描写一位英雄人物属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。
[基本框架]
1．首段：生平介绍
人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材料要真实。
2．中段：事迹叙述
选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。
3．尾段：简短的评论
对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。
[常用词块]
1．at the age f fur 4岁时
2．a by f sixteen一个16岁的男孩
3．make friends with her和她交朋友
4．be ready t help thers乐于助人
5．a lively and smart girl一个活泼聪明的女孩
6．be warmhearted and gdlking热心肠而且漂亮/俊朗
7．learn frm each ther and help each ther相互帮助相互学习
8．be highly praised by the teachers and students得到老师和同学的高度称赞
9．jin the Eighth Rute Army参加八路军
10．be brn in a pr peasant family出生于一个贫苦的农民家庭
[常用语句]
1．介绍人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征
①He has fair hair and blue eyes.
他有金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛。
②Abraham Lincln，the sn f a pr family，was brn in Kentucky n February 12，1809.
亚伯拉罕·林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于1809年2月12日生于肯塔基州。
③She is an rdinarylking girl，but her kindness and cnsideratin impress me mst.
她是一个普普通通的女孩，但她的善良和体贴使我印象深刻。
④He is a gdlking，kindhearted man.
他是一个相貌俊朗，心地善良的男子。
2．介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩
①She wn first prize in the Chinese Petry Cntest at the age f ten.
她10岁就获得了《中国诗词比赛》一等奖。
②He spent 28 years n the cean jurneys and went t mre than thirty cuntries.As a result，China's ecnmy develped faster.
他花了28年在海上航行，到达30多个国家。结果，中国的经济发展得更快了。
③He/She is gd at spken English and even better at using cmputers.
他/她擅长英语口语，更擅长使用电脑。
3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价
①We regard him as ur mdel.
我们把他作为我们的榜样。
②The peple had cme t lve him as an inspiring leader.
人们把他作为一个鼓舞人心的领袖而开始热爱他。
③Lei Feng has been praised fr his cmmunist spirit.雷锋因他的共产主义精神而受到称赞。
保定市残疾青年医生宁学雷，凭着其过人的医术和高尚的医德为乡邻所敬重。请你根据下列有关提示用英语写一篇报道，简要介绍身残志坚的好医生宁学雷。
1．宁学雷出生在河北保定市，1岁时患上了小儿麻痹症，导致下身瘫痪，疾病的磨难激发了他学医救人的志向；
2．经过多年的刻苦学习，他最终实现了梦想，考入了一所医学院；
3．大学毕业后，他开了一家诊所，边行医边学习，不断提高自己的医术；
4．他医德高尚，不计报酬，始终把治病救人放在首位，因此赢得了人们的尊重。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．短文要求包含所有要点，但不必逐条翻译；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：小儿麻痹症plimyelitis
【学生习作】
Ning Xuelei was brn in Bading，Hebei Prvince.He suffered frm plimyelitis at the age f ne and never regained the use f his legs.The hardship and sufferings never defeated him but inspired him t study medicine t save peple's lives in the future.
After he studied hard fr many years，he finally realized his dream and was admitted t a medical cllege.He started a clinic and began t give medical treatments t peple.He tries his best t imprve his medical skills by learning frm ther experienced dctrs.
Ning Xuelei is a nble dctr withut expecting rewards frm his patients.As a dctr，he puts “curing the sickness t save the patient”first，thus winning wide respect frm thers.
点评：
1．条理清晰；
2．要点齐全；
3．句式较为简单。
4．缺少必要的衔接手段。
【升格作文】
Ning Xuelei，brn in Bading, Hebei Prvince，suffered frm plimyelitis at the age f ne and never regained the use f his legs.The hardship and sufferings never defeated him but inspired him t study medicine t save peple's lives in the future.
Having studied hard fr many years，he finally realized his dream and was admitted t a medical cllege.After graduating，he started a clinic and began t give medical treatments t peple.In the meanwhile，he tries his best t imprve his medical skills by learning frm ther experienced dctrs.
Ning Xuelei is a nble dctr withut expecting rewards frm his patients.In additin，as a dctr，he puts “curing the sickness t save the patient”first，thus winning wide respect frm thers.
请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍抗日巾帼英雄赵一曼。
1．赵一曼，抗日英雄，1905年生于四川省。
2．1926年加入了中国共产党。
3．1935年，赵一曼成为东北抗联的领导人之一，同日本侵略者进行了游击战争。
4．1935年11月，在与日军作战期间，为了保护战友，赵一曼被俘。
5．在监狱里，日本人使用了各种酷刑，但她没有透露任何信息，绝不屈服。
6．1936年8月1日，日本人在珠河县杀害了她。
7．赵一曼同志为民族解放献出了自己最宝贵的生命。
8．她伟大的英雄形象和光辉事迹永远激励着中华儿女坚韧不拔、开拓前进。
注意：词数80左右。
参考词汇：the Nrtheast AntiJapanese United Army 东北抗日联军 trture n．酷刑 liberatin n．解放 persevere v．坚韧不拔 frge ahead开拓前进

【参考范文】
Zha Yiman，an antiJapanese herine，was brn in Sichuan Prvince in 1905.She jined the Cmmunist Party f China(CPC)in 1926.In 1935 Zha Yiman became ne f the leaders f the Nrtheast AntiJapanese United Army，fighting a guerrilla war against the Japanese invaders.
In Nvember 1935，during fighting against the Japanese army，Zha Yiman was captured t prtect her cmrades.In prisn，the Japanese used all kinds f cruel trtures，but she did nt reveal any infrmatin，never giving in.On August 1st，1936，she was killed in Zhuhe Cunty.
Cmrade Zha Yiman gave her mst precius life fr natinal liberatin，whse great heric image and brilliant achievements always inspire the Chinese peple t persevere and frge ahead.