(新高考)高考英语二轮专题读后续写精读精炼（七）（含答案解析）

这是一份(新高考)高考英语二轮专题读后续写精读精炼（七）（含答案解析），共9页。
In 1945, a 12-year-ld by saw a beautiful brch （胸针）in a shp windw that set his heart racing. But the price—five dllars—was t high fr Reuben Earle. Five dllars wuld buy almst a week's fd fr his family.
Reuben culdn’t ask his father fr the mney. Everything his father made thrugh fishing went t his mther, Dra. Slim and beautiful, she was the center f the hme and the glue that held it tgether. The husewrk was never-ending, and she struggled t feed and clthe their five children, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared abut.
Nevertheless, he pened the shp's dr and went inside. Standing prudly and straight in his flur-sack （面粉袋改做的）shirt and washed-ut trusers, he tld the shpkeeper what he wanted, adding, “But I dn't have the mney right nw. Can yu please hld it fr me fr sme time?”
"I'll try,” the shpkeeper smiled. "Peple arund here dn't usually have that kind f mney t spend n things. It shuld keep fr a while."
Reuben respectfully tuched his wrn cap and walked ut. He wuld raise the mney and nt tell anybdy, fr he thught Mum wuld get surprised when she saw that brch. On hearing the sund f hammering （捶打）frm a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he culd raise mney by selling the used nail bags. Peple built their wn hmes in Bay Rberts, using nails bught in bags frm a lcal factry. Smetimes the used bags were thrwn away at the cnstructin site, and Reuben knew he culd sell them back t the factry fr five cents a piece. That day he sld tw nail bags and hid the mney in a rusty sda tin.
注意：1,续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Every day after schl, Reuben started his plan.
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Finally, the time came!
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二：文本解析
情节分析：本文主要讲述了一个小故事：12岁男孩Reuben想为自己的母亲买一枚胸针，可 手头没有足够的钱，他找到店主，店主答应为他保留一段时间，而Reuben开始捡钉子来筹 钱购买胸针。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：每天放学后，Reuben就开始他的计划。 本段开头提到Reuben已经开始进行筹钱计划，后文可以讲述他的筹钱过程以及最终结果， 可以具体描写一下筹钱过程中Reuben付出的努力。
第二段开头是：终于，是时候了！本段 开头暗示Reuben己经筹到了足够的钱，后文就可以描写他买下胸针的激动心情以及将胸针 送给母亲Dra的过程。另外，母亲收到胸针后开心、感动的反应也可以是描写的重点. 文章的主人公无疑是小男孩Reuben,但次要人物Dra是不能忽略的，需要通过妈妈来衬托 儿子。那么看看文章对妈妈的描述：
Slim and beautiful, she was the center f the hme and the glue that held it tgether. The husewrk was never-ending, and she struggled t feed and clthe their five children, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared abut.
如果结尾只是说妈妈很开心，就非常遗憾了，还必须和这个描写照应：对生活的乐观 和对孩子的热爱。
妈妈的开心：Wearing the beautiful brch and knwing the stry behind it, Dra was t verjyed t utter a wrd.
妈妈的疼爱：She just threw her arms tightly arund her belved sn.
对话： “Merry Christmas, mm"， the sn annunced prudly. "Yu t." the prud mther eched.
主题升华：Well, n dream is ut f reach fr a willing heart.
三：续写单句训练
每天放学后，鲁本都开始了他的计划。

又冷又饿，鲁本四处闲逛，小心地从一条街到另一条街寻找指甲袋。

为了节省更多的钱，这个下定决心的男孩甚至决定在一大早就送文件。

他赢的每枚硬币都去了苏打罐，他珍贵的“银行”，然后所有的疲倦都神奇地消失了

每次他经过商店橱窗里的胸针时，都会提醒他，他做了什么是值得的。

一天比一天地，他的苏打水锡变得越来越重了。

六个星期过去了，他才知道。然后走到了平安夜。

终于，时间到了！鲁本偷偷走进他的房间，小心翼翼地拿出苏打罐，把所有的硬币都倒出来，开始数。

5美元二十美分！他第二次数了一遍，毫无差错。

他的努力工作最终得到了回报！

鲁本紧紧地拿着苏打锡，立刻冲进了商店。

朵拉戴着漂亮的胸针，知道背后的故事，欣喜若狂，一句话也说出来。

她只是伸出双臂紧紧地搂住了她心爱的儿子。

“圣诞快乐，妈妈，”儿子骄傲地宣布。“你自己也是如此。”

骄傲的母亲也着。嗯，没有梦想是无法不到的。

四：佳作展现
Every day after schl, Reuben started his plan.
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Finally, the time came!
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五：课后练笔
Alex was very excited because the New Year Eve was appraching. Suddenly, he saw his grandfather sitting alne lking very unhappy.
Alex went t him and asked, “Grandpa, why are yu sitting alne? Is there anything wrng with yu?”
His grandfather replied, “N, I am fine. I just feel like sitting alne.”
“Grandpa, yu knw the New Year is near, s are yu preparing fr it?” asked Alex excitedly.
“N dear, I am nt. With the passage f time, the wrld has cmpletely changed and I dn’t see any pint in celebrating the wrld I see tday,” answered his grandfather disappintedly.
“I knw smething is wrng with yu and yu are nt telling me. Please tell me what the prblem is.” Alex said.
“I feel I am a stranger in the wrld I am living in. It is nt the same as I have knwn. Nw everyne is busy with their wn wrk. Yur father is busy with business, yur brther is busy n the cmputer, yur sister is busy studying abrad and yur mum is busy with husehld wrk. I dn’t knw hw t pass my days,” said his grandfather sadly.
“Grandpa, yu have me!” said Alex.
His grandfather smiled and said, “Yeah, yu are here, but what abut thers? In ur days, we had a fixed time each day when the whle family sat tgether and talked, shared prblems and laughed tgether.”
That night Alex thught abut what his grandfather had said and an idea flashed thrugh his mind. He decided t have a surprise New Year party at his wn hme and make everyne cme tgether that day. As New Year’s Eve gt nearer, Alex gt busy preparing fr the party. He kept it a secret frm his grandfather and asked everyne nt t let him knw abut it in rder t surprise him.
It was December 31 and everyne was busy with their wn wrk.
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Alex saw his grandfather lking very happy while talking with the family members.
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六：单句训练
那是12月31日，每个人都在忙着自己的工作。

亚历克斯的祖父坐在他的房间里看书。

晚上8点。每个人都开始聚集在客厅里，亚历克斯去给他的祖父打电话。

他惊讶地发现所有人都在那里。“今天，我们不去，只是为你享受派对！”亚历克斯说。

全家都为忙于生活而道歉。然后他们吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐，一起聊天，分享问题，一起大笑。

亚历克斯在和家人交谈时看到他的祖父看起来很开心。

他们回顾了过去，为未来做了计划。

“我希望我们不会再被分开了。所有家庭成员在一起的地方永远不会改变。亚历克斯看着他年迈的祖父说。

其他人也同意了，并确定了全家定期聚会的时间。

爷爷感动了，希望和大家一起享受生活。

尽管外面很冷，但全家还是暖和不过了。


参考答案
三：单句训练
Every day after schl, Reuben started his plan.
Cld and hungry, Reuben wandered arund, searching fr nail bags carefully frm ne street t anther.
T save mre mney, the determined by even decided t deliver papers n the early mrning.
Every cin he wn went t a sda tin, his treasured “bank"， and then all the tiredness disappeared magically.
Each time he passed by the brch in the shp windw wuld remind him what he did was wrthwhile.
Day by day, his sda tin became heavier and heavier.
Six weeks passed befre he even knew it.
Then apprached the Christmas Eve.
Finally, the time came! Reuben stle int his rm and cautiusly tk ut the sda tin, pured all the cins ut and began t cunt.
Five dllars and twenty cents! He cunted it a secnd time, and n mistake.
His hard wrk eventually paid ff!
Hlding the sda tin firmly, Reuben rushed fr the shp withut a secnd's delay.
Wearing the beautiful brch and knwing the stry behind it, Dra was t verjyed t utter a wrd.
She just threw her arms tightly arund her belved sn. “Merry Christmas, mm"， the sn annunced prudly. "Yu t." the prud mther eched.
Well, n dream is ut f reach fr a willing heart.
六：单句训练
It was December 31 and everyne was busy with their wn wrk.
Alex’s grandfather was sitting in his rm, reading a bk.
When the clck struck 8 pm. everyne started gathering in the living rm and Alex went t call his grandfather.
He was surprised t find everyne there. “Tday, we are nt ging anywhere but enjy the party fr yu!” Alex said.
The whle family aplgized fr being busy with their lives. Then they had a wnderful dinner talking, sharing prblems and laughing tgether.
Alex saw his grandfather lking very happy while talking with the family members.
They lked back n the ld days and planned fr the future.
“I hpe we wn’t be separated again. It never changes that hme is where all family members are tgether.” Alex said, lking at his ageing grandfather.
Others agreed and fixed a time when the whle family wuld get tgether regularly.
Grandpa was mved t tears, wishing t enjy life with everyne.
Despite the cld utside, the whle family culdn’t be warmer.
四：佳作展现
（一）
Every day after schl, Reuben started his plan. Cld and hungry, Reuben wandered arund, searching fr nail bags carefully frm ne street t anther. T save mre mney, the determined by even decided t deliver papers n the early mrning. Every cin he wn went t a sda tin, his treasured “bank"， and then all the tiredness disappeared magically. Each time he passed by the brch in the shp windw wuld remind him what he did was wrthwhile. Day by day, his sda tin became heavier and heavier. Six weeks passed befre he even knew it. Then apprached the Christmas Eve.
Finally, the time came! Reuben stle int his rm and cautiusly tk ut the sda tin, pured all the cins ut and began t cunt. Five dllars and twenty cents! He cunted it a secnd time, and n mistake. His hard wrk eventually paid ff! Hlding the sda tin firmly, Reuben rushed fr the shp withut a secnd's delay. Wearing the beautiful brch and knwing the stry behind it, Dra was t verjyed t utter a wrd. She just threw her arms tightly arund her belved sn. “Merry Christmas, mm"， the sn annunced prudly. "Yu t." the prud mther eched. Well, n dream is ut f reach fr a willing heart.
（二）
It was December 31 and everyne was busy with their wn wrk. Alex’s grandfather was sitting in his rm, reading a bk. When the clck struck 8 pm. everyne started gathering in the living rm and Alex went t call his grandfather. He was surprised t find everyne there. “Tday, we are nt ging anywhere but enjy the party fr yu!” Alex said. The whle family aplgized fr being busy with their lives. Then they had a wnderful dinner talking, sharing prblems and laughing tgether.
Alex saw his grandfather lking very happy while talking with the family members. They lked back n the ld days and planned fr the future. “I hpe we wn’t be separated again. It never changes that hme is where all family members are tgether.” Alex said, lking at his ageing grandfather. Others agreed and fixed a time when the whle family wuld get tgether regularly. Grandpa was mved t tears, wishing t enjy life with everyne. Despite the cld utside, the whle family culdn’t be warmer.