广东高考英语作文专项突破

这是一份广东高考英语作文专项突破，共20页。试卷主要包含了假定你在伦敦某校做交换生等内容，欢迎下载使用。

高考英语作文
1．假定你是李华，正在准备明天英语课堂的“一分钟汇报”。你打算讲述你们小组上周获得学校表彰的研究项目“Interviewing Older Generations about Their Lifestyles”，内容包括：
1.项目的目的；
2.项目成功的经验；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow classmates
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!

2．假设你是李华，请你写信给英国笔友Jessica 祝福新年并描述你在春节期间与同学举办的新年聚会。内容包括：
1.时间、地点及参加人员；
2.食物、饮料及活动内容。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jessica,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，为树立“劳动光荣”的理念，上周日你校举办了“文明校园·从我做起”卫生大扫除活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.活动内容：打扫餐厅、整理图书馆图书、清理校园垃圾等；
3.活动意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3.参考词汇：大扫除thorough cleaning
Civilized Campus Starts From Me
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4．假如你是李华，半年前你参加了《健康报》关于“健康与生活方式选择”的夏令营，开始反思自己的不良生活方式，现在请你给该报编辑写一封信投稿，内容包括：
1. 你过去的一种不良生活方式及其对你的影响；
2. 你如何改变这种不良方式；
3. 改变这种方式后你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右（开头已经给出，不计入字数）；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

5．你校英文报开设了新专栏“My Future Plan”。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你未来想从事的工作；
2. 需要做的准备。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

6．假设你是李华，你在暑假参加了社区的志愿者活动，请向学校英语报投稿分享你的经历。内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．活动的时间和内容；
3．你的感悟及（或）收获。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
Thank you for reading my letter.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

7．假定你在伦敦某校做交换生。学校准备成立一个以中国文化为活动主题的俱乐部，请你用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍你希望成立的俱乐部。内容包括：
1. 情况简介；
2. 目的和意义；
3. 你的期待。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What I have in mind is
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8．你校英语社团计划在暑期开展“保护海龟义工之旅” (Sea Turtle Conservation Voluntour)，活动范围在惠东海龟国家级自然保护区及双月湾景区。假如你是英语社团负责人，请你写一篇招募启示。
1. 活动安排；
2. 报名要求及方式（满16周岁）；
3. 呼吁参加。
参考词汇：惠东海龟国家级龟自然保护区 Huidong Sea Turtle National Nature Reserve
双月湾the Double-moon Bay
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Voluntourists Wanted
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
English Society

9．假定你是李华,你校准备举办主题为“我眼中的中国”的汉语演讲比赛。请写封邮件邀请你的英国留学生朋友Robert参加,内容包括:
1.比赛时间和地点(10月1日下午2:00；学校报告厅lecture hall)；
2.演讲主题；
3.比赛注意事项。
注意：
l.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

10．假定你是李华，你校计划组建英文辩论队。请你写一则通知，内容包括：
1.团队目标；
2.报名条件；
3.报名方式。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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11．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写封回信。内容包括：
1. 推荐一本小说；
2. 此书内容简介；
3. 给出阅读建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

12．假如你是学生李华，你的英国笔友Smith写信说，他想来中国当一年的英语教师，现征求你的建议。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他来你的家乡；
3. 说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
Delighted to know that you are determined to teach English in China for a year,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua






参考答案：
1．Dear fellow classmates,
With joint effort of our group, our project “Interviewing Older Generations about Lifestyles” tuned out to be a huge success. Here I’m honored to share our experience in how to carry it out.
Aiming to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, the project offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have. To conduct an in-depth interview, you’d better make a full preparation in advance. including the lists of interviewees and questions. During the interview, gentle words and soft tone are necessary to encourage the old to open their hearts and share more. Last but not least, don’t forget to organize the collected information and write a report.
Hopefully, you’ll find our experience useful and be ready to start your own project.
Thank you!
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在英语课堂的“一分钟汇报”环节，对小组上周获得学校表彰的研究项目“Interviewing Older Generations about Their Lifestyles”进行介绍，内容包括项目的目的，项目成功的经验以及对同学的祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
加深：deepen→enhance
各种各样的：various→a variety of
提前：in advance→ahead of schedule
在……期间：during→for the duration of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, the project offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have.
拓展句：The project, whose aim is to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To conduct an in-depth interview, you’d better make a full preparation in advance，including the lists of interviewees and questions. （运用了动词不定式做目的状语）
【高分句型2】Aiming to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, the project offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have. （运用了现在分词作状语，省略关系代词的限制性定语从句）
2．Dear Jessica,
How have you been? I am very glad to write to introduce myself to you during the Spring Festival.
As we all know, the Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival for Chinese people. It is a wonderful festival for the whole country to celebrate. One afternoon during the Spring Festival holiday this year, a New Year's party was held by three of my classmates and me in the city park. We brought a lot of food and drink from home, some brought a lot of candy and some brought nice juice and yogurt .Then we ate together and talked. Later, we also played basketball with the students from other schools in groups. Although we lost the game, we were all very happy.
Finally, I hope I can share your interesting holiday stories and look forward to your reply.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给英国笔友Jessica 祝福新年并描述你在春节期间与同学举办的新年聚会。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ pleased
有趣的：interesting→ funny
精彩的：wonderful→ splendid
答复：reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then we ate together and talked. Later, we also played basketball with the students from other schools in groups.
拓展句：we played basketball with the students from other schools in groups after we ate together and talked.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Although we lost the game, we were all very happy.（运用了Although引导的让步状语从句。）
【高分句型2】One afternoon during the Spring Festival holiday this year, a New Year's party was held by three of my classmates and me in the city park.（运用了was held的被动语态结构。）
3．                                                                                                                                                      Civilized Campus Starts From Me
Aimed at enhancing the students’ awareness of labor, a thorough cleaning themed on Civilized Campus Starts From Me was organized by our school last Sunday.
With great passion, all the students in our school got involved in various work, ranging from cleaning the dining hall, arranging books in the library to cleaning up the garbage at campus. With our joint efforts, the campus soon took on a new look. Tired though we were, we were in high spirits.
Not only did we obtain a brand-new insight into the meaning of labor, but we would cherish the fruits of others’ labor.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为学校举办的“文明校园·从我做起”卫生大扫除活动写一篇报道，时大家树立起“劳动光荣”的理念。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.参加人员；
2.活动内容：打扫餐厅、整理图书馆图书、清理校园垃圾等；
3.活动意义。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be aimed at；get involved in；range from……to；joint efforts；take on；in high spirits；obtain a brand-new insight into
第三步：连词成句
1.Aimed at enhancing the students’ awareness of labor, a thorough cleaning themed on Civilized Campus Starts From Me was organized by our school last Sunday.
2.With great passion, all the students in our school got involved in various work, ranging from cleaning the dining hall, arranging books in the library to cleaning up the garbage at campus.
3.With our joint efforts, the campus soon took on a new look.
4.Tired though we were, we were in high spirits.
5.Not only did we obtain a brand-new insight into the meaning of labor, but we would cher-ish the fruits of others’ labor.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]：Aimed at enhancing the students’ awareness of labor, a thorough cleaning themed on Civilized Campus Starts From Me was organized by our school last Sunday.这句话运用了过去分词作状语的结构。
[高分句型2]：Tired though we were, we were in high spirits.这句话运用了though引导让步状语从句时，要用部分倒装结构。
[高分句型3]：Not only did we obtain a brand-new insight into the meaning of labor, but we would cherish the fruits of others’ labor.这句话运用了not only……but also的部分倒装结构。
4．One possible version:
Dear Editor,
As I attended the summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I started to analyze them seriously, especially playing games, the unhealthy way I relaxed myself, and its effects on my life.
Half a year ago, I felt stressed out and always relaxed with computer games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! After the camp, I realized that it was time to adjust my lifestyle by finding other ways to relax. Rock climbing and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. Though it was a big struggle, I made it with great determination.
After six months of trying out, I feel more energetic now. I believe that I can change myself for the better.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给报社编辑写封信，分享自己是如何改变一种不良生活方式的。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加：attend→participate in
影响：effect→impact
紧张，过去劳累：stress out/wear out→overstrain
意识到：realize=be aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Half a year ago, I felt stressed out and always relaxed with computer games day and night.
拓展句： I always relaxed with computer games day and night since I felt stressed out half a year ago.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Though it was a big struggle, I made it with great determination. (运用了though引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that I can change myself for the better. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5．          When talking about the rosy future, many people would think of a satisfactory job in the first place. To have a dream job is also the first thing that comes to my mind, and I’m determined to be a lawyer.
To achieve my dream, I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge. Only through hard work can I be admitted to my ideal university where I will major in law. Of course, I should also build myself up, which is the basic condition for my progress in study.
In short, I hope my efforts today will pay off next year and I can have a bright future and a meaningful life!
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报开设了新专栏“My Future Plan”。请你写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
有希望的：promising→rosy/bright
首先：at first→in the first place
基本的：fundamental→basic
总之：all in all→in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To achieve my dream, I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge.
拓展句：I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge because I want to achieve my dream.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When talking about the rosy future, many people would think of a satisfactory job in the first place. (运用了省略句)
[高分句型2] To achieve my dream, I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
6．Dear Editor,
Thank you for reading my letter. I am a senior three student writing to share my experience. I volunteered to be a tutor in my community library on July 20, 2021. I took care of 10 primary school students ranging from Grade 1 to 3. In the morning, I gave a helping hand when they had any difficulties in doing their homework. In the afternoon, I first taught them how to draw animals and then hosted a story sharing in which all children told stories they like most.
The community library is a wonderful place for kids whose parents are busy working in the summer. Exhausted as I was after the full-day's work, I felt delighted and proud as I actively contributed to their growth.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向学校英语报投稿分享去残疾社区进行志愿者活动的经历。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
老师：teacher→tutor
疲惫的：tired→exhausted
高兴的：glad→delighted
极好的：great→wonderful
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I volunteered to be a tutor in my community library on July 20, 2021. I took care of 10 primary school students ranging from Grade 1 to 3.
拓展句：I volunteered to be a tutor in my community library on July 20, 2021, where I took care of 10 primary school students ranging from Grade 1 to 3.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I took care of 10 primary school students ranging from Grade 1 to 3. (运用了现在分词作定语)
[高分句型2] In the afternoon, I first taught them how to draw animals and then hosted a story sharing in which all children told stories they like most. (运用了介词+关系代词结构定语从句)
7．One possible version:
What I have in mind is that a Chinese calligraphy club shall be established. Chinese calligraphy, a form of art with a long history, stands for the civilization of ancient China. Anyone interested can learn more about the profound Chinese culture.
Members will have a get-together once a week, each time with a different activity related to Chinese calligraphy. Some basic Chinese handwriting skills will be taught and famous Chinese calligraphy works appreciated as well. Moreover, lectures on related topics will be given and interesting competitions will be held.
Hopefully, our club will have a membership of 20 students at most for the time being. Welcome to join us!
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生向同学们介绍你希望成立有关中国文化的俱乐部。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
建立：set→establish
有关的：relevant→related
渊博的：great→profound
代表：represent→stand for
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Some basic Chinese handwriting skills will be taught and famous Chinese calligraphy works appreciated as well.
拓展句：Some basic Chinese handwriting skills will be taught while famous Chinese calligraphy works will be appreciated.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] What I have in mind is that a Chinese calligraphy club shall be established. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] Anyone interested can learn more about the profound Chinese culture.(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
8．                                                                                                                                                                                       Voluntourists Wanted
Aiming to raise the awareness of sea turtle protection, English Society is planning the Turtle Consercation Voluntour.
Participants are expected to take volunteering jobs at Huidong Turtle Conservation such as doing some cleaning, caring for the turtles and serving as a guide to tourists. Between jobs, travels around Double-moon Bay are scheduled. Students aged 16 or over can take part. Anyone interested in it can apply online at www.englishsociety.com.
Join us to be a voluntourist this summer! It is a truly unique opportunity to learn something, help others and enjoy yourself.
English Society
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇招募启示，介绍“保护海龟义工之旅”活动安排、报名要求及方式以及呼吁参加。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
担任：work as→serve as
提高：improve→raise
照顾：look after→care for
机会：chance= opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming to raise the awareness of sea turtle protection, English Society is planning the Turtle Consercation Voluntour.
拓展句：English Society is planning the Turtle Consercation Voluntour, whose aim is to raise the awareness of sea turtle protection.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Aiming to raise the awareness of sea turtle protection, English Society is planning the Turtle Consercation Voluntour. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Participants are expected to take volunteering jobs at Huidong Turtle Conservation such as doing some cleaning, caring for the turtles and serving as a guide to tourists. (运用了动名词作宾语)
9．Dear Robert,
Our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”. Aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to sign up for it.
The contest will be held in the school lecture room at 9 a.m. on Sunday. The contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes that have taken place around us. Therefore, your speech should focus on what impresses you most about your life here in our city. Besides, when making the speech, please speak loudly without referring to your draft.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua


【解析】
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Robert写一封信，邀请他参加学校即将举办的主题为“我眼中的中国”的汉语演讲比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
主题：topic→theme
发生：happen→take place
此外：in addition→besides
安排：arrange→schedule
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句：The contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes that have taken place around us.
拓展句：The contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes taking place around us.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Dear Robert,Our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”. （运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]The contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes that have taken place around us.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]Therefore, your speech should focus on what impresses you most about your life here in our city. （运用了what引导的宾语从句）
10．One possible version：
Notice
Our school is to start an English debate team, which aims to improve us students’ spoken English and ways of thinking. Team members will also be provided with valuable chances to make new friends and gain irreplaceable experiences. Therefore, if you are enthusiastic about English and have a sharp mind, don’t hesitate to join the debate team. Make sure you will be devoted to the training and teamwork.
Want to become a member of us? Download the application form from the school website and send it to Edebateteam@163.com after filling in it.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将组建英文辩论队，要求考生就相关事宜写一则通知。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
计划，目标是：aim to→intend to
独一无二的，从未有过的：irreplaceable→unparalleled
热情的，狂热的：be enthusiastic about→be crazy about
专心于，致力于：be devoted to→concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Team members will also be provided with valuable chances to make new friends and gain irreplaceable experiences.
拓展句：Team members will also be provided with valuable chances, through which you can make new friends and gain irreplaceable experiences.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Our school is to start an English debate team, which aims to improve us students’ spoken English and ways of thinking.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Therefore, if you are enthusiastic about English and have a sharp mind, don’t hesitate to join the debate team.（运用了祈使句和if引导的条件状语从句）
11．Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels. There are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels, among which I like A   Dream of Red Mansions most. It is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison. Based on Jia and Lin’s love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline about a big family, which exposes the social crisis.
The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand. So when you read it, you’d better get a Chinese dictionary ready for reference. In addition, I suggest that you should know some background knowledge about the Qing Dynasty.
I wish you would have fun and learn something through reading it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写封回信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴：pleased→glad
非常：more than→very
著名的：excellent/outstanding/well-known→famous
此外：furthermore/what's more→In addition
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：It is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison.
拓展句：It is such an interesting novel that it is excellent beyond comparison.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] There are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels, among which I like A Dream of Red Mansions most.(运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, I suggest that you should know some background knowledge about the Qing Dynasty.(运用了虚拟语气)
12．Dear Smith,
Delighted to know that you are determined to teach English in a scenic place in China for a year, I highly recommend my hometown—Guangzhou and extend my warmest welcome to you.
Guangzhou is the ideal destination for both tourism and education. The scenery is splendid with the Pearl River and Baiyun Mountain. In addition, you can always enjoy a variety of tasty food. What’s the most attractive is that, as one of the open cities, its people are eager to learn English to embrace the world, making it an inviting city undoubtedly worth working in.
What do you think of my suggestion? Hope to meet you here. (89 words)
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Smith写一封信，欢迎他来你的家乡当英语老师并说明理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
理想的，完美的：perfect→ideal
壮丽的，壮观的：grand→splendid
各种各样的：various→a variety of
美味的：delicious→tasty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I highly recommend my hometown—Guangzhou and extend my warmest welcome to you.
拓展句：I highly recommend that you can teach English in my hometown—Guangzhou and extend my warmest welcome to you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Guangzhou is the ideal destination for both tourism and education.   (运用了“both…and…”句型)
[高分句型2] What’s the most attractive is that, as one of the open cities, its people are eager to learn English to embrace the world, making it an inviting city undoubtedly worth working in. (运用了what引导的从句作主语，that引导的从句作表语)