高考复习 新高考英语写作 读后读写环境描写（PPT课件）

这是一份高考复习 新高考英语写作 读后读写环境描写（PPT课件），共17页。PPT课件主要包含了环境描写等内容，欢迎下载使用。

通过对环境的描写，能够向读者交待故事的背景，衬托人物，渲染气氛，从而推动情节发展。通过环境描写向读者间接的表达着故事中主人公的内心情感变化。
首先要明确的是，把主旨想清楚，时刻不忘“写景乃为主旨服务”这句话。
The wind was blwing dreadfully(恐怖地)。传达出情感需要不好，则用贬义色彩的糟糕负面的词The wind was blwing sftly（柔和地）。传达出的情感好，则用褒义色彩的美好的、正向的词。
第一种：情景交融：写景+感受
这个景物描写很精彩。但是如果后面在加一句：Resting beside my mther, with hands held tightly by her, I feel the wrld is s beautiful.（躺在母亲身边，双手紧紧地握着母亲，我觉得这个世界是如此美丽。）这样一加，就让“母亲”显现，就让“我与母亲关系和谐”的主旨就显现了。
第一种：比喻法：写景+比喻+特点
句子分析：这句话的核心句是：The darkness was thin，即：暮色稀薄。其他内容都是锦上添花的作用，就是让这个核心句子显得更加完整具体。Hw t d it?1) 用到了比喻：这里的 like.就起到了这个作用：“like sme sleazy dress”像是一条薄薄的裙子，2) 将darkness比作薄薄的裙子还不够，还穿了好几个冬天(has been wrn and wrn fr many winters),冬天里穿裙子一定非常的寒冷。于是作者又加上了寒冷入骨(t the bnes)。如此，一个寒冷的夜晚(cld night)与一件不能御寒的敞衣相联系，内容可以如此丰富。
平平无奇的交代下自然现象+比喻（定语从句或非谓语修饰）+突出特点(冷得不得了)
描写“雾”（5秒钟时间思考）
1. 人物动作的画面定格
They std there fr a mment, side by side, waiting fr the rushing hliday current and fr their place in it. Then the daughter glanced ver and mmentarily regarded her mther. And slwly, almst reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustmed affectin arund her mther’s shulders and gently guided her back int the deluge. 她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。 然后女儿扫了一眼，立刻注视着她的母亲。 慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。
His hard wrk paid ff! Hlding the sda tin firmly, Reuben rushed fr the shp t buy the brch. The mment he gt the beautiful brch, he burst thrugh the frnt dr and placed it in Dra’s hand. Never had Dra received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her sn tightly int her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。
2. 特殊寓意的写景画面
The sky was a billin pure eyes f light and the grass green underft, it was as if night and day had becme ne beautiful mment. Dawn had cme. 天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）Dawn sent shimmering rays ver the placid cean, bestwing a glden path frm the shre t the hrizn.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明到来的画面）The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded thrugh it, the sunset like range paint n a blue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面） 
The lingering sunlight was bliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped ver the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）The mn under siege by stars seemed t lighten the night bringing frth stars that shne and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness cnsumed everything。被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面） Lking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew befre. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My cnsciusness ebbed away with the heat. I tk a few blinks befre I landed with a thud.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）
 Dtted with glittering  stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）The rain drummed n the windw, bidding farewell t the last beam f sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。 （雨水来临的画面） Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet grund is cld under ft. A dense earthly sweet smell rises frm the grund, envelping everything within its sft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strlled dwn the street. Occasinally, ne wuld fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it t the grund. 我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）