外研版 (2019)选择性必修 第二册Unit 2 Improving yourself集体备课课件ppt

写一篇读后感

本单元的写作项目是写一篇读后感，属于议论文写作范畴。

[基本框架]

1．开头(the beginning)——总结文章的主要内容；

2．主体(the middle)——写出自己的感受和反思；

3．结尾(the ending)——得出结论。

[常用词块]

1．an unforgettable experience一次难忘的经历

2．remind sb.of sth.使某人想起某事

3．look back on the past回想往事

4．make a good impression on sb.给某人留下深刻印象

5．devote one's spare time to do sth.利用某人课余时间做某事

6．show one's determination表达某人的决心

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．The story is based on the folk legends of the primitive northern tribes.

这个故事是以北方原始部落的民间传说为根据的。

2．The Million Pound Bank Note gives account of a story about a poor，honest man who gains respect and love by a million pound bank­note given by a pair of rich brothers.

《百万英镑》讲述了一个故事，讲的是一个贫穷、诚实的人，他通过一对富有的兄弟给了一张百万英镑的钞票来赢得尊重和爱。

3．The film tells the true story of a group who survived in the Andes in sub­zero temperatures.

这部电影讲述了一群人在安第斯山脉零度以下的环境中生存下来的真实故事。

★丰满主体

4．After reading this story，I understand that we teenagers should find and make use of our advantages，stopping complaining about the shortcomings all the time.

看完这个故事，我明白我们青少年应该发现并利用我们的优势，停止一直抱怨缺点。

5．Taking my friend Thompson as an example，you'll find his parents usually guide him to figure out the answers by himself rather than directly giving him the answers to the questions.

以我的朋友汤普森为例，你会发现他的父母通常引导他自己找出答案，而不是直接给他答案。

6．In conclusion，what we want to do with the blind following of trends which reflects a widespread lack of basic scientific knowledge is to improve our personal qualities.

综上所述，我们要处理盲目跟风反映出普遍缺乏科学基础知识的问题，就是要提高个人素质。

7．I love The Necklace not only due to the incredibly wonderful ending，but also because of the exquisite description of the weakness of humanity.

我之所以喜欢《项链》，不仅是因为它有着令人难以置信的精彩结局，更是因为它对人性弱点的精妙描写。

★余味结尾

8．Many people simply regard Pride and Prejudice as a love story，but in my opinion，this book is an illustration of the society at that time.

很多人只是把《傲慢与偏见》当作一个爱情故事，但在我看来，这本书是当时社会的写照。

假设你阅读了英国小说家查尔斯·狄更斯(Charles Dickens)的代表作之一《雾都孤儿》(Oliver Twist)，请你根据以下提示写一篇读后感：

1．查尔斯·狄更斯是英国伟大的小说家，《雾都孤儿》是他的代表作之一；

2．《雾都孤儿》的主人公奥利弗·崔斯特(Oliver Twist)是一个孤儿，他被扔进了贫穷与犯罪的魔窟；

3．他历尽无数艰辛，最后在好心人的帮助下，身世被查明并获得了幸福。同时，那些坏人都受到了惩罚；

4．奥利弗·崔斯特的成长环境是充满黑暗和罪恶的，但是他始终很善良；

5．这部小说会给人留下深刻的印象，让人懂得做人的道理；

6．《雾都孤儿》在英国文学史上是最受欢迎并且是被高度称赞的作品之一。

注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【学生习作】

Charles Dickens is a great English novelist. He wrote many famous novels，and among them Oliver Twist is the most famous. The hero of this novel is Oliver Twist，an orphan. He is thrown into a world full of poverty and crime. He suffers a lot when he is young. In the end，warm­hearted people help Oliver Twist find out his identity and he gains happiness. At the same time，the bad people are punished.

From my point of view，the novel will leave a deep impression on people and make people understand the truth of life. Learning from the kind Oliver can regain the nature of goodness.

点评：

1．句式较为简单，没有复杂句式。

2．内容叙述详实，感受和反思单薄，给人以头重脚轻的感觉。

【升格作文】

Charles Dickens，a great English novelist，wrote many famous novels，among which Oliver Twist is the most famous.The hero of this novel is Oliver Twist，an orphan，who is thrown into a world full of poverty and crime.He suffers a lot when he is young.In the end，with warm­hearted people's help，Oliver Twist's identity is found out and he gains happiness.At the same time，the bad people are punished.

From my point of view，dark and evil as the environment Oliver Twist grows in is，he is always very kind.The novel will leave a deep impression on people and make people understand the truth of life.

Oliver Twist is a novel reflecting the tragic fact of the life.I，a kind person，want to tell you that learning from the kind Oliver can regain the nature of goodness.

A peacock (孔雀) was very unhappy with her ugly voice，so she spent most of her days complaining about it.“It is true that you cannot sing，” said the fox，“but look how beautiful you are！” “Oh，but what good is all this beauty，” cried the bird，“with such an unpleasant voice！” “Listen，” said the fox，“each one owns something good: you have such beauty；the nightingale (夜莺) has her songs；and the owl (猫头鹰) has his eyes.Even if you had a sweet voice，you would still complain about another thing.Why can't you just be happy about what you have already got？”

请从这则寓言中提炼出一个恰当的主题，写一篇读后感。

注意：不得直接引用原文中的句子。

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【参考范文】

The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice ignoring her beauty. But a fox advises her to be content with what she owns.

After reading it，I understand that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages，stopping complaining about the shortcomings all the time. If the peacock had realized this，she would not have been so upset，then would have shown her beautiful figures and been proud of herself.

Many people around me make the same mistake，who only focus on what they cannot get. Take my friend Mike as an example. He does very well in all subjects，ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams. But he usually complains that he can't play basketball well because he is not tall enough. Never will he know how we admire him! In fact，nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent. So we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much.