湖南省衡阳市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-04作文

这是一份湖南省衡阳市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-04作文，共5页。
1．（2020·湖南衡阳）法国作家雨果曾说“进步，才是人应该有的现象”。回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。请结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
要求：
1.选取至少两个方面；
2.结合自身亲身经历谈一谈过去与现在的不同；
3.如何取得这些进步的；
4.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80。
注意：便文中不得出现真实人名、校名地名及其他相关信息。
参考词汇：used t d/be... , try ne’s best t d…,make prgress in( )
I have made prgress
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材料作文
2．（2022·湖南衡阳）随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？
请你以“Hw t Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)词数不少于80。
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电子邮件
3．（2021·湖南衡阳）中华文化渊源流长，博大精深，展现出独特的魅力，让世界为之赞叹。假如你是李强,你的外国笔友Steven非常喜欢中国，想对中国文化有更进步的了解。请你从以下几个方面,给他写一封email,向他简单介绍中国的文化特色。
注意:
1.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等个人信息;
2.根据上图，至少要写两个方面的内容(可适当发挥);
3.80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Steven,
Hw is it ging?
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Yurs,
Li Qiang
参考答案：
1．例文：
I have made prgress
I used t be a shy girl wh was afraid f speaking in frnt f the peple. As a result, I made few friends and ften felt lnely. Finally, I made up my mind t be active and utging. At first, it was difficult fr me t jin in after-schl activities. Luckily, with the help f my friends, I managed t express my thughts and helped thers with their prblems in my spare time. Nw, I’m nt a shy girl any mre. I have made much prgress.
I used t be pr at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest prblem was that after reading a passage, I culdn’t fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. Hwever, I didn’t give up. I kept n remembering new wrds , listening t English sngs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much prgress in English and als I became mre and mre cnfident.
What great prgress I have made!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，要结合题目所给信息，谈一谈自己的进步。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段讲述了作者性格内向，几乎没有朋友，后来经过自己的努力和朋友的帮助，不再害羞，在人际交往方面取得了很大进步；第二段讲述了作者起初不擅长英语，后来经过自己的努力，改变了自己的学习习惯，在英语学习方面取得了很大进步，自己也变得很自信；第三段感叹自己取得了如此大的进步；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。
3.高分亮点：
短语：used t be；in frnt f；be afraid f ding sth.；as a result；make up ne’s mind；help sb with sth.；give up；keep n ding sth.。
句型：At first, it was difficult fr me t jin in after-schl activities. it’s adj. fr sb. t d sth.，it作形式主语，动词不定式t d作真正主语；I used t be a shy girl wh was afraid f speaking in frnt f the peple. wh引导的限制性定语从句。
2．例文
Hw t Be a Happy Student
Everyne wants t be happy. As a student, what can we d t be happy? Here is my advice.
It’s necessary fr us t have learning gals. The gals can make us be clear abut what t d every day and live a busy and meaningful life. T be healthy is t be happy. S remember t have gd life habits and d mre exercise. We can d sme sprts, such as running r playing basketball. Als, we shuld be ready t help thers. When we help thse in truble, we can get much happiness. Besides, the mst imprtant fr us is t stay in a gd md. If we are in gd spirits, we can study better. We shuld have a psitive attitude and be ready t help thers.
I believe if we d s, we can have a happy life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Hw t Be a Happy Student”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．例文：
Dear Steven,
Hw is it ging? I’m glad yu like China and are interested in Chinese culture. Nw I’ll tell yu smething abut Chinese culture.
There are many traditinal festivals in China, such as Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. Peple eat different fds t celebrate different festivals. During the Spring Festival, we ften get tgether as a family and eat dumplings, because it is a symbl f reunin and gd luck. It’s als my favrite fd. And in the Mid-Autumn Festival, peple ften eat mn cakes, because the shape is like the mn. We ften eat Zngzi n the Dragn Bat Festival.
If yu want t visit sme places f interest, yu can g t the great wall and Tiananmen Square. These are places where freigners must g. If yu are interested in clthing, yu can try chengsam r Tang cstume, which is a favrite clthing fr many peple, especially girls. In additin, Beijing Opera is the mst famus, but nw many peple dn’t understand it. If yu want t travel far away, yu can take a high-speed train, which is very fast and will bring yu the mst cmfrtable travel.
I’m lking frward t seeing yu in China.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据题干中的思维导图，写出中国的文化特色，从不同的方面进行介绍，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要围绕导图内容，用第二人称和第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。