上海高考英语作文专项训练：建议信

这是一份上海高考英语作文专项训练：建议信，共10页。试卷主要包含了 对表弟进入高中表示祝贺；等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信一．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是李华，你的表弟张强被一所寄宿制高中（boarding high school）录取了，写一份信祝贺他。信的内容需包括：1. 对表弟进入高中表示祝贺；2. 介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同；3. 对如何成功地过好高中生活提出自己的建议。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你的朋友李华是启明中学的一位高一新生，最近他正在为住校还是走读举棋不定，因此，写信向你求助。假如你是王磊，就读于高三年级，以过来人的身份用英语给他写封回信。你的信必须包括以下内容:1.就住校还是走读的选择提供你的建议；2.说明你建议的理由。(注：住校/走读：board/live at home) 三．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你是明启中学高三学生李华，你校门口一家老字号面馆（time-honored noodle restaurant）因上涨的租金和周边快餐店的竞争，面临关门的窘境。该面馆登报求助。请给该面馆写读者回信，信中必须包括：1. 阐述保护中华老字号（time-honored Chinese brands）的意义；2. 向该面馆提出改进的建议。（信中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息） 四．Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是名启中学的学生李明，你时常听到小区里爷爷奶奶们说起不会扫二维码、打不着车、没有健康码无法乘坐公交车的尴尬场景。请你就此事给上海市信访办的人民建议征集处写一封信，内容包括：1.反映当前存在的问题；2.提出解决办法。 五．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假定你是明启中学的高中学生李华。某电视台线上学习节目打算增设两个栏目。初步拟定从“Reading for Fun”、“Textbook Learning”、“Homework Guidance”、“Online Listening”以及“Questions and Answers”五个栏目中选取两个，特此向所有在线学习者征求意见。请你给电视台写封邮件，推荐两个栏目。邮件内容须包括:1) 你推荐的两个栏目；2) 你推荐这两个栏目的理由。注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。 六．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学学生王放，最近你在报纸上读到多起由于宠物狗主人不牵狗绳，导致 路人被狗咬伤的新闻事件，由此你联想到在你所居住的小区里也经常有各种不文明的养狗行 为，你决定写一封邮件给小区物业公司，内容包括：1. 简述你们小区存在的不文明养狗行为及这些行为可能造成的危害；2. 就这一问题提出改进建议。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   范文及解析：一．Dear cousin，   I'm very pleased to hear that you have passed the entrance examination and been admitted to a very famous boarding high school．I feel very proud of you and I believe you really deserve the honor since you have been working so hard．   As you have mentioned in the letter，similarities and differences exist simultaneously between the life of middle school and that in high school．On the one hand，you have to keep on working hard as there are multiple subjects for you to learn．On the other hand，in high school，teachers，instead of serving as total monitors of your learning performance as they used to be in middle school，will probably encourage you to take initiatives to acquire knowledge and solve problems．In addition，the boarding life requires more of your independence．    For you，personally speaking，to be optimistic is crucial．If you hope to get accustomed to the new environment，you'd better be positive no matter what difficulties you will encounter in your upcoming high school life．May you adapt yourself to the boarding high school life as soon as possible!                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Truly Yours，Li Hua本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给表弟张强写封信，祝贺他被一所寄宿制高中录取，介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同，并提出建议。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法 要求：1. 对表弟进入高中表示祝贺；2. 介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同；3. 对如何成功地过好高中生活提出自己的建议。第二步:列提纲pass the entrance examination; be admitted to; feel proud of; deserve the honor; keep on working hard; encourage sb. to do sth.; take initiatives to do sth.; acquire knowledge and solve problems; get accustomed to; be positive; encounter difficulties; adapt oneself to sth.第三步：连词成句1. I'm very pleased to hear that you have passed the entrance examination and been admitted to a very famous boarding high school．2. I feel very proud of you and I believe you really deserve the honor since you have been working so hard．3. As you have mentioned in the letter，similarities and differences exist simultaneously between the life of middle school and that in high school．4. On the one hand，you have to keep on working hard as there are multiple subjects for you to learn．5. On the other hand，in high school，teachers，instead of serving as total monitors of your learning performance as they used to be in middle school，will probably encourage you to take initiatives to acquire knowledge and solve problems．6. In addition，the boarding life requires more of your independence． 7. If you hope to get accustomed to the new environment，you'd better be positive no matter what difficulties you will encounter in your upcoming high school life．8. May you adapt yourself to the boarding high school life as soon as possible!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1. 表并列补充关系：On the one hand, On the other hand, In addition2. 表转折对比关系（供参考）：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing3. 表因果关系（供参考）：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 二．Dear Li Hua,     You have asked me for my advice with regard to whether to board at school or live at home and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.     In my humble opinion, it is wise to board at school. First of all, you will save much time because you needn’t go a long distance. You can make use of the time that students live at school spend going between home and school. What’s more, it will be a good chance to experience life like college in advance, and you can learn how to live independently and have a good command of many life skills. Last but not least, there is no doubt that you can communicate with classmates and talk about the questions together, which will be of benefit to your study.     I hope you will find these proposals useful and I will be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours,Wang Lei本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给高一新生李华写封回信，就住校还是走读的选择提供你的建议。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.就住校还是走读的选择提供你的建议；2.说明你建议的理由。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）ask sb. for advice; with regard to; board at school; conductive; wise; go a long distance; spend; be a good chance to do; experience; in advance; independently; have a good command of; there is no doubt that; communicate with; be of benefit; be ready to do; discuss; proposal第三步：连词成句1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to whether to board at school or live at home and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.2. In my humble opinion, it is wise to board at school.3. First of all, you will save much time because you needn’t go a long distance.4. You can make use of the time that students live at school spend going between home and school.5. What’s more, it will be a good chance to experience life like college in advance, and you can learn how to live independently and have a good command of many life skills.6. Last but not least, there is no doubt that you can communicate with classmates and talk about the questions together, which will be of benefit to your study.7. I hope you will find these proposals useful and I will be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least 2.表并列补充关系：What is more3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)（供参考） 4.表因果关系：Because 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 三．Dear…,I'm sorry to know you are at the risk of being shut down because of the rising rent and fierce competition.As a time honored noodles restaurant, your restaurant must have a long history, as well as good reputation, providing distinct characteristics of traditional food culture. Therefore, from the bottom of my heart, I hope you can keep it up. As for your current difficulties, the recommendation I would make is that you can first visit your neighboring restaurants, from which you may learn a lot. Second, you can develop new dishes. Third, you can arrange your decorations and put an advertisement in your Wechat circle to promote your noodles and dishes and attact more customers.At last I wish you a booming businessYours,Li Hua本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表报社给校门口一家老字号面馆写一封回信。该面馆因上涨的租金和周边快餐店的竞争，面临关门的窘境，曾向报社报求助。词汇积累困境：in trouble →at risk明显的：clear/obvious→distinct建议：advice/suggestionl→recommendation宣传：advertise→promote句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：You can arrange your decorations and put an advertisement in your Wechat circle to promote your noodles and dishes and attact more customers.拓展句：You can arrange your decorations and put an advertisement in your Wechat circle, which can promote your noodles and dishes and attact more customers. 四．Dear Sir&Madam,My name is Li Hua, a student from Mingqi Middle School. I am writing to you to reflect a problem. I often hear old people in the community say that they can’t scan the QR code, can’t get a taxi, can’t take a bus or other transportation tools without a health code, which makes them often encounter embarrassing moments in their lives.The old people have contributed their whole life to our happiness and health. Faced with their predicament, I think we should take measures to help them. First of all, regarding the health code, we should stipulate that the elderly can also enter public places or take transportation by using their ID cards. Secondly, since most of the payment methods are now mobile payment, it is urgent to organize volunteers to teach the elderly to use mobile payment, taxi-hailing apps and scan QR codes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给上海市信访办的人民建议征集处写一封信，反映当前老人不会扫二维码、打不着车、没有健康码无法乘坐公交车的问题并提出解决办法。1.词汇积累遭遇：encounter→experience贡献：contribute→devote关于：regarding→concerning面对：be faced with=face2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：I often hear old people in the community say that they can’t scan the QR code, can’t get a taxi, can’t take a bus or other transportation tools without a health code, which makes them often encounter embarrassing moments in their lives.拓展句：I often hear old people in the community say that they can’t scan the QR code, can’t get a taxi, can’t take a bus or other transportation tools without a health code, thus making them often encounter embarrassing moments in their lives. 五．Dear editors,       I know you’re going to set up new programs on line. So I’m writing to suggest two programs---“Reading for Fun” and “Homework Guidance” as an online learner.       First of all, I think reading is of great significance to the whole life of people. “Reading for Fun” can create a good language environment for online learners, broaden their horizons, and encourage them to absorb rich language, in order that learners can better use the language.       Secondly, homework allows us to master what we have learned, which can deepen understanding and memory. However, many of our students’ parents are usually busy and have no time to guide their homework. And students do homework at home, where there no teachers. “Homework Guidance” not only can help complete homework, but also can improve the enthusiasm of students. Besides, under the guidance of the program, students can develop good study habits and not worry about their homework any more.        That's why I recommend the two programs. I am sure they will be well-received by the online learners. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.                                                                                                              Sincerely yours,Li Hua本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给电视台写封邮件，推荐两个栏目，并写出推荐这两个栏目的理由。词汇积累建议：suggest→ propose→ advise鼓励：encourage→ urge有益的：helpful→ significant→ be of great significance培养：develop→ bring up2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However, many of our students’ parents are usually busy and have no time to guide their homework.拓展句：However, many of our students’ parents are usually busy, who have no time to guide their homework. 六．Dear Sir,Today I write to you to complain the improper puppy-raising behaviors in our neighborhood and I strongly suggest we should set up rules and regulations for puppy raisers.According to Xinmin Evening News, several dog-biting accidents have occurred recently, in which up to 6 people have been hurt and one of them is now even down in the hospital. All this reminds me of the similar phenomenon in our neighborhood. Some of dog-raisers often walk their dog without leashes. The dogs are rushing on the street, absolutely ignoring the kids and the old around, and make people scared and frightened, which tend to cause some unexpected accidents. Moreover , some of them rarely clean the dog waste in the street. There is no doubt that it will pollute the environment and to great extent do harm to neighour’s health.And thus, we should set up the specific rules and regulations to stop improper puppy-raising behaviours and prevent possible risks. First, all dogs must be kept on leash in public, and masks should be used for some large dogs. And , to prevent possible biting accidents, I suggest maskes should be used for some large dogs when their owners are walking them in public areas. Second, all the puppy owners must learn their dogs’ waste. They can take some paper bags when they are walking dogs. If not, we can’t image what our neighborhood will be like in the future.I advocate the two suggestions can be put into practice and our neighbourhood can be kept clean and safe.Wang Fang本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是明启中学学生王放，最近你在报纸上读到多起由于宠物狗主人不牵狗绳，导致 路人被狗咬伤的新闻事件，由此你联想到在你所居住的小区里也经常有各种不文明的养狗行 为，你决定写一封邮件给小区物业公司，内容包括：1. 简述你们小区存在的不文明养狗行为及这些行为可能造成的危害；2. 就这一问题提出改进建议。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：reminds me of the similar phenomenon in our neighborhood（这让我想起了我们小区里的类似现象）；in public（在公共场所）；put into practice（实施）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I strongly suggest we should set up rules and regulations for puppy raisers.句中使用宾语从句；to prevent possible biting accidents, I suggest maskes should be used for some large dogs when their owners are walking them in public area动词不定式作目的状语且when引导时间状语从句；If not, we can’t image what our neighborhood will be like in the future.句中使用省略句。