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第一部分      应用文写作类型07  劝慰与安慰类劝慰信用于向人表达安慰、关切、问候之意，要根据不同的对象、不同的情况，表达真挚的慰问，要能够真正打动人心，以此达到劝慰的目的。其结构一般如下：①、得知困难，表示遗憾与关心②、提出合理的建议③、祝愿对方情况能够改善素材精粹【高分句型】首段：知悉困境，表示同情I'm sorry to know that you are having a hard/tough time at the moment.获悉你目前身处困境，我深表遗憾。I'm sorry to hear about your difficulties in..... I know it can be really tough at times.听说你在…方面遇到困难我很难过。我知道，这件事有时候真的很难。On behalf of.....，I would like to express our sincere concern and care for you.我谨代表……，对表示诚挚的关心和关怀。主体部分：表示理解与同情，给予安慰和劝导As we all know，failure is the mother of success.I do hope you won't lose heart and will get ready totry again. 众所周知，失败是成功之母。我真希望你不要灰心，做好准备再试一次。You shouldn't/are not supposed to do sth. 你不应该做某事。Be brave/Pull yourself together.You will surely overcome the difficulty.勇敢一些/振作起来。你一定能克服困难。尾段：表达期望、祝愿I hope things will get better soon.  希望事情会很快好起来。I'm sure you will get over your difficulties in a short while.  我相信你很快就会克服困难。佳作共赏Dear Amy，I received your letter this afternoon and I'm sorry to hear of your illness，which makes you so upset. Since you have asked for leave，you'd better take a good break from your heavy school work. Actually，there is no need to worry about your school work.I'm sure it won't take you long to recoverwith the proper treatment given by the doctors.You won't fall behind other students too much becauseyou are so smart in learning and I will do my best to help you.Hope that you will get well soon.Best wishes to you！Yours，Li Hua实战突破Test  1假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩很优秀。但由于骄傲和懒惰，最近他的成绩一落千丈, 丧失斗志。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 进行安慰；2. 给予劝告；3. 表达祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Tom,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Tom,I feel sorry to know your grades have been plunging. But it’s not time for you to feel desperate. I believe you can find yourself back by taking action.It is your pride and laziness that should take the blame. But on the bright side, mistakes nourishes one’s mind and breeds success. It’s never too late to change. Here is how. First, review the lessons that you have missed recently by comparing notes with peers. In addition, it's necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished.I hope you could feel better and get your academic performance improved.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生朋友Tom写封信，对他最近因为成绩一落千丈而丧失斗志进行劝慰并鼓励。【详解】1.词汇积累沮丧：desperate→upset复习：review→go over此外：in addition→what‘s more坚持：keep up→stick to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：But on the bright side, mistakes nourishes one’s mind and breeds success.拓展句：But on the bright side, mistakes can not only nourish one's thoughts, but also breed success.【点睛】[高分句型1] In addition, it's necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] First, review the lessons that you have missed recently by comparing notes with peers.  (运用了that引导的定语从句)Test  2假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Joe本来打算这个暑假来成都观看世界大学生运动会。但因为疫情，大运会推迟至明年举办。请你给他写一封邮件，要点如下：1. 表示遗憾；2. 简述大运会推迟的必要性，并安慰Joe；3. 欢迎他明年来观看大运会。注意：1. 词数100词左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇：大运会 the World University Games 疫情epidemicDear Joe,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Lihua 【答案】Dear Joe,I’m more than delighted to know that you intended to visit China for the World University Games. However, it is a pity that the activity, which was scheduled to take place in Chengdu this year, is postponed to next year due to the epidemic.As we can see, with the epidemic spreading wildly in some areas of the globe, to ensure the security of all the participants must come first. And there is no need for us to feel down about the delay, because we can hold a firm belief that people around the world will bring the disease under control soon with joint efforts. In addition, given one more year, Chengdu can get better prepared, so that you can have a better experience of enjoying the grand activity.I sincerely invite you to visit China next year and I’m longing for the day when we watch the game together!【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。因为疫情，原定暑假在成都举办的大运会推迟至明年，要求考生给英国朋友Joe写信，表示遗憾并告知大运会推迟的必要性。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted → pleased/happy计划、打算：intend → plan确保：ensure → make sure真诚地：sincerely → honestly2.句式拓展原句：As we can see, with the epidemic spreading wildly in some areas of the globe, to ensure the security of all the participants must come first.拓展句：As we can see, because the epidemic is spreading wildly in some areas of the globe, to ensure the security of all the participants must come first.【点睛】[高分句型1]  However, it is a pity that the activity, which was scheduled to take place in Chengdu this year, is postponed to next year due to the epidemic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] And there is no need for us to feel down about the delay, because we can hold a firm belief that people around the world will bring the disease under control soon with joint efforts. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和that引导的同位语从句)Test  3假定你是高三学生李华，你的同学王平春节去武汉探亲因新冠状病毒肺炎疫情迅速扩散，他有发热症状而暂时滞留武汉，请你代表全班同学给此时处于焦虑和郁闷中的他写一封英文慰问信。要点如下：1.对其表示关心和同情。2.对其表示安慰并提供帮助。3.表达愿望和祝福。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Wang Ping,Knowing that _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes.Your sincerelyLi Hua【答案】Dear Wang Pin,Knowing that you are delayed in Wuhan, I am really getting upset about it. So are our classmates. I’m writing to convey our concern to you on behalf of the class.Words came that Wuhan was in bad condition due to COVID-19. However, dear friend, there’s no sense worrying about it too much. You are supposed to stay optimistic. After all, you merely have a bit of fever. College Entrance Examination is around the corner, you know. So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it. As scheduled, our online class will be held on Feb. 8. All of the classmates have access to the Internet courses wherever you are. It is convenient for us to study, isn’t it?Is there anything I can do for you? Feel free to contact me. I sincerely expect that you can make a quick recovery and return to normal.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在武汉有发烧症状的同学王平写一封慰问信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量的一般过去，现在进行时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.对其表示关心和同情。2.对其表示安慰并提供帮助。3.表达愿望和祝福。第二步：列提纲 Delay，get upset about，convey，on behalf of，in bad condition，there’s no sense，be suppose to，stay optimistic，around the corner，precious，afford，convenient，return to normal第三步：连词成句Knowing that you are delayed in Wuhan, I am really getting upset about it. So are our classmates.I’m writing to convey our concern to you on behalf of the class.Words came that Wuhan was in bad condition due to COVID-19. So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it. As scheduled, our online class will be held on Feb. 8. All of the classmates have access to the Internet courses wherever you are.I sincerely expect that you can make a quick recovery and return to normal.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] So are our classmates.（使用了倒装句）[高分句型2] Words came that Wuhan was in bad condition due to COVID-19.（使用了同位语从句）[高分句型3] All of the classmates have access to the Internet courses wherever you are.（使用了让步状语从句）Test  4你是某中学高三的学生李华，你的朋友李明因考试发挥失常，成绩不理想而情绪低落。请给他写封信表示安慰，要点如下:1、表示遗憾和理解;2、找出问题并及时改正;3、表示鼓励。注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Li Ming,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Li Ming,I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam and that you are very worried about your study. I quite understand how you feel now.There is no doubt that we should keep a good state of mind. As we know, failure is the mother of success. We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which can help us find out the mistakes we made and try to make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas. Only in this way can we make progress in our study.I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you'll be feeling much better. Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给李明写一封安慰信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1、表示遗憾和理解;2、找出问题并及时改正;3、表示鼓励。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）do well in；be worried about ；keep a good state of ；spare no efforts to； find out；try to；make up for ； make progress； turn …into…第三步：连词成句1.I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam and that you are very worried about your study.2.I quite understand how you feel now.3.There is no doubt that we should keep a good state of mind. 4.As we know, failure is the mother of success. 5.We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which can help us find out the mistakes we made and try to make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas.6.Only in this way can we make progress in our study.7.I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you'll be feeling much better. 8.Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, (供参考)3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1] There is no doubt that we should keep a good state of mind.(that引导同位语从句)[高分句型2] We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which can help us find out the mistakes we made and try to make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas.(which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型3] Only in this way can we make progress in our study.(only加状语置于句首，全句用部分倒装)Test  5假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到飓风(hurricane)侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：1. 得知情况及感受；2. 表达安慰和鼓励；3. 打算提供的帮助。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.Dear Peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter,I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss. Shocked to learn the terrible news, I feel upset about your suffering.Though sorrowful, you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period. You will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.Thinking about your present situation, I feel sincere pity for you, and I’ll be there for you whenever you need any help! If necessary, I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.Never give up hope and be strong! Longing for good news from you!Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封慰问信，表达对朋友的关心和帮助。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时，一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：分-总法分-总法指分点表达要点之后，在最后进行总结。要求：1. 得知情况及感受；2. 表达安慰和鼓励；3. 打算提供的帮助。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）horrible，severe，hurricane, hit , loss, upset , stand up to, get through, bring about, whenever ,help, call on, make a donation, give up第三步：连词成句1. I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss.2. I feel upset about your suffering 3. you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions4. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period.5…. face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.6. I feel sincere pity for you7. I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.8. Never give up hope根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss.这句话运用了宾语从句。Shocked to learn the terrible news, I feel upset about your suffering.和Thinking about your present situation, I feel sincere pity for you,运用了非谓语动词作状语；Though sorrowful, you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions.和If necessary, I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.运用了状语从句的省略。使用了一些固定词组，如get through, bring about等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。