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北京卷高考英语“书面表达”中，近几年都是电子邮件形式的应用文，所要求写作的内容均与考生的学习和生活密切相关，常涉及语言学习、活动开展、人际关系，以及关于中国传统文化方面，如参观中国画展、参观中国剪纸艺术展、在中国朋友家做客等。
高考中，考查的形式仍然可能会以文字提纲类为主，也可能仍然是要求考生写一篇书信(或邮件)。考生在平时的训练当中，应该适当地注重这些方面的练习。
应用文写作具有如下特点。
题材广泛，由书信为主，转向新闻报道和通知。
应用文包括信件、日记、通知等。考生能够运用恰当的句式、语法和词汇讲述信件、日记、通知等内容。
2. 要求语法准确，内容无缺失。
考生能够准确使用语法、词汇，力求文章扣题，结构完整，内容充实、健康，思想活跃，逻辑清晰，语言准确，
3. 体现交际性
《2022高考命题要求和命题原则》使高考由“解答试题”转向“解决问题”。完成“用应用文解决一件事情”的新高考写作目标。交际得体，表达的对象，措辞，相关得体的表达语料需要仔细斟酌，在平时要做好相关书面表达类型的积累。
应用文书信和通知写作若想得高分，必须自己形成一套实用、可操作性的写作模式。在考场上，才能做到游刃有余，从容应对高考写作，取得满分作文。
1. 开门见山，不拐弯抹角。
书信一般需要问候开头，考生要积累一到两个问候用语，正文内容要做到语言简练、得体，长短结合，多用短语，句式富于变化。
通知分为口头通知和书面通知，口头通知，需要问候大家，再开始正文写作；书面通知不需要问候，直接写通知的正文。
结构合理，衔接得当。
一般写三段，也不是不须写三段，要求做到无语法错误，且字数达标。语言信息明确，内容上无遗漏重大信息点，而且衔接手段丰富多样。
3. 结尾回扣主题。
写作要一环扣一环，回扣首段，做到有始有终，完整结局。同时保证卷面的整洁，留下良好的第一印象，考场上务必做到认真仔细。
写作指南
英语书信写作的关键在于对书信主体的处理：
1．称呼(salutatin)：收信人称呼从信左边开始写，一般以 “Dear…”或“My dear…”开头，后面常用逗号。
2．正文(bdy)：正文是书信的主体，它质量的高低将直接决定作文得分的高低，因此在书信的训练和写作中对其要精雕细刻，力求做到层次清晰、要点齐全、过渡自然、行文流畅和文笔优美。若是回信则应根据实际需要告诉对方自己何时 收到信件，自己的感受或自己的近况，而后切入正文。
正文结束时，常会另起一行，写上一些表示祝福或期待的话 语，如：Best wishes！/Lking frward t yur early reply./Gd luck！等。
3．结尾(cmplimentary clse)：是写信人表示自己对收信人的谦称，常用表达有Yurs，Yurs sincerely，Yurs truly或 Yurs faithfully等。
◆写作语料
一、常用开头
1．邀请信：It is a pleasure fr me t invite yu n behalf f…t…/We wuld like t invite…t…/We are mre than glad t invite yu t…
2．申请信：My name is…I wuld like t wrk as…/apply fr…
3．祝贺信：We are very happy t knw that yu have successfully…Allw me/us t give ur mst sincere cngratulatins n…/I was delighted t hear (t receive) the news that…
4．投诉或抱怨信：I'm writing t tell yu smething abut… which I think is nt satisfying.
5．慰问信：We are very srry t learn f/learn that…/I am very srry t have heard f yur present situatin that…
6．建议信：I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr advice n hw t…Here are sme tips fr yu.
7．询问信：I wuld like t ask sme infrmatin n…/I'm writing t ask whether yu are able t d me a favr.
二、常用结尾
1．鼓励型：
Hw delighted I am nw! Actually, whatever happens, we must stay clam first and then find a wise slutin.
2．祝愿型：
I hpe what's mentined abve might be helpful and wish yu a gd jurney.
I will value them frever. Many happy returns f the day(年年有今日)．
3．请求询问型：
By the way, culd I…？Thank yu very much in advance.
4．展望型：
I believe that the wide use f these shpping bags can greatly imprve ur envirnment. This is ne f the steps we take t make ur cuntry an even cleaner place.
5．目的型：
I am writing the letter in the hpe that yu can cnsider these prblems and make mre imprvements.
6．期待型：
I'm lking frward t yur early reply.
If yu happen t knw the news, please infrm yur classmates f it. I hpe all f yu can learn a lt in this activity.
1．（2021·北京·高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. I hpe the change wn’t cause yu t much truble.
Hw abut ging ut next Saturday mrning? If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at the schl gate at 9: 00. Please let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
In additin, next Saturday, there will be a flwer shw in Beihai Park. Then we can g t see the flwers tgether.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
通知：tell→infrm
麻烦：prblem→truble
怎么样：what abut→hw abut
适合：fit→suit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend s that I can g ut with yu and have a gd time.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. (运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me knw what time suits yu best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
2．（2020·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hw are yu ding? I hpe everything's OK with yu.
Our schl's drama club plans t start practising. Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place. Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us?
He r she shuld be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in bth directing and teaching.
Thank yu fr yur help. Please take care f yurself. Remember t wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan t d sth.(计划做某事)；in ne's place(代替某人)；recmmend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；bth…and…(两者都……)；take care f(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．（2019·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 交通出行；
2. 必备衣物。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that yu’re cming t tur in China.
I suggest that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund. Tianjin will be yur next stp. After that, yu can g t Shanghai, where yu can stay fr a week. Yu can take high-speed trains t bth cities.
Summer in these cities is ht and rainy, s take summer wear plus an umbrella with yu.
Lking frward t yur arrival.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】
本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that yu’re cming t tur in China.和that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund.是宾语从句。where yu can stay fr a week.是非限制性定语从句。
4．（2022·四川·石室中学模拟预测）假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。你市正在实施垃圾分类，请你给21st Century投稿。内容包括：
1.垃圾分类的好处；
2.你打算如何做；
3.你的倡议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Garbage Classificatin
In rder t deal with waste scientifically and effectively, ur city has started t prmte garbage classificatin this year. I apprve f the new idea cmpletely because it can nt nly reduce the harm dne t the envirnment but als save resurces thrugh recycling.
As a respnsible citizen, I'll try t learn basic knwledge abut hw t srt garbage and apply what I learn t practice. Meanwhile I'll tell peple arund me abut the imprtance and necessity f the prgram, which will inspire them t classify garbage vluntarily.
Let's get invlved in this prgram.I believe that thrugh jint effrts the earth will becme a cleaner and mre cmfrtable place t live in.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。你市正在实施垃圾分类，请你给21st Century投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
处理：deal with→handle
赞同：apprve f→g alng with
重要性：imprtance→significance
加入：get invlved in→participate in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In rder t deal with waste scientifically and effectively, ur city has started t prmte garbage classificatin this year.
拓展句：Our city has started t prmte garbage classificatin this year in rder that we can deal with waste scientifically and effectively
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As a respnsible citizen, I'll try t learn basic knwledge abut hw t srt garbage and apply what I learn t practice.（运用了what引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Meanwhile I'll tell peple arund me abut the imprtance and necessity f the prgram, which will inspire them t classify garbage vluntarily.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
5．（2022·陕西咸阳·一模）根据国家卫健委统计，近期的多起疫情传播原因都是由外出旅游引起的。中国的传统节日春节临近，很多人都打算回到家乡与家人团聚。为了减少疫情传播，请你以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1.非必要不出行，就地过年；
2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
要求：1.字数100左右；
2.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。
3.参考词汇：国家卫健委 the Natinal Health Cmmissin
Dear fellw students,
Recently the whle wrld is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic f the COVID-19.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】Dear fellw students,
Recently the whle wrld is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic f the COVID-19. Accrding t the Natinal Health Cmmissin, travelling is the mst likely way t spread the disease. On behalf f Schl Students' Unin, I call n all f my fellw students t d what we can t help t decrease the chances f disease infectin.
Abve all, bey the rules set by the lcal gvernment. Then, stay in yur wn place and dn't g ut unless it is a must. If yu have t have a trip, wear face mask and keep yurself at least ne meter away frm thers. Once yu get back hme, wash yur hands immediately under running water and with sap. Only in these ways can yu guarantee yurself free frm being infected.
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：1.非必要不出行，就地过年；2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
减少：decrease→reduce
旅程：trip→jurney
确保：guarantee→ensure
首先：abve all→first f all
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Abve all, bey the rules set by the lcal gvernment.
拓展句：Abve all, bey the rules which are set by the lcal gvernment.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]On behalf f Schl Students' Unin, I call n all f my fellw students t d what we can t help t decrease the chances f disease infectin.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Only in these ways can yu guarantee yurself free frm being infected.（运用了部分倒装句）
6．（2022·北京石景山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。2022年4月神舟十三号(Shenzhu-13 manned spaceship)即将返航，你校电视台英文频道向学生征集以“航天”为主题的原创短视频。你打算邀请留学生Jim 一起完成作品。请你给他写邮件，内容包括：
1 .征集要求；
2 .作品初步想法；
3 .询问意向。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词： 神舟十三号：Shenzhu- 13 manned spaceship 航天：aerspace
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
T celebrate the return f Shenzhu-13 manned spaceship in April, 2022, I’d like t invite yu t create a shrt vide, cncerning the hnrable mment.
The theme f the innvative vide is “aerspace” and the length f the vide shuld be within 10 minutes. I’d lve t sht the vide as fllws.
First, it includes a brief intrductin f the spaceship, as well as the astrnauts wh’ll have successfully finished the task. Als, the space life can be mentined as lts f audience may be fnd f it. Finally, we will send ur best wishes and pay tribute t the heres.
I wnder if yu have any special thughts abut my plan? Lking frward t yu reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写邮件，邀请留学生Jim一起完成以“航天”为主题的原创短视频作品，写明征集要求，作品初步想法并询问对方的意向。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
关于：cncerning→with regard t
任务：task→missin
喜欢/感兴趣：be fnd f→shw interest in
特别的：special→particular
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The theme f the innvative vide is “aerspace” and the length f the vide shuld be within 10 minutes.
拓展句：The theme f the innvative vide, the length f which shuld be within 10 minutes, is “aerspace”.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]First, it includes a brief intrductin f the spaceship, as well as the astrnauts wh’ll have successfully finished the task. （运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Als, the space life can be mentined as lts f audience may be fnd f it. （运用了as引导的状语从句）
7．（2022·天津市新华中学模拟预测）假定你是李华,你的外籍朋友Mr. Brwn对中国文化很感兴趣，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他来参加北京非物质文化遗产(nn-material cultural relics)展览活动。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brwn,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Brwn,
Knwing yu are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing t invite yu t have a lk at the nn-material cultural relics shw.
Arranged in Beijing Museum n Saturday, April 8th in 2022, the exhibitin will display varius nn-material cultural relics, such as silk making, paper cutting, seal engraving and s n. As an enthusiast in culture, yu are bund t be thrilled at thse fantastic exhibitins. Nt nly will they be a feast fr yur eyes, but they will als deepen yur insight int riental culture.
Please accept my earnest invitatin. Lking frward t yur instant reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍朋友Mr. Brwn写封信，邀请他来参加北京非物质文化遗产(nn-material cultural relics)展览活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
各种各样的：varius→diverse
兴奋的，激动的：thrilled→excited
极好的：fantastic→wnderful
立即的：instant→immediate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As an enthusiast in culture, yu are bund t be thrilled at thse fantastic exhibitins.
拓展句：Because yu are enthusiastic abut Chinese culture, yu are bund t be thrilled at thse fantastic exhibitins.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Arranged in Beijing Museum n Saturday, April 8th in 2022, the exhibitin will display varius nn-material cultural relics, such as silk making, paper cutting, seal engraving and s n. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Nt nly will they be a feast fr yur eyes, but they will als deepen yur insight int riental culture. (运用了nt nly置于句首，句子部分倒装的句式)
8．（2022·陕西咸阳·二模）假设你是李华，请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
内容包括：
1．表示祝贺；
2．她在奥运会上的优异成绩；
3．个人感想。
注意事项：
1．词数：100词左右；
2．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing t cngratulate yu n yur achievements. The whle natin is prud f yu. Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.
The ther day, when watching the race n TV, I was fully attracted by yur excellent perfrmance in yur events. And I felt thrilled and cheered fr yu the mment yu reached yur gals skillfully and successfully. It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.
Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
以……为骄傲：be prud f →take pride in
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
实现：reach→achieve
决定：decide t→be determined t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
拓展句：Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.（运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
9．（2022·陕西西安·二模）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Andy在你市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他付出的努力；
3.期待交流。
参考词汇：中国成语大会：Chinese Idim Cntest
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Andy,
Learning that yu’ve wn the first prize in yur grup in the Chinese Idim Cntest, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins.
It came as n surprise t me that yu wn the first place in the cntest. Fr several years, yu’ve shwn great interest in Chinese idims, Nt nly have yu recited a sea f Chinese idims with great enthusiasm, but yu als have dived int Chinese histry and learned abut the stries behind them. Yu deserve the prize.
Hpe t have a talk with yu and exchange ur experience f learning idims.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生好友Andy在市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。要求考生给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提供：ffer→prvide
惊奇：surprise→astnishment
比赛：cntest→cmpetitin
热情：enthusiasm→warmth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning that yu’ve wn the first prize in yur grup in the Chinese Idim Cntest, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins.
拓展句：When I learn that yu’ve wn the first prize in yur grup in the Chinese Idim Cntest, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It came as n surprise t me that yu wn the first place in the cntest.（运用了that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】Nt nly have yu recited a sea f Chinese idims with great enthusiasm, but yu als have dived int Chinese histry and learned abut the stries behind them.（运用了nt nly…but als…不但……而且……句型，位于句首句子用部分倒装）
10．（2022·北京平谷·模拟预测）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。冬奥会刚刚结束，残奥会正在进行，你的英国好友Jim听说很多人非常喜欢双奥吉祥物（masct）冰墩墩（Bing Dwen Dwen）、雪容融（Shuey Rhn Rhn），给你发来邮件询问相关信息，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.表达喜爱之情；
2.简要介绍冰墩墩、雪容融。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【答案】Dear Jim,
Yu are quite right abut that the mascts f Beijing 2022 are very ppular in the wrld, especially fr peple wh are keen n ice and snw sprts.
I like the lvely mascts very much. Bing Dwen Dwen is a cartn image f a panda wearing a spacesuit. It lks like a winter sprts athlete frm the future. “Bing Dwen Dwen” shws the spirit f the Olympics, including a strng mind and a healthy bdy. Meanwhile, Shuey Rhn Rhn lks like a red lantern hanging n hmes and streets t celebrate Chinese New Year. On its head are paper cuts f pigens in the shape f the Temple f Heaven. The masct, “Shuey Rhn Rhn”, symblizes cmmunicatin amng different cultures.
D yu like them? I will send yu the mascts as a gift.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国好友Jim回复一封邮件，向他介绍双奥吉祥物（masct）冰墩墩（Bing Dwen Dwen）、雪容融（Shuey Rhn Rhn）相关信息。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
热衷于：be keen n →like
象征：symblize →stand fr
包括：include →cver
礼物：gift → present
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Dwen Dwen is a cartn image f a panda wearing a spacesuit. It lks like a winter sprts athlete frm the future.
拓展句：Dwen Dwen which lks like a winter sprts athlete frm the future is a cartn image f a panda wearing a spacesuit.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Yu are quite right abut that the mascts f Beijing 2022 are very ppular in the wrld, especially fr peple wh are keen n ice and snw sprts.(运用了wh引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Meanwhile, Shuey Rhn Rhn lks like a red lantern hanging n hmes and streets t celebrate Chinese New Year.(运用了现在分词作后置定语)
11．（2022·天津·耀华中学模拟预测）假设你是新星中学的学生李津。不久前你的英国笔友Mark通过网络看到北京冬奥会开幕式的一些片段，非常感兴趣，发邮件向你询问具体情况。请你回复对方，简要介绍相关情况。主要内容包括：
（1）简要介绍开幕式情况（时间、地点、特色等）；
（2）谈谈给你印象最深的一个或两个方面；
（3）观众的反响和你的感受。
注意：
（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）词数不少于100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Beginning f Spring立春 the 24 slar terms24节气 cunt dwn倒计时
Dear Mark，
It’s great t knw that yu’re interested in the pening ceremny f Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I’m s glad t
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mark，
It’s great t knw that yu’re interested in the pening ceremny f Beijing Winter Olympic Games and I’m s glad t intrduce sme amazing details.
The pening ceremny fell n 4th February, the Chinese “Beginning f Spring”, which is the first f the 24 slar terms f the year. S it began with the cuntdwn t the slar terms, leaving peple amazed at Chinese culture.
The pening ceremny uses creativity and technlgy t achieve a beautiful visual effect, stressing the spirit shared by all mankind. The mst impressive is that when small snwflakes representing each participate cuntry jined tgether t frm a big ne, the audience present all cheered fr the spirit it carried.
The whle pening ceremny gave me the verall feeling f “simplicity, safety and brilliance” just as the requirements f ur winter Olympic Games. The mst imprtant is that it shws ur best wish f “tgether fr the future” t all peple arund the wrld.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Mark写信，简要介绍北京冬奥会开幕式的相关情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
惊讶的：amazed→astnished
以……开始：begin with→start with
重要的：imprtant→significant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The pening ceremny uses creativity and technlgy t achieve a beautiful visual effect, stressing the spirit shared by all mankind.
拓展句：The pening ceremny uses creativity and technlgy t achieve a beautiful visual effect, stressing the spirit which is shared by all mankind.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
The pening ceremny fell n 4th February, the Chinese “Beginning f Spring”, which is the first f the 24 slar terms f the year.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
The mst imprtant is that it shws ur best wish f “tgether fr the future” t all peple arund the wrld.(that引导表语从句)
北京卷高考英语“书面表达”中，近几年都是电子邮件形式的应用文，所要求写作的内容均与考生的学习和生活密切相关，常涉及语言学习、活动开展、人际关系，以及关于中国传统文化方面，如参观中国画展、参观中国剪纸艺术展、在中国朋友家做客等。
高考中，考查的形式仍然可能会以文字提纲类为主，也可能仍然是要求考生写一篇书信(或邮件)。考生在平时的训练当中，应该适当地注重这些方面的练习。
应用文写作具有如下特点。
题材广泛，由书信为主，转向新闻报道和通知。
应用文包括信件、日记、通知等。考生能够运用恰当的句式、语法和词汇讲述信件、日记、通知等内容。
2. 要求语法准确，内容无缺失。
考生能够准确使用语法、词汇，力求文章扣题，结构完整，内容充实、健康，思想活跃，逻辑清晰，语言准确，
3. 体现交际性
《2022高考命题要求和命题原则》使高考由“解答试题”转向“解决问题”。完成“用应用文解决一件事情”的新高考写作目标。交际得体，表达的对象，措辞，相关得体的表达语料需要仔细斟酌，在平时要做好相关书面表达类型的积累。
应用文书信和通知写作若想得高分，必须自己形成一套实用、可操作性的写作模式。在考场上，才能做到游刃有余，从容应对高考写作，取得满分作文。
1. 开门见山，不拐弯抹角。
书信一般需要问候开头，考生要积累一到两个问候用语，正文内容要做到语言简练、得体，长短结合，多用短语，句式富于变化。
通知分为口头通知和书面通知，口头通知，需要问候大家，再开始正文写作；书面通知不需要问候，直接写通知的正文。
结构合理，衔接得当。
一般写三段，也不是不须写三段，要求做到无语法错误，且字数达标。语言信息明确，内容上无遗漏重大信息点，而且衔接手段丰富多样。
3. 结尾回扣主题。
写作要一环扣一环，回扣首段，做到有始有终，完整结局。同时保证卷面的整洁，留下良好的第一印象，考场上务必做到认真仔细。
写作指南
英语书信写作的关键在于对书信主体的处理：
1．称呼(salutatin)：收信人称呼从信左边开始写，一般以 “Dear…”或“My dear…”开头，后面常用逗号。
2．正文(bdy)：正文是书信的主体，它质量的高低将直接决定作文得分的高低，因此在书信的训练和写作中对其要精雕细刻，力求做到层次清晰、要点齐全、过渡自然、行文流畅和文笔优美。若是回信则应根据实际需要告诉对方自己何时 收到信件，自己的感受或自己的近况，而后切入正文。
正文结束时，常会另起一行，写上一些表示祝福或期待的话 语，如：Best wishes！/Lking frward t yur early reply./Gd luck！等。
3．结尾(cmplimentary clse)：是写信人表示自己对收信人的谦称，常用表达有Yurs，Yurs sincerely，Yurs truly或 Yurs faithfully等。
◆写作语料
一、常用开头
1．邀请信：It is a pleasure fr me t invite yu n behalf f…t…/We wuld like t invite…t…/We are mre than glad t invite yu t…
2．申请信：My name is…I wuld like t wrk as…/apply fr…
3．祝贺信：We are very happy t knw that yu have successfully…Allw me/us t give ur mst sincere cngratulatins n…/I was delighted t hear (t receive) the news that…
4．投诉或抱怨信：I'm writing t tell yu smething abut… which I think is nt satisfying.
5．慰问信：We are very srry t learn f/learn that…/I am very srry t have heard f yur present situatin that…
6．建议信：I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr advice n hw t…Here are sme tips fr yu.
7．询问信：I wuld like t ask sme infrmatin n…/I'm writing t ask whether yu are able t d me a favr.
二、常用结尾
1．鼓励型：
Hw delighted I am nw! Actually, whatever happens, we must stay clam first and then find a wise slutin.
2．祝愿型：
I hpe what's mentined abve might be helpful and wish yu a gd jurney.
I will value them frever. Many happy returns f the day(年年有今日)．
3．请求询问型：
By the way, culd I…？Thank yu very much in advance.
4．展望型：
I believe that the wide use f these shpping bags can greatly imprve ur envirnment. This is ne f the steps we take t make ur cuntry an even cleaner place.
5．目的型：
I am writing the letter in the hpe that yu can cnsider these prblems and make mre imprvements.
6．期待型：
I'm lking frward t yur early reply.
If yu happen t knw the news, please infrm yur classmates f it. I hpe all f yu can learn a lt in this activity.
1．（2021·北京·高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. I hpe the change wn’t cause yu t much truble.
Hw abut ging ut next Saturday mrning? If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at the schl gate at 9: 00. Please let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
In additin, next Saturday, there will be a flwer shw in Beihai Park. Then we can g t see the flwers tgether.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
通知：tell→infrm
麻烦：prblem→truble
怎么样：what abut→hw abut
适合：fit→suit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend s that I can g ut with yu and have a gd time.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. (运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me knw what time suits yu best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
2．（2020·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hw are yu ding? I hpe everything's OK with yu.
Our schl's drama club plans t start practising. Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place. Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us?
He r she shuld be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in bth directing and teaching.
Thank yu fr yur help. Please take care f yurself. Remember t wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan t d sth.(计划做某事)；in ne's place(代替某人)；recmmend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；bth…and…(两者都……)；take care f(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．（2019·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 交通出行；
2. 必备衣物。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that yu’re cming t tur in China.
I suggest that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund. Tianjin will be yur next stp. After that, yu can g t Shanghai, where yu can stay fr a week. Yu can take high-speed trains t bth cities.
Summer in these cities is ht and rainy, s take summer wear plus an umbrella with yu.
Lking frward t yur arrival.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】
本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that yu’re cming t tur in China.和that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund.是宾语从句。where yu can stay fr a week.是非限制性定语从句。
4．（2022·四川·石室中学模拟预测）假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。你市正在实施垃圾分类，请你给21st Century投稿。内容包括：
1.垃圾分类的好处；
2.你打算如何做；
3.你的倡议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Garbage Classificatin
In rder t deal with waste scientifically and effectively, ur city has started t prmte garbage classificatin this year. I apprve f the new idea cmpletely because it can nt nly reduce the harm dne t the envirnment but als save resurces thrugh recycling.
As a respnsible citizen, I'll try t learn basic knwledge abut hw t srt garbage and apply what I learn t practice. Meanwhile I'll tell peple arund me abut the imprtance and necessity f the prgram, which will inspire them t classify garbage vluntarily.
Let's get invlved in this prgram.I believe that thrugh jint effrts the earth will becme a cleaner and mre cmfrtable place t live in.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。你市正在实施垃圾分类，请你给21st Century投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
处理：deal with→handle
赞同：apprve f→g alng with
重要性：imprtance→significance
加入：get invlved in→participate in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In rder t deal with waste scientifically and effectively, ur city has started t prmte garbage classificatin this year.
拓展句：Our city has started t prmte garbage classificatin this year in rder that we can deal with waste scientifically and effectively
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As a respnsible citizen, I'll try t learn basic knwledge abut hw t srt garbage and apply what I learn t practice.（运用了what引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Meanwhile I'll tell peple arund me abut the imprtance and necessity f the prgram, which will inspire them t classify garbage vluntarily.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
5．（2022·陕西咸阳·一模）根据国家卫健委统计，近期的多起疫情传播原因都是由外出旅游引起的。中国的传统节日春节临近，很多人都打算回到家乡与家人团聚。为了减少疫情传播，请你以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1.非必要不出行，就地过年；
2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
要求：1.字数100左右；
2.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。
3.参考词汇：国家卫健委 the Natinal Health Cmmissin
Dear fellw students,
Recently the whle wrld is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic f the COVID-19.
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Li Hua
【答案】Dear fellw students,
Recently the whle wrld is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic f the COVID-19. Accrding t the Natinal Health Cmmissin, travelling is the mst likely way t spread the disease. On behalf f Schl Students' Unin, I call n all f my fellw students t d what we can t help t decrease the chances f disease infectin.
Abve all, bey the rules set by the lcal gvernment. Then, stay in yur wn place and dn't g ut unless it is a must. If yu have t have a trip, wear face mask and keep yurself at least ne meter away frm thers. Once yu get back hme, wash yur hands immediately under running water and with sap. Only in these ways can yu guarantee yurself free frm being infected.
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：1.非必要不出行，就地过年；2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
减少：decrease→reduce
旅程：trip→jurney
确保：guarantee→ensure
首先：abve all→first f all
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Abve all, bey the rules set by the lcal gvernment.
拓展句：Abve all, bey the rules which are set by the lcal gvernment.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]On behalf f Schl Students' Unin, I call n all f my fellw students t d what we can t help t decrease the chances f disease infectin.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Only in these ways can yu guarantee yurself free frm being infected.（运用了部分倒装句）
6．（2022·北京石景山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。2022年4月神舟十三号(Shenzhu-13 manned spaceship)即将返航，你校电视台英文频道向学生征集以“航天”为主题的原创短视频。你打算邀请留学生Jim 一起完成作品。请你给他写邮件，内容包括：
1 .征集要求；
2 .作品初步想法；
3 .询问意向。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词： 神舟十三号：Shenzhu- 13 manned spaceship 航天：aerspace
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
T celebrate the return f Shenzhu-13 manned spaceship in April, 2022, I’d like t invite yu t create a shrt vide, cncerning the hnrable mment.
The theme f the innvative vide is “aerspace” and the length f the vide shuld be within 10 minutes. I’d lve t sht the vide as fllws.
First, it includes a brief intrductin f the spaceship, as well as the astrnauts wh’ll have successfully finished the task. Als, the space life can be mentined as lts f audience may be fnd f it. Finally, we will send ur best wishes and pay tribute t the heres.
I wnder if yu have any special thughts abut my plan? Lking frward t yu reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写邮件，邀请留学生Jim一起完成以“航天”为主题的原创短视频作品，写明征集要求，作品初步想法并询问对方的意向。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
关于：cncerning→with regard t
任务：task→missin
喜欢/感兴趣：be fnd f→shw interest in
特别的：special→particular
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The theme f the innvative vide is “aerspace” and the length f the vide shuld be within 10 minutes.
拓展句：The theme f the innvative vide, the length f which shuld be within 10 minutes, is “aerspace”.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]First, it includes a brief intrductin f the spaceship, as well as the astrnauts wh’ll have successfully finished the task. （运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Als, the space life can be mentined as lts f audience may be fnd f it. （运用了as引导的状语从句）
7．（2022·天津市新华中学模拟预测）假定你是李华,你的外籍朋友Mr. Brwn对中国文化很感兴趣，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他来参加北京非物质文化遗产(nn-material cultural relics)展览活动。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brwn,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Brwn,
Knwing yu are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing t invite yu t have a lk at the nn-material cultural relics shw.
Arranged in Beijing Museum n Saturday, April 8th in 2022, the exhibitin will display varius nn-material cultural relics, such as silk making, paper cutting, seal engraving and s n. As an enthusiast in culture, yu are bund t be thrilled at thse fantastic exhibitins. Nt nly will they be a feast fr yur eyes, but they will als deepen yur insight int riental culture.
Please accept my earnest invitatin. Lking frward t yur instant reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍朋友Mr. Brwn写封信，邀请他来参加北京非物质文化遗产(nn-material cultural relics)展览活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
各种各样的：varius→diverse
兴奋的，激动的：thrilled→excited
极好的：fantastic→wnderful
立即的：instant→immediate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As an enthusiast in culture, yu are bund t be thrilled at thse fantastic exhibitins.
拓展句：Because yu are enthusiastic abut Chinese culture, yu are bund t be thrilled at thse fantastic exhibitins.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Arranged in Beijing Museum n Saturday, April 8th in 2022, the exhibitin will display varius nn-material cultural relics, such as silk making, paper cutting, seal engraving and s n. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Nt nly will they be a feast fr yur eyes, but they will als deepen yur insight int riental culture. (运用了nt nly置于句首，句子部分倒装的句式)
8．（2022·陕西咸阳·二模）假设你是李华，请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
内容包括：
1．表示祝贺；
2．她在奥运会上的优异成绩；
3．个人感想。
注意事项：
1．词数：100词左右；
2．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing t cngratulate yu n yur achievements. The whle natin is prud f yu. Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.
The ther day, when watching the race n TV, I was fully attracted by yur excellent perfrmance in yur events. And I felt thrilled and cheered fr yu the mment yu reached yur gals skillfully and successfully. It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.
Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
以……为骄傲：be prud f →take pride in
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
实现：reach→achieve
决定：decide t→be determined t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
拓展句：Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.（运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
9．（2022·陕西西安·二模）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Andy在你市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他付出的努力；
3.期待交流。
参考词汇：中国成语大会：Chinese Idim Cntest
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Andy,
Learning that yu’ve wn the first prize in yur grup in the Chinese Idim Cntest, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins.
It came as n surprise t me that yu wn the first place in the cntest. Fr several years, yu’ve shwn great interest in Chinese idims, Nt nly have yu recited a sea f Chinese idims with great enthusiasm, but yu als have dived int Chinese histry and learned abut the stries behind them. Yu deserve the prize.
Hpe t have a talk with yu and exchange ur experience f learning idims.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生好友Andy在市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。要求考生给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提供：ffer→prvide
惊奇：surprise→astnishment
比赛：cntest→cmpetitin
热情：enthusiasm→warmth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning that yu’ve wn the first prize in yur grup in the Chinese Idim Cntest, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins.
拓展句：When I learn that yu’ve wn the first prize in yur grup in the Chinese Idim Cntest, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It came as n surprise t me that yu wn the first place in the cntest.（运用了that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】Nt nly have yu recited a sea f Chinese idims with great enthusiasm, but yu als have dived int Chinese histry and learned abut the stries behind them.（运用了nt nly…but als…不但……而且……句型，位于句首句子用部分倒装）
10．（2022·北京平谷·模拟预测）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。冬奥会刚刚结束，残奥会正在进行，你的英国好友Jim听说很多人非常喜欢双奥吉祥物（masct）冰墩墩（Bing Dwen Dwen）、雪容融（Shuey Rhn Rhn），给你发来邮件询问相关信息，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.表达喜爱之情；
2.简要介绍冰墩墩、雪容融。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【答案】Dear Jim,
Yu are quite right abut that the mascts f Beijing 2022 are very ppular in the wrld, especially fr peple wh are keen n ice and snw sprts.
I like the lvely mascts very much. Bing Dwen Dwen is a cartn image f a panda wearing a spacesuit. It lks like a winter sprts athlete frm the future. “Bing Dwen Dwen” shws the spirit f the Olympics, including a strng mind and a healthy bdy. Meanwhile, Shuey Rhn Rhn lks like a red lantern hanging n hmes and streets t celebrate Chinese New Year. On its head are paper cuts f pigens in the shape f the Temple f Heaven. The masct, “Shuey Rhn Rhn”, symblizes cmmunicatin amng different cultures.
D yu like them? I will send yu the mascts as a gift.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国好友Jim回复一封邮件，向他介绍双奥吉祥物（masct）冰墩墩（Bing Dwen Dwen）、雪容融（Shuey Rhn Rhn）相关信息。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
热衷于：be keen n →like
象征：symblize →stand fr
包括：include →cver
礼物：gift → present
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Dwen Dwen is a cartn image f a panda wearing a spacesuit. It lks like a winter sprts athlete frm the future.
拓展句：Dwen Dwen which lks like a winter sprts athlete frm the future is a cartn image f a panda wearing a spacesuit.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Yu are quite right abut that the mascts f Beijing 2022 are very ppular in the wrld, especially fr peple wh are keen n ice and snw sprts.(运用了wh引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Meanwhile, Shuey Rhn Rhn lks like a red lantern hanging n hmes and streets t celebrate Chinese New Year.(运用了现在分词作后置定语)
11．（2022·天津·耀华中学模拟预测）假设你是新星中学的学生李津。不久前你的英国笔友Mark通过网络看到北京冬奥会开幕式的一些片段，非常感兴趣，发邮件向你询问具体情况。请你回复对方，简要介绍相关情况。主要内容包括：
（1）简要介绍开幕式情况（时间、地点、特色等）；
（2）谈谈给你印象最深的一个或两个方面；
（3）观众的反响和你的感受。
注意：
（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）词数不少于100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Beginning f Spring立春 the 24 slar terms24节气 cunt dwn倒计时
Dear Mark，
It’s great t knw that yu’re interested in the pening ceremny f Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I’m s glad t
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mark，
It’s great t knw that yu’re interested in the pening ceremny f Beijing Winter Olympic Games and I’m s glad t intrduce sme amazing details.
The pening ceremny fell n 4th February, the Chinese “Beginning f Spring”, which is the first f the 24 slar terms f the year. S it began with the cuntdwn t the slar terms, leaving peple amazed at Chinese culture.
The pening ceremny uses creativity and technlgy t achieve a beautiful visual effect, stressing the spirit shared by all mankind. The mst impressive is that when small snwflakes representing each participate cuntry jined tgether t frm a big ne, the audience present all cheered fr the spirit it carried.
The whle pening ceremny gave me the verall feeling f “simplicity, safety and brilliance” just as the requirements f ur winter Olympic Games. The mst imprtant is that it shws ur best wish f “tgether fr the future” t all peple arund the wrld.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Mark写信，简要介绍北京冬奥会开幕式的相关情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
惊讶的：amazed→astnished
以……开始：begin with→start with
重要的：imprtant→significant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The pening ceremny uses creativity and technlgy t achieve a beautiful visual effect, stressing the spirit shared by all mankind.
拓展句：The pening ceremny uses creativity and technlgy t achieve a beautiful visual effect, stressing the spirit which is shared by all mankind.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
The pening ceremny fell n 4th February, the Chinese “Beginning f Spring”, which is the first f the 24 slar terms f the year.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
The mst imprtant is that it shws ur best wish f “tgether fr the future” t all peple arund the wrld.(that引导表语从句)
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