







高中英语外研版 (2019)必修 第一册Unit 3 Family matters课文配套课件ppt
展开Writing abut a family memryWriting
Learning bjectives
At the end f the class, yu will be able t:1. get the main idea and specific infrmatin f the jurnal entry;2. find ut the elements and structure f a family memry;3. write a shrt stry abut the family memry;4. revise their wn and ther’s writings.
What family memries have yu had? Talk abut it in brief.
Let’s watch an ld pht.
Read the jurnal entry and answer the questins.
1. What brught back the authr’s lvely memry?2. What happened in the authr’s memry?3. Why is it a lvely memry?
1. What brught back the authr’s lvely memry?
An ld pht.
2. What happened in the authr’s memry?
The authr wanted t surprise her mther with hme-made scrambled eggs n her mther’s birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing abut it and eating them all anyway.
3. Why is it a lvely memry?
Because it shws the lve between the authr and her mther.
I was tidying my rm yesterday and fund an ld pht in a ntebk. As I was lking at it, the lvely memry f that day came back t me.
It was my mther’s birthday ten years ag, and I decided t surprise her with hme-made scrambled eggs. I wke up really early and tipted t the kitchen. I had never cked anything befre, s I tried t cpy hw she did it. But smehw they ended up burnt.
I was abut t thrw everything away when my mther came in. I shwed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened. T my surprise, she tasted them and said they weren’t bad! I guess lve is indeed a magical ingredient. In fact, we ended up laughing and ate them all.
This weekend is her 45th birthday. I’ll make her scrambled eggs again, and this time they wn’t be burnt!
Elements f a family memry
Wh was in the memry ? When did the family memry take place?Where did the family memry take place?What happened? (What did yu see and d?)Why is it special r memrable?
Yur family memry
my father and I
a Sunday mrning
in the garden
My father taught me t ride a bicycle.
Lve has a great pwer.
Structure f a family memry
Beginning: Brief infrmatin abut when, where, wh, what.Main bdy:Specific descriptin f what yu saw and what yu did, hw yu felt. Ending: Cnclusin f what happened at last and yur feeling.
Useful expressins
Last summer,…/In 2015,…/Many years ag,…I was at…It made me feel s…I remember this because…I learnt that…
assignment fulfillmentrganizatin and develpmentsentence stylegrammar, spelling and punctuatin
assignment fulfillment—fully respnd t the task rganizatin and develpment—present a unified structure; have cherent lgic; build transitins sentence style—demnstrate gd sentence skills, clarity and varietygrammar, spelling and punctuatin—free f r have few errrs, if any, in grammar, punctuatin, wrd chices, spelling…
Nw write a shrt stry abut this memry. Use the expressins in the bx t help yu.
assignment fulfillmentrganizatin and develpment
grammar, spelling and punctuatin
un-frget-table
wrd frmatin
There is a yellw shirt in my clset. This is nt an rdinary shirt. Every time I see it, I can’t help thinking f that unfrgttable thing in my life.
When I was nine years ld, ne night, I suddenly caught a high fever, and my father was ut n a business trip. In a hurry, my mther tk me t see the dctr.
After the treat, it was mre than 2 ’clck in the mrning the next day. When I gt hme, the elevatr stpped and my mther decided t carry me upstairs. At first, my mther walked easily but later, she was tired and the white silk shirt was wet with sweat.
sentence style; grammar, spelling and punctuatin
It was my father’s new gift fr my mther, which she liked very much.
It was my father’s new gift fr my mther, my mther liked the white shirt very much. But at this time, she frgt her wn shirt. It made me feel s mved. I lied n her back and cried.
A few days later, my mther didn’t wear the shirt. After asking, I realized that my zipper tre the shirt. Since then, my mther never wrn the shirt but I ften see my mther pens the clset t tuch it.
Learn t use the sentences frm the textbk.
sentence style
Fur years later, we mved twice, but the shirt still hangs in my clset. Every time I see it, the warm memry f that day came back t me. I remember this because lve is indeed a magical pwer.
1. Hw d we write abut a family memry?2. What shuld we pay attentin t after writing?3. Hw d we assess the primary draft?
1. Get the main idea and details f the family memry. 2. Figure ut the elements and structure f the family memry.3. Write a jurnal entry f the family memry.4. Assess the primary draft.5. Learn mre frm the sample writing.
1. Make mre imprvement n yur first draft.2. Cllect infrmatin f ther family memries and write a new jurnal entry.
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