2022中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范热点 热点18 游戏

热点18 游戏 游戏无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来了极大的影响。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：游戏。【预测题目】（一）以下是你刚刚买的一款游戏“Travel in Space，在市场上很受欢迎，请将它介绍给你的朋友，不少于80词，可以适当发挥．（文章用第一人称）设计者
 由David Lee 所设计
 
 价格
 花了我150元
 
 游戏介绍
 1. 在游戏中，可以穿不同的服装，游览不同的国家
2. 可以得到每个建筑物的足够的信息
3. 所去过的地方将被标上亮红色
4. 最后，可以用知识来打开宝藏盒子
     游戏的目标
 环游世界去了解每个地方，游戏很有趣，可以从中学到很多
 
 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】A new gameI have just bought a new kind of game．It is designed by David Lee．/The designer of the game is David Lee．It cost me 150 yuan．When you play the game, you can visit/travel around different countries in different clothes．You can get enough information about each building．The places you have visited are marked in bright red．Finally, you can use knowledge to open the treasure box．The goal of the game is to travel around the world to learn about each place．The game is very interesting and you can learn a lot from it．I'm sure you will enjoy it．【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。 （二）根据下面的内容，以Li Hua的名义给市长写一封信。假如你是永州市一中的一名学生，你发现许多中学生玩电子游戏。有的不做作业，有的不去上学。他们花了很多的钱在电子游戏上，有的开始偷钱。电子游戏对学生的学习和健康不利，特别是视力不好。希望大家不要玩电子游戏，政府应当适当制止中学生玩电子游戏。让学生们远离电子游戏。要求：1.不要逐条翻译提示内容,字数在80词以上。      2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。3.不得使用真实的人名或学校名称。提示用词：government (政府)Dear Mayor, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mayor,I’m a middle school student in Junior Grade Three in No. One Middle School .I find some students like playing computer games so much that they don’t finish their homework and even don’t go to school. Some of them have spent a lot of money on computer games. So they begin to steal. Parents and teachers are terribly worried about them. Playing computer games is not good to our studies and health. It’s especially bad for out eyes. I hope our government can do something to stop middle school students from playing computer games. Let’s be away from it. Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。所给材料很详细，在写作时注意用上适当的连词使文章更有逻辑。【亮点说明】这篇短文写出了全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，基本无语法错误。如: I find some students like playing computer games so much that they don’t finish their homework and even don’t go to school. I hope our government can do something to stop middle school students from playing computer games.等。 （一）假如你是Sam，你的朋友Larry来信邀请你到他家玩电脑游戏，而你不愿意去。请根据下列要点写一封回信。1.我没有时间到你家去玩电脑游戏，因为我今天要准备数学考试。2.现在我们读八年级，应该少玩电脑游戏，努力学习，锻炼身体。 3.劝告Larry最好不再玩电脑游戏，邀请他和你一起学习并陈述理由（一条或两条即可）要求：1.用上所给要点，并适当发挥，使短文条理清楚、语句连贯；2.词数70左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Larry, Thanks for your inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear Larry, Thanks for your inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t. I don’t have time to play computer games at your home, because I have to study for a math test. It’s so important! What’s more, we are in Grade eight now. I don’t think we should play computer games too much. On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.I really hope that you will not play it any longer. My dear friend, come to study with me. As middle school students, we should spend more time on our study. Let’s make a great progress together!Best wishes!Sam【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，你的朋友Larry回信，告诉她你不愿意去她家玩电脑游戏。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I don’t have time to……，It’s……，I don’t think……，I really hope that……，Let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉她我不去她家，接下来解释原因并且建议她少玩电脑游戏，最后希望她和我一起学习，共同进步。此处invite sb to do sth, what’s more, on the contrary, spend time on sth, make a great progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 （二）要点如下：(1)假如你是李明十五岁， 你喜欢周末和朋友们一起做作业，一起闲逛和一起玩游戏。(2)你的父母担心你的学习。他们认为青少年不应当被允许一起做作业，你们在一起会交谈代替做作业。青少年也不应当花许多时间在游戏上，游戏会妨碍你的学习。(3)但你不同意这些观点。 同学们一起学习可以相互帮助。 玩游戏可以使你感到放松，这对学习有好处。你和同学们相处融洽，这使你很开心。(4)你认为你应当被允许对一些事做出决定。例如，你应该被允许选择自己的朋友，你应当被允许听摇滚乐......请用第一人称写作文，内容可适当发挥。  I’m Li Ming. I am 15 years old now. I like ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】I’m Li Ming. I am 15 years old now. I like doing homework with my friends on weekends. Besides, I like going around and playing computer games with them. My parents are worried about my study. They think teenagers shouldn’t be allowed to do homework together because we may talk about other things with each other instead of doing homework. Teenagers should not spend too much time on games because games get in the way of study. However, I don’t agree with them. We can help each other when learning together. Playing games can make me feel relaxed, which is good for our study. I can get on well with my classmates and I feel happy. I think I should be allowed to make decisions on my own. For example, I should be allowed to choose my friends. I should be allowed to listen to rock music.【解析】这篇作文要点明确，首先是介绍一下自己在周末的活动，包括一起做作业、一起玩游戏、一起闲逛等，然后表达父母对此的态度，陈述父母不同意的原因，最后表达自己的观点，对于父母看法不同意的理由，自己想要父母做出的改变等。人称是以第一人称为主，事态基本上是一般现在时，需要注意部分短语的表达即可，写作难度不大，在最后部分需要写到“被允许…”，要注意正确使用被动语态。用到的短语表达有：on weekends 在周末，playing computer games 玩电脑游戏，are worried about my study 担心我的学习，instead of 而不是，spend too much time on games 花费太多的时间在游戏上，get in the way of study 妨碍学习，agree with 同意，get on well with 和…相处得好，make decisions on my own 自己做决定，listen to rock music. 听摇滚乐。总体来说写作的时候要注意正确运用语态，行文流畅，完成了要求的写作任务。 （三）现在学生在网吧上网（get online）成风，你们班在下周班会上将谈论有关问题。请你根据表格中提示的内容用英语写一篇60词左右的讲话稿，要点必须齐全。益处1. 学会使用现代设备——电脑；2. 学会更多知识(knowledge)；3. 玩游戏，使人更加聪明。坏处过于沉迷游戏，对学习有害。网上交友，通信频繁，学习成绩下降。建议在学校学习时不上网。寒暑假可以上网。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Students nowadays are used to getting online on net bar. The advantages are: Students can learn how to operate an up-to-date computer. They can learn a lot of knowledge by surfing the Internet. Also playing computer games make people cleverer. There are also disadvantages. It will be bad for their learning if they waste too much time on computer games. When they make e-friends and communicate too frequently, their results will be affected. We suggested that students should not be allowed to get online at school, but they can get online during the summer and winter holidays.【解析】1.题干解读：本文属于议论文，介绍学生在网吧上网的好处以及坏处，并针对这一情况给出建议。2.例文点评：这是一篇非常优秀的文章，时态运用准确，句式结构运用灵活，要点齐全，上下文衔接完美，符合英美国家的语言习惯。3.高分亮点：单词短语：be used to, 疑问词+to do, a lot of, 介词by+doing, make sb adj, there be, be bad for, also等。高分句式：When they make e-friends and communicate too frequently, their results will be affected中when引导的时间状语从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则；We suggest that students should not be allowed to get online at school中that引导宾语从句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be used to, 疑问词+to do, a lot of, 介词by+doing, make sb adj, there be, be bad for, 主将从现和宾语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如also；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 （四）七岁的女孩Mary来自美国,在日常生活中，她喜欢听音乐，喜欢去动物园。她家里有一台电脑，她通常在周六玩电脑游戏。她的妈妈每天都会在网上搜索信息,，有时还进行网上购物。她的爸爸喜欢在网上看足球比赛，还经常在电脑上玩游戏。请根据所给提示写一篇短文介绍她及其家人。要求：1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确。2. 至少60词。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Mary is seven years old. She is from America. She likes listening to music and going to the zoo. There is a computer in her home. Mary usually plays computer games on Saturday. Her mother goes on the Internet every day. She usually searches for information and sometimes she goes shopping on it. Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.【解析】试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【亮点说明】范文中用了一些常见短语：be from来自某处；  like doing喜欢做某事；  listen to 听；search for 寻找；go shopping购物。She likes listening to music and going to the zoo这个句子中and连接两个并列的动词，形式保持一致。Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it这个句子中and连接两个句子，时态保持一致。 Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.When they make e-friends and communicate too frequently, their results will be affected.Teenagers should not spend too much time on games because games get in the way of study. I find some students like playing computer games so much that they don’t finish their homework and even don’t go to school.I hope our government can do something to stop middle school students from playing computer games.Thanks for your inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t. I don’t have time to play computer games at your home.I really hope that you will not play it any longer. My dear friend, come to study with me. As middle school students, we should spend more time on our study.Let’s make a great progress together!I don’t think we should play computer games too much. On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.Everyone knows playing come spend too much time on computer games, we’ll have no time to do sports. 15. As long as we work together, we will have a happy school life              （一）假如你是Sam，你的朋友Larry来信邀请你到他家玩电脑游戏，而你不愿意去。请根据下列要点写一封回信：1. 我没有时间到你家去玩电脑游戏，因为我今天要准备数学考试。2. 现在我们读八年级，应该少玩电脑游戏，努力学习，锻炼身体。 3. 劝告Larry最好不再玩电脑游戏，邀请他和你一起学习并陈述理由（一条或两条即可）要求：1. 短文应包括要求的所有信息。2. 短文应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样。3. 不能出现个人和学校的真实信息。4. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）Dear Larry, Thanks for you inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t.____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Sam【参考范文】Dear Larry, Thanks for you inviting me to play computers at your home. I’m afraid I can’t. I don’t have time to play computer games at your home, because I have to study for a math test. It’s so important! What’s more, we are in Grade 8 now. I don’t think we should play computer games too much. On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.I really hope that you will not play it any longer. My dear friend, come to study with me. As middle school students, we should spend more time on our study. Let’s make a great progress together!Best wishes!Yours,Sam【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，假如你是Sam，你的朋友Larry来信邀请你到他家玩电脑游戏，而你不愿意去。请根据下列要点写一封回信。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉她我不去她家，接下来解释原因并且建议她少玩电脑游戏，最后希望她和我一起学习，共同进步。此处What’s more, we are in Grade 8 now. I don’t think we should play computer games too much. On the contrary, we should study harder and exercise more.也让文章增色不少。 （二）读了以上同学的调查报告，你有何感想？你是否也曾沉迷于电脑游戏？请以“远离电脑游戏”为题写一篇短文。内容包括：1．中学生玩电脑游戏的负面影响（包括对学习、经济和身体的影响等）。2．中学生的主要任务是把时间和精力放在学习上，学好各门功课。3．建议中学生远离电脑游戏，专心学习。写作要求：1．条理清晰，意思连贯，词句通顺。2．不能照抄原文，不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。3．词数80个左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】How to stay away from playing computer games?These days computer is very popular among young students besides me. When I feel tired or lonely, I often spend a lot of time playing computer games. Today I read the survey about my classmates. I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. I knew why there were so many young people disliked studying hard and how some students became thieves.Everyone knows playing come spend too much time on computer games, we’ll have no time to do sports. Playing games too mputer can help us feel relaxed. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life. For example, if wuch does harm to our eyes. That’s why so many students wear glasses.As a student, it’s our duty to study. We must try our best to do well in our lessons. To keep healthy, stay away from playing computer games. As long as we work together, we will have a happy school life【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍中学生玩电脑游戏的负面影响（包括对学习、经济和身体的影响等）;中学生的主要任务是把时间和精力放在学习上，学好各门功课;建议中学生远离电脑游戏，专心学习.根据内容可能会用到一般现在时,注意逻辑性和句式的变化。【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅介绍人物时注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如spend a lot of time playing computer games，I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life.，When I feel tired or lonely, To keep healthy等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 （三）游戏，尤其是电脑游戏，给学生带来很不好的影响，你怎么看，谈谈你的看法？_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Now more and more students always spend plenty of their time playing computer games. some of them can even play from morning to night. how terrible it is!Playing too much computer games has bad impacts in many ways. For one thing, if students often play computer games, they can't do well in their study, because they always think about the things in computer games instead of the knowledge in books. For another, sitting before the computer for a long time will cause back pains and headaches. and the radiation from the computers can also do harm to our eyes and our minds. What's more, many students are so deeply attracted by some interesting computer games that they communicate less with their families and friends, which will lead to mental problems. Last but not least, some students prefer the fighting games. It is likely that they'll be violent in the real life. That is to say, those who usually play violent games may do crimes more easily. Therefore, the teachers and parents should work together to stop the kids from playing computer games all around the clock.现在越来越多的学生总是花很多时间来玩电脑游戏.有些甚至可以从早玩到晚玩.这是多么可怕啊!玩太多的电脑游戏在有多方面都造成了不良影响.一方面,如果学生经常玩电脑游戏,他们就无法好好学习,因为他们总是想着电脑游戏里面的东西而不是书本的知识.另一方面,长期坐在电脑前会导致背痛,头痛.而且电脑辐射也可能会伤害到我们的眼睛和大脑.更重要的是,许多学生都深深被一些有趣的电脑游戏吸引了,以至于他们与他们家人和朋友的交流变少,这将导致心理问题.最后但并非最不重要的,有些学生喜欢玩暴力游戏.他们很有可能会在现实生活中变得暴力.也就是说,那些经常玩暴力游戏的人会更容易犯罪.因此,教师和家长应该一起合作来阻止孩子们整天整夜的玩电脑游戏. （四）李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。提示词： give up   concentrate on   be (become)interested in_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Li Xiao hu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. as a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him.First, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.,so he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games,and then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.