 开头表达自己乐意提供建议2. 具体的建议3. 表达祝愿
审题：找出需要建议的地方
②生日当天吃什么传统食物以及意义
③在选择礼物上给出建议
①中国人怎么庆祝生日②生日当天吃什么传统食物以及意义③在选择礼物上给出建议
中国人过生日的时候吃蛋糕，和亲戚朋友一起聚会吃饭。
Chinese usually eat birthday cakes n the birthday.
Chinese are likely t enjy birthday cakes n the birthday.
Chinese are fnd f eating birthday cakes and lngevity ndles n the birthday.
换词和短语：be likely t d/be fnd f/enjy
Dear Linda, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Ping
Chinese are likely t enjy birthday cakes n the birthday. Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting tgether t have a big meal.
生日的时候会吃长寿面，代表着长寿。
We usually eat lngevity ndles. Because they stands fr lng life.
It is necessary fr us t eat lngevity ndles, which stands fr lng life.
It is vital fr us t eat lngevity ndles, which is regarded as a symbl f lng life.
句式+扩充句子：it is adj. fr sb. t d sth./定语从句
Chinese are likely t enjy birthday cakes n the birthday. Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting tgether t have a big meal. It is necessary fr us t eat ndles, which is regarded as a symbl f lng life.
建议送唱片/自己国家特色的礼物······，因为······
句式：as fr 至于 why nt d···？为什么不······？ I strngly advised yu t d sth.我强烈建议······ since+句子 因为······
Dear Linda,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Ping
1. Chinese are likely t enjy birthday cakes n the birthday. Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting tgether t have a big meal. 2. It is necessary fr us t eat ndles, which is regarded as a symbl f lng life.3. As fr gifts, why nt chse a recrd fr her since yu tld me she was crazy abut jazz music last time?
句子与句子/要点和要点之间缺少？
First f all, Chinese are likely t enjy birthday cakes n the birthday. What's mre, Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting tgether t have a big meal. Becides, It is necessary fr us t eat ndles, which is regarded as a symbl f lng life.As fr gifts, why nt chse a recrd fr her since yu tld me she was crazy abut jazz music last time?
first f all、what’s mre、besides、as fr、therefre
1. 开头表达自己乐意提供建议
I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t···I'm glad t ffer yu sme suggestins abut it.I'm delighted t receive yur letter. Nw I'm writng t give yu sme advice n hw t···
Hpe my advice abve will mre r less be helpful t yu and have a gd time.I hpe my suggestins will be great help fr yu.I'm lking frward t yur reply.
It must be very interesting and meaningful fr yu t plan a birthday fr yur best friend. I'm s glad t ffer yu sme suggestins abut it. First f all, Chinese are likely t enjy birthday cakes n the birthday. What's mre, Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting tgether t have a big meal. Becides, It is necessary fr us t eat ndles, which is regarded as a symbl f lng life.As fr gifts, why nt chse a recrd fr her since yu tld me she was crazy abut jazz music last time? Hpe my advice abve will mre r less be helpful t yu and have a gd time
列大纲：避免漏掉要点句式：联系学习过的固定搭配衔接：连接词；衔接句