(新高考)高考英语二轮专题读后续写精读精炼（六）（含答案解析）

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That night, I quarreled with my mther, and then strmed ut f the huse. While n the rad, I remembered that I did nt have any mney in my pcket, I did nt even take my cell phne with me t make a call hme．
At the same time, I went thrugh a ndle shp, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished fr a bwl f ndles, but I had n mney!
The seller saw me standing befre the cunter and asked, “Hey little girl, yu want t eat a bwl？” “But …but I d nt carry mney …” I shyly replied．
“Okay, I’ll treat yu．” the seller said, “cme in, I will ck yu a bwl．”
A few minutes later the wner brught me a steaming bwl f ndles. After eating sme pieces, I cried．
“What is it？” He asked．
“Nthing. I am just tuched by yur kindness!” I said as I wiped my tears. “Even a stranger n the street gives me a bwl f ndles, and my mther, after a quarrel, chased me ut f the huse. She is cruel （残忍的）!”
The seller sighed, “Girl, why did yu think s? Think again. I nly gave yu a bwl f ndles and yu felt that way. Yur mther has been taking care f yu since yu were little, why were yu nt grateful and why did yu hurt yur mm? Yu shuld say srry t yur mm.”
I was really surprised after hearing that．
Why did I nt think f that? A bwl f ndles frm a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mther has raised me since I was little and I have never felt s, nt even a little．
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分为两段，开头语已为你写好；
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Just at that mment, many memries came back int my mind．
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Befre I culd aplgize, my mther saw me and rushed t me
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了作者和妈妈吵了一架，然后冲出了房子,也没有给家里打电话。作者走过一家面馆，突然觉得很饿，想要一碗面条，但是没有钱，面馆老板免费请作者吃了一碗面。作者感悟到一个陌生人一碗面条都能让他心怀感激，从小妈妈就把他养大，但却从来没有这样的感觉，作者对此进行反思。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由续写段落的首句“Just at that mment, many memries came back int my mind．(就在那一刻，许多回忆涌上了我的脑海。)”及前文“Why did I nt think f that? A bwl f ndles frm a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mther has raised me since I was little and I have never felt s, nt even a little.( 我以前怎么从来没有感受到呢?一个陌生人给我的一碗面条让我心怀感激，从小妈妈就把我养大，我从来没有这样的感觉，一点也没有。)”可知，本段续写内容主要写作者经过反思，意识到母亲对自己的好，然后回家以及回家后母亲对他的宽容态度。
2.续写线索：反思——回忆——生活细节——回家——款待——感动、羞愧
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.到达：arrive/get t/reach
②.回家：g back hme/return hme
情绪类
①.感谢：be grateful/shw my appreciatin/shw my gratitude
②.羞愧：ashamed / blush fr
[高分句型
1. When arriving hme, I saw my mther sitting at the dinner table, wrried and tired.（此句运用了状语从句中的省略，从句的主语与主句一致，且从句中含有be动词时，从句中可将主语与be动词省略。）
2. Befre I culd aplgize, my mther saw me and rushed t me “Oh, hney, yu’re back! I have prepared yur favrite ndles.”（本句中运用了befre引导的时间状语从句。）
三：续写单句训练
就在这时，我又想起了许多记忆。

当我生病的时候，她总是照顾我。

当我回到家时，她总是准备我最喜欢的食物。

她所有的善良都回到了我身上。

我应该感激她为我所做的一切，我意识到我应该立即回家，向她说对不起。

回到家，我看到母亲坐在餐桌旁，担心又累。

我还没来得及道歉，妈妈就看见了我，冲向我说：“哦，亲爱的，你回来了！”

我准备好了你最喜欢的面条。

听到这话，我忍不住倒在她的怀里。

“对不起，妈妈，请原谅我，”我低声对她说，眼泪流下来，为自己感到羞愧。

四：佳作展现
Just at that mment, many memries came back int my mind．
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Befre I culd aplgize, my mther saw me and rushed t me
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五：课后练笔
It was ne f the httest days f the dry seasn.We had nt seen rain in almst a mnth.The crps were dying.Cws had stpped giving milk.The streams were lng gne back int the earth.If we didn’t see sme rain sn we wuld lse everything.
I was in the kitchen making lunch fr the family when I saw my six-year-ld sn,Billy,walking tward the wds.I culd nly see his back.He wasn’t walking in his usual way.He was bviusly walking with a great effrt,trying t be as still as pssible.Minutes after he disappeared int the wds,he came running ut again,tward the huse.
Mments later,hwever,he was nce again walking in that slw purpseful lng step tward the wds.This activity went n fr ver an hur—walking cautiusly t the wds,then running back t the huse.Finally,my curisity gt the best f me.I crept ut f the huse and fllwed him n his jurney.
He was cupping bth hands in frnt f him as he walked; being very careful nt t spill the water he carried.Branches and thrns slapped(拍打) his little face but he did nt try t avid them.He had a much greater purpse.As I leaned in t spy n him,I saw the mst amazing site.
Several large deer appeared threatening in frnt f him.But Billy walked right up t them.I almst screamed fr him t get away.And I saw a baby deer laying n the grund,bviusly suffering frm heavy lss f water and heat exhaustin,lifte its head with great effrt t lap(舔)up the water in my beautiful by’s hand.
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When the water was gne,Billy jumped up t run back t the huse.
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And later I knew what was ging n.
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六：单句训练
水没了后，比利跳起来跑回屋里。

我的好奇心再次驱使我跟着他回来。

他到达厨房后，打开了水龙头。

当他努力用双手喝水来接水时，水还在通过他的手指跑开。

他也很难把手关掉水龙头。

他似乎为浪费水而感到难过，自判有罪。

他脸上带着一种不安的表情，小心翼翼地把它朝树林走去。

后来我知道了发生了什么。

我开始明白他为什么不按照他平常的方式走路。

我站在树林边，看着这颗最美丽的心如此努力地努力拯救生命。

当我的眼泪开始落在地上，他们突然加入了其他多滴。

我抬头看着天空。就好像上帝自己也被我儿子的巨大努力感动了，开始骄傲地哭泣。


参考答案
三：单句训练
Just at that mment, many memries came back int my mind.
When I was ill, she always tk care f me .
When I arrived hme, she always prepared my favrite fd.
All her kindness came back t me.
I shuld be grateful fr all she had dne fr me, I realized I shuld g back hme immediately and say srry t her.
When arriving hme, I saw my mther sitting at the dinner table, wrried and tired.
Befre I culd aplgize, my mther saw me and rushed t me “Oh, hney, yu’re back!
I have prepared yur favrite ndles.”
Hearing this，I culdn’t help thrwing myself int her arms.
“Srry, Mm, please frgive me, ” I whispered t her with tears streaming dwn my cheeks, ashamed f myself.
六：单句训练
When the water was gne,Billy jumped up t run back t the huse.
My curisity nce again drve me t fllw him back.
After he reached the kitchen,he turned n the tap.
As he was trying hard t cup bth hands t receive the water,it was still running away thrugh his fingers.
And he als had great difficulty turning ff the tap with hands ccupied.
He seemed t be s srry and self-cndemned fr his wasting f water.Wearing a nte f upset n his face,he carried it carefully twards the wds.
And later I knew what was ging n.
And it began t make sense t me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.
I std n the edge f the wds watching the mst beautiful heart wrking s hard t save a life.
As my tears began t hit the grund,they were suddenly jined by ther mre drps.
I lked up int the sky.
It was as if Gd himself was mved by the great effrt made by my sn and began t weep with pride.
四：佳作展现
（一）
Just at that mment, many memries came back int my mind. When I was ill, she always tk care f me .When I arrived hme, she always prepared my favrite fd. All her kindness came back t me. I shuld be grateful fr all she had dne fr me, I realized I shuld g back hme immediately and say srry t her. When arriving hme, I saw my mther sitting at the dinner table, wrried and tired.
Befre I culd aplgize, my mther saw me and rushed t me “Oh, hney, yu’re back! I have prepared yur favrite ndles.” Hearing this，I culdn’t help thrwing myself int her arms. “Srry, Mm, please frgive me, ” I whispered t her with tears streaming dwn my cheeks, ashamed f myself.
（二）
When the water was gne,Billy jumped up t run back t the huse.My curisity nce again drve me t fllw him back.After he reached the kitchen,he turned n the tap.As he was trying hard t cup bth hands t receive the water,it was still running away thrugh his fingers.And he als had great difficulty turning ff the tap with hands ccupied.He seemed t be s srry and self-cndemned fr his wasting f water.Wearing a nte f upset n his face,he carried it carefully twards the wds.
And later I knew what was ging n.And it began t make sense t me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.I std n the edge f the wds watching the mst beautiful heart wrking s hard t save a life.As my tears began t hit the grund,they were suddenly jined by ther mre drps.I lked up int the sky.It was as if Gd himself was mved by the great effrt made by my sn and began t weep with pride.